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Why Washington and Lee_"Is Lee the General?"


martinmengqian 3 / 6  
Dec 26, 2016   #1
Please elaborate on how you have familiarized yourself with Washington and Lee University and what led to your decision to apply. This is an optional question but if you choose to answer this question there is a 100-word minimum and 250-word maximum.

"Is Lee the General?"

As I discussed liberal arts colleges with my friends, I learnt about Washington and Lee University. We wandered the Internet out of the curiosity for Washington and Lee's namesakes, only to find out how much the spirit of engaged citizenship in society fits me.

Because of my childhood experience, I realized how politics can influence so many families' lives --there are still 60-million left-behind children who are separated from family. As I tried to help them, I realized how little I could do. Thus, I aspire to study politics in order to optimize policy to reflect contemporary needs in society.

The education of Washington and Lee fully prepares me to pursue my wants. Led by the motto "Not Unmindful of the Future," Washington and Lee University grants the Shepherd Program, which let me use my political knowledge to address poverty problems of disadvantage communities. Also, Washington and Lee's proximity to D.C. area enables me to reach valuable internships in which I even have the chance to work in the government, not only to learn useful experience through directly involving in political system, but also to have valuable opportunities to interact with many elite politicians and open my minds.

Since I hope to become an extraordinary politician to truly participate in the basic level of policy-making process and improve local people's lives, I really desire to grasp the chance to study at Washington and Lee.

Any suggestion welcomes!!
ngokhoa99 11 / 58 14  
Dec 26, 2016   #2
The first paragraph doesn't do its job well, I think. If you learned about the school by talking with your friend, there's no need to refer to Lee.

What is this experience of yours that you talked about in the second paragraph? If you can elaborate it, your motivation will be more clear.


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