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|When people live in a small area, they know each other well. Threre's no chance for that in big city
2 - Hi Farida. I like the way you explain the benefits. Here is my analysis. 1st paragraph. A few...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 12, 2016 / kobayakawa07 - Aug 12, 2016
|The percentage of transportation access by people who come to New Zealand
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 12, 2016 / Riandi31 - Aug 12, 2016
|The Perseid Meteor Shower Will Really Outdo Itself Tonight
2 - Great, there are some improvements indicated within your essay this time, yet there are still slight mistakes you make...
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 12, 2016 / ilankelo21 - Aug 12, 2016
|Few years ago, many inhabitants lived in big community in the small area. But now it's different.
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 12, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 12, 2016
|Beware, We Will Run Out of Water if We Don't Do These Things!
5 - Hola Kendal, I love the article that u choose. I found it very interesting topic since I'm keen on...
Writing Feedbackriaerizal11 - Aug 11, 2016 / eris28 - Aug 12, 2016
|Excerpt Meaning from I Have a Dream Speech
Writing Feedbackamm_16 - Aug 12, 2016 / amm_16 - Aug 12, 2016
|HOW I TEACH KIDS TO LOVE SCIENCE
3 - ... imaginations wrong and wild because children has unlimittedhave unlimited ideas. Whereas, his job areis to collect, combine and...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 11, 2016 / adip - Aug 12, 2016
|What Do You Know About the Common Cold?
3 - Greetings Mrs sestria, I am pleased to read your writing. However I'm afraid that you need to few adjustments,...
Writing Feedbackbbcheesecake14 - Aug 12, 2016 / ramzi06 - Aug 12, 2016
|Summary, National Geographic This Chart Shows How U.S. Carbon Emissions Are Rising-Again
5 - Hi, Halim. I found that coherence is the most problem in your essay. Thus, sometimes it is hard to...
Writing FeedbackHalim15 - Aug 12, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Aug 12, 2016
|Summary an article : Parents Giving Unproven IQ-Boosting Drugs to Kids with Down's
3 - Hi, Fadhila. Iam about to give you some of my thought on your writing the researcher founded (Found...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 12, 2016 / bornStunna15 - Aug 12, 2016
|Want to Lose Weight? Try Counting Calories
2 - Hi Sestria.. I am delighted to read your writing. However, I think you need improving. I hope you can...
Writing Feedbackbbcheesecake14 - Aug 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 12, 2016
|Summary Article : Our Future School, The Green School
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 11, 2016 / mem77 - Aug 12, 2016
|How Being a Middle Child Affects Your Finances
2 - Hi Permata, making an understandable and structural sentence is one of main problems English beginners have and I...
Writing FeedbackPermata92 - Aug 12, 2016 / ilankelo21 - Aug 12, 2016
|A Social Network Aims to Speed Up Progress in Science
3 - Hi there! just some simple corrections would not hurt, yeah? :D here: ... experiment about scientific network...
Writing Feedbackbbcheesecake14 - Aug 12, 2016 / Rinnegan45 - Aug 12, 2016
|Short introduction and conclusion of Level of education of Bulgarians planning to leave Bulgaria
2 - Hiii ziad,., welcome to essay forum, hopefully it can help you to improve your writing skill. ...
Writing FeedbackZiadRasyid24 - Aug 11, 2016 / hasbi - Aug 12, 2016
|TED Summary by Julia Galef, Why you think you are right even if you are wrong
3 - Thank you very much Mr. Ramzi for your very interesting summarize about TED video. However, i have a few...
Writing Feedbackramzi06 - Aug 11, 2016 / mem77 - Aug 12, 2016
|Two version of the "background, identity, interest, or talent" essay
Writing Feedbackadepani3112 - Aug 12, 2016 / Halim15 - Aug 12, 2016
|Students to attend schools to learn or not?
5 - Hi adip, - Some people make an assumption that teaching children at home - whereas the other peoples...
Writing Feedbackadip - Aug 2, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 12, 2016
|summary TED's video: advice for new grads on living a succsessful life
Writing Feedbackadip - Aug 12, 2016 / Riandi31 - Aug 12, 2016
|Since 1787, the Electoral College has been the system used in U.S to choose the country's president
4 - It is unlikely that the system will change anytime soon. It is unlikely which the system will change...
