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|"One Second Everyday" - Summary TED talks
2 - Hello Faridadwi18 I applied some adjustments to your text so that it sounds more professionally written. They are...
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|Honey-bee Colonies and The Production of Honey - IELTS Task 1
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|Writing Task 2 (unit 2 Workbook CECI) Healthy lifestyle for some people in modern world
2 - Hello ZiadRasyid24 You should consider doing a bit more reading in English - this should help you to...
Writing FeedbackZiadRasyid24 - Aug 17, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 17, 2016
|Do you think that emailing and texting reduce the togetherness? Writing Task 2
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 17, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 17, 2016
|Education and lifestyle. Causes and Effects of Overweight Children - IELTS Task 2
2 - Welcome to EF! Without further ado, let me go in a straight forward case of the introduction. You have...
Writing Feedbackdinafayna04 - Aug 17, 2016 / eddies - Aug 17, 2016
|Many people have more attention to artificial friends than their neighbor surroudings
Writing Feedbackayu sasmita08 - Aug 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 17, 2016
|People should limit the use of electronic media to maintain relationships in reality
Writing Feedbacktyar32 - Aug 17, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 17, 2016
|Writing IELTS 1, describing bar chart of domestic products growth in different type of countries
2 - hi ramzy.... ... increasing trend in a row since from 1960s to 1990s. (from... to...., if you want...
Writing Feedbackramzi06 - Aug 16, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 17, 2016
|Children Obesity ratio has risen in western countries
Writing FeedbackKhatarizNS - Aug 17, 2016 / RezaAnandatama17 - Aug 17, 2016
|Work or travel? The dilemma of adolescents after finishing third school and before beginning college
4 - Hi Halim. I am delighted to meet this medium. I have read your writing closely. Let me help you...
Writing FeedbackHalim15 - Aug 14, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 17, 2016
|Modern form of communication could be negative for us ??
Writing Feedbackalfadmishal20 - Aug 17, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 17, 2016
|Taking a gap year for going a vacation or getting a job is being part of teenager's lifestyle
3 - hi.... ... that it is very valuable for them in order to improve their mentality Nevertheless, the...
Writing FeedbackRezaAnandatama17 - Aug 15, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 17, 2016
|What Islam really says about women: TED summery
3 - hi ekaa.. According to Alaa Murabit, as a young moslem woman she never thoughtthinks that God judge...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 16, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 17, 2016
|Writing IELTS: Children with Obesity (Cause and Effect)
3 - Hi Ilham, as I go through the essay, I believe you were able to address the argument clearly, you...
Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Aug 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 17, 2016
|The existence of high connectability through electronic letters makes people unsociable
2 - Greetings Mr Halim Such a pleasure having opportunity to share knowledge in writing ielts.. In modern era, telecommunication...
Writing FeedbackHalim15 - Aug 17, 2016 / ramzi06 - Aug 17, 2016
|The cutting-edge technology brings a tremendous negative impact on human's relation with others
NEW - Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their...
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|The youth in many countries is unskilled. Compulsory military service is good and necessary for them
3 - Hi Lupin_a1315616. I have some corrections for your essay. Feel free to discuss :) Second Paragraph A friend...
Writing FeedbackLupin_a1315616 - Aug 16, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 17, 2016
|Fighting for Aleppo, who is the target?
2 - Hi Yusuf. Welcome to Essay Forum. You have been the right medium to improve your writing. If it...
Writing FeedbackYusuf05 - Aug 17, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 17, 2016
|SUMMARY ARTICLE - PLAN A BELGIAN WAFFLE TOUR
4 - Hello my speaking partner! I found your writing is well developed and a reliable information. My suggestion is...
Writing FeedbackPermata08 - Aug 16, 2016 / Yusuf05 - Aug 17, 2016
|ARTICLE SUMMARY : UNTOLD STORY BEHIND CHILDREN's TALE "The Little Prince"
2 - Hi Atikah, your writing is a good job. You passed the major errors. Let me help you to finalize...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 16, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 16, 2016
|Life: How Barbershop can Keep men Healthy
Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Aug 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 16, 2016
|TED talks: Could we cure HIV with lasers?
3 - Hi Mahdi. You show the better progress in the writing skill since you reduce your mistakes of the grammar....
Writing Feedbackkobayakawa07 - Aug 16, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 16, 2016
|Essay about : What does StockBroker do?
5 - Hi Coban, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF, we definitely feel more energized whenever we read...
Writing Feedbackscoban - Aug 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 16, 2016
|Intel Reinvents Itself to Stay King in a Changing World
3 - hi eka! here are some suggestions and corrections for your essay. In order to win that competitionachieve winning...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 16, 2016 / azmi23 - Aug 16, 2016
|Uses of Leisure Time - the best way to rejuvenate body and mind is to spend time in nature
3 - Hi Terminal123, below are my suggestions for your review; - The researcher s are reporting higher - levels...
Writing FeedbackTerminal23 - Aug 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 16, 2016
|Athletes vs Focus - it fills entire zone of sign is vague. Peripheral vision in sport - summary
Writing Feedbacksaitama10 - Aug 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 16, 2016
|Astronaut nearly drowns in space
3 - Hi there! I'll give you another tips for your essay. - Being an astronaut is very threatening...
Writing Feedbackbbcheesecake14 - Aug 16, 2016 / Rinnegan45 - Aug 16, 2016
|TED resume : The happy secret to better work
3 - Hi Beauty! 10% of long term happiness canpredictby external world => I think the better sentence is :...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Aug 16, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 16, 2016
|Fiji Wins First Ever Olympic Medal
7 - Hallo my classmate.. I will give some comment for your writing...i hope it will be useful for you to...
Writing FeedbackRiandi31 - Aug 12, 2016 / Permata992 - Aug 16, 2016
|Summary Article : Gay-rights Activists Are Under Pressured by Religious Conservatives
3 - Hallo Farida, I will give me some feedbacks for your summary.. I hope it will useful for you to...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 16, 2016 / Permata992 - Aug 16, 2016
|Get that life: How I Created a National Anti-Bullying Organization
NEW - By: Hearter Wood Rudulph Hi fellas, this is the summary of an article for today. Hope it feed...
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|A Carnival, not A Crusade. Essay about the influence of Rio Olympic Games to Brazil
4 - hii, here my correction ;) -in your essay, it's too much punctuