Volunteeriing in FIRST Robotics/WHY YOU HAVE CHOSEN TO VOLUNTEER YOUR TIME?

PROMPT: EXPLAIN IN LESS THAN 1000 WORDS WHY YOU HAVE CHOSEN TO VOLUNTEER YOUR TIME W/ THE ORGANIZATIONS THAT YOU HAVE AND HOW YOUR EXPERIENCE HAS CHANGED YOUR LIFE.

I have dedicated the past two years of my high school career to the FIRST Robotics club. I am a math and science fanatic but that's only one reason why i decided to join FIRST Robotics. My sophomore year I would always see an older lady carry buckets of water bottles up the ramp in our high school. She never missed a day. Each and every morning she would make her way up the ramp from the girls locker room where she filled the buckets which contained water bottles with ice. Your probably wondering why she filled up buckets of water with ice. Well that's how the First Robotics program at Valley High School makes the majority of its money; by selling ice cold water bottles for fifty cents a piece. One morning I offered Mrs. Van Soolen some help with the water bottles and also told her about my interest in science and math."Thanks for the help. My name is Mrs. Van Soolen. I am the coordinator of the FIRST Robotics program and could use a hand would these water bottles." I remember saying somehting like; "nice to meet you Mrs. Van Soolen my name is Francisco but I prefered to be called Franky. I am interested in joining FIRST Robotics." Ever since that day I have been a member of the FIRST Robotics program and never missed a day of carrying buckets of ice up the ramp.

Right now I am at 239 words so I need about 751 more words. Any help would be greatly appreciated. NOTE: I ALWAYS RETURN A FAVOR AND WILL GLADLY HELP YOU WITH YOUR ESSAY.

I dont know much, but what about talking WHY you like helping?? or how talking to the lady made you get a better insight of life/ the organisation/etc?

im not much help, sorry, but thanks for your feedback on my essay :)

Do you want to tell the oraginaztion your passion in the volunteer work? You should not just say you are interested in math and science but try to tell the reader what you have done related to your volunteer and your passion about being in this program. Also, you can describe this anecdote more specifically so as to demonsrate your personality!

Just my own opinion!