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|THE NUMBERS OF MALE AND FEMALE TEACHERS IN 6 DIFFERENT TYPES OF EDUCATIONAL SETTING IN 2010
3 - @Thykeppy Hi there! Welcome to the forum. In comparison to most that I have observed and given...
Writing FeedbackThykeppy - Jun 2, 2019 / Maria - Jun 3, 2019
|Topic: Describe one of the happiest days of my life (a paragraph of about 200 words).
2 - @Cozy19s Hello there! Because you only have two hundred words, using essay optimization techniques would help you have...
Writing FeedbackCozy19s - Jun 2, 2019 / Maria - Jun 3, 2019
|Proportion of population aged 65+ - The text is IELTS Writing Task1
3 - @Annie Chen Hello there. Welcome to the forum! Like what has already been mentioned, including the figure next...
Writing FeedbackAnnie Chen - Jun 2, 2019 / Maria - Jun 3, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Agree or Disagree essay on solution to improve road safety
4 - Thank you for your helpful advices @ melanienguyen278 and @ Maria I'll try my best to enhance my writing...
Writing FeedbackWendynguyen803 - May 30, 2019 / Wendynguyen803 - Jun 3, 2019
|IELTS writing task 2 - investment in science subjects is essential for development
Writing Feedbackkatiemeo - Jun 1, 2019 / katiemeo - Jun 2, 2019
|Cars made in Argentia / Australia / Thailand - writing task
Writing FeedbackNhanpham147 - Jun 1, 2019 / Nhanpham147 - Jun 2, 2019
|It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents.
3 - @Maria I really appreciate your feedback. Thank you! What band do you think I can get from my writing?...
Writing Feedbackhunghoiham1999 - Jun 1, 2019 / hunghoiham1999 - Jun 2, 2019
|Scientific experiments and research - should governemnt or private companies control that?
Writing FeedbackTaylor 098 - May 30, 2019 / Taylor 098 - Jun 1, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 - AGREE OR DISAGREE? - Work from home only benefits employees, not employers.
3 - @ctyn1203 Hello there. Welcome to the forum! Let me help you with your essay. First and foremost,...
Writing Feedbackctyn1203 - Jun 1, 2019 / Maria - Jun 1, 2019
|"throw-away" society. Causes and effects?
3 - Hi suong1510, Nice essay overall. There is a problem regarding the example in body paragraph 2. I...
Writing Feedbacksuong1510 - Jun 1, 2019 / greynd - Jun 1, 2019
|IELTS W2 - To what extent do you agree or disagree too much attention to wild animals and birds.
Writing Feedbackmisaping - May 31, 2019 / misaping - Jun 1, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: ANIMAL TESTING / moral issues
Writing Feedbackhaotran1198 - May 30, 2019 / suong1510 - Jun 1, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Inconsiderate gaming and kids
4 - Hi there, I think your opinion in the essay is quite clear, with a wide range of vocabularies you...
Writing Feedbackgreynd - May 31, 2019 / suong1510 - Jun 1, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Water consumption statistics across the globe
2 - @nhant Hi there! It would be beneficial and helpful if you could provide the pie chart (any figure/data...
Writing Feedbacknhant - Jun 1, 2019 / Maria - Jun 1, 2019
|Question 26: Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. A learn for kids?
2 - @tunghs15217 Hello! I see that you're new to the forum. Welcome! Let me help you with your essay....
Writing Feedbacktunghs15217 - May 31, 2019 / Maria - May 31, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: Science will soon make people live longer. Good?Bad?Discuss both, give your opinions
Writing FeedbackDang Khoa - May 30, 2019 / Dang Khoa - May 31, 2019
|Begginer writting task 1 on consumer spending in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey
4 - I think the the only problem that you are facing is grammar. In this essay there are too many...
Writing Feedbackxyanuaaa - May 21, 2019 / Taylor 098 - May 30, 2019
|Everyone should stay a school until reaching adulthood
Writing Feedbacktrannthkv2 - May 28, 2019 / Maria - May 29, 2019
|An opinion essay; Libraries - is there still a need such institution?
3 - @angaquay Hi there! Let's look through your essay - and hopefully I can provide you with useful feedback...
Writing Feedbackangaquay - May 28, 2019 / Maria - May 29, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 Agree/Disagree Police force carrying guns will encourage a higher level of violence.
