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|WRITING TASK 1 of IELTS: UK TELEPHONE CALLS - the total number of minutes by three categories
3 - @vanessazhang00 One more key feature that you can add to your essay as an alternative to making the conclusion...
Writing Feedbackvanessazhang00 - Mar 13, 2020 / phong3baotap - Mar 16, 2020
|IELTS Task 1: Birth and Death rates in New Zealand, from 1901 to the prediction for 2101.
3 - @kerry19910620 You can use the phrase "overtake that of ... and ended up at..." as an alternative to making...
Writing Feedbackkerry19910620 - Mar 16, 2020 / phong3baotap - Mar 16, 2020
|Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress
7 - @yennhut Dear Author, Based on the knowledge that I know, I suggest that you compose the introduction part...
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|IELTS Writing Task 1 #Antarctic ozone hole and damaging gases
6 - @Eileen0216 You can use the phrase "LAGGED THAT OF" as an alternative to making the sentence sound better and...
Writing FeedbackEileen0216 - Mar 14, 2020 / phong3baotap - Mar 16, 2020
|My essay is about why Western people should change their eating habit
3 - Sorry for my carelessness it was an IELTS essay but anyway I really appreciate. I hope I can do...
Writing FeedbackKha7nhsvu2x - Mar 12, 2020 / Kha7nhsvu2x - Mar 15, 2020
|My way of learning English
3 - You have to study more about grammar , vocabulary and structure sentences to start writing essay . I think...
Writing FeedbackVan Thuy An - Mar 14, 2020 / Chung1002 - Mar 15, 2020
|Writing Task 1 Test 5 Cam 14 : Doing Regular Physical Activity between Men and Women in Australia
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|IELTS task 2: Both views: fixed punishment for crime or case by case consideration
6 - Do not exaggerate the topic presentation in the paraphrase. You will lose points for not using proper translation terms...
Writing Feedbackvuthuylinh2611 - Mar 14, 2020 / Holt - Mar 15, 2020
|UNIVERSITY EDUCATION SHOULD BE FREE TO EVERYONE, REGARDLESS OF INCOME.
Writing Feedbacktheamazingshao - Mar 13, 2020 / theamazingshao - Mar 15, 2020
|Somes go to university for a better job. Somes take a job after school. Discuss advantages
Writing Feedbackshinichi1472 - Mar 13, 2020 / shinichi1472 - Mar 14, 2020
|THE MAIN CONCERN IS REDUCTION OF SPECIES OR OTHER ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS?
3 - It is highly possible that your essay would only get a 4 maximum scoring bracket. There are several reasons...
Writing Feedbackhuonglydg - Mar 13, 2020 / Holt - Mar 14, 2020
|WRITING TASK 1_CAMBRIDGE 12: FAST FOOD - statistics in the USA
Writing FeedbackBao Ngoc - Mar 13, 2020 / Holt - Mar 14, 2020
|TOPIC: Fewer and fewer people want to become teachers in many countries
3 - First of all, I think you have a wide range of vocabulary that may impress the examiner. However, your...
Writing Feedbacknguyenthinhu - Mar 13, 2020 / theamazingshao - Mar 13, 2020
|THE NEGATIVE EFFECT OF THE FAST PACE AND STRESS OF MODERN LIFE ON FAMILIES.
Writing Feedbacktheamazingshao - Mar 10, 2020 / theamazingshao - Mar 13, 2020
|Ielts task 2 essay about bad situations and how people react towards those situations.
Writing Feedbackdieuanhk - Mar 11, 2020 / dieuanhk - Mar 13, 2020
|Why many prisoners commit crimes as soon as they released? - IELTS WRITING TASK 2
3 - @Holt Thank you very much! I really appreaciate your detailed comments! However, I'd like to ask you to do...
Writing FeedbackTran Ha Chi - Mar 12, 2020 / Tran Ha Chi - Mar 13, 2020
|Crime level - IELTS Writing Task 2 - assessment!
Writing Feedbackthanhhmai07 - Mar 13, 2020 / thanhhmai07 - Mar 13, 2020
|History or Science is more important - What is an essential subject in school?IELTS
2 - Ordinary users are not allowed to score essays. Only contributors can score essays. Always direct your request for a...
Writing Feedbackbaotram2008 - Mar 13, 2020 / Holt - Mar 13, 2020
|The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.
