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|Four countries: US, Japan, Mexico and Germany scored big in the Hot Dog Eating Contest
4 - Hallo fadli, welcome to essay forum! It is nice to read your writing task 1. Especially your grammatical...
Writing FeedbackFadli_14 - May 31, 2016 / Beauty17 - Jun 1, 2016
|Some businesses find that when new employees join them after finishing their education, they lack...
Writing FeedbackNovi - May 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 1, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 ; Children play computer games become pros and cons
2 - Furqanda, if you wish to know your prediction score for this essay, I would be really glad to assess...
Writing FeedbackBtihbk11 - Jun 1, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jun 1, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 (Practice) Many people depend on their cars for everyday domestic, social and working
4 - Since automobile company provide sophisticated technology and also goodModern or Preliminary its a choice that i suggest -designedis it...
Writing FeedbackNovi - May 31, 2016 / Btihbk11 - Jun 1, 2016
|Whereas rehabilitation can heal druggies from the narcotic adiction, jail will give deterrent effect
4 - My introduction: Narcotics is treacherous. There are myriad number of people who used deadening drugs. Majority people say yes...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - May 31, 2016 / Irvinhi - Jun 1, 2016
|It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood.
3 - hello nahid, this is my suggestions to you. Living near the movie theater is my preferable to me...
Writing FeedbackNahid87 - May 31, 2016 / Meirama91 - May 31, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 (PRACTICE) - UNEMPLOYEMENT CAUSE AND HOW TO SOLVE IT?
5 - Some aspects, such as migrations and global crisis, have givencritical vital contributions to rise up the number of ......
Writing FeedbackMeirama91 - May 25, 2016 / patricrioo - May 31, 2016
|Abstract for a Journal "STUDY ON PRUNING HEIGHTS ON GROWTH, DEVELOPMENT AND BIOMASS YIELD OF MORINGA
3 - Hi Tran, as much as I loved the uniformity of your essay, I had a hard time understanding the...
Writing Feedbacktkhoan1993 - May 30, 2016 / justivy03 - May 31, 2016
|The advantages of living in a large city - a lot of opportunities and potential to develop
3 - Hi Huynh, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family. I hope you find this website valuable as...
Writing Feedbackngocloan - May 31, 2016 / justivy03 - May 31, 2016
|Improved medical care. With many recent major breakthroughs in medication, humans are now accessible
4 - Hey nhanmi! There are some corrections as follows: With many recent major breakthroughs in medications , humans are...
Writing Feedbacknhanmi - May 30, 2016 / Nahid87 - May 31, 2016
|Toefl - Do you believe that online courses should replace classroom learning?
2 - without missing your job and studying in yourthe free time. but I believe that the possibility of interaction and...
Writing FeedbackMikermn - May 30, 2016 / jrojas21 - May 30, 2016
|All students should have equal chance to register at the university.
Writing FeedbackNahid87 - May 27, 2016 / justivy03 - May 30, 2016
|Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to have their friends around.
3 - I think, it is depending(depends) on everyone's attitude towards life. ... important role in our lives and consider (considered?)...
Writing FeedbackNahid87 - May 28, 2016 / Mikermn - May 30, 2016
|Is it right or wrong for children to engage in paid work to get a salary at the early age? Task 2
2 - Natt, in a real test, you need to play safe because there are many considerations that you should think...
Writing Feedbackabzabzabz - May 30, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 30, 2016
|It is the visitors' responsibilities to learn how to behave properly when they visit other countries
4 - Thank you so much for correcting my essay. I've found this website is very helpful and your comments are...
Writing Feedbackabzabzabz - May 29, 2016 / abzabzabz - May 30, 2016
|A COMPARISON THE EFFECT OF DOMESTIC PREPARED AND IMPORTED HERBAL MEDICAL PRODUCTS IN FEED ON EGG PR
Writing Feedbacktkhoan1993 - May 26, 2016 / tkhoan1993 - May 30, 2016
|You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles away. Compare different kind of transportation
Writing FeedbackNahid87 - May 29, 2016 / tkhoan1993 - May 30, 2016
|TOEFL independent essay: Would you maintain your customs if moving to another country?
Writing FeedbackMikermn - May 30, 2016 / hamed54321 - May 30, 2016
|All over the world, children and adults are facing an increasing problem with excess weight.
3 - Hi Komoliddin, welcome to the EssayForum team :) This is the right place to develop your writing skills, especially...
Writing FeedbackKoma - May 27, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 30, 2016
|TOEFL independent writing:A Leader should have strong opinions and should not change his/her opinion
2 - Hi Huang, welcome to EssayForum :) I hope you can find this website is fruitful towards your development in...
