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|IELTS Task 1; Describe the diagram about nuclear reactor
4 - Furqanda, you need to complete the way that you present the information in the overview / introduction of your...
Writing FeedbackBtihbk11 - May 17, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 26, 2016
|People should be allowed to work as long as they want? Agree or disagree
6 - I agree with this point Punctuation Aiding to this many researches conducted globally ... Aiding to this, many researches...
Writing FeedbackAdeel80 - May 24, 2016 / 13williamsm - May 25, 2016
|World has changed speedily from manual era to digital era because of computers
Writing FeedbackUvyL26 - May 24, 2016 / Novi - May 25, 2016
|Tourism is an excellent way to develop a country, but it can also cause harm. How can countries ensu
3 - Azamat, if you wish to know what is your approximate band score for this writing. I would like to...
Writing FeedbackAzamat98 - May 22, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 25, 2016
|The range of visitors who travelled Brighton attractions in England between 1980 and 2010.
3 - Lily, I notice that you still need to elaborate this essay further, since it only has 154 words. This...
Writing Feedbackliv_ryu - May 25, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 25, 2016
|IELTS 2 - An increase the production of consumer goods results in the damage
2 - Hi Rere, here are some additional insights and corrections to your essay. -The highly increase ( increase is...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 25, 2016 / justivy03 - May 25, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 - Some support development in agriculture, such as farming industry
2 - Hi Rere, as much as I applaud you in noting the suggested approach on your essay, I would also...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 25, 2016 / justivy03 - May 25, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 ; GLOBAL WARMING one of extremely serious problem
NEW - Our world encounters global warming as one of extremely serious problem. Global warming is a consequence of several factors....
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|Should computer be invented? They have made a very vital impact on society.
4 - Hi mei, I have a several suggestions to your essay. Hope it helps. Over two decades, computer has...
Writing FeedbackMeirama91 - May 24, 2016 / patricrioo - May 25, 2016
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - People lived in small villages or big cities
2 - hi nurul, glad to read your essay, gere are some sugestions for you specifically for your introduction :...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - May 23, 2016 / Novi - May 25, 2016
|I strongly agree that gender could affect on the job position based on certain abilities.
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 24, 2016 / madmoiselle - May 25, 2016
|"Choosing between a house and a business" - TOEFL Essay
4 - ... house show us the responsibility of us withfor our family. A house creates a stablesafe place for your...
Writing Feedbackwaterforce1205 - May 24, 2016 / madmoiselle - May 25, 2016
|Technology is very much a part of modern life. Check usage, structure and convention (Cbest writing)
6 - wow.. you are totally in different level of writing skill.. Thank you. I will work on that part.....
Writing FeedbackExt7484 - May 22, 2016 / Ext7484 - May 24, 2016
|Internet marketing of four different business retails in New Zeland is depicted in the pie chart
2 - Nurul, I notice that you've been using similar pattern of writing Task 1 like I usually write. This is...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - May 24, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 24, 2016
|The 20th century saw great change. In your opinion, what is one change that should be remembered?
2 - ... I found that the more most important change (...) is the different way of the communication by...
Writing FeedbackNahid87 - May 24, 2016 / Joydoc - May 24, 2016
|Comparison Three universities BU, USC and UB.
4 - Hi Hang, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope you find this website a credible source of information...
Writing Feedbackminicover93 - May 23, 2016 / justivy03 - May 24, 2016
|Foreign language study by children in the first education level is more effective than in second
3 - Hi Nurul, I definitely agree that learning a second language, in this case, a foreign language at an early...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - May 23, 2016 / justivy03 - May 24, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 (Practice) - Nature vs Nurture in Sharping People' Personalities and Developments
4 - Hi Febriyani, here are additional insights for your essay. - one'spersonalitiespersonality and growths - areis determined...
Writing Feedbackpebzna12 - May 24, 2016 / justivy03 - May 24, 2016
|The transition of the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy between 2000 and 2050
2 - ... Yemen and Italy between 2000 and 2050 and theas projected year 2050. Overall, it is noticeable that the...
Writing Feedbackpebzna12 - May 24, 2016 / Btihbk11 - May 24, 2016
|Pupils should be trained how to become a precedent parent. IELTS
3 - On the other hand, becoming well-qualified parents does not require such parenthood ... Children can learn it naturally throughout...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - May 20, 2016 / madmoiselle - May 24, 2016
|People tend to have a limited time in doing face-to-face communication with their friends
2 - Zelly, welcome to EssayForum :) This is a valuable place to enhance your writing skill by giving peer-corrections to...
Writing Feedbackzelly - May 24, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 24, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 (Practice) - Why Taking Part-time Job for Teenager are Beneficials?
5 - Hy, Febry. I would like to give some suggestions :) ... effective ways for young adult to prepare...
Writing Feedbackpebzna12 - May 22, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - May 23, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 (Practice) - Who Should Take Responsibility for Juvenile Attitude
4 - Febri, by doing many readings on many of your essays, I do realize something. The problems which made your...
Writing Feedbackpebzna12 - May 22, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 23, 2016
|Many advertisements are greatly exaggerated, thus, causing some untruths in the products
3 - Hi Teck Hui, it is a pleasure to read your essay. It is imperative to mention your standpoint in...
Writing FeedbackTheodore - May 23, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - May 23, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 (Practice) - Competitive or Cooperative? Is competition the key to survive?
3 - Hi Febriyani, here's some additional remarks to your writing practice. - In summaryconclusion ( I think this is...
Writing Feedbackpebzna12 - May 23, 2016 / justivy03 - May 23, 2016
|Argumentative Essay - "Does Technology Make Us More Alone or More Connected to the World?" Comments?
3 - Hi Michael, well, you hoped that your readers enjoy reading the essay and I must say, I did enjoy...
Writing Feedbackmwentworth18 - May 19, 2016 / justivy03 - May 23, 2016
|Health Concerns and the Zika Virus
3 - Hi Becky, I believe this writing tasks is more of a research paper, I hope I'm right, anyway, for...
Writing Feedbackwabewebejole01 - May 21, 2016 / justivy03 - May 23, 2016
|It appears that the youth crime rate have experienced a significant increase to the alarming level
2 - Hi Ilmy, glad to read your essay, here are some corrections for you, keep on writing. Cheer! Undoubtedly,...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - May 22, 2016 / Novi - May 23, 2016
|IELTS - Writing Task 2 The characteristic we are born will have many much more influence on our pers
4 - Ilmi, your efforts to get a high score in IELTS writing is remarkable. I saw that you almost upload...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - May 22, 2016 / akbartaufiq25 - May 23, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 (Practice) - Having Enjoyable Life or Earning Much Money, Which One Do You Prefer?
2 - ... good life will be determined by the quantity amounts of money that people they earn through a fine...
Writing Feedbackpebzna12 - May 22, 2016 / Ext7484 - May 22, 2016
|What do you do for good health? People's awareness is rising.
3 - Hi, Yuting! Here i want to give several suggestions to your writing. Paragraph 1 there are more and...
Writing Feedbackyuting80 - May 22, 2016 / pebzna12 - May 22, 2016
|Different views about whether children experience competitions or not to be a well-qualified adult.
2 - Hello, Ilmi! Again, I'm going to share several points to you. 2nd Paragraph ... work harder and improve...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - May 22, 2016 / pebzna12 - May 22, 2016
|These days, advertising for commercial use appears to boost the volume of sales. IELTS
4 - Hi, Ilmi! Here are my suggestions. Paragraph 1 A huge number of people vaying to buy such kind...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - May 20, 2016 / pebzna12 - May 22, 2016
|IELTS - Technological advances in learning methods
3 - hi zarnovi paragraph 1 I would argue that directly attendattending the general lecture directly will deliver much more...
Writing Feedbackzarnovi - May 22, 2016 / aviniwirastri - May 22, 2016
|Opinion Editorial - The Rise of a Phoenix
9 - Wow, those are all great points. Some of those grammatical errors I didn't even notice. I'm taking everything suggested...
Writing FeedbackLlamaGod - Apr 22, 2016 / LlamaGod - May 21, 2016
|TOEFL essay for rating - why attend University?
6 - In the third paragraph, find another word for "diversities" as it probably should not be used as a noun....
Writing FeedbackJoydoc - May 16, 2016 / AndrewT97 - May 21, 2016
|The annual expenditures for five purposes in a British school in three different years
4 - Greetings, Yichieh Lee. Overall, I can follow the descriptions since you have written. However, there are some slightly correction...
Writing Feedbackyichiehli - May 16, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - May 21, 2016
|The percentage of kinds of transport used and the reasoning behind the use of a vehicle in Edmonton
4 - Good afternoon, PEBZNA12. Thank you for sharing your analysis. I enjoyed reading it. To improve the flow of the...
Writing Feedbackpebzna12 - May 15, 2016 / EditorPal - May 20, 2016
|Main causes contributing to make farmable land degraded; three continents were adversely affected
3 - Hy Mersad, I would like to suggest you to use transitional expressing, it will eases to read and understand...
Writing Feedbackmersad - May 20, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - May 20, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 - Nowadays, a lot of charities and organizations have set up a number of days name
3 - Hi Rere, with this particular essay, I must say that I enjoyed reading it, aside from the very minor...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 5, 2016 / justivy03 - May 20, 2016
|To have several careers and then further education will be something that continues throughout life?
