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Essay about yourself (finance and investment interest)


ela4490 1 / 1  
Jul 8, 2012   #1
My name is Juhi Singh and I did my engineering in information technology from Andhra University,Visakhapatnam. I'm twenty-two years old and live in Hyderabad,Andhra Pradesh.

I was born in Lucknow,Uttar Pradesh. I did my schooling from Delhi Public School,New Delhi. When I was in eleventh class, my father got transferred and we all moved to Hyderabad. I did my intermediate from Narayana Junior College,Hyderabad.My father works in South Central Railway and my mother is a home maker. I have a brother and he works in Navy Store Department,Mumbai.

I like reading books and listening music. I'm not a fan of any particular author but I do like fiction novels a lot. Painting is also one of my hobbies. I'm a highly sportive person and love to play badminton and table tennis.

I'm a mediocre person with average marks but i'm willing to work hard to achieve my goals and objectives. Presently, I'm working as an Assistant System Trainee at Tata Consultancy Services. But after two years, I would like to go for an MBA(Masters of Business Administration) as it will help me to develop appropriate leadership and managerial skills. My keen interest is in the field of finance and investment.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Jul 8, 2012   #2
My name is Juhi Singh and I did my engineering in information technology from Andhra University,Visakhapatnam.

engineering what? specify your degree!... My suggestion;
I am Juhi Singh, an engineering graduate in Information Technology.

I have aMy only brother and he works in for Navy Store Department,Mumbai.

I introduced these changes to break the usual pattern. Otherwise, the reader feels you are giving him a list of things. Present your sentences differently to make your writing interesting :)
gracesantos - / 1  
Jul 9, 2012   #3
My name is grace santos,i was born on march 6 1986.I am 26 years old.I live at united states but i born in philippines.now i have husband and one son.Was my simple dream finish my career and help my parents and sibling,but not easy to achieve my dream in life was much trial,but does not deter testing for I could not continue my dream in life
hadi1981 25 / 44  
Jul 9, 2012   #4
My Name is Hadi, I am a qualified doctor work in a hospital.
i am 33 years old, born in Syria, Married an at the time I am studying English because I want to complete my study abroad.
OP ela4490 1 / 1  
Jul 11, 2012   #5
Thanks for the help.


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