2 - @yuchengkuo Hi there! I see that you're new here. Welcome to the forum. Let me look through your...
Writing Feedbackyuchengkuo - May 28, 2019 / Maria - May 29, 2019
|In any field - those in power should step down after five years
3 - @yyu340 Hello there! As someone has already given you a rating, I would rather prefer to focus more...
Writing Feedbackyyu340 - May 28, 2019 / Maria - May 29, 2019
|How important is COLLEGE education today?
3 - @minhthuy99 Hi there! First and foremost, I can't seem to determine what form of citations you are using....
Writing Feedbackminhthuy99 - May 28, 2019 / Maria - May 29, 2019
|Truthfulness as the critical factor that contributes to sustaining a good relationship
4 - @junejulyapril Just keep reading/listening books, magazines and stuff that you like, when you found a new word, just write...
Writing Feedbackjunejulyapril - May 27, 2019 / Dang Khoa - May 29, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 Some students leave school with a negative attitude towards learning and peer pressure
4 - @Maria Thanks so much for your prompt feedback! Trying to sound naturally in transitions is my weakest spot, and...
Writing Feedbackchrisskuo - May 27, 2019 / chrisskuo - May 28, 2019
|IELTS Task 1: Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey - money spent on consumer goods
Writing Feedbackandrewfoy273 - May 27, 2019 / andrewfoy273 - May 28, 2019
|Justifying and estimating belong to necessary skills for youngsters to acquire in their young age
Writing Feedbacknagasirenz2 - May 27, 2019 / nagasirenz2 - May 28, 2019
|IELTS task 2 (global climate change) - carbon print
Writing Feedbackchanyinyui - May 27, 2019 / chanyinyui - May 28, 2019
|Who holds the duty to take measures against environmental degradation? IELTS Task 2
Writing Feedbackmaria4506 - May 27, 2019 / maria4506 - May 28, 2019
|IELTS 2: Computers are just a tool or the most important invention?
4 - @melanienguyen278 Hello! First and foremost, I think that your essay is well-written! You were able to establish your...
Writing Feedbackmelanienguyen278 - May 26, 2019 / Maria - May 27, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Should student freely choose subject to study?
4 - @Dattranvan1811 Hello. I won't necessarily give out a band score; however, I'll provide you with a sufficient feedback...
Writing FeedbackDattranvan1811 - May 26, 2019 / Maria - May 27, 2019
|The use of social media is replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Good or bad?
Writing Feedbackchiruha - May 27, 2019 / andrewfoy273 - May 27, 2019
|Some people believe that the best way to improve road safety is to ban the teenagers from traveling'
Writing Feedbackxyanuaaa - May 26, 2019 / xyanuaaa - May 27, 2019
|IELTS: Discuss the issues associated with people aging longer and give possible measures.
Writing Feedbackcoke - May 26, 2019 / DoctorWho - May 26, 2019
|assignment - do you agree with the idea that children have a pet
Writing Feedbackchangcap - May 25, 2019 / Maria - May 25, 2019
|Advanced technology can prevent and solve the crime
3 - Maria i've learned a lot from you like try to write "the more specific the better". I usually think...
Writing FeedbackKrystal318 - May 22, 2019 / Dang Khoa - May 25, 2019
|Ielts task2: Government plans for global warming
2 - @bluepen0311 Use more appropriate terminologies when you are trying to explain things. For instance, you do not extend the...
Writing Feedbackbluepen0311 - May 24, 2019 / Maria - May 24, 2019
|I've written this essay about overpopulation topic. Meaning and consequences.
2 - @suong1510 Try to minimize the number of unnecessary terms in your essay; this will help you optimize your essay...
Writing Feedbacksuong1510 - May 24, 2019 / Maria - May 24, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - WHICH BENEFITS OF TAKING A GAP YEAR FROM A SCHOOL?
Writing Feedbackdatngn09 - May 23, 2019 / datngn09 - May 24, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Discuss opinion about the developments of AI.
2 - Hey!! It's a fairly good essay. There's a good progression from the introduction to highlighting about the...
Writing Feedbackdinhcongtrang99 - May 22, 2019 / DoctorWho - May 23, 2019
|Should people travel to other places to learn about the culture and live there?
3 - I rewrote your ending as: To summarize, traveling to other countries which are no involved in wars to gain...
