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|Article Summary : TED's Secret to Great Public Speaking by Chris Anderson
7 - Hello, I've read your summary and now I will give you some suggestions. 1. Well, I remember about...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Aug 10, 2016 / hikuma21 - Aug 12, 2016
|Summary: Plant Life in the Taklimakan Desert
4 - hallo ibal i'd like to suggest you additional corrections ... Tamarix ramosissima and Alhagi sparsifolia with the different...
Writing Feedbackibal28 - Aug 11, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 12, 2016
|TED Talks: 10 ways to have a better conversation
4 - hi kobayakawa97, people in the United States of America Next third, don't do not compare with your...
Writing Feedbackkobayakawa07 - Aug 12, 2016 / onji09 - Aug 12, 2016
|TED talks: Clues to prehistoric times, found in blind cavefish
3 - Hi Mahdi, Recent years, scientists explorea cave to find new species, particularly cave fish--> don't forget to put...
Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25 - Aug 11, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 12, 2016
|Always telling the truth is the most consideration in any relationship between people?
Writing FeedbackCindyliu - Aug 12, 2016 / molly16 - Aug 12, 2016
|IELTS Task 1 (Practice) Results number of vistors to Ashdown Museum
7 - this is my body paragraph Such period of refurbishment, the dissatisfied proportion account for two-fifths of all...
Writing Feedbackyunana - Jul 9, 2016 / adip - Aug 12, 2016
|IELTS - Writing Task 1 Level of education of Bulgarians planning to leave Bulgaria
3 - Hi Ilmi. Your introduction is almost perfect. I like it very well :) You can paraprahe it good,...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Aug 11, 2016 / kobayakawa07 - Aug 12, 2016
|Pandas Get to Know Their Wild Side
8 - Hi riandi, The government says that there are several species ... in 2003, government said that the number...
Writing FeedbackRiandi31 - Aug 10, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 12, 2016
|TED Video by Negin Farsad: Taxonomy of Haters
2 - Hi Fadhillah.. I am going to give you a few suggestions. Much MANY social problems in America...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 12, 2016
|Test 1 TOEFL promotions: based on seniority or on performance?
4 - -In an enterprise, everybody has the desire offor a promotion; itwhich is every employee's dream. -Therefore, most organizations have...
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Jul 27, 2016 / Cindyliu - Aug 12, 2016
|Test 6 TOEFL.Would you prefer taking a career path leading to management or individual positions?
4 - -In these positions ....some moment of our life. Leadership, time management and social skills are the traits which should...
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Aug 11, 2016 / Cindyliu - Aug 12, 2016
|Do you ever heard about Superfood?
5 - hi... Having a healthy body is not an easy thing. Many people believetrust(believe is a general...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 10, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 12, 2016
|IELTS TASK 1 - The sale of foods and drinks on a typical weekday in a coffee shop
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - Aug 12, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Aug 12, 2016
|A smarter, more precise way to think about public health
Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 11, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 12, 2016
|What the West's Ancient Droughts Say About Its Future
4 - Hi ifrosa.. i hope, it can be help you.......... - Californians facing frightening question toward the recent...
Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 11, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 12, 2016
|Article Summary : Facts of Laughter by Sophie Scott
2 - The way you develop paragraphs is good, yet some changes need more improvement in particular paragraph development. ...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Aug 11, 2016 / eddies - Aug 12, 2016
|Summary - Al-Gore New thinking on the climate crisis
2 - Hi Dipa.. Welcome to Essay Forum.. I have read your writing closely. There are some of errors grammatically. I...
Writing FeedbackDipa19 - Aug 11, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 12, 2016
|SUMMARY ARTICLE : Trump's Ideas for Economy, Will He Make America Great Again?
2 - Hi Atikah.. Welcome to Essay Forum I have read your writing closely. I have found some of grammar mistakes....
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 11, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 12, 2016
|The expenditure on Photographic is the highest amongst all other consumer goods of Britain
2 - Greetings Mr Jack Jiang, Just sharing several information regarding to your writing. The chart shows the differences of...
Writing FeedbackJack Jiang - Aug 11, 2016 / ramzi06 - Aug 11, 2016
|Companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently
2 - I completely agree with the strategy of companies consultants for the company to operate more efficiently I would...
