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|Some people concede that life was superior in major avenues 100 years ago.
4 - Hi Azamat, I can see that you have posted several essays in this forum. I think that you've already...
Writing FeedbackAzamat98 - Jun 27, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 2, 2016
|[ielts Task 2 ] International Travel and Mass Media ease people learning other countries
3 - Hello Yon, I think that all modifications and corrections have been delivered nicely by two contributors in EssayForum. With...
Writing Feedbackyon959 - Jun 30, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 2, 2016
|Eating at home has many advantages; it's safer for us because we know what we are going to cook
5 - Hi, Quan, usually we write an essay with three main parts: introduction, reason"s" and conclusion. If you want to...
Writing FeedbackSlimeTim - Jun 29, 2016 / yon959 - Jun 30, 2016
|Statistic of births given from women aged 40 until 44 years by numbers of children and years.
3 - Hi Faisal, I hope the below corrections are not too late for your revision. -The table below provides...
Writing Feedbackfaisalrachmn - Jun 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 30, 2016
|Environment; Let me know if this issue essay of GRE is proper or not and rate on the scale of 1 to 6
3 - HI Divya, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, we aim to provide you with helpful and...
Writing Feedbackbldivya5 - Jun 29, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 30, 2016
|[Toefl] School with low-budget should cut P.E classes or art and music courses?
4 - Hi Phuong, I hope the corrections below are helpful and even more so, useful to your revision. -...
Writing Feedbackphanhblue2007 - Jun 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 29, 2016
|Social Media Is Important, the need to control it before it controls you.
2 - Hi Heather, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope this is just the start of a great partnership...
Writing Feedbackpunkstar21 - Jun 8, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 29, 2016
|'console games became the least popular': The global sales of different types of digital games IELTS
3 - Hi Chou, here's another take for your essay. - The bar chart illustrates the four different - All...
Writing Feedbackcc71268 - Jun 29, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 29, 2016
|Discuss the extent to which you agree or not with the recommendation of increase spending on art
Writing FeedbackROBINPHILIP - Jun 10, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 29, 2016
|More studying means a better education. IELTS Writing #2 - Boarding schools vs Day schools
2 - Naomi, I would like to try to asses your writing based on IELTS writing task 2 band descriptors. There...
Writing FeedbackTitus14 - Jun 27, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jun 29, 2016
|Village versus large city. The Benefit and Drawback of Living in Small Community
2 - Hi Rahmi, here's another take on your essay. - Most people live in enermousenormous - In contrastOn the...
Writing Feedbackkurniarahmi - Jun 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 29, 2016
|People in the UK above the age of 4, who chose either listen to the radio or watch TV during one day
6 - Hi Naomi, for your expression of gratitude towards people, you may say' Thank you for your help. (...
Writing FeedbackTitus14 - Jun 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 29, 2016
|Differences in the universal trend in using water for 3 distinct purposes over a period of 100 years
Writing Feedbackknhusone - Jun 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 29, 2016
|GRE: "Educational institutions should not dissuade students from pursuing unlikely academic careers"
3 - Hi Cj, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, this website aims to provide you with the most credible and...
Writing Feedbackmrcjthedj - Jun 24, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 28, 2016
|A good leader needs to have clearly defined principles and should not change his beliefs
Writing Feedbackyoue - Jun 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 28, 2016
|(TOEFL) Are people earning a lot of money qualified as a successful person?
3 - Hi Elisa, here's another take on your essay. By the way, before I get started, I just want to...
Writing Feedbackelisa27 - Jun 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 28, 2016
|GRE: "Humans in Kaliko islands" Argument
3 - Hi Brian, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope you find this website not only...
Writing Feedbackhanbrianlee - Jun 24, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 27, 2016
|People may do different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health?
4 - Hi Huy, here's another take on your essay with the focus on the first and second paragraph of the...
Writing Feedbacktruongquanghuy - Jun 24, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 27, 2016
|Healthy lifestyle and state budget. IELST writing task 2 - update question 25 June 2016
Writing Feedbackpriscaoktav - Jun 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 27, 2016
|Total percentage of children ever born to older women aged from 40 until 44 years in Australia
Writing Feedbackkurniarahmi - Jun 18, 2016 / Titus14 - Jun 27, 2016
|Youngsters with lower artistic skill aren't mandatory to engage in art syllabus
3 - HI Aulia, below is another take on your essay. - lower artistic skills are not - mandatorymandated to...
