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Research advice on TOEFL, SAT, IELTS, GRE and other academic essays (page 117)

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The growth of salmon begin when eggs from adult salmon laid out at small stones under the reeds

Writing FeedbackTrisulastri - Apr 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
Salmon Life Cycle. It lives in upper-river which move slowly as an egg for 5 until 6 months.

Writing Feedbackyonathan66 - Apr 4, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 4, 2016
IELTS TASK I: the satisfaction of spending money - in shops, restaurants, and design (New Zealand)

Writing Feedbackfardan10 - Apr 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
Taks 1 : the employees according to their gender in the Great Britain

Writing FeedbackLaPolo11 - Apr 3, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 4, 2016
Does Charging Tourist For Admission Has More Merits Than Demerits?

Writing Feedbackyonathan66 - Apr 4, 2016 / Hadiyati Fudla - Apr 4, 2016
From the chart: Native Australia experienced the largest number entering Movie Theater at 70%

Writing FeedbackDesty22 - Apr 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
Many citizens should pay admission to visit museum. Money is spent eg. for rebuilding the facility.

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IELTS TASK 2: Whether crime prevention should be done or not.

Writing Feedbackichanpants89 - Apr 4, 2016 / La Baso - Apr 4, 2016
A fixed punishment delivers some benefits for human being - IELTS TASK 2.

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The advantages gain by museums when charging visitors for admission

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The consideration of entrance fee in some museums

Writing Feedbacktiraatira11 - Apr 4, 2016 / fardan10 - Apr 4, 2016
Museums are supposed to be affordable to all people

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Charging people for admission to the museums; original writing, 40 minutes

Writing Feedbackangga93 - Apr 4, 2016 / fardan10 - Apr 4, 2016
IELTS TASK 2: The rich and poor nations have the gap after that what the cause and solution the case

Writing Feedbackdina79 - Apr 3, 2016 / LaPolo11 - Apr 4, 2016
Railway passengers in the U.K. In 1950, the National train stood at top rank with 1,000 users

Writing Feedbackfardan10 - Apr 4, 2016 / tiraatira11 - Apr 4, 2016
IELTS Task 2 Government should introduce new technologies or offer free education to improve life

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The life cycle of salmon marine creature - big size of fish in river and in ocean habitat

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Tourism can cause some problems in socio-culture due to its bad influence.

Writing Feedbackadeclara - Apr 3, 2016 / Yusri31 - Apr 4, 2016
Helping the young generation be ready to face the globalization era is the task of education sector.

Writing Feedbacknelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Apr 4, 2016
IELTS TASK 1. Four places visited by three different people migrants living in Australia

Writing Feedbacknelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 4, 2016
IELTS writing Task 2 : The media in people's lives and politicians

Writing Feedbacklily89 - Apr 3, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Apr 4, 2016
Can we get more knowledge about the whole world only by television broadcasts or movies?

Writing FeedbackMasfufah - Apr 3, 2016 / fardan10 - Apr 4, 2016
Increasing a large number of flight is widely known in whole world. What is the effect of this?

Writing Feedbacklily89 - Apr 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Apr 4, 2016
Writing Task 2: In order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing

Writing FeedbackMasfufah - Apr 3, 2016 / fardan10 - Apr 4, 2016
IELTS 2 : Rich vs Poor Nations - income achievement gap has been growing for at least fifty years

Writing Feedbacklily89 - Apr 3, 2016 / fardan10 - Apr 4, 2016
Issue price of stuff about the which are relatively inexpensive

Writing Feedbackrahmat248 - Apr 1, 2016 / yonathan66 - Apr 4, 2016
The massive usage of electronic media has a drawback on the society's private relationships.

Writing FeedbackRAY93 - Mar 28, 2016 / nurannisaputry92 - Apr 3, 2016
Some people argue that those who live in apartment tower is far from social life; IELTS

Writing Feedbackadeclara - Apr 3, 2016 / yonathan66 - Apr 3, 2016
The pie chart presented the plus points and problems the most general categories of Fairmont Islands

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Almost a half of the Fairmont Island disbenefits come from high cost living

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The general merits and demerits of visiting Fairmont Island; expensive living cost was complained

Writing Feedbacknelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016 / Sawsana - Apr 3, 2016
IELTS TASK I: cell-pone market share - upward trend in Nokia, Motorola, and Sony Ericsson.

