I can be a useful asset to you on the weekends; Stanford Room mate Essay

Greetings future roommate,

My persona closely resembles a balanced blend of that of James Bond's, Stephen Hawking's, John Lennon's, and Giacomo Casanova's personality, because I'm as good with the ladies as I am with my TI-84 Plus Silver Edition Calculator, I fight bad guys and star in movies annually, I play and listen to a large array of music, and I am calm and collected under pressure. To call me a band nerd would be accurate, because I will frequently leave the room to go practice trumpet, and I often listen to works such as Clair de Lune or Liebestraum. However, I can quickly change from classical to rap. I am assertive, and , consequently, I like to debate with others and make blunt statements. Aside from the nuisances of my personality, I go into phases of deep thought, usually inspired by night or by a classical piece of music, and take the time to dream. My dreams are modestly reasonable. For example, as I am writing this essay, I am dreaming of a day in the near future when we have a spaceship that can travel to the Andromeda galaxy by taking a shortcut through the 5th dimension ( Don't blame me for that thought, blame the string theorists) . I fully believe that you and I will have a great relationship, because I can tolerate most behavior from people, as long as said behavior doesn't involve playing Taylor Swift on loop, and I am interested in most hobby's that many people participate in no matter how obscure. The reclusive, competitive video gamer and the star quarterback reside on the same terrace in my heart and I expect the same open-mindedness from you as my roommate as well. Due to the fact that you and I will be , undoubtedly, studying for twelve hours a day, I can be a useful asset to you on the weekends, because I am quite the wing man. Most importantly, however, you will never beat me at guitar hero.

Lets make good grades, meet new women, and make a mark.
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I was going for confidence, edge, a bit of humor, and most importantly a depth of my character.

Accomplished?

dang, a bit edgy, humorous like you said but bold and great :)

Thanks a ton

I applaud your ambition with this essay. It's definitely a brave approach. The admissions tutors are human and after 100 of these it could be easy to be tired and mistake confidence with arrogance. However I think you land on the right sight of the fence.

GG; HF ;)

I wish I was good with written humor, once again, i think you did a great job.

I love it omg. This was creative, weird (in a good way of course) and welcoming. You elaborate on who you are as a person and add a twist to it in a way to allow the reader to fully grasp that conception of you. I like it. This will most definitely separate you apart from other applicants.

if you don't mind, please help me with my nyu supplemental =) thank you!!