Writing Feedbacknoalawyer - May 29, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 30, 2016
|TASK1-The table below compares the average number of vehicles using three roads.
2 - Mersad, this essay 'flow of ideas' was okay, the information that you delivered was understandable. The introduction paragraph was...
Writing Feedbackmersad - May 28, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 28, 2016
|What is the most important thing in a relation?
3 - Hi Hamed, frankly you are good at writing, but you need more practice. Bear in mind the practice makes...
Writing Feedbackhamed54321 - May 27, 2016 / mersad - May 28, 2016
|TOEFL essay - New theater in the neighborhood. Sugesstions?
Writing FeedbackJoydoc - May 24, 2016 / Joydoc - May 27, 2016
|Children should be allowed to do paid work or not
Writing Feedbackrozhnaz - May 27, 2016 / rozhnaz - May 27, 2016
|Attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals
5 - For many years ago, an outstanding discovery by psychologists has revealedis that colour has been possible tocan influence people's...
Writing Feedbackichanpants89 - Apr 17, 2016 / abhay4556 - May 27, 2016
|IELTS 2. We have become depended upon bad news and the mass media are aware of this.
2 - Glad to read your essay again, Maxim! None of the strengths of your previous writing are lost in this...
Writing FeedbackMaximKlopunov99 - May 27, 2016 / akbartaufiq25 - May 27, 2016
|In my way of thinking, children attending to private schools is reasonable idea. IELTS 2
4 - Xiao, I notice that there is no thesis statement in your essay. This is dangerous, and therefore you will...
Writing Feedbacksuxiaojing - May 5, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 27, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 (PRACTICE) - THE DANGERS OF CHEMICAL COMPOUND USAGE
4 - Nurul, I would like to try to assess you based on IELTS writing task 2 public band descriptors. ...
Writing FeedbackMeirama91 - May 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 27, 2016
|Unhealthy lifestyle has been an increasing trend. Who should guide kids in the right direction?
Writing FeedbackSDan - May 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 27, 2016
|Debate Essay Morality and Legalality of Abortion Paper
3 - I agree to every thought of yours. Abortion should not be permitted unless its unavoidable. Killing fetus is a...
Writing Feedbackabhay4556 - May 26, 2016 / cleokmoore - May 27, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 ; Unemployment is a big disaster.
6 - Hi Furqanda, glad to read your essay, here are some suggestions for you Paragraph 4 Secondly, government should...
Writing FeedbackBtihbk11 - May 24, 2016 / Novi - May 26, 2016
|Inventors and doctors, both are important to our society and both are play their role wisely.
7 - Hy, Ram. It is a great chance to give some suggestions for your essay. Inventors are not as important...
Writing Feedbackppdev - May 26, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - May 26, 2016
|If the world was ruled by female leaders, it would have been peaceful. Is it true?
3 - Subi, I can see that you got a very-comprehensive feedback from one of EssayForum contributors. I hope you can...
Writing FeedbackSDan - May 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 26, 2016
|Factors of unemployment and steps to solve it
6 - Hey, your essay is quite refreshing. You certainly have alot of ideas and creativity. I found some minor mistakes...
Writing Feedbackrozhnaz - May 25, 2016 / SDan - May 26, 2016
|The teenager's decision for having a paid work is not a poor decison at all. IELTS TASK 2
3 - Hi Patric, here are my thoughts on your concerns. 1. In discussion and give opinion type, do we...
Writing Feedbackpatricrioo - May 25, 2016 / justivy03 - May 26, 2016
|IELTS Task 2- Computers should never have been invented
4 - hello novi, this is my suggestion for your introduction :) The computer is a valuable discoveryinvention that has...
Writing FeedbackNovi - May 23, 2016 / Meirama91 - May 26, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 - In some societies, fashion is becoming more and more important
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 24, 2016 / justivy03 - May 26, 2016
|Some people believe that food adverts should be banned.Do you agree or disagree?
3 - Indeed, welcome to the big family of EssayForum, Zehra! You are very lucky to join us because we provide...
Writing Feedbackzombibezelye - May 26, 2016 / akbartaufiq25 - May 26, 2016
|The usage of chemical materials in food-making and maintenance has become a debatable issue.
3 - Hi Patric, aside from the corrections above that focused on your grammar, I would like to add that your...
Writing Feedbackpatricrioo - May 26, 2016 / justivy03 - May 26, 2016
|IELTS Task 1; Describe the diagram about nuclear reactor
4 - Furqanda, you need to complete the way that you present the information in the overview / introduction of your...