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Aug 11, 2016 / amm_16 - Aug 12, 2016
|Article Summary : TED's Secret to Great Public Speaking by Chris Anderson
7 - Hello, I've read your summary and now I will give you some suggestions. 1. Well, I remember about...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Aug 10, 2016 / hikuma21 - Aug 12, 2016
|Summary: Plant Life in the Taklimakan Desert
4 - hallo ibal i'd like to suggest you additional corrections ... Tamarix ramosissima and Alhagi sparsifolia with the different...
Writing Feedbackibal28 - Aug 11, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 12, 2016
|TED Talks: 10 ways to have a better conversation
4 - hi kobayakawa97, people in the United States of America Next third, don't do not compare with your...
Writing Feedbackkobayakawa07 - Aug 12, 2016 / onji09 - Aug 12, 2016
|TED talks: Clues to prehistoric times, found in blind cavefish
3 - Hi Mahdi, Recent years, scientists explorea cave to find new species, particularly cave fish--> don't forget to put...
Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25 - Aug 11, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 12, 2016
|Always telling the truth is the most consideration in any relationship between people?
Writing FeedbackCindyliu - Aug 12, 2016 / molly16 - Aug 12, 2016
|IELTS Task 1 (Practice) Results number of vistors to Ashdown Museum
7 - this is my body paragraph Such period of refurbishment, the dissatisfied proportion account for two-fifths of all...
Writing Feedbackyunana - Jul 9, 2016 / adip - Aug 12, 2016
|IELTS - Writing Task 1 Level of education of Bulgarians planning to leave Bulgaria
3 - Hi Ilmi. Your introduction is almost perfect. I like it very well :) You can paraprahe it good,...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Aug 11, 2016 / kobayakawa07 - Aug 12, 2016
|Pandas Get to Know Their Wild Side
8 - Hi riandi, The government says that there are several species ... in 2003, government said that the number...
Writing FeedbackRiandi31 - Aug 10, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 12, 2016
|TED Video by Negin Farsad: Taxonomy of Haters
2 - Hi Fadhillah.. I am going to give you a few suggestions. Much MANY social problems in America...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 12, 2016
|Test 1 TOEFL promotions: based on seniority or on performance?
4 - -In an enterprise, everybody has the desire offor a promotion; itwhich is every employee's dream. -Therefore, most organizations have...
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Jul 27, 2016 / Cindyliu - Aug 12, 2016
|Test 6 TOEFL.Would you prefer taking a career path leading to management or individual positions?
4 - -In these positions ....some moment of our life. Leadership, time management and social skills are the traits which should...
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Aug 11, 2016 / Cindyliu - Aug 12, 2016
|Do you ever heard about Superfood?
5 - hi... Having a healthy body is not an easy thing. Many people believetrust(believe is a general...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 10, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 12, 2016
|IELTS TASK 1 - The sale of foods and drinks on a typical weekday in a coffee shop
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - Aug 12, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Aug 12, 2016
|A smarter, more precise way to think about public health
Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 11, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 12, 2016
|What the West's Ancient Droughts Say About Its Future
4 - Hi ifrosa.. i hope, it can be help you.......... - Californians facing frightening question toward the recent...
Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 11, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 12, 2016
|Article Summary : Facts of Laughter by Sophie Scott
2 - The way you develop paragraphs is good, yet some changes need more improvement in particular paragraph development. ...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Aug 11, 2016 / eddies - Aug 12, 2016
|Summary - Al-Gore New thinking on the climate crisis
2 - Hi Dipa.. Welcome to Essay Forum.. I have read your writing closely. There are some of errors grammatically. I...
Writing FeedbackDipa19 - Aug 11, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 12, 2016
|SUMMARY ARTICLE : Trump's Ideas for Economy, Will He Make America Great Again?
2 - Hi Atikah.. Welcome to Essay Forum I have read your writing closely. I have found some of grammar mistakes....
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 11, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 12, 2016
|The expenditure on Photographic is the highest amongst all other consumer goods of Britain
2 - Greetings Mr Jack Jiang, Just sharing several information regarding to your writing. The chart shows the differences of...
Writing FeedbackJack Jiang - Aug 11, 2016 / ramzi06 - Aug 11, 2016
|Companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently
2 - I completely agree with the strategy of companies consultants for the company to operate more efficiently I would...
