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Increasing a large number of flight is widely known in whole world. What is the effect of this?

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Writing Task 2: In order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing

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IELTS 2 : Rich vs Poor Nations - income achievement gap has been growing for at least fifty years

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Issue price of stuff about the which are relatively inexpensive

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The massive usage of electronic media has a drawback on the society's private relationships.

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Some people argue that those who live in apartment tower is far from social life; IELTS

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The pie chart presented the plus points and problems the most general categories of Fairmont Islands

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Almost a half of the Fairmont Island disbenefits come from high cost living

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The general merits and demerits of visiting Fairmont Island; expensive living cost was complained

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IELTS TASK I: cell-pone market share - upward trend in Nokia, Motorola, and Sony Ericsson.

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Task 1 : mobile phone manufacture for two consecutive years (2005 and 2006)

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It is clear for me that the increasing percentage of overweight among children is parents' mistakes

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Early education boosts creativity, although it can bring detrimental effect on mentality development

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Tourism can give bad impacts for local culture and environment. There are several ways to reduce it.

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The percentage of people attending several public areas in Australia

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There is no consensus about the learning foreign language age for children among experts.

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Many people say that the bliss count on money whilst another say that money is not all in life.

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Human eagerness to purchasing unnecessary items; IELTS TASK 2.

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'keep-in-touch with the entire world'; Without the internet, the world would be completely different

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Punishment is given to someone who breaks the rule; fixed punishment for all kinds of crimes?

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The effect of global trade increase - goverment changes so local companies can take advantage of it

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Lack of emotional and social education from family as the main cause of crimes among teenagers

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A breakdown of employment labour from different genders based on the kinds of job in Britain 2005

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Holidaymakers and businessmen have been enjoyed the ease and convenience of air transportation

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Task 1 : The charts show in percentage in terms of the results of a survey of a new shop

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Child labor is a common and dangerous phenomenon in some parts of the world.

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Nowadays, folk tend to shop more intense even for items which they do not really need

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Task 2- Walking is known to be beneficial for health and yet fewer and fewer people are walking thes

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Fish pie production process; peas and sous are given before arranging with potatoes and wrapping.

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Child labour. In this modern era, several children works to earn money.

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Social media vs politicians and their impact on the public - IELTS TASK 2

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IELTS Task 1 - Proportion of various citizens in Australia who comes to certain places

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Having a job you love doing is not the only factor that makes you happy. (IELTS WRITING TASK 2)

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In the true happines the emotions and love is involved, not money.

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TASK 2 IELTS: The violent crime among youngsters since parents and teachers

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Recently the television has become a medium where people can study about overseas

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"Shining stars in the dark skies" Should money be spent on space exploration?

Writing Feedbackbehieli - Apr 2, 2016 / behieli - Apr 3, 2016
Tour guides are necessary for great trips, but others prefer to travel without help

Writing FeedbackWright - Apr 3, 2016 / LaPolo11 - Apr 3, 2016
Why many people replace older products (although they are still working well) with a new ones?

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IELTS TASK 2: The phenomenon of a global trade in the worldwide

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Which the better? learning a culture by watching program or visiting directly

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IELTS Task 2 - Many people buy products that they do not really need

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taks 1 : travel by using train in Great Britain from 1950 to 2004/5

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To learn about other countries.. By watching television or by visiting directly??? "IELTS WR TASK 2"

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Numerous features contribute to production of a movie and among them some plays the key role

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Children... May they work at certain age or no? "IELTS 2"

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IELTS2 : the increase of using plane nowadays - need the flights be burdened with tax more?

Writing FeedbackLaPolo11 - Apr 3, 2016 / wahyu - Apr 3, 2016
Most people desire the happiness. Some of them think that you can buy it with money. It is not true.

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Children in some kinds of paid work - this is one of the controversial issues. IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Money is the key to happiness - it is one of the important necessities in human life

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A thing that you can learn about another country by visiting it and impossible to know just from TV?

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Youth crime due to the lack of social and emotional learning from their parents as the major cause?

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Rapid developement of internet technology influence people in numerous areas for the better

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These days, as the rising of international trade, many primary requirements are imported from abroad

Writing FeedbackLa Baso - Apr 3, 2016 / Kimbong93 - Apr 3, 2016
IELTS TASK 2 - Doing job that really love not always make people get the happiness

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IELTS TASK 2 - Children should not go to work. They must instead to educate themselves at schools.

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The primary commodities import will make small local business broke. Higher global trade - pros/cons

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During the last three decades, one of the most crucial inventions changing societies' is internet

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Scientists discoveries and political decisions are displayed in the mass media influencing our world

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Happiness is a part of human beings, meaning to feel that something is better. A job for example.

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