Writing Feedbackculprit23 - Jun 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 27, 2016
|I strongly support the idea of charging the foreign tourists higher
3 - Hi! I would like to suggest you to replace some of the 'historical' with 'ancient', this will make your...
Writing Feedbackknhusone - Jun 25, 2016 / Titus14 - Jun 27, 2016
|Mankind hinges today on the advancement of technology and most people are lost without it
3 - Hi Virel, indeed, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope this is just the beginning of a great...
Writing Feedbackvirel - Jun 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 27, 2016
|Fewer languages in the world has its merits; How to write an opinion essay about languages?
3 - Hi Mansurbek, I would like to help by adding a few suggestions to the other half of your essay....
Writing FeedbackMansurbek19 - Jun 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 27, 2016
|"teaching children at home is best for a child's development" - do you agree with this statement?
6 - Dear Ielts mates, I would appreciate if those of you, who understand ielts writing band descriptors thoroughly, could let...
Writing FeedbackVadimKlimenko - Jun 23, 2016 / VadimKlimenko - Jun 27, 2016
|Life in a small village makes people more enjoyable doing their daily activities than in a huge city
5 - Hi! I have some suggestions for you, though I'm not a native English speaker, I'd still like to point...
Writing Feedbackpujakurniawan19 - Jun 18, 2016 / Titus14 - Jun 27, 2016
|An essay on reading and writing - how to improve language skills?
5 - Hey Trung, you can improve your language skills on essay writing and reading by practicing regularly, as we all...
Writing Feedbacklacuspendragon - Jun 11, 2016 / woodssmith89 - Jun 27, 2016
|IELTS Writing task 2 - Solutions to low birth rate in developed countries
4 - Naomi, those are good questions. I would like to try my best to answer them. First, with regards to...
Writing FeedbackTitus14 - Jun 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jun 27, 2016
|Happy Moonlight Festival- create your own festival
2 - Hi Maibellinenguyen, I highly appreciate your description of the festival, but I think you should use vocabulary more carefully....
Writing FeedbackMaibellinenguyen - Jun 26, 2016 / knhusone - Jun 26, 2016
|Internet is something that people use to make their live become easier. IELTS TASK 2
4 - Dear Grahyta, In my opinion, you focus on the quality of information available through the internet excessively. Note...
Writing FeedbackGrahyta24 - Jun 18, 2016 / VadimKlimenko - Jun 25, 2016
|Should government invest more money in a city infrastructure instead of public transportation?
2 - Matt, I would like to deliver my feedback in the detailed descriptions below. I hope this would be helpful...
Writing Feedbackable_Person - Jun 24, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jun 24, 2016
|A COMPARISON OF TRIPS UNDERTAKEN BY CARS BASED ON GENDER - WRITING IELTS TASK 1
3 - Hi Ilham, it is nice to read another IELTS essay practice of yours. I would like to point out...
Writing Feedbackilankelo21 - Jun 24, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jun 24, 2016
|Debate about whether to teach children competitiveness or create a spirit of cooperation in them
4 - HI Tran, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope you find this website credible, useful as well as...
Writing Feedbackknhusone - Jun 24, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 24, 2016
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 The internet makes human lives more convenient
7 - Human/Daily activities become easier more comfortable due to the existence of the cutting-edge internet. While the internet tend /...
Writing FeedbackLahfah Afifah - Jun 19, 2016 / KarunaTruong - Jun 24, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 THE POSSIBLE CHANGE AMONG SOCIETIES DUE TO THE SOPHISTICATED COMMUNICATION TOOLS
5 - Hi Muhammad, Overall your essay is well-qualified I think you should change Taking a smart phone as an...
Writing Feedbackilankelo21 - Jun 23, 2016 / KarunaTruong - Jun 24, 2016
|The FAMILY. As a beginner, I need your help so much. More importantly, my examination is coming
2 - Hello thanhlac98 Overall, your text is nicely written, but a few things could be improved. The suggested adjustments...
Writing Feedbackthanhlac98 - Jun 23, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Jun 23, 2016
|Information about the comparison density in several areas from 1900 to 2000.
4 - Hi Putu, I would like to give additional remarks and modifications in order to make your essay develops better...
Writing FeedbackPutuariska - Jun 18, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jun 23, 2016
|Mining is tearing up our environment!
4 - Hi Katelyn, I can see that you have gathered a very comprehensive feedback from one of EssayForum contributors. I...
Writing Feedbackih8writing100 - Jun 21, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jun 23, 2016
|It is not necessary to attach the teacher's payment to the student's learning capacity
3 - Hi Bidhan, I would like to contribute in the enhancement of your essay. I focused on the last 2...