Writing FeedbackTHC1310vn - Mar 11, 2020 / THC1310vn - Mar 13, 2020
|The population of some nations witness a larger proportion of the youngster vs senior citizens
2 - This essay is guilty of over discussion without regard for the time allotment of the test. You wrote 319...
Writing FeedbackNgoc98 - Mar 11, 2020 / Holt - Mar 11, 2020
|The data of an average Australian household electricity use and heat-trapping coal emissions CHARTS
Writing Feedbackamy_nyk - Mar 11, 2020 / Holt - Mar 11, 2020
|IELTS 1 - MIX CHART women who were poverty-stricken & the poverty ratio in the USA
3 - You could have done a better job at representing the discussion of these charts. You only have 160 words...
Writing FeedbackEdwardDowney - Mar 11, 2020 / Holt - Mar 11, 2020
|The modern technology has a great impact on the ultimate way people live now
Writing Feedbackaltgrbo16 - Mar 10, 2020 / altgrbo16 - Mar 11, 2020
|The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among humans
3 - I think your essay is OK, but there are a few mistakes. "mass media facilitates the interaction among...
Writing FeedbackHazelmiii - Mar 10, 2020 / THC1310vn - Mar 10, 2020
|Using computers every day does more harm than good to the children
Writing FeedbackTran Ha Chi - Mar 9, 2020 / Tran Ha Chi - Mar 10, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2- LOSS OF BIO-DIVERSITY- CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS
4 - Dear Potatowee and Holt , Thank you very much for your response. Base on your feedbacks, I tried...
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|What UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after graduation.
Writing Feedbackphong3baotap - Mar 9, 2020 / phong3baotap - Mar 10, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: SPENDING TIME AND MONEY ON THE PROTECTION OF WILD ANIMALS - AGREE OR DISAGREE
4 - I would provide more explanations and go more deep into the topic. you just used 2 paragraph to explain...
Writing FeedbackJasmineNguyen - Mar 7, 2020 / andreita89pp - Mar 9, 2020
|PRACTICING ielts for task 1 consumption for different meat and fish.
NEW - variety of livestock and fish consumption The line graph give information about a variety of livestock and fish...
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|Task 1: University subjects chosen, 2005.
3 - You have a few spelling errors in the essay that call attention to your lack of English spelling ability...
Writing FeedbackHoangThuyAn - Mar 9, 2020 / Holt - Mar 9, 2020
|Causes and effects of urban sprawl - drastic changes in living patterns
2 - The presentation could use more formatting. It is too compressed on the page, making it difficult to read. Use...
Writing FeedbackNguyenvananh - Mar 9, 2020 / Holt - Mar 9, 2020
|The pipe chart give information about electricity energy
3 - You forgot to upload the image for this presentation. I cannot accurately review your work without the image. Let...
Writing Feedbacklulu12345 - Mar 9, 2020 / Holt - Mar 9, 2020
|The line graph illustrates car thefts in Great Britain, France, Sweden and Canada from 1990 to 1999
Writing FeedbackTHC1310vn - Mar 1, 2020 / HoangThuyAn - Mar 9, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Population in Australia according to nationalities and living areas
Writing Feedbackpotatowee - Mar 4, 2020 / HoangThuyAn - Mar 9, 2020
|General Training - Task 1 - Type: Informal Letter - Subject: Staying in a relative house
3 - I think you should use: "met" instead of "saw" in the 3rd sentence. Also, in the 4th sentence, it...
Writing FeedbackGaucho - Mar 5, 2020 / yennhi - Mar 9, 2020
|IELTS Task 2: Causes Solutions: Professionals leave their countries to work in developed countries.
Writing FeedbackTHC1310vn - Mar 8, 2020 / THC1310vn - Mar 9, 2020
|IELTS task2 :Nowadays,children spend too much time watching TV and playing computer games...
2 - You did not properly paraphrase the prompt. The first paragraph of the IELTS Task 2 essay is always focused...
Writing FeedbackCola - Mar 9, 2020 / Holt - Mar 9, 2020
|TOEFL Writing:The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
4 - Thanks for correcting my grammer mistakes! Thanks for your opinions, I really appreatiate it! But I'm confused of...
Writing Feedbackkiwiii - Mar 9, 2020 / kiwiii - Mar 9, 2020
|International travel is extremely popular these days. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
3 - Your essay contains researched information. That runs directly counter to the instruction that asks you to use personal experience...
