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|Ielts essay task 2 regarding who determines children's academic success
3 - In final paragraph you can add some more points to support your final thoughts about the topic....
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|Task 1 IELTS: Compare consumers Germany, Italy, France and Britain
3 - I think you should, put the word "Overall" or "In general" for the overview. Then, usually there are three...
Writing FeedbackKhaiHoan - Apr 7, 2020 / nabilah_hannan - Apr 8, 2020
|Can a country be more interesting and develop quickly when it has a mixture of nationalities?
Writing Feedbackly3108 - Apr 8, 2020 / ly3108 - Apr 8, 2020
|IELTS TASK 1: LINE GRAPH ABOUT CHANGES IN PRICE
2 - I have to say, this is a very impressive task 1 presentation. It is almost totally accurate in representing...
Writing FeedbackMRielts - Apr 8, 2020 / Holt - Apr 8, 2020
|Toefl independent question - studying art and literature vs math and science
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|Temperature and hours of daylight in Mumbai and Moscow - TASK 1 IELTS
2 - Excellent writing. You made proper comparison points and clearly stated the information provided using a proper mix of simple...
Writing Feedbackkenny Tran - Apr 8, 2020 / Holt - Apr 8, 2020
|Should rich countries give other types of help to poorer ones instead of giving financial aids?
Writing Feedbackly3108 - Apr 8, 2020 / ly3108 - Apr 8, 2020
|Advantages and disadvantages of children from nuclear family moving geographically with their parent
3 - To @Holt: First of all, thank you for taking your time to give me feedback. However, I find it...
Writing FeedbackCoroline - Apr 8, 2020 / Coroline - Apr 8, 2020
|Pros and cons of media on gender inequality
2 - I am not sure what English test you are practicing for or what prompt you are responding to ....
Writing FeedbackBeginners - Apr 8, 2020 / Holt - Apr 8, 2020
|Task 2: Children's education is expensive. In some countries, the government pay some of it.
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|Master in Entrepreneurship -AAS- How will the proposed study contribute to your career?
2 - You are not responding to the question. How will the study contribute to your career? So you want to...
Writing Feedbackhendiva87 - Apr 7, 2020 / Holt - Apr 7, 2020
|Essay about the changes in the number of Vietnamese students studying abroad.
2 - You kind of let your writing get away from you in this task. The ideal word count is 175-190....
Writing FeedbackLam - Apr 7, 2020 / Holt - Apr 7, 2020
|Money on average earned - correct this Task 1 IELST Writing
4 - You need to make a clear structure in Task 1 IELTS writing test. 1. Introduction 2. Overview 3....
Writing FeedbackLe Quoc Dzung - Apr 7, 2020 / hendiva87 - Apr 7, 2020
|Australia physical activity - (Task 1 in IELTS writing test)
3 - @Tphuc Overall, you have done a good structure in Task 1. In the introduction, you have already paraphrased...
Writing FeedbackTphuc - Apr 7, 2020 / hendiva87 - Apr 7, 2020
|IELTs_Task 2_The causes of stress in college student - the university' life will be colorful and des
Writing FeedbackTynna - Apr 7, 2020 / Holt - Apr 7, 2020
|Students should have the right to make comments about their teachers - IELTS Writing Task 2
3 - The inaccurate prompt paraphrase has created a discussion instruction deviation on your part. The discussion asks you to compare...
Writing FeedbackNTG - Apr 6, 2020 / Holt - Apr 7, 2020
|IELTS Task 2: Agree and Disagree: Introducing more physical education in school curriculum.
Writing Feedbackbaongoc2608 - Apr 6, 2020 / Phuongbo - Apr 6, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2: There is a claim that oral communication is more effective than writing communication
3 - Unfortunately, this essay will automatically get a failing score in the TA section because of a clear prompt deviation....
Writing Feedbackbuingocdiem03 - Apr 6, 2020 / Holt - Apr 6, 2020
|The figures for the proportion of the Internet users in America, Canada and Mexico
2 - The minimum word count for this essay to be scored is 150 words. You only wrote 135 words. Therefore,...
Writing Feedbackquynh832004 - Apr 6, 2020 / Holt - Apr 6, 2020
|Colour in offices and hospitals - how it impacts people?
