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|The percentage of individuals holding on science categories in Malaysia and Singapore
3 - Let me rewrite the introduction ... A breakdown of the the number of people who are holding science...
Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Aug 19, 2016 / RezaAnandatama17 - Aug 19, 2016
|History of the Circus (Summarize)
2 - Hello I applied some stylistic adjustments to your text so that it sounds better: There has [...]...
Writing Feedbackzul2805_es - Aug 19, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 19, 2016
|Racial Inequality in U.K. Is Getting Worse, Report Finds
2 - Hi Azmi, I would like to go straightforward to check and give my best feedback in this article summary....
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 18, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 19, 2016
|The breakdown of the number of dwellers who are elderly people in Great Britain (1985-2035)
2 - Hi Reza, here's my analysis towards your essay. 1st paragraph: - TheA breakdown of the information about the...
Writing FeedbackRezaAnandatama17 - Aug 18, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 19, 2016
|Time Summary: Russia and Iran Fly Across a Key Threshold in the Middle East
3 - Hello Sony. I am very keen on reading your summary. This has been free of the major errors grammatically....
Writing Feedbackjomul01 - Aug 18, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
|"8 Beauty Products Safe to Share" - Summary Article
2 - Hi Hikuma. I have seen your writing. Actually, you show the better result for the writing skill. You are...
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 18, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
|Summary TED's : art make unusual stuff
4 - HI Adi.. this is one of the good summaries because I get the information clearly. However, I am going...
Writing Feedbackadip - Aug 18, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
|Several televised talent shows have their own purpose to reach. IELTS WRITING TASK 2
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 18, 2016 / jomul01 - Aug 18, 2016
|Exhibiting ability in front of television becomed popular among citizens all around the world
2 - Hi Atikah, below are thoughts on your essay, I hope the corrections will enhance your essay and be ready...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 18, 2016
|The Proportion of Population Aged 65 and over in the United Kingdom - IELTS Task 1
3 - Hi. you wrote writing task 1 IELTS properly, however,I have some advice to enhance you score... here...
Writing Feedbackdinafayna04 - Aug 18, 2016 / andika_soppeng - Aug 18, 2016
|The benefit of safety in driving
5 - Hi Celestine, - Safe driving is very important for prevention ... Safety drive very important to prevent an...
Writing FeedbackCelestine - Aug 2, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 18, 2016
|At the present time, the televised talent show are famous programs in many countries.
2 - Hi, fadhilah ! here are several my suggestions Television show needs more interesting program to entertain every person.(in...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 18, 2016 / jomul01 - Aug 18, 2016
|Summary an Article Best Trails to People Who Do Not Like Hiking
2 - Hi Farida. I appreciate your effort because you wanna provide your time to improve your English. Let me give...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 18, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
|SUMMARY : How Netted Birds Can Actually Help Conservation
3 - Hi Sofi, below are my thoughts and enhancements on your summary. - elaborates relating to how netted birds...
Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 18, 2016
|The chart below gives information about the UK's ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions
4 - Hi Ilham, Let me help you to make an introductory paragraph, The bar graph illustrates data on people...
Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Aug 18, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 18, 2016
|Nowadays, information and communication technology are really important in education
3 - Hi Cheese! facilitate the to study => I'm sorry, I can't understand the meaning of this phrase. :(...
Writing Feedbackbbcheesecake14 - Aug 18, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 18, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2- Write an essay on environment conservation and challenges.
3 - hiii smith i love your summary, here some suggestion for you to strengthen your summary... In the recent Paris...
Writing Feedbacktwid - Aug 18, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 18, 2016
|The Panama Pepers exposed a huge global problem
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 17, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 18, 2016
|How to improve photography skills on your phone
2 - dear @bbcheesecake14, here are some corrections for your essay. let me start from the first paragraph, i think...
Writing Feedbackbbcheesecake14 - Aug 18, 2016 / riaerizal11 - Aug 18, 2016
|The road was by far the most popular of four means of transport; delivery goods by pipeline was rare
4 - Hi Jenlisa, below are additional suggestions to enhance your analysis. First of all, when writing, don't forget the minor...
