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USA is a democratic, advanced in science and technology; AUBG- Global perspective


Alparslan 1 / 3  
Dec 21, 2011   #1
"How an AUBG education will broaden your global perspective and cultivate your capacity for social responsibility."

When it is said "USA", it brings to my mind that USA is a democratic, advanced in science and technology, rich, and highly developed country. and the most vital thing about USA is its high quality education. I always had a dream of studying in the US since my childhood. Unfortunately, the distance from my country, Turkmenistan, the travel cost and the education would make it impossible, I thaught. But my hope told me "Do not give up". Therefore, I kept searching about all universities, but above all I have been looking for an American university. After a few inquiries, I have come across with American University in Bulgaria (AUBG) and I have started to do researches about this university.

As a result of my researches, I have found that the American model of higher education has set the standard for the rest of the world. According to the Academic Ranking of World Universities, 18 of the top 20 universities in the world and 32 of the top 40 are American. The American approach to higher education focuses more on creativity, interactive learning, and critical thinking.

The American University in Bulgaria is fully American, offering an American level of teaching with American curriculum and standards of excellence. They have full American accreditation, and their graduates go on to top American graduate schools. I have been really impressed by these informations and I have selected the undergraduate program of AUBG in Computer Science and Informations Systems. I have so many reasons choosing this program.

First of all I like exerting myself with computers, second I find it fascinating and there is a great demand for it in our daily life.

We can not imagine a world without computers. There would be no PCs or latops, and so no word processing or spread sheets, no communication using the web, no online shopping or photo enhancement. There would be no mobile phones or digital cameras, because everything is computerized now . There would be no internet or phone system. There would be no modern cars, trains or aircraft: computers control how they work and guide their safety on rails or in the air. Shops are computer-controlled, many things are made by robots, supermarkets and thier distribution systems rely on computers, and computers often control food production.

I think AUBG's Computer Science program teaches how to use computers to make the world better. AUBG will teach me how to make a computer to behave how I want; this might be making a robot move something from one end of a room to another, it might be making a calculation which saves someone's life in medical field, or it could be creating a world look different with amazing buildings.

I hope with AUBG's education I will learn how computers work together in building networks like the internet. AUBG will equip me with skills that can help solve problems in a field of industries, such as business, manufacturing, law enforcement or healthcare, management, information, administration, how to plan, analyze, design different projects, even develop softwares.

Consequently, I am sure that the education in AUBG will be adequate, meet my requirements, and make me a responsible global citizen to serve all human beings.

this is my essay. it would be kind of you, if anybody could review my essay... please...
Jennyflower81 - / 690 96  
Dec 21, 2011   #2
Hi, I can help you edit a few things:

When it is said "USA", it brings to my mind that USA is a democratic, advanced in science and technology, rich, and highly developed country.

This sounds a bit weak, for an opening statement. It does not make sense, re-word this.

One of the most vital things about USA is the high quality education system .

I have always dreamed of studying in the US since my childhood. Unfortunately, I thoughtit was impossible , due to the distance from my country, Turkmenistan, travel expenses, and education costs.

[i]I researched many universities , but above all, I was looking for an American university. After a few inquiries, I came across American University in Bulgaria, (AUBG) and I have started to read about this university.


These are some suggestions on how to improve the grammar in your paper. Continue to edit your english, but you have a great story! Let your ambition and desire to succeed show through as you write. I wish you luck in school :)
OP Alparslan 1 / 3  
Dec 22, 2011   #3
thanks for your help Jenny that's kind of you
OP Alparslan 1 / 3  
Dec 22, 2011   #4
but i have already sent it


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