write a paragraph about some actions that should be taken to protect our oceans

there are many ways to help protect our oceans and coast for future generations. First, I think we shouldn't litter because this makes the sea pollute and endangers sea plants and animals. Some animals can be harmed if they eat these pollutants. We should place rubbish and plastic bags in proper dustbin. Second, I suppose the government should introduce laws to prohibit the killing of endangered animals and the destruction of the environment where the endangered species live. Finally, we should tell our friends, relatives or families not to purchase products made from body parts of endangered species. Be a smart shopper and choose your seafood responsibly. All in all, occeans should be protected so that the Earth will be a happy planet for us to live on.

Your excitement and energy are actually leaping off the page. There is a sense that you wrote this paragraph in a quick manner, considering only the most obvious ways that you could respond to the question. Most of your input is based upon the most basic and well known solutions to the problem of environmental pollution and destruction. While this is an acceptable response, I wish you had given some thought to the question posed and taken the time to think about some original responses to the question.

This sort of question is meant to help you improve your analytical skills and logical thought process. this is an opportunity for you to actually take the time to learn something new and unique in relation to environmental protection. Aside from these normally given responses, are there any other solutions that you can think of which would take these known steps further and serve as an improvement to the already existing solutions?

If you review your response, you will notice that you have confused land pollution with sea pollution in your response. According to the prompt that you provided, you were supposed to discuss how to protect the oceans. So the response that you delivered should have focused on that target. So which parts of the response that you wrote apply to the question posed? You should develop the following parts of your response:

1. I think we shouldn't litter...
2. I suppose the government...
3. not to purchase products...

Those are the most basic responses that you can fall back on. It would help your response if you did some research on the topic and tried to use some updated solutions to the problem. the combination of the two should create a stronger paragraph response.