Zain, unfortunately, your response statement is not acceptable in terms of referencing why you chose to study Software Engineering and CS at UW. You are discussing personal reasons for choosing the course. You are not relating your choice of course to the criteria that you used when considering your university options. You have to consider what you want to learn and how the facilities, courses, and training offered by UW will help you achieve your full potential in these areas. You have academic reasons for choosing UW, explain how the university fulfills that requirement using specific references within the required character count. Focus on the specific contribution that the co-op program will make to your academic proficiency in these fields. Be UW specific because this current presentation is too common in reference that it can be used to refer to any university you are applying to. That is what makes it ill effective as a response.