2 - Being a Task 2 essay, you have to meet the minimum 250 word requirement. You have only written 199...
Writing FeedbackJenJung0411 - Apr 6, 2020 / Holt - Apr 6, 2020
|The internet makes finding out detailed information as well as making conversations very easy
2 - Your response is totally unrelated to the task presented by the discussion instructions. Based on the original prompt, the...
Writing FeedbackBich Tram - Apr 6, 2020 / Holt - Apr 6, 2020
|What are the advantages of being bilingual?
2 - This is a pretty good essay that only has some reference issues. You repeatedly make reference to results of...
Writing Feedbackharrisonormal - Apr 5, 2020 / Holt - Apr 6, 2020
|Climate change or just dynamic weather? We need to find a way to live with it.
Writing FeedbackNyle - Apr 4, 2020 / Nyle - Apr 6, 2020
|Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they...
Writing Feedbackemmawattson - Mar 31, 2020 / emmawattson - Apr 5, 2020
|US government research expenditure- IELTS WRITTING TASK 1
4 - In the IELTS task 1 you MUST NOT give your opinion ideas like "the opposite was true for ..."...
Writing FeedbackSuka - Apr 5, 2020 / SUONYIL LAM - Apr 5, 2020
|People's opinions differ as to whether homework is necessary to educate children or not
3 - @leminhvu1992 I think you have misunderstood the requirement of this essay. It requires you to discuss both views, not...
Writing Feedbackleminhvu1992 - Apr 5, 2020 / khanhhuyen2447 - Apr 5, 2020
|IELTS task 2: Humanitarian aid for poor countries in time of natural disaster
3 - There is a lack of coherence in your reasoning presentation. You did a good job in presenting the reason...
Writing Feedbackvuthuylinh2611 - Apr 5, 2020 / Holt - Apr 5, 2020
|The popularity of free time activities that the US elderly took part in - the period of 1980 & 2010
3 - I think the overall just mention the objects have followed upward, downward or fluctuation because the comparisons of numbers...
Writing FeedbackHunT - Apr 4, 2020 / SUONYIL LAM - Apr 5, 2020
|Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
2 - You have not properly responded to the prompt. You were not supposed to offer an opinion regarding a topic...
Writing FeedbackThao4real - Apr 5, 2020 / Holt - Apr 5, 2020
|Electric vehicles have come a long way with the advancement in technology
2 - The essay tends to be redundant in statements. You mention the same information about charging the vehicle more than...
Writing Feedbackorlandobanuelos - Apr 5, 2020 / Holt - Apr 5, 2020
|Are computers the most important invention of the last century?
Writing FeedbackHoang Anh Thu - Apr 3, 2020 / Thao4real - Apr 5, 2020
|Some individuals claim that the only purpose of movie is to entertain. Others have different opinion
7 - Your essay is good but you should write more in the conclusion In the second paragrah, you made a...
Writing Feedbackxuangiao2000 - Mar 29, 2020 / Thao4real - Apr 5, 2020
|Difficulties of urban life.
Writing Feedbackaprilmk - Apr 1, 2020 / ngocminh96 - Apr 4, 2020
|IELTS task 2 - Discuss both views about sports profession of wages
3 - @Holt Thanks for your feedback, I have learn the hard way. However, can you give me more feedback about...
Writing FeedbackSUONYIL LAM - Apr 4, 2020 / SUONYIL LAM - Apr 4, 2020
|ESSAY OF IELTS TASK 1 - LINE GRAPH water consumption in Brazil and Democractic Republic of Congo.
3 - almost global rose -> rise. this increased six times ... -> this number/figure increased six..... Brazil's popoulation is ...
Writing FeedbackSUONYIL LAM - Apr 4, 2020 / HunT - Apr 4, 2020
|Films were produced by big companies in the past, but today people are able to make a film.
2 - This is not a comparative essay or advantage/disadvantage conversation. It is a single opinion essay that requires you to...
Writing Feedbackvinvin - Apr 4, 2020 / Holt - Apr 4, 2020
|Reducing global warming damage should be handled by governments rather than inviduals.
2 - This is a single opinion essay. As a single opinion essay, you are not allowed to support both sides...
