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Living lonely between advantage and disadvantage

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CCTV, security cameras, etc. Public surveillance criticism- the advantages outweigh the disadvantage

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While the benefits of media presence in a society is clearly, the failures also exist in technology

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IELTS TASK 2: The advantages and disadvantages of such flights and the taxed more in the flights

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The most significant income in 2003 brought travel sector, with 36% of the online retail sale in NZ

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Today, inevitably the number of people committing crime is rising. What could be done to stop it?

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The benefits of making start up business instead of being worker for another company

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Electricity Evocation in Germany in a three-decade period, is revealed in the pie chart.

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The advancement of technology is used to check others activities in this globalized era

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People should not be judged by clothes they wear

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'The traveler should stay away from risky places' Advantage and disadvantage of the new locality.

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Living Alone is The Right Choice

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Learning an another language offers an insight how people from overseas think and see the world

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need

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IElTS writing topic: should rich countries share their wealth with poor?

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A comparison of electricity generation units by source in Germany in 1980 and 2010

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The cutting-edge technology has led media to more accessible in individuals' lives.

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Discuss the causes of rising unemployment among young adults and give some solutions.

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Cutting-edge surveillance technology is beneficial for public safety

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The development of media technology such as TV and internet has affected citizen's activities

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IELTS Task 2 - Walking is known to be beneficial for health but not many people are walking today

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Types of railway transportation used commonly in four countries in 2007.

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IELTS Task 1; a traveler who visited Brighton attractions - did he get bored there?

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IELTS Task 1 - The changes in the number of rental or sales of films (2002 - 2011)

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The presented table highlights information of train transportation in four countries in 2007

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IELTS Task 2 In this sophisticated technology, many devices attract children attantion

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The total rentals and sales of movies over 9 years period from 2002 to 2011

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Proportion of Visitors to England who enjoy four different tourist attractions in Brighton - IELTS 1

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Students Unfocus on Education ___ IELTS Task 2

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The monthly spending on different products of an average Australian kin in a 10 years period

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Global population in different world regions - historical data and predictions for future

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Shopping habit turns people into some financial troubles

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Films in diverse formats at store 2002-2011 - rentals figure had the highest number at the beginning

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Numbers of commercial formats of film rented and its sales from a special stall over a 9-year period

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The information about the United States of America dwellers consuming energy by fuel

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The total of movies rented and sold in diverse formats each year between 2002 and 2011

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Excessive shopping leads to debt - causes and solutions.

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Human consumerism leads to a huge debt

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In this modern era, there are enormous number of people who have extreme weight.

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IELTS TASK 2: The reasons and the solutions of the children's lack of attention in class

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The number of cars is growing along with the economic growth of a country

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Business and money; big budgets for marketing and promoting.

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Empowering the societies with the most effective-functional policies to maintain their advance

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IELTS TASK 2 - Traveling to many different places makes you more sophisticated

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Education and health service cost should be paid by people in prosperity for a country' extra income

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A breakdown of information about holiday maker percentage visiting England in Brighton; 1980 to 2010

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EILTS Task 2: Pupils' Concentrating Hurdle in The Class

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The cause of lack of information for children at school ( TASK 2)

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IELTS TASK 2: THE PEOPLE GET GOOD JOB BY EDUCATION

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2002-2011 timeframe VHS and DVD's. The number of sales and rentals of films in a store.

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Decrease number of overweight needs further solutions by educating the importance of nutrients

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'electricity cost increase' - Some alteration in Australian monthly expenditure in 1991 and 2001

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People take some pictures using photo booths. Below is described how such machines works.

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Task 2: is it necessary for both parents go out to work ?

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Task 2 - Schools should cut art and music out of the curriculum

Writing FeedbackDesty22 - Apr 3, 2016 / Ester Napitupulu - Apr 6, 2016
Nowadays social media and society all encourage people to do what they like

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Economic progress or other factors should be used to measure a country's success - IELTS task 2

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In regard to negative effects emerged by obesity, individuals should take a significant action

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For last few decades, the extreme gap has been recorded between wealthy and poorer countries.

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The photograph is automatically created in a short-time using an automatic photo booth

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