Writing Feedbackjenlisa - Aug 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 18, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 - More and more works is done by the machines.
2 - Hi Rere, upon reviewing the essay, I must say is is written comprehensively thorough, it has all the necessary...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - Aug 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 18, 2016
|Is it an appropriate way to learn foreign language by children at an early age, or not?
2 - hi brano, i'll give you some correction for your essay a tendency of receiving informlationinformation thisthese period children...
Writing FeedbackBRANOO - Aug 18, 2016 / bbcheesecake14 - Aug 18, 2016
|Most argue that the advance of electronic communication is harmful towards human interpersonal skill
3 - Halo, Miss Ilmi Your Introduction: The way how people interact each other ... Basically, I have another...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Aug 18, 2016 / nida26 - Aug 18, 2016
|It's debated whether an individual should always tell the truth at any time
Writing FeedbackLansium - Aug 17, 2016 / Lansium - Aug 18, 2016
|TED talk: Non-violence struggle by Jamila Raqiib.
2 - Hi Fadhillah.. Please, you meet these corrections, and those make you sure to be better. in the world....
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 18, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
|Podcast Summary: Educate The Young Women To Be Brave Than To Be Perfect
2 - This podcast is from Rashma Saujani, 2016 who started their story fromthat based on her true story. she was...
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 18, 2016 / madmoiselle - Aug 18, 2016
|The best way to balance in successful career and happy family life at the same time
3 - Hello. I only find the corrections for this paragraph. Keep writing. ... associated with stressful causecausesimpose focusingimposing focus...
Writing Feedbackpujakurniawan19 - Aug 16, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 18, 2016
|We need to recognize problems in this technological era to minimize bad influence on our social life
3 - Hi Fadhilahumar91, I try to correct your writing. Feeling free to discuss :) First Paragraph. TechnologyTechnological era has...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 18, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 18, 2016
|Writing Task 1 (unit 3 Workbook CECI) Survey about the essential of communication skill for job
4 - Hello, Ziad. Here some suggestions for your writing. From(you can use with regards to or to begin with)...
Writing FeedbackZiadRasyid24 - Aug 17, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Aug 18, 2016
|Why genetic research must be more diserve (Ted Talks by Keolu Fox) - Summary
2 - Hi Ashela.. Welcome to Essay Forum. I am very keen on reading your writing. Actually, it is a good...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Aug 17, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
|What skill does everyone need? According to the speaker, it should be addressed to listening skill.
Writing Feedbackramzi06 - Aug 17, 2016 / ZiadRasyid24 - Aug 17, 2016
|Time Summary: China's Launch of a Quantum Satellite is a Major Step in the Space Race
3 - hallo jo... Cracked message which is would alert and altered messages across the globe (...) quantum satellite and...
Writing Feedbackjomul01 - Aug 16, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 17, 2016
|Mystery of déjŕ vu explained - it's how we check our memories
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 16, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 17, 2016
|"One Second Everyday" - Summary TED talks
2 - Hello Faridadwi18 I applied some adjustments to your text so that it sounds more professionally written. They are...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 17, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 17, 2016
|Honey-bee Colonies and The Production of Honey - IELTS Task 1
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 17, 2016 / ZiadRasyid24 - Aug 17, 2016
|Writing Task 2 (unit 2 Workbook CECI) Healthy lifestyle for some people in modern world
2 - Hello ZiadRasyid24 You should consider doing a bit more reading in English - this should help you to...
Writing FeedbackZiadRasyid24 - Aug 17, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 17, 2016
|Do you think that emailing and texting reduce the togetherness? Writing Task 2
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 17, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 17, 2016
|Education and lifestyle. Causes and Effects of Overweight Children - IELTS Task 2
2 - Welcome to EF! Without further ado, let me go in a straight forward case of the introduction. You have...
Writing Feedbackdinafayna04 - Aug 17, 2016 / eddies - Aug 17, 2016
|Many people have more attention to artificial friends than their neighbor surroudings
Writing Feedbackayu sasmita08 - Aug 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 17, 2016
|People should limit the use of electronic media to maintain relationships in reality
Writing Feedbacktyar32 - Aug 17, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 17, 2016
|Writing IELTS 1, describing bar chart of domestic products growth in different type of countries
2 - hi ramzy.... ... increasing trend in a row since from 1960s to 1990s. (from... to...., if you want...