Writing Feedbackbidhan - Jun 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 23, 2016
|IELTS Task 1 (Practice) Estimated percentage of car trips by purpose and gender of drivers, 2005
6 - Hi Irvin, Here are some corrections: -This is a breakdown of the figure for the number -that W...
Writing FeedbackIrvinhi - Jun 1, 2016 / MaximKlopunov99 - Jun 23, 2016
|I strongly advocate that it is more preferable for students to study together, instead of alone
4 - Thanks for the compliment, justivy03. However, I think my vocabulary is not so strong and far from enough. ...
Writing Feedbackable_Person - Jun 18, 2016 / able_Person - Jun 23, 2016
|Writing task 2: Modern technology in work place. Disadvantages to relying too much on technology?
6 - paragraph 2, "a computer" change to" the computer" paragraph 3, "work to" change to "work with" . "a problem"...
Writing FeedbackKarunaTruong - Jun 22, 2016 / Wendy Li - Jun 22, 2016
|IELTS TASK1 percentages of students' attendance in four different secondary school categories
3 - Hi Huang, its good to have yet another member of the Essay Forum Family. In this analysis, we would...
Writing Feedbackyoucandoit - Jun 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|Technological dependence - Social Science final exam
Writing FeedbackWendy Li - Jun 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|Some causes of adults to get education and comparison of courses costs - in the charts
3 - Hi Nora, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you find this website truly helpful...
Writing Feedbacknoura88 - Jun 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|Movies and TV have a cumulative impact by unconsciously shape people's insights and behaviors
3 - HI Phoenix, first of all, thank you adding this website as your credible source of feedback in your writing...
Writing Feedbackzyber2222 - Jun 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|Learning foreign language as early as possible for children future - ielts Task 2 Writing
3 - Hi Yon, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I am happy to WELCOME yet another member...
Writing Feedbackyon959 - Jun 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|The Process of Produce Cement and Concentrate
3 - Hi Puja, thank you for making sure that you have included the diagram in your analysis. Below are my...
Writing Feedbackpujakurniawan19 - Jun 22, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|Football World Cup and other sports allows people to release their patriotic emotions in a safe way.
3 - Hi Maxim, below are additional help that will hopefully enhance your essay. I will focus on the first 2...
Writing FeedbackMaximKlopunov99 - Jun 22, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|Writing task 2: using disciplinary in school to solve problems. Teachers or parents responsibility ?
4 - No worries at all Troung, we are here to help you with any of your writing projects. There's definitely...
Writing FeedbackKarunaTruong - Jun 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|Cement manufacturing process and produce concrete from cement
Writing Feedbackkurniarahmi - Jun 19, 2016 / souhail123 - Jun 22, 2016
|Florida. Someone correct for me this paragraph, i want to know the mistakes i had made.
Writing FeedbackAtchane - Jun 16, 2016 / souhail123 - Jun 22, 2016
|Comparison of children born by women in age from 40 to 44 in Australia
Writing Feedbackpujakurniawan19 - Jun 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 21, 2016
|The number of elderly people in several different states in the United Kingdom between 1985 and 2035
3 - Hi Adi, please find the corrections below and oh before I forget, for future writing reference, please post the...
Writing Feedbackadip - Jun 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 21, 2016
|What shows statistics about people aged over 64 years old in the United Kingdom?
2 - Hi Puja, below are additional help from my end. - The chart illustrates the proportion - It comparesabout...
Writing Feedbackpujakurniawan19 - Jun 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 21, 2016
|'To make concrete. First, we make an amalgam of materials' - IELTS Task 1 Process
Writing Feedbackfaisalrachmn - Jun 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 21, 2016
|Most people have been used to use those electronic gadgets to get in touch with their friends. Task2
Writing Feedbackscoutrabbit - Jun 12, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 21, 2016
|Here's brief summary about me. I have lots of habits such as reading books, hang out with friends.
Writing Feedbackvyvyy_sfnr - Jun 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 20, 2016
|The most important thing the government should do to improve health care is to clean the environment
3 - Hi Natasha, I would like to provide additional insights on the first two paragraphs of your essay. -...
Writing Feedbacknatasha_139 - Jun 20, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 20, 2016
|Computer can easily do basic math. Should children spend their time to learn advanced calculations?
3 - Hi Jaff, indeed WELCOME to the forum, it's always good to welcome yet another member of this very valuable...
Writing Feedbackmjafarpk - Jun 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 20, 2016
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