The Latin words "Vires, artes, mores" have been a guiding philosophy not only behind Florida State University, but behind my life as well. The two Latin concepts that have guided my life most are "Vires" and "Mores". These two lexicalities have very meaningful values that have taken place in my life.
Vires; signifies strength of all kinds, such as moral, physical, and intellectual. I believe that this concept has affected me most throughout my high school career. Moral strength deals with the distinction between right and wrong, and through high school, your morals become more lucid then you could ever imagine. I believe in standing up for yourself and what you believe in. Everyone has their own moral beliefs. Physical strength has also played a big role in my life as well. I theorize that if you are physically fit, then you are mentally as well. I have been on a competitive cheerleading squad for 7 years, and from learning so much and being in fit, physical condition, I have set my mind mentally too. Intellectual strength however, has been the most beneficent strength through these 4 years. Intellectual strength is like building blocks, each day you build upon it more and more. Through studies, education and life lessons you can build more intellectual strength. Intellectual strength is also a powerful means to maintain inner strength and a strong sense of self-worth and relevance.
Mores refers to character, custom, or tradition. When it comes to custom, I am a strong Christian, and I have been for 5 years. Along with my family, I stand up for what I believe in. Character is key, and is built on life experiences and how you can overcome the hardships. These past two years, three of my good friends have passed away, and from these fates, I have learned to keep going on and be strong. Each of these friends have inspired me and touched my heart in such a way I can't explain. I have accepted that no matter what happens, life goes on and you should believe in yourself and achieve your dreams. In this case, I believe that I am well prepared and primed to become a Florida State Seminole!
Physical strength has also played a big role in my life as well. I theorize that if one is physically fit, then one is mentally fit as well if one has the power and mind set to excel your goals.
I added more onto the physcial strength, is there any other places where I need to add more and explain further?
I like the new addition. I suggest changing the middle of the first sentence to be a little less wordy: "...is physically fit, then one is mentally fit as well if he or she has the power and mindset to excel at his or her goals."
Other than physical strength, I think it looks good. Nice work.
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Gloria
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