Writing Feedbackyuxian719 - May 14, 2019 / Krystal318 - May 22, 2019
|IELTS task 2: problems in big citties/ main problems and solutions
3 - Your Opening is quite vague as you mentioned "some factors" and "some solutions". The same with your Ending "some...
Writing FeedbackTaylor 098 - May 21, 2019 / Krystal318 - May 22, 2019
|IELTS Task 1: The bar chart show the petroleum production and consumption among 7 regions in 2002
Writing Feedbackgrace412 - May 21, 2019 / grace412 - May 22, 2019
|Ielts Essay task 2 - young children play video games - problems and solutions
Writing Feedbacksuruku - May 16, 2019 / dacvuong11a1hoa - May 21, 2019
|Forested land in six continents over the world throughout a 15-year period
Writing Feedbackltdung0612 - May 16, 2019 / ltdung0612 - May 20, 2019
|The line graph of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city
2 - @Chau Nguyen Hello! First and foremost, I think you should focus on optimizing the word count through removing...
Writing FeedbackChau Nguyen - May 19, 2019 / Maria - May 19, 2019
|The statistics of tourists to Scotland who visited went to the various attractions
Writing FeedbackThulai1304 - May 18, 2019 / Thulai1304 - May 19, 2019
|IELTS 2- Language study / online courses offered by universities
4 - @Writer07 Thank you for your comment. But I am quite certain that each paragraph in my essay contains only...
Writing Feedbackmnhc - May 18, 2019 / mnhc - May 19, 2019
|After high school, students decide whether to continue studying in an university or getting a job
2 - @opaki123 Hi there! Let's look through your essay; I do have a couple of key recommendations. First...
Writing Feedbackopaki123 - May 19, 2019 / Maria - May 19, 2019
|The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011
Writing Feedbackhuynhtien2407 - May 17, 2019 / huynhtien2407 - May 18, 2019
|Summerize the information from the diagram to describe the production of milk
Writing Feedbackyenchauhoang - May 12, 2019 / yenchauhoang - May 18, 2019
|Personality and High Grades - What is the most important thing to succeed in life?
2 - @Krystal318 Hi there! Let's divide this response into two portions: technicalities and content-wise. In terms of the...
Writing FeedbackKrystal318 - May 17, 2019 / Maria - May 17, 2019
|IELTS Task 2- schools' or parents' responsibility to teach children be healthy.
Writing Feedbackbuzzlin - May 16, 2019 / Krystal318 - May 17, 2019
|Students study in group is better than them to study alone
3 - @Trinh Duy Hung Hi there! Be cautious of the construction of your sentences because the forms of the...
Writing FeedbackTrinh Duy Hung - May 13, 2019 / Maria - May 16, 2019
|IETLS Task 2_ Pollution and environment damage result from developing and making the country richer.
2 - @AnhVu Try to omit unnecessary words that do not contribute anything substantial to your essay. Instead, try a...
Writing FeedbackAnhVu - May 14, 2019 / Maria - May 16, 2019
|Olympic Foods - My GMAT Analytical Writing Practice
2 - @PIYOPIYO First and foremost, I recommend revising portions that have unnecessary wordings in them. These parts are not supposed...
Writing FeedbackPIYOPIYO - May 15, 2019 / Maria - May 15, 2019
|The extinction of particular species of animals and plants lead to the main problem of environment
Writing Feedbackpro123 - May 15, 2019 / pro123 - May 15, 2019
|To improve road safety, it is not enough to punish more harshly those who violate the law
3 - thank u...
Writing Feedbackvietable - May 15, 2019 / vietable - May 15, 2019
|Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary?
2 - @Brenna Vo Watch out for the formatting of the structure of your sentences. I have noticed that you have...
Writing FeedbackBrenna Vo - May 15, 2019 / Maria - May 15, 2019
|Should secondary students learn international news as one of their subjects
5 - @Maria thank you very much for your strong support. I will keep practising and trying my best...
Writing FeedbackShaha1511 - May 14, 2019 / Shaha1511 - May 15, 2019
|IELTS 2: TOPIC Education for 18+ years
5 - @Brenna Vo Thank you very much But you know, when I search on Google, there are some articles that...
Writing FeedbackDuong Duc Minh - May 13, 2019 / Duong Duc Minh - May 15, 2019
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