Writing Feedbackfireboy99 - Aug 11, 2016 / gabrieloandco - Aug 11, 2016
|'How to Explore the Pantanal' - article
2 - Greetings Mrs Selvi, just sharing for several information regarding to your wrting, It is a part of nation...
Writing FeedbackPermata92 - Aug 11, 2016 / ramzi06 - Aug 11, 2016
|Drawings that show the beauty and fragility of earth
2 - Here is my feedback: As she got many experience, she can illustrate that situation by a unique way...
Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Aug 11, 2016 / payal1982 - Aug 11, 2016
|The Jobs Which Machine Can Do And The One That Can Not In The Future
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 11, 2016 / daniL - Aug 11, 2016
|CBEST prompt- Restriction on how many years a teacher may teach the same subject or grade level?
6 - Thank you Justivy03 for your advice. I will try to write at least one essay everyday. Hope I could...
Writing FeedbackPkyra - Aug 8, 2016 / Pkyra - Aug 11, 2016
|Summary of Article "Britain's First Female Doctor"
Writing Feedbackhikuma21 - Aug 11, 2016 / ashelarisa48 - Aug 11, 2016
|Speedy cannabis spit test could spot people driving while high
3 - Hi Azmi, first if all, linking verbs, these verbs are very minor that are often neglected by a writer,...
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 11, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 11, 2016
|TED Summary : "How to speak so that people want to listen" by Julian Treasure
2 - Hello I rewrote some sentences for you so the text sounds more stylistically refined: There are many...
Writing Feedbackmolly16 - Aug 11, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 11, 2016
|summary TED's video: 6 talks that are music to my ears
4 - Hi Adi, let me suggest you some correction, I found some singural form and spelling mistakes in your writing:...
Writing Feedbackadip - Aug 11, 2016 / grintdevereaux30 - Aug 11, 2016
|HERE'S WHY RIO'S OLYMPIC DIVING POOL TURNED GREEN!
Writing Feedbackeris28 - Aug 11, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 11, 2016
|Article Summary : Asia's Lions Live in One Last Place on Earth-and They're Thriving
3 - Hallo Jomul, If you don't mind, let me correct you summary. they are become thea symbol of strength...
Writing Feedbackjomul01 - Aug 11, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 11, 2016
|It is actually agreed today that sports and social activities play a main role in students' life.
5 - here some correction from me.. other activity activities directly influence --> influence directly therefor --> therefore...
Writing Feedbackmohamadabtahi - Aug 11, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 11, 2016
|Orangutan learns to mimic human conversation for the first time
5 - Hello Eka, Adriano Lameria, from the University of Durham, UK and his team found that ..... Adriano Lameria...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 11, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 11, 2016
|Between Apathy and Risk About Zika in Florida
2 - Hello farida, It is nice to know person who has same interest in IELTS. Overall, I like your essay...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 11, 2016 / mahdinurianto25 - Aug 11, 2016
|HOW TO FIX A BROKEN EDUCATION SYSTEM WITHOUT ANY MORE MONEY
3 - when you make summary you don't need to give your own opinion, just make summary from the article/other website...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 10, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 11, 2016
|Pandas Get to Know Their Wild Side - article from National Geographic
9 - Hello azmi23, Giant panda population have(has) declined and labelled endangered since 1990. The China still have (subject is...
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 10, 2016 / hikuma21 - Aug 11, 2016
|Summary TED The reasons companies fail-and how to avoid them
3 - Every company needs to grow so the owner ignores for not getting any profit. There is [need article] a...
Writing FeedbackHalim15 - Aug 11, 2016 / RAY93 - Aug 11, 2016
|More people in developing countries are purchasing cars.What are the problems and possible solution?
4 - Hi molly, Therefore, I believe collaboration governmentgovernment's collaboration with the ... Moreover, the direct impact of this is...
Writing Feedbackmolly16 - Jul 29, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 11, 2016
|"The jobs we'll lose to machines and the ones we wont" Anthony Goldbloom. TED
Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Aug 11, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 11, 2016
|Family has a bigger influence on young teens than friends. Present your agreement or disagreement.
7 - Your essay so good, but i think you must explain the reason, go deep "why the family give significant...
Writing FeedbackVips - Aug 9, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 11, 2016
|Stem cell brain injections let people walk again after stroke
4 - hii thank you for your feedback but actually i found the same pattern of this sentence "According to recent...
Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 10, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 11, 2016
|TED Summary, the skill of self confidence from Dr. Ivan Joseph
3 - Hi Ramzi, What is the important importance of confidence ? ... of confidence on each person, they are...
Writing Feedbackramzi06 - Aug 10, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 11, 2016
|There are three essential qualities of good parents: understanding, support and patience
3 - Form marriage to having have kids in order to create the next generation for the family, we all and...
Writing FeedbackQuang Huy - Aug 11, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 11, 2016
|Government spending on the internet - is it the most appropriate use of money? IELTS task 2
7 - All around the world, extraordinary sums of money ... Hello this is my introduction Such some regions...
Writing Feedbackhuynhngocminh99 - Jul 19, 2016 / adip - Aug 11, 2016
|New Invention Which Gives Hope to Pancreatic Cancer Patient
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 10, 2016 / molly16 - Aug 11, 2016
|Summery article of "Superfood doesn't mean anything, so let's stop using it"
4 - People, nowadays are easily to believe the promise offers by the superfoods super food related to get health...
Writing Feedbackhikuma21 - Aug 11, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 11, 2016
|Summary an article: Finding the right switch can solve the biggest problems
2 - Hi Nur, here's another one from my side; - how malnutrition badly behave about less nutrition problem -...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 11, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 11, 2016
|I need comments for my IELTS Task 1 about Burnaby Public Library (my first writing)
4 - Hi Yoga, indeed, WELCOME to the forum, we hope,like a family, you can trust us with your writing projects...
Writing FeedbackKusumaningtyas - Aug 10, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 11, 2016
|Pixar: The math behind the movies
3 - HI Muhammad, below are my suggestions for your summary; First of all, the way you plot your summary...
Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Aug 10, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 11, 2016
|Summary of Video: Wired Happiness
3 - Hi Nur, below are my suggestions on your summary. - Most citizens in urban society - always say...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 11, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 11, 2016
|Being born in the middle-class in a developing country limits the overall perception of society.
2 - Hi Gabriel, you can see my analysis towards your essay in the detailed descriptions below. I hope you can...
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Aug 10, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 11, 2016
|SUMMARY ARTICLE : GLOBAL CITIZENS, HOW TO CHANGE THE WORLD?
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 10, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 11, 2016
|Summary article: Anxiety on China
3 - The official forecast is predicting of a very small number growth that is incontrovertible inflated for Political reasons. ...
Writing Feedbackadip - Aug 10, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 11, 2016
|TEDx Talks : The Skill of Self Confidence
2 - Without such skill, person will lose believe in her/his self before he/she accomplish her/his tasks. fail to accomplish his...
Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25 - Aug 10, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 11, 2016
|The globalization brings economic and social improvements to the world - the reading passage
2 - You could say: Throughout the reading passes, there are conclusive evidence that prove.... However, the passage also integrates...
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Aug 10, 2016 / adepani3112 - Aug 11, 2016
|Wide arrays of policies have been created to ban public smoking in closed areas
3 - That's no mistake mate, imposing taxes and paying them are two completely different things. Citizens pay taxes, while governments...
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Aug 10, 2016 / gabrieloandco - Aug 10, 2016
|Summarize an article "Why Brexit happened and what to do next"
2 - is considered one of the most profound phenomena If you mention Europe and the rest of the world, you...
Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Aug 10, 2016 / gabrieloandco - Aug 10, 2016
|A chronicle Abuse' at Australia's Nauru Immigration Camp
2 - Your mistakes corrected: The confidential files revealed a massive reports of sexual abuse The victims , who...
Writing FeedbackYusuf05 - Aug 10, 2016 / gabrieloandco - Aug 10, 2016
|It is often argued that distance learning should completely replace classroom learning
2 - This essay is very well written I only suggest some stylistic changes. ... to an enterprise where he...
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Aug 10, 2016 / Davidg021 - Aug 10, 2016
|TED Summary: Inside The Mind of A Master Procrastinator by Tim Urban
2 - Hello I think it'll make more sense if you try constructing some simpler sentences for now. I applied...
Writing Feedbackmolly16 - Aug 10, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 10, 2016
|Disscussion of documents 'Describe Serious Abuse' at Australia's Nauru Immigration Camp.
2 - - This island is a place were immigrantshousing on it. Double verb - Nauru has first housed a detention...
Writing FeedbackCitradipuss22 - Aug 10, 2016 / Risty01 - Aug 10, 2016
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