Writing Feedbackfireboy99 - Aug 11, 2016 / gabrieloandco - Aug 11, 2016
|'How to Explore the Pantanal' - article
2 - Greetings Mrs Selvi, just sharing for several information regarding to your wrting, It is a part of nation...
Writing FeedbackPermata92 - Aug 11, 2016 / ramzi06 - Aug 11, 2016
|Drawings that show the beauty and fragility of earth
2 - Here is my feedback: As she got many experience, she can illustrate that situation by a unique way...
Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Aug 11, 2016 / payal1982 - Aug 11, 2016
|The Jobs Which Machine Can Do And The One That Can Not In The Future
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 11, 2016 / daniL - Aug 11, 2016
|CBEST prompt- Restriction on how many years a teacher may teach the same subject or grade level?
6 - Thank you Justivy03 for your advice. I will try to write at least one essay everyday. Hope I could...
Writing FeedbackPkyra - Aug 8, 2016 / Pkyra - Aug 11, 2016
|Summary of Article "Britain's First Female Doctor"
Writing Feedbackhikuma21 - Aug 11, 2016 / ashelarisa48 - Aug 11, 2016
|Speedy cannabis spit test could spot people driving while high
3 - Hi Azmi, first if all, linking verbs, these verbs are very minor that are often neglected by a writer,...
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 11, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 11, 2016
|TED Summary : "How to speak so that people want to listen" by Julian Treasure
2 - Hello I rewrote some sentences for you so the text sounds more stylistically refined: There are many...
Writing Feedbackmolly16 - Aug 11, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 11, 2016
|summary TED's video: 6 talks that are music to my ears
4 - Hi Adi, let me suggest you some correction, I found some singural form and spelling mistakes in your writing:...
Writing Feedbackadip - Aug 11, 2016 / grintdevereaux30 - Aug 11, 2016
|HERE'S WHY RIO'S OLYMPIC DIVING POOL TURNED GREEN!
Writing Feedbackeris28 - Aug 11, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 11, 2016
|Article Summary : Asia's Lions Live in One Last Place on Earth-and They're Thriving
3 - Hallo Jomul, If you don't mind, let me correct you summary. they are become thea symbol of strength...
Writing Feedbackjomul01 - Aug 11, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 11, 2016
|It is actually agreed today that sports and social activities play a main role in students' life.
5 - here some correction from me.. other activity activities directly influence --> influence directly therefor --> therefore...
Writing Feedbackmohamadabtahi - Aug 11, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 11, 2016
|Orangutan learns to mimic human conversation for the first time
5 - Hello Eka, Adriano Lameria, from the University of Durham, UK and his team found that ..... Adriano Lameria...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 11, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 11, 2016
|Between Apathy and Risk About Zika in Florida
2 - Hello farida, It is nice to know person who has same interest in IELTS. Overall, I like your essay...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 11, 2016 / mahdinurianto25 - Aug 11, 2016
|HOW TO FIX A BROKEN EDUCATION SYSTEM WITHOUT ANY MORE MONEY
3 - when you make summary you don't need to give your own opinion, just make summary from the article/other website...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 10, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 11, 2016
|Pandas Get to Know Their Wild Side - article from National Geographic
9 - Hello azmi23, Giant panda population have(has) declined and labelled endangered since 1990. The China still have (subject is...
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 10, 2016 / hikuma21 - Aug 11, 2016
|Summary TED The reasons companies fail-and how to avoid them
3 - Every company needs to grow so the owner ignores for not getting any profit. There is [need article] a...
Writing FeedbackHalim15 - Aug 11, 2016 / RAY93 - Aug 11, 2016
|More people in developing countries are purchasing cars.What are the problems and possible solution?
4 - Hi molly, Therefore, I believe collaboration governmentgovernment's collaboration with the ... Moreover, the direct impact of this is...
Writing Feedbackmolly16 - Jul 29, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 11, 2016
|"The jobs we'll lose to machines and the ones we wont" Anthony Goldbloom. TED
Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Aug 11, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 11, 2016
|Family has a bigger influence on young teens than friends. Present your agreement or disagreement.
7 - Your essay so good, but i think you must explain the reason, go deep "why the family give significant...
Writing FeedbackVips - Aug 9, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 11, 2016
|Stem cell brain injections let people walk again after stroke
4 - hii thank you for your feedback but actually i found the same pattern of this sentence "According to recent...
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