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I was working as a Supervisor of Information Unit in the training and community service center


sami201 1 / 1  
Feb 19, 2015   #1
My study plan computer science and technology for study in China

Dear friends
I was write my study plan for master degree , can I got help about it.
much wrong there.
I want ask about the formulation:

During my studies at XXXX in Saudi Arabia, I was work as a Supervisor of Information Unit in the training and community service center part-time in conjunction with my study in the university.

My tasks centered around data management using a computer by creating electronic systems on the Internet and other systems for the internal work on the local network.

This systems Contributed effectively to the development and improvement of the quality of the tasks and the results were good, work continued for three years until I got the bachelor degree in the field of Computer Science, 2009 after that I returned to XXX.

This work helped me to acquire enough skills to work competently supervisor of the Department of Computer in the Central Bank of XXXX, after that I got my current job at 05/20/2010 after competing with three people have the same academic degree through tests and interviews, I still working now in XXX.

I Continued development and gain experience, and practical skills in networks and information systems, databases and information security, maintenance and other areas of computer technology, to meet the requirements of the job and the tasks entrusted to me.

Despite the intensity of work, I made efforts to expand my work circle by preparing and submitting several training courses in the field of computer for staff government sector of civilian and military under the auspices of the local council in the governorate.

After four years in the work, I have finished the statutory period, now I can get study leave for a period of 3 years, according to the Central Bank of XXXX law.

I always look forward to study the Master Degree, it means a lot to me scientifically and practically, and I need to develop and expand my knowledge to put another imprint on the field of work and application, I have a great desire to raise the my level of knowledge.

the bad thing that the province of ْْْْْْXXX, where I live is very lacking in scientific degrees in the field of computer technology.
On July 25, 2013 the World Bank began working in Financial Infrastructure Project No. P132311 by agreement with the Central Bank of XXXX to develop financial and banking system, which is expected to be completed in December 31, 2019, This period is sufficient to obtain a master's degree, which enables me to contribute to this project which directly linked to my work functional, Where it is certain, according to the World Bank documents that the implementation of this project will need to qualified cadres in the fields of information technology and the multi-computer science.

In the period 2011-2014, I was working 1-2 hours a day in an institution for trading and importing, and I was responsible for communication with the factories and companies in China and the purchase of goods, I knew many friends from different provinces and cities in China.

This allowed me to learn about the culture of Chinese society and morals and treat them and their dedication and perseverance in carrying out their duties, and their passion for science and knowledge.

Perhaps this is the reason of why china have reached of scientific, technical and economic development at the global level where he became one of the leading countries in the areas of technology and information industry.

The universities of China occupies an advanced rank globally in providing various science, become a magnet for foreign students wishing to obtain a fruitful scientific experiments and strong certificates.

I am one of those interested and aspiring to admission to a university in the country, I read a lot about it, China my perfect destination to study master's degree in computer science and technology.

I feel a lot of hope and ambition to get knowledge through my participation in research, programs and activities with colleagues and professors at the university, and to achieve maximum benefit throughout the study period.

That would be a strong tributary to help business and perform the tasks and the application of skills, activities and experiences in XXX after a successfully return.

I am very grateful to the State of China and its people about their services for other peoples, especially in the field of university research and studies by the China Scholarship Council (CSC), to them the utmost respect.

Although I have only one chance to study, I am optimistic to access to this acceptance of the study, my age of 34 years and several months, as we know a condition of admission to Chinese universities for master students must be less than 35 years!.

To this, I say frankly that in front of me one chance only, if I lost, may be Master degree for me just a dream difficult to achieve.

Thank you,
Vns9x 102 / 236 16  
Feb 19, 2015   #2
I always look forward to study ing
work competently as supervisor
I Continue the development and gain experience
to contribute to this project, which
I am one of those who interested and
admission is not a verb
Hopefully, it is somehow beneficial to your essay!
OP sami201 1 / 1  
Feb 19, 2015   #3
Thank you Dear Vns9x
I updated your suggestions:
"I am one of those who interested and aspiring to get admission in".

what you think about the formulation,and Ordering, Is it acceptable?
Thank you.


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