Writing FeedbackMaximKlopunov99 - May 5, 2016 / justivy03 - May 20, 2016
|Classes in Education - who should do the talking? Edit my TOEFL writing
3 - Hi Qin, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope that you find this website credible...
Writing Feedbackqinwei0515 - May 5, 2016 / justivy03 - May 20, 2016
|The Disappearance of Nurses. Nursing Essay as to why nurses are fleeing from the medical field
3 - Hi Daylin, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you find this website useful to...
Writing FeedbackDaylin - May 5, 2016 / justivy03 - May 20, 2016
|IELTS9-TASK1-ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050...
4 - Dear @akbartaufiq25 thank you for your message. Dear @justivy03 thanks a lot for your constructive comments. However I have...
Writing Feedbackmersad - May 16, 2016 / mersad - May 20, 2016
|TASK 1- BAR CHART- the percentage of students who passed their exam, by subject and gender
7 - slight improvements: - A comparison of the number of female and male students passing high school exams as stated...
Writing FeedbackUvyL26 - May 17, 2016 / eddies - May 20, 2016
|IELTS (ESSAY) - Education topic (universal and special education)
3 - Hi Hoon, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you keep on writing and posting your projects and...
Writing FeedbackHoon - May 12, 2016 / justivy03 - May 20, 2016
|Number of students staying in the UK who gained TEFL and Cambridge UCLES CELTA training qualificati
Writing FeedbackUvyL26 - May 18, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - May 20, 2016
|The bar chart illustrates the figure for tourists travelling through three major airports in NYC
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - May 14, 2016 / justivy03 - May 20, 2016
|The total number of pupils in the UK who obtained qualifications for English Language Teachers
4 - Hi, Novi. Here is my suggestion for your writing. The first paragraph - in two academic years, between...
Writing FeedbackNovi - May 17, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - May 20, 2016
|PROBLEM RELATED TO SMOKING AND A WAY TO OVERCOME - IELTS TASK 2
3 - Slight improvements: - In recent decades - lifestyles have forced - parents spend more time working - Such...
Writing Feedbackdevi27 - May 19, 2016 / eddies - May 19, 2016
|Information about the number of students who succeed on their high school test in 2010/2011
4 - Hy, Patric Here is my feedback for your writing task The represented bar chart illustrates information...
Writing Feedbackpatricrioo - May 17, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - May 19, 2016
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1. Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily
3 - Hi Maxim, here's another take on your analysis. - founded in 1868 near the main road. - obtained(...
Writing FeedbackMaximKlopunov99 - May 19, 2016 / justivy03 - May 19, 2016
|In prevailing days, it is a ubiquitous concern that there is an ascended dependence on cars.
5 - Hi Azamat, once again, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF and when it comes to the...
Writing FeedbackAzamat98 - May 18, 2016 / justivy03 - May 19, 2016
|IELTS: Writing Task 2 : Problem and Solutions Of Motorways. (Need 6 bands)
5 - Hello, Mohammad, Here are my corrections. Hope they will be useful. -add some parenthesis in the body...
Writing Feedbackzohaib - May 17, 2016 / MaximKlopunov99 - May 19, 2016
|Sensitive issue of smoking bans - smoker and non-smoker have strong argument about their rights.
4 - Hai Marsudi,,to understand what prompt instructed in your essay well, I strongly suggest you to address the question in...
Writing Feedbackmarsudiwjy07 - May 18, 2016 / devi27 - May 18, 2016
|WRITING TASK 2 [Problem-Solving] : More working families these days are in favor of fast food
5 - Hi needless to say, introductory paragraph is the most essential part in essay writing task two as this will...
Writing FeedbackHusnul28 - May 18, 2016 / devi27 - May 18, 2016
|TABLE - TEFL and Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees for students living in the UK
3 - Hi Patric, below are my suggestions to your analysis. - The represented table reveals information - about the...
Writing Feedbackpatricrioo - May 17, 2016 / justivy03 - May 18, 2016
|Girls did better than boys in almost all of the competency exams subjects, besides geography.
2 - Hi Nurul, here's another take on your analysis. - The represented chart providespresents the information - completely done...
Writing FeedbackMeirama91 - May 17, 2016 / justivy03 - May 18, 2016
|TASK 1: two main parts in the steam production: nuclear reactor and the heat exchanger. DIAGRAM
3 - Hi Aulia, here's a closer look at your analysis. - that the steam process - is producesproduced...
Writing FeedbackUvyL26 - May 17, 2016 / justivy03 - May 18, 2016
|This representative table provides info on the quantity of students qualified for teaching English
2 - Mei, your efforts in polishing your writing is a remarkable one. I noticed that you posted more than two...
Writing FeedbackMeirama91 - May 17, 2016 / akbartaufiq25 - May 18, 2016
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