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|Summary of Artile World's hardiest animal has evolved radiation shied for its DNA By: Andy Coglan
2 - ...,water bear, is the most toughest creatures on the planet, [NO NEED COMMA] which can survive in AN extreme...
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|Summary article_Your Birth Control Pill Might Raise Your Depression Risk
2 - A research institute in Denmark conducted a study involving more that 1 million women and adolescent girls about...
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|Social media on the Internet are getting improved, to make most people around connect to one another
2 - Hi Fadhila Let me give you some correction ... social media brings (a) negative effect on adolescent behavior(behaviour)...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Oct 4, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 5, 2016
|TEDx Summary How the Panama Papers journalists broke the biggest leak in history by Gerard Ryle
3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections Economic controls the world. That first sentence (...)...
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|TED Summary: The Truth about Lying
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|Article Summary - Hurricane Matthew Makes Landfall in Haiti
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|There is advice that teenagers should reach a job before continuing to study in school or university
2 - Hello Your text will sound much more professionally written if you apply the following adjustments to it: ...
Writing FeedbackBekuk22 - Oct 4, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Oct 5, 2016
|Social networking is the leading cause why individuals are losing interaction among family members
2 - Hi Ilmy. I am pleased to read your essay because you have understood about the systematic of the essay....
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Oct 4, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 5, 2016
|The experience of working and saving money for the higher education - gap year from school benefits
2 - Hi Fadhil Let me give you some correction Teenagers get advices(piece of advice) by older people to have...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Oct 4, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 5, 2016
|The pie charts gives information of survey result in 2005 and 2009 about employee and their bosses
3 - Hi andikaa. Here I left some suggestion for you. Hope it can help. Overall, the percentage of respon...
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|Ted Summary: The Single Biggest Reason Why Startups Succeed
2 - These are my few suggestions for your summary There are some findings INVENTIONS by Bill Gross about what...
Writing Feedbackgoldieu - Oct 4, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 5, 2016
|The benefits and drawbacks pertaining to experience a workplace before continuing study
4 - I'd use Grammarly to your advantage, it's a free program that automatically checks for errors and alerts you about...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 3, 2016 / Nishi7409 - Oct 4, 2016
|The outcome of observation on the relationships among employees with their manager and partnerships
2 - ... about the relationship ofamong employees with their manager and partnerships inboth year , 2005 and 2009 and itwhich...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Oct 4, 2016 / hirani03 - Oct 4, 2016
|Ghosts and Poltergeists: more common than you think?
2 - ... by some people causing the negative energies phenomenonenergy phenomenons ; such as heard ... However, the ghost...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Oct 4, 2016 / hirani03 - Oct 4, 2016
|Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people
NEW - Ielts writing TASK 2 - Word usage and sentence length problems! Many newspapers and magaziens feature stories about...
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|The free movement of goods across national borders; IELTS writing task 2
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|TED Summary: The unexpected beauty of everyday sounds by eklit Hadero
4 - Hi Alfa...Hopefully the followings will help There are some major errors in the use of simple past tense,...
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 3, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 4, 2016
|Survey of Workers at Work (Supervisor and Co-workers)
2 - AtIN 2005, survey of relationships with supervisor shows that61 percentof workerShavehad a very good relation with their bosses. which...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 4, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Oct 4, 2016
|Result of the survey on workmen's relations with the chiefs and colleagues
2 - it is important to present the graph here The given pie charts provide information about the percentage of...
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|SUMMARYS The colorful propaganda maps in 20 century wars
4 - Helo bams, Hope you doing well, lemme give you some suggestion ==> Maps made to persuade to the...
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|Many media celebrities allegedly exert negative implications on youth generation
3 - Dear Ronaldo, here are some advices for your essay, feel free to correct me, Many media celebrities -->...
Writing Feedbackronaldover71 - Oct 4, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Oct 4, 2016
|Speaking like a leader - most people does not have good speaking skills
2 - Helllo brother Let me give you some advices ... in the several countries do not have good manner...
