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|Plan to Replant Millions of Trees in Central England Slows Down
2 - hiii eris after read your summary here some suggestion from me 1. it is better for you to pay...
Writing Feedbackeris28 - Aug 10, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 10, 2016
|Why photo should be more beautiful?
Writing FeedbackPermata92 - Aug 10, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 10, 2016
|Some people argue that teaching students to behave well and to assess right and wrong is important.
2 - Hi Rere, WELCOME back! I'm not sure if it's just me but it seems that you've been busy lately...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - Aug 10, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 10, 2016
|Students although focused on their main major, also have enough time to learn history and literature
Writing Feedbacklamnt - Aug 8, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 9, 2016
|Some individuals believe that its parent's responsibility to make minors a good society's member.
5 - Hi Kumar, below are the additional remarks for the second leg of your essay; - start interacting with...
Writing FeedbackDr kumar281 - Aug 8, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 9, 2016
|TOEFL practice 1 - sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries
5 - Hi Cindy, as I go through the essay, I must say that the first 2 paragraphs are quiet stable,...
Writing FeedbackCindyliu - Aug 6, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 8, 2016
|Importance of Artworks and Museums - will always be vital for the success and prosperity of a nation
3 - Hi Jade, as I go through the essay, I must say the ideas are quiet confusing, confusing because you...
Writing FeedbackJadeOrero - Aug 7, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 8, 2016
|First thing every newborn becomes familiar with is family. Are parents the best teachers? TOEFL
3 - First thing every newborn is getting familiar with its Family. For everybody, mothers and fathers are the most important...
Writing FeedbackAshkan123 - Aug 7, 2016 / Ashkan123 - Aug 8, 2016
|The desire of corporations to maximize profits makes conflict with the general welfare of the nation
5 - Hello ichanpants89, Thank for your feedback. I will work on these things and will consider these points from...
Writing Feedbackvrustagi29 - Aug 5, 2016 / vrustagi29 - Aug 7, 2016
|Write a report for a university lecturer about the information on popularity of two new music sites
Writing FeedbackXimon - Aug 6, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 7, 2016
|10 MOST EFFECTIVE STRATEGIES TO READ AND REMEMBER
Writing FeedbackBeatrice96 - Aug 2, 2016 / Beatrice96 - Aug 6, 2016
|To the Office of Student Financial Aid: writing to appeal the loss of my Gold Scholarship
Writing FeedbackDevo7 - Jul 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 5, 2016
|Core curriculum seek students that are both good at their career and other important disciplines
2 - Hi Gabriel, though it is true that, to post the passage for this project will be a question of...
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Aug 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 5, 2016
|There is this an old saying: opposite poles attract. The same applies to relationships. Test 3 TOEFL
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Aug 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 5, 2016
|This essay will give an answer on why we are in need of music (historical vs cosmopolitan)
6 - Hi. First of all, thank you for reading my feedback and paying enough attention to correct some mistakes. As...
Writing Feedbackrodiwo - Aug 4, 2016 / huynhngocminh99 - Aug 5, 2016
|Some people think that holding parties, wedding parties, birthday parties are waste of money
Writing Feedbackbestjery - Aug 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 4, 2016
|Essay about Four elements of good writing
Writing Feedbackhuyennd - Jul 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 4, 2016
|Students at school and universities learn more from lessons with teacher
Writing Feedbackquynh_12 - Aug 4, 2016 / quynh_12 - Aug 4, 2016
|IELTS Task 2: Many species close to endangered and we should protect only the beneficial animals
3 - Hi Mahdi, below are my take on your essay; 3rd paragraph - However, some people disagree about thatwith...
Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25 - Aug 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 4, 2016
|The effects of corruption on society - it's the chronic problems on the top of the world
Writing Feedbackjanjira - Jul 14, 2016 / janjira - Aug 4, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 : Problem and solution about homecoming in Eid al-Fitri celebration
3 - Hi Mahdi, as much as I liked reading your essay, I must say, personally, I don't consider Eid al...
Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25 - Aug 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 3, 2016
|The Heart-Breaking Truth about Exotic Pets and the Painful Journey They Take
Writing FeedbackTheHam - Aug 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 3, 2016
|IELTS Task 2:The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide.
4 - Hi Nguyen, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope that you will be able to participate more in...