Writing Feedbackhuongnguyen2610 - Mar 9, 2020 / Holt - Mar 9, 2020
|The difference between men and women jobs
3 - Are you writing this essay for a Task 2 test? Kindly remember to post the complete prompt next time....
Writing FeedbackBayram D - Mar 8, 2020 / Holt - Mar 9, 2020
|Tell about the weather which you hate
2 - The weather you are describing is not a drizzle, it is raining. So you should say "When it is...
Writing Feedbackthanhhuong - Mar 8, 2020 / Holt - Mar 9, 2020
|IELTS Task 2 - Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like...
Writing Feedbackphong3baotap - Feb 26, 2020 / phong3baotap - Mar 9, 2020
|Change in structure of an island - the first one is before, and the second one after the development
Writing Feedbackngocanh123 - Mar 4, 2020 / ngocanh123 - Mar 8, 2020
|The information about the number of people who used television for sports in different countries.
Writing FeedbackHoangThuyAn - Mar 6, 2020 / HoangThuyAn - Mar 8, 2020
|People should face tough situations in life where they need to make a hard decisions. CBEST PROMPT
4 - I strongly suggest that you do not mention any identifying names in your test essay, should the opportunity arise....
Writing Feedbackandreita89pp - Mar 6, 2020 / Holt - Mar 7, 2020
|The importance of color in marketing
4 - Your discussion approach to this essay is not entirely correct. You were asked "How true is this statement? How...
Writing Feedbackyenle999 - Mar 7, 2020 / Holt - Mar 7, 2020
|IELTS Writing task 2: Strict punishments for driving offences or other measures would be effective
2 - You have misunderstood the information in the prompt. There are 2 points of view being supplied: - strict...
Writing Feedbackmhoang1998 - Mar 7, 2020 / Holt - Mar 7, 2020
|The shortage of accommodation in big cities
Writing FeedbackPhuongbo - Mar 5, 2020 / thuchaau - Mar 7, 2020
|FORMAL EDUCATION - the best moment to start (IELTS WRITING TASK 2)
3 - You would need to write 5 paragraphs: 1st Introduction ( where you will give your opinion and why) 2nd...
Writing Feedbacknxnchan - Mar 6, 2020 / andreita89pp - Mar 6, 2020
|CBEST PROMPT Explain what led to your decision to become a teacher.
Writing Feedbackandreita89pp - Mar 5, 2020 / andreita89pp - Mar 6, 2020
|The difficulties people have when they integrate into a new country
Writing Feedbackthuchaau - Mar 4, 2020 / thuchaau - Mar 6, 2020
|[Writing task 2 IELTS] The responsibility of residents and government in protecting the environment
5 - The prompt paraphrase would have been more effective if it contained the 5 sentence requirement for the discussion. Your...
Writing Feedbackaubreyfu310 - Mar 5, 2020 / Holt - Mar 6, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: The solution for cutting down a lot of trees
Writing Feedbackntan1210 - Mar 4, 2020 / ntan1210 - Mar 5, 2020
|IELTS task 1: Line graph on four materials recycling rate over time
Writing Feedbackvuthuylinh2611 - Mar 5, 2020 / vuthuylinh2611 - Mar 5, 2020
|Nowadays people use social media to keep up with the news. Why do they do this?
Writing FeedbackJadoo - Mar 5, 2020 / Jadoo - Mar 5, 2020
|Ielts writing task 2 : In modern society, people think primary schools should teach science
3 - You did not paraphrase the introduction paragraph enough. You are doing a direct cut and paste of " teaching...
Writing Feedbackpcrazed9x - Mar 4, 2020 / Holt - Mar 5, 2020
|How to succeed in academic life
3 - This is a pretty good practice run for your English sentence writing skills. There are a few unclear references...
Writing Feedbackngocbich22122000 - Mar 4, 2020 / Holt - Mar 5, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Deforestation - Give your opinions and solutions
Writing FeedbackJasmineNguyen - Mar 4, 2020 / JasmineNguyen - Mar 5, 2020
|Learning a foreign language is to travel or work in a foreign country. Others don't think so.
Writing Feedbacknguyenn - Mar 4, 2020 / nguyenn - Mar 5, 2020
|The balance - Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject
4 - @vuthuylinh2611 @Holt This is the first time I've written an Ielts writing essay. Thank you so much for your...
Writing FeedbackLinhnguyen27 - Mar 4, 2020 / Linhnguyen27 - Mar 4, 2020
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