Writing FeedbackThao4real - Apr 4, 2020 / Holt - Apr 4, 2020
|Some people believe that the world is changing for the better
Writing FeedbackTang Phuong - Apr 4, 2020 / Holt - Apr 4, 2020
|The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years.
Writing Feedbacktung53202 - Apr 3, 2020 / tung53202 - Apr 4, 2020
|Music at school. Give your opinion about it.
Writing Feedbackrenezella - Apr 3, 2020 / Holt - Apr 3, 2020
|Essay about worldwide market share of notebook computer
2 - There is an inconsistency in your time reference throughout the essay. As you are speaking of measurements taken in...
Writing Feedbackwearelearning - Apr 3, 2020 / Holt - Apr 3, 2020
|It is no longer necessary to use animal as food or to use animal products.
2 - Your stance in the actual discussion is unclear. The essay requires the defense of only one stance in the...
Writing Feedbackiamktrang - Apr 2, 2020 / Holt - Apr 3, 2020
|Common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are young
3 - Your second paragraph is a little bit more applicable to the prompt instructions when compared to your first reasoning...
Writing Feedbackhungdo - Apr 2, 2020 / Holt - Apr 3, 2020
|The line graph illustrates how people consumed fast food in UK per week
Writing FeedbackHunT - Mar 28, 2020 / tung53202 - Apr 3, 2020
|Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
5 - @Holt Thank you for your very helpful review! In fact, i did not do any research. The 2008 recession...
Writing FeedbackFreyMiggen - Apr 1, 2020 / FreyMiggen - Apr 3, 2020
|Task 1: Line graph about countries' birth rates
2 - You have to remember that you have to follow a certain format for writing the Task 1 essay: -...
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Apr 2, 2020 / Holt - Apr 2, 2020
|Sexual Assault: Its Effects on Victims
2 - Truth be told, the paper doesn't make much sense. The introduction doesn't really outline what the discussion will be...
Writing FeedbackTina 9910 - Apr 2, 2020 / Holt - Apr 2, 2020
|Too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds.
3 - Apart from some wrong spelling, your essay is totally done very well.You generate your sentences by using flexible linking...
Writing Feedbackbella05 - Apr 1, 2020 / Nguyenkhanhnhu - Apr 1, 2020
|Many animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in the sea
3 - Thank you so much for showing me. I will try my best to improve these mistakes and apply your...
Writing Feedbacklanfeng - Apr 1, 2020 / lanfeng - Apr 1, 2020
|IELTS Task 2: Disappearance of high street shops
5 - Overall, your essay is so good that you are capable of combing your views and the examples completely. I...
Writing Feedbacktaeyonieee - Mar 30, 2020 / aprilmk - Apr 1, 2020
|IELTS Task 1: Pie chart: Revenue Sources and Expenditures of a USA Charity
Writing FeedbackTHC1310vn - Mar 30, 2020 / THC1310vn - Mar 31, 2020
|Essay about the influence of Education on eating habbit
3 - You are not being asked to deliver a solution to the problem in this essay. You are only being...
Writing Feedbackiuudung - Mar 31, 2020 / Holt - Mar 31, 2020
|Some students choose to study in another country for a time during high school or university.
Writing Feedbackcuongndangh2003 - Mar 20, 2020 / hmphuongg - Mar 31, 2020
|Domestic recycling - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 LINE GRAPH
Writing Feedbackemmawattson - Mar 30, 2020 / emmawattson - Mar 31, 2020
|Learning online is sometimes a necessity: the pros and cons
3 - Hello Diem, in my view, you have done a good job, except for several sentences to be polished. ...
Writing FeedbackdiemanhN - Mar 31, 2020 / Zavy - Mar 31, 2020
|Children to know right from wrong - IELTS 10 Test 1 Writing Task 2
Writing Feedbackjacksonhong - Mar 30, 2020 / jinjin000 - Mar 31, 2020
|IELTS task 2: Time spent by young adults with their family
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|'Museums should be open to everyone' - IELTS Task 2 - Many museums charge for admission
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|Household living - WRITING TASK 1_BAR CHART_CAMBRIDGE 13 TEST 2
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|Many people recommend that we should use more public transports for our sake. Do u agree or disagree
2 - As a task 2 essay, I would have to caution you against writing less than the minimum word count....
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