the word "accept" - UVA your favorite word and why

I have an essay on the topic of "What is your favorite word and Why?" === can anyone please proofread my essay for me? Thank You.

Among all the words, the word "accept" is what I cherish and also been as our family's motto.
I got fascinated of this word as I grow up because of my dad who taught me from his own experiences when he was abandoned by parents in early age and growing up by himself. Because of that, ever since I was little, I was forced to learn and accept all the consequences of my action, doesn't matter how small it is. If I had broken something, I had to earn wages to replace it and if I didn't do my task, I had to face the punishment but also enjoy rewards whenever I achieve my tasks. Learning and accepting the result of consequences that could be a punishment or reward teaches me that running away or hiding it will not solve the problems but rather, face and bracing the truth resolves it. The word "accept" is what most of people fear and want to avoid but it is definitely a word for those bold and courageous. Accepting the outcome not just only makes me better but it allows me to become more mature.

In short, the word "accept" is and will always a word I will cherish and value because it encourages me to learn and take responsibilities and mold me into a better person.

It's kind of bland, and there's grammatical issues.

I think so too but that is why I need HELP? my mind and brain is not working -_-

Lol, this prompt is annoying but it also has a ton of room for creativity. The reason why your essay seems bland is because you just give several examples of the word and then you also try to relate that word to other concepts like being mature and being responsible. The ideas are not fully developed. I suggest you take one experience, an experience that defines your life and maybe see if you can tag the word "accept" to that experience or find a new word that describes the experience.

Hope that helped! Please read mine!