Hello,, I'm Irfan Ardian, Let me give some corrections
which can be made either from
fiberglass or wood
please check your spelling
which can be made either from
fibreglass or wood
Following this, the machine's sensor detects wind's velocity and
direction, meanwhile, it activates the ...
i guess u have to put dot before "meanwhile", to make it clear meaning.
so become like this :
Following this, the machine's sensor detects wind's velocity and direction. Meanwhile, it activates the ...
Based on the figure, we know if written 1.5 megawatts which is same with 1,500 kilowatts
and it can foster the electricity until
15,000 kilowatts.
1,500 kilowattswhich is
150 times lower than the first location
that become :
which is
15 times lower than the first location
overall, i reckon your writing is great even you use punctuation.
thanks