Writing Feedbacklilykarry2109 - Aug 2, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 3, 2016
|TOFEL writing practice - Can teachers be both popular(students like them) and helpful to students?
Writing FeedbackChuyun - Aug 2, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 3, 2016
|IELTS: TASK 1 ACADEMIC MODULE DEGREES GRANTED IN DIFFERENT FIELDS AT THE NATIONAL UNIVERSITY
5 - Hello Daniel, I am very glad to see other person who has same interest about IELTS. More over, your...
Writing FeedbackDaniel1998 - Jul 30, 2016 / mahdinurianto25 - Aug 3, 2016
|IELTS TASK 1 Three categories of crimes in a particular city, 1984-2009.
5 - Hello Risty, I am very glad to see you again in EF. Otherwise, I see your essay become better...
Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Jul 31, 2016 / mahdinurianto25 - Aug 3, 2016
|IELTS 2 - Modern Technology influence on access to important data
5 - Hello Fatma, I am very happy to see your essay because your essay is well structured and the flow...
Writing Feedbackfatmajanna - Jul 18, 2016 / mahdinurianto25 - Aug 3, 2016
|The Internet provides us many valuable things but also cause some problems; IELTS task
4 - Hi Yingying, welcome to EF! :) To avoid confusion, I reckon that for the next practice you need...
Writing Feedbackmessityy - Jul 24, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 3, 2016
|Sweatshop about clothing and a child does not have education, workers very poor and get low wages
3 - Hi Wendy, first of all, in this essay, I can definitely feel that you are somehow furious, furious of...
Writing FeedbackWendy Li - Jul 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|IELTS Task 2: More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time.
2 - Hi Mahdi, below are my thoughts for your essay. Indeed, a growing number of people are buying cars...
Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25 - Aug 2, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|Why money are very important factor in today's world?
5 - Hi Alvius, indeed, you need to practice more in order to create a good essay. Now, it will not...
Writing FeedbackAlviusTinambunan - Jul 20, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|Students going to college - essay correction; I am trying to improve my writting skills.
2 - Hi Ashkan, first of all, I don't see anything wrong with how you approach your first paragraph, however, in...
Writing FeedbackAshkan123 - Aug 2, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|If we use cell phones in the right way, they will become the most efficient tool in this modern life
3 - Hello. First of all, I really enjoyed reading you essay. I think you have a good basis in terms...
Writing Feedbackquynh_12 - Aug 1, 2016 / rodiwo - Aug 2, 2016
|Students who only learn from books and never practice, in reality hardly find any jobs.
Writing Feedbackquynh_12 - Jul 31, 2016 / p_leighton - Aug 1, 2016
|Some people believe that governments should pay for healthcare and education, but others disagree..
Writing Feedbackbestjery - Jul 31, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 1, 2016
|The problems that appear if using personal vehicle and the best way to solve it
2 - Hi Puja, nice to meet you here. This is my some corrections: - Transport facilities is basic need...
Writing Feedbackpujakurniawan19 - Jul 31, 2016 / Risty01 - Jul 31, 2016
|IELTS Task2: Children are forced to study even their leisure time. Is that a good practice?
5 - Hi. Here is my opinion Pressure is a noun. You should say:may parents put pressure on their children to...
Writing FeedbackFreeman_ps1983 - Jul 27, 2016 / huynhngocminh99 - Jul 31, 2016
|The diagrams illustrate the growth of Salmon, one of the species of big fish. IELTS Task 1 practice
7 - Hello mister, thank you for the feedback that you give to me before, I also want to give some...
Writing Feedbackakbartaufiq25 - Jul 19, 2016 / grintdevereaux30 - Jul 31, 2016
|People face far greater risks in our modern way of life than they did in the past
3 - The correction you made is just about grammar and linking ideas. However, the topic requires you to show "any...
Writing Feedbackquynh_12 - Jul 30, 2016 / nguyendinhtuong - Jul 31, 2016
|Whether it should be compulsory for high school students to wear uniforms or not - it's the question
5 - Hi Minh, I'm glad to help you edit some mistakes in your essay: [b]beneficial for their performance not beneficial...
Writing Feedbackhuynhngocminh99 - Jul 27, 2016 / quynh_12 - Jul 31, 2016
|The public transportation overflow in modern countries is causing number of negative effects
3 - Hi Adip. Here is my feedback. It is very sensible of you to have written two paragraphs in the...