Writing Feedbackramzi06 - Aug 16, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 17, 2016
|Children Obesity ratio has risen in western countries
Writing FeedbackKhatarizNS - Aug 17, 2016 / RezaAnandatama17 - Aug 17, 2016
|Work or travel? The dilemma of adolescents after finishing third school and before beginning college
4 - Hi Halim. I am delighted to meet this medium. I have read your writing closely. Let me help you...
Writing FeedbackHalim15 - Aug 14, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 17, 2016
|Modern form of communication could be negative for us ??
Writing Feedbackalfadmishal20 - Aug 17, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 17, 2016
|Taking a gap year for going a vacation or getting a job is being part of teenager's lifestyle
3 - hi.... ... that it is very valuable for them in order to improve their mentality Nevertheless, the...
Writing FeedbackRezaAnandatama17 - Aug 15, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 17, 2016
|What Islam really says about women: TED summery
3 - hi ekaa.. According to Alaa Murabit, as a young moslem woman she never thoughtthinks that God judge...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 16, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 17, 2016
|Writing IELTS: Children with Obesity (Cause and Effect)
3 - Hi Ilham, as I go through the essay, I believe you were able to address the argument clearly, you...
Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Aug 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 17, 2016
|The existence of high connectability through electronic letters makes people unsociable
2 - Greetings Mr Halim Such a pleasure having opportunity to share knowledge in writing ielts.. In modern era, telecommunication...
Writing FeedbackHalim15 - Aug 17, 2016 / ramzi06 - Aug 17, 2016
|The cutting-edge technology brings a tremendous negative impact on human's relation with others
NEW - Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their...
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|The youth in many countries is unskilled. Compulsory military service is good and necessary for them
3 - Hi Lupin_a1315616. I have some corrections for your essay. Feel free to discuss :) Second Paragraph A friend...
Writing FeedbackLupin_a1315616 - Aug 16, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 17, 2016
|Fighting for Aleppo, who is the target?
2 - Hi Yusuf. Welcome to Essay Forum. You have been the right medium to improve your writing. If it...
Writing FeedbackYusuf05 - Aug 17, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 17, 2016
|SUMMARY ARTICLE - PLAN A BELGIAN WAFFLE TOUR
4 - Hello my speaking partner! I found your writing is well developed and a reliable information. My suggestion is...
Writing FeedbackPermata08 - Aug 16, 2016 / Yusuf05 - Aug 17, 2016
|ARTICLE SUMMARY : UNTOLD STORY BEHIND CHILDREN's TALE "The Little Prince"
2 - Hi Atikah, your writing is a good job. You passed the major errors. Let me help you to finalize...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 16, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 16, 2016
|Life: How Barbershop can Keep men Healthy
Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Aug 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 16, 2016
|TED talks: Could we cure HIV with lasers?
3 - Hi Mahdi. You show the better progress in the writing skill since you reduce your mistakes of the grammar....
Writing Feedbackkobayakawa07 - Aug 16, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 16, 2016
|Essay about : What does StockBroker do?
5 - Hi Coban, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF, we definitely feel more energized whenever we read...
Writing Feedbackscoban - Aug 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 16, 2016
|Intel Reinvents Itself to Stay King in a Changing World
3 - hi eka! here are some suggestions and corrections for your essay. In order to win that competitionachieve winning...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 16, 2016 / azmi23 - Aug 16, 2016
|Uses of Leisure Time - the best way to rejuvenate body and mind is to spend time in nature
3 - Hi Terminal123, below are my suggestions for your review; - The researcher s are reporting higher - levels...
Writing FeedbackTerminal23 - Aug 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 16, 2016
|Athletes vs Focus - it fills entire zone of sign is vague. Peripheral vision in sport - summary
Writing Feedbacksaitama10 - Aug 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 16, 2016
|Astronaut nearly drowns in space
3 - Hi there! I'll give you another tips for your essay. - Being an astronaut is very threatening...
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