Writing FeedbackBams17 - Oct 4, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 4, 2016
|TED Talk Summary: Richard St. Johnson; 8 traits of success
2 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections When we people ask about what the meaning...
Writing Feedbackkorbansuspendcuy - Oct 3, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 4, 2016
|TED summary- A New Way to Heal Hearts without Surgery
2 - Hi fauziyah, here is some suggestions for your writing in order to improve it. This phenomenon is caused...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 4, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Oct 4, 2016
|Writing Task 2 Social Media Have Negative Or Positive Effects?
2 - Dear Faridadwi, here are some advices for your writing, feel free to correct me if I get wrong, ...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Oct 4, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Oct 4, 2016
|Article Summary - Donald Trump is right, America's airports are awful
5 - ... of the USA, Donald Trump's(YOU SHOULD KNOW USING 'S I GIVE YOU SOME EXAMPLE DENI'S BOOKS, JONI'S CARS,...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 4, 2016 / Bams17 - Oct 4, 2016
|Ted Summary - Technology hasn't changed love. Here's why
3 - Hi Fadhil, I have some advice for you - Helen Fisher started her presentation by the overview of...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Oct 4, 2016 / goldieu - Oct 4, 2016
|The new developed ink can be used to 3D-print flexible bone implants in any size, shape and form
2 - Hello Yonathan These below are my thoughts towards your summary. Hopefully, that can help you significantly. Check it out...
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|Robotic race cars. The autonomous vehicle was a dream and it has been dream since 1939
Writing FeedbackDioba - Oct 4, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Oct 4, 2016
|Free Trade System - a long-life controversy in myriad side of array of countries
2 - hai alfa I have several suggestions for you I hope it helps avoid to use subject pronoun such...
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 4, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 4, 2016
|TED Talk Summary: Rory Stewart - Why Democracy Matters
2 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections ... often considered to be in the notorious...
Writing Feedbackkorbansuspendcuy - Oct 4, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 4, 2016
|A Five-hundred-meter Aperture Spherical Telescope called FAST was began spying on outer space
2 - HiDioba Let me give you some advice ... in which 200 meters bigger than its(it is) closest rival,...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Oct 4, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 4, 2016
|Most of professions such as lawyer and doctor will see a significant change, as result of machinery
2 - Hi kiev, this is some advice for you. Perhaps useful for you. 1.wrong spelling word proffessions ---->profesions as...
Writing Feedbackkiev - Oct 4, 2016 / Dioba - Oct 4, 2016
|How Did a Blind Man Climb Yosemite's El Capitan in a Day?
3 - Hi there, Here's is some of feedback from me. The first blind climber ever was Erik Weihenmayer in...
Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Oct 4, 2016 / kiev - Oct 4, 2016
|The pie chart gives us information where people who travel to New Zealand come from
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|How Young Malawian Boy Build a Windmill
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|Electronic tongue taste-tests wines so you don't have to (Article Summary)
5 - ... electronic tongue from a platinum, a gold, and carbon electrodes ... This electronic tongue NEW INVENTION can...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 4, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 4, 2016
|TED Summary - Ken Robinson says schools kill creative
3 - Hello Abraham Lincoln, However, If childrenthey [may use adverb] are not prepared to be ... the This...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 4, 2016 / PHA2016 - Oct 4, 2016
|The free movement of goods regulations and its impact on the domestic market
3 - hi.. i have something for you, mate.. connecting between a country and another had[has] become important rule (...)...
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Oct 4, 2016 / korbansuspendcuy - Oct 4, 2016
|Article Summary: Guardian; Cath Kidston to expand in Asia after Hong Kong firm's takeover
2 - Hi. Please, check my notes. Hopefully, it can help you to improve your knowledge. GOOD LICK The fashion...
