Can I get some people to read my answer to the question: please briefly elaborate on one of your work experiences (150 words or fewer)? I want someone to revise it for me before I make it my final answer. My answer to the question is below.
I have been working at Kmart for nearly three years and have enjoyed my time there. I started out as a cashier, a few months into the job I became an electronics associate. Currently they moved me to stock associate where my main duty is to put out freight and maintenance counters. Working since the age of sixteen made me a better person and a harder worker. I enjoy helping customers; I get a satisfying feeling when I help others. I belive that working with customers has given me the motivation to help people to better their lives, and would like to have a career were the main objective is to help someone in need. I missed out on a lot of opportunities in high school due to working, however, in return I'm more responsible, a better student, and I'm ready for the next stage of my life.