Writing Feedbackadip - Jul 30, 2016 / huynhngocminh99 - Jul 30, 2016
|Cars, apart of the private transportation, has recently sold to many people in developing countries.
Writing Feedbackramzi06 - Jul 30, 2016 / mahdinurianto25 - Jul 30, 2016
|Lofty tax and significant improvement of public transportation as a solution for too many cars
2 - Greetings Mr. Defry, Just share something that come up in my mind, don't forget to correct me if I...
Writing FeedbackDefryerwinsyah13 - Jul 30, 2016 / ramzi06 - Jul 30, 2016
|Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment.Why is this happening ,and what
8 - Hi, Rudi Thanks for your suggestion on my essay, I really appreciate it, So, Here my some corrections: ...
Writing Feedbackrodiwo - Jul 27, 2016 / Risty01 - Jul 30, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 : People in poorer countries are buying cars. What are the problems? Any solutions?
3 - Hi grintdevereaux30, I have some suggestions, and please correct me when I make some mistakes. this is your...
Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Jul 29, 2016 / adip - Jul 30, 2016
|In my opinion, managing and maintaining interpersonal relations is the most important skill nowadays
6 - Hi Payal, it is a sample introduction of mine. However, I'm sorry if this obtains some mistake. Such...
Writing Feedbackpayal1982 - Jul 28, 2016 / adip - Jul 30, 2016
|IELTS: individuals are more and more dependent or independent.
5 - The first sentence of the Intro won't impress the examiner, since such phrase too commonly appears when IELTS...
Writing Feedbackkantyjang - Jul 20, 2016 / eddies - Jul 30, 2016
|Too many cars create problems and the State, also even society should work to solve this
Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Jul 29, 2016 / mahdinurianto25 - Jul 29, 2016
|Test 1 TOEFL. Summarize a reading and listening passage.
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Jul 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 29, 2016
|First trial of IELTS writing test sample (Task 1) before the real IELTS
6 - You got a point there, Ivy. My biggest obstacle is to transfer the concept from my mind into the...
Writing Feedbackabstracism - Jul 26, 2016 / abstracism - Jul 29, 2016
|IELTS: People do unhealthy activities. Why and give solutions.
3 - Hi Keely, it is really nice to see that finally the moderator in this forum release your account from...
Writing Feedbackkantyjang - Jul 27, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 29, 2016
|The younger children need some help from their parents to complete their homework efficiently; IELTS
5 - I would like to say thank you for appreciating my feedback above. It is nice to see the fighting...
Writing Feedbackjobymonpj - Jul 28, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 29, 2016
|IELTS: SHOULD PARENTS HELP CHILDREN WITH THEIR HOMEWORK OR NOT?
Writing FeedbackDaniel1998 - Jul 26, 2016 / Daniel1998 - Jul 28, 2016
|Immigrants from rural to urban areas: Effects and Solutions.
3 - Hi Nguyen, I would like to try to assess you based on IELTS writing band descriptor of task 2....
Writing Feedbackgiangnt248 - Jul 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 28, 2016
|Having an outstanding career and satisfying family life are the main desires of all human beings
3 - Hi Mahdi, here's my take on your essay; - Enjoying life is our principal intentionTo enjoy life is...
Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25 - Jul 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
|The protection for endangered animal species and your opinions.
7 - Hi Nguyen, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF and you can be rest assured that we...
Writing Feedbackgiangnt248 - Jul 25, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
|The table shows the the demand for bananas and coffee in 5 countries over a 6 year period
Writing FeedbackKaterina0686 - Jul 27, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 28, 2016
|An essay about how to write a good paragraph
Writing Feedbackhuyennd - Jul 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2.Q.INCREASE AIR TICKET PRICE TO REDUCE AIR TRAFFIC
4 - The salad days of third millennium has seen Although there are few arguments in favour , I am of...
Writing Feedbackjobymonpj - Jul 26, 2016 / eddies - Jul 28, 2016
|ielts- should we provide children in rural communities with more schools or computers
7 - hai on the contrary with the view of many commented above, I think you have written a fairly good...
Writing Feedbackhuynhngocminh99 - Jul 22, 2016 / jobymonpj - Jul 28, 2016
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