Writing FeedbackBtihbk11 - May 17, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 26, 2016
|People should be allowed to work as long as they want? Agree or disagree
6 - I agree with this point Punctuation Aiding to this many researches conducted globally ... Aiding to this, many researches...
Writing FeedbackAdeel80 - May 24, 2016 / 13williamsm - May 25, 2016
|Tourism is an excellent way to develop a country, but it can also cause harm. How can countries ensu
3 - Azamat, if you wish to know what is your approximate band score for this writing. I would like to...
Writing FeedbackAzamat98 - May 22, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 25, 2016
|The range of visitors who travelled Brighton attractions in England between 1980 and 2010.
3 - Lily, I notice that you still need to elaborate this essay further, since it only has 154 words. This...
Writing Feedbackliv_ryu - May 25, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 25, 2016
|IELTS 2 - An increase the production of consumer goods results in the damage
2 - Hi Rere, here are some additional insights and corrections to your essay. -The highly increase ( increase is...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 25, 2016 / justivy03 - May 25, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 - Some support development in agriculture, such as farming industry
2 - Hi Rere, as much as I applaud you in noting the suggested approach on your essay, I would also...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 25, 2016 / justivy03 - May 25, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 ; GLOBAL WARMING one of extremely serious problem
NEW - Our world encounters global warming as one of extremely serious problem. Global warming is a consequence of several factors....
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|Should computer be invented? They have made a very vital impact on society.
4 - Hi mei, I have a several suggestions to your essay. Hope it helps. Over two decades, computer has...
Writing FeedbackMeirama91 - May 24, 2016 / patricrioo - May 25, 2016
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - People lived in small villages or big cities
2 - hi nurul, glad to read your essay, gere are some sugestions for you specifically for your introduction :...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - May 23, 2016 / Novi - May 25, 2016
|World has changed speedily from manual era to digital era because of computers
3 - It was hard wayuneasy to recall all past data, someonepeople must the computer has made make workingmore efficiently ....
Writing FeedbackUvyL26 - May 24, 2016 / madmoiselle - May 25, 2016
|I strongly agree that gender could affect on the job position based on certain abilities.
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 24, 2016 / madmoiselle - May 25, 2016
|"Choosing between a house and a business" - TOEFL Essay
4 - ... house show us the responsibility of us withfor our family. A house creates a stablesafe place for your...
Writing Feedbackwaterforce1205 - May 24, 2016 / madmoiselle - May 25, 2016
|Internet marketing of four different business retails in New Zeland is depicted in the pie chart
2 - Nurul, I notice that you've been using similar pattern of writing Task 1 like I usually write. This is...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - May 24, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 24, 2016
|Technology is very much a part of modern life. Check usage, structure and convention (Cbest writing)
2 - Erwin, it is nice to see your revision of this essay. I do realize that you've made some adjustments....
Writing FeedbackExt7484 - May 22, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 24, 2016
|The 20th century saw great change. In your opinion, what is one change that should be remembered?
2 - ... I found that the more most important change (...) is the different way of the communication by...
Writing FeedbackNahid87 - May 24, 2016 / Joydoc - May 24, 2016
|Comparison Three universities BU, USC and UB.
4 - Hi Hang, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope you find this website a credible source of information...
Writing Feedbackminicover93 - May 23, 2016 / justivy03 - May 24, 2016
|Foreign language study by children in the first education level is more effective than in second
3 - Hi Nurul, I definitely agree that learning a second language, in this case, a foreign language at an early...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - May 23, 2016 / justivy03 - May 24, 2016
|The transition of the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy between 2000 and 2050
2 - ... Yemen and Italy between 2000 and 2050 and theas projected year 2050. Overall, it is noticeable that the...
Writing Feedbackpebzna12 - May 24, 2016 / Btihbk11 - May 24, 2016
|Pupils should be trained how to become a precedent parent. IELTS
3 - On the other hand, becoming well-qualified parents does not require such parenthood ... Children can learn it naturally throughout...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - May 20, 2016 / madmoiselle - May 24, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 (Practice) - Nature vs Nurture in Sharping People' Personalities and Developments
3 - Hi Febri, your essay is understandable, however i have some suggestions for you. ... they parents were genius...
Writing Feedbackpebzna12 - May 24, 2016 / madmoiselle - May 24, 2016
|People tend to have a limited time in doing face-to-face communication with their friends
2 - Zelly, welcome to EssayForum :) This is a valuable place to enhance your writing skill by giving peer-corrections to...
Writing Feedbackzelly - May 24, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 24, 2016
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