There are many punctuation mistakes and some paragraphs need to be cleaned, especially 4th.
a simple one was going
a simple one, was going
and boy, they did
"and, boy, did they..." (I think)
beating so furiously gave me a strange
beating so furiously, gave me a strange
they were a means of escape from boredom and I became obsessed.
You should separate this from the last sentence, and change it a little bit.
They were mostly general knowledge in my childhood, but soon I started venturing into novels as well.
It sounds strange, I did get that when you were a child you read encyclopedias or books like that, and then you began with novels, but this can be improved.
I also till now don't know if the crowd applauded.
To this day, I don't know if the crowd applauded.
If one thing the stage taught me, it was to conquer your fear .
has taught
The stage or the podium is one place on earth that would be my utopia. Nothing whatsoever, has given me the experience that the stage put me through. It is an angry beast, the stage. It gives you that feeling when you get when skydiving(not that I've been skydiving),
The stage or the podium is one place on earth that would be my utopia. Nothing whatsoever, has given me the experience that the stage put me through. It is an angry beast, the stage. It gives you that feeling when you get when skydiving(not that I've been skydiving),
The stage or the pĆ³dium is the one place on earth that . Nothing else can make me experience...
when you get when you skydive (not that I've done it)
You have read a lot, I believe you can improve this inmensely.