Writing Feedbackkorbansuspendcuy - Oct 4, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 4, 2016
|Neuro-revolution: sending a message from our brain to someone else's body is possible
2 - Hello rosadesiana I have some advice to you any further information(s) about brains ...any refer to information, that's...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 4, 2016 / Alamsyah Ismail - Oct 4, 2016
|Star basketball player endorses Hillary Clinton
3 - Cavalier stars basketball player STAR, James LeBron [NEED COMMA] has supported Hillary Clinton for TO BECOME THE...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 4, 2016
|Free trade across countries. Tuesday, October 4, 2016
3 - Hi Erwin.. these below are my suggestions for your essay. Hopefully, my notes can help you others argue...
Writing Feedbackerwiin1 - Oct 4, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 4, 2016
|A research published that the amount of ivory elephants in Africa were significantly decreased
2 - Hi PHA Let me give you some advice ... elephants in Africa were significantly decrease(decreased) of demand...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 4, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 4, 2016
|Article Summary: Digital advertising: Doesn't ad up
3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections This year'sRecently, advertising week event ... ... Google...
Writing Feedbackerwiin1 - Oct 4, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 4, 2016
|Anthony Goldbloom told his worries about his niece, Yahli, 9 months old.
5 - Hello, rosadesiana! Your essay is good, but I would give you corrections 1. ... most of professions...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 3, 2016 / erwiin1 - Oct 4, 2016
|Article Summary: One of two lions that escaped from an enclosure in Leipzig zoo in Germany
Writing Feedbackgoldieu - Oct 3, 2016 / fauzankrn - Oct 4, 2016
|TED Summary: How to Stay Calm When You Know You'll be Stressed By Daniel Levitin
3 - Hi Fitri12.. Let me give you some advice.. ... stressful moments such as loosinglosing home keys ... ...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Oct 4, 2016 / sasariri - Oct 4, 2016
|Article Summary: National Geographic; Thoughie dies and species goes extinct
Writing Feedbackkorbansuspendcuy - Oct 3, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 4, 2016
|Kang Lee: Can you really tell if a kid is lying? (TED Summary)
7 - Hi Sasa, it's my pleasure to share regarding your writing. Sorry to say, your writing is confusing, since...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 3, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 4, 2016
|The hidden light of Afghanistan (TED Summary)
4 - Helllo my frined I will try to give you some comments Afghanistan people were suffering from Taliban tribe...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Sep 27, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 4, 2016
|Being a workman or student? Graduates are easy to find in coffee shops, boutiques or other companies
2 - I agree with you 100% UNLESS the individual wants to become an entrepreneur. If someone can break at...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Oct 3, 2016 / Nishi7409 - Oct 4, 2016
|Hurricane Matthew due to hit Haiti with 210kph winds today
3 - Haiti faces a flsh flodds and EXTREME wind storm extremely which was IS a terrible hurricane. Tha THE...
Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Oct 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 4, 2016
|Nowadays, young people need guidance from adults. Should they take a job before go to university?
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Oct 3, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 4, 2016
|TED Summary : Street Art With A message Of Hope And Peace by El Seed
4 - The most interesting part was its Caligraffiti which is a mix between Calligraphy and Graffiti. The most interesting part...
Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Oct 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 4, 2016
|Article summary: Once Sleepy Singapore Has Become Asia's World City-While Hong Kong Is Lagging
3 - ....and two prominent marketS in the region ... .., which according to the writer asIS a result of ......
Writing Feedbackkiev - Oct 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 4, 2016
|Success is a continuous journey (TED Summary)
4 - Many people think that success is just one straight way. This is can[DOUBLE VERBS] explain why dopeople reach success...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 3, 2016
|An Article Summary: Climate Change Could Destroy Wild Relatives of Cereals By 2070
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Oct 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 3, 2016
|Human bones can by recreated in laboratory nowadays.
2 - Hi Ifan.. Here are my thoughts throws your summary. As Intellegent INTELLIGENT society, researchers have utterly (...)...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Oct 3, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 3, 2016
|The speaker, James Oliver, talked about the importances of children to learn about healthy food.
2 - Hi, Aris05 I love to read your review here some advice to improve your writing In that video,...
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