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Task 1 : mobile phone manufacture for two consecutive years (2005 and 2006)

Writing FeedbackLaPolo11 - Apr 3, 2016 / xutong - Apr 3, 2016
It is clear for me that the increasing percentage of overweight among children is parents' mistakes

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Early education boosts creativity, although it can bring detrimental effect on mentality development

Writing Feedbacknurannisaputry92 - Apr 1, 2016 / nelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016
Tourism can give bad impacts for local culture and environment. There are several ways to reduce it.

Writing Feedbackrahmat248 - Apr 1, 2016 / nelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016
The percentage of people attending several public areas in Australia

Writing FeedbackLita27 - Apr 3, 2016 / dina79 - Apr 3, 2016
Punishment is given to someone who breaks the rule; fixed punishment for all kinds of crimes?

Writing FeedbackDesty22 - Apr 3, 2016 / adeclara - Apr 3, 2016
Lack of emotional and social education from family as the main cause of crimes among teenagers

Writing FeedbackLaPolo11 - Apr 3, 2016 / nelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016
There is no consensus about the learning foreign language age for children among experts.

Writing Feedbackmeco - Apr 3, 2016 / dina79 - Apr 3, 2016
A thing that you can learn about another country by visiting it and impossible to know just from TV?

Writing FeedbackEster Napitupulu - Apr 3, 2016 / nelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016
Many people say that the bliss count on money whilst another say that money is not all in life.

Writing FeedbackWiwik Mujahidin - Apr 3, 2016 / lily89 - Apr 3, 2016
Human eagerness to purchasing unnecessary items; IELTS TASK 2.

Writing Feedbacknelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016 / adeclara - Apr 3, 2016
'keep-in-touch with the entire world'; Without the internet, the world would be completely different

Writing Feedbackadeclara - Apr 3, 2016 / nelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016
The effect of global trade increase - goverment changes so local companies can take advantage of it

Writing FeedbackMasfufah - Apr 3, 2016 / adeclara - Apr 3, 2016
A breakdown of employment labour from different genders based on the kinds of job in Britain 2005

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Holidaymakers and businessmen have been enjoyed the ease and convenience of air transportation

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Task 1 : The charts show in percentage in terms of the results of a survey of a new shop

Writing FeedbackLaPolo11 - Apr 2, 2016 / nelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016
Child labor is a common and dangerous phenomenon in some parts of the world.

Writing FeedbackAnaguna - Apr 3, 2016 / lily89 - Apr 3, 2016
Nowadays, folk tend to shop more intense even for items which they do not really need

Writing FeedbackLita27 - Mar 27, 2016 / Desty22 - Apr 3, 2016
Task 2- Walking is known to be beneficial for health and yet fewer and fewer people are walking thes

Writing FeedbackDesty22 - Apr 3, 2016 / Lita27 - Apr 3, 2016
Fish pie production process; peas and sous are given before arranging with potatoes and wrapping.

Writing Feedbackwahyu - Apr 3, 2016 / Desty22 - Apr 3, 2016
Child labour. In this modern era, several children works to earn money.

Writing FeedbackMasfufah - Apr 3, 2016 / adeclara - Apr 3, 2016
Social media vs politicians and their impact on the public - IELTS TASK 2

Writing FeedbackDiandin16 - Apr 3, 2016 / nelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016
IELTS Task 1 - Proportion of various citizens in Australia who comes to certain places

Writing Feedbackadrian21 - Apr 3, 2016 / dina79 - Apr 3, 2016
Having a job you love doing is not the only factor that makes you happy. (IELTS WRITING TASK 2)

Writing Feedbackadeclara - Apr 3, 2016 / Lita27 - Apr 3, 2016
In the true happines the emotions and love is involved, not money.

Writing FeedbackLa Baso - Apr 3, 2016 / adeclara - Apr 3, 2016
TASK 2 IELTS: The violent crime among youngsters since parents and teachers

Writing Feedbackdina79 - Apr 3, 2016 / Anaguna - Apr 3, 2016
Recently the television has become a medium where people can study about overseas

Writing FeedbackWiwik Mujahidin - Apr 3, 2016 / LaPolo11 - Apr 3, 2016
"Shining stars in the dark skies" Should money be spent on space exploration?

Writing Feedbackbehieli - Apr 2, 2016 / behieli - Apr 3, 2016

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