As a prospective business major, I think highly of real life experiences; the school will offer me research opportunities, co-op programs, and special interdisciplinary programs such as Denning T&M program.
Well... Except for the sentences I have highlighted, the rest sound mostly like statements you make. They don't provide the reader with convincing facts for the question that they have asked. I feel you should do a little bit more research on Georgia Tech and find its features that are appealing to you. Then you present them here and show the readers how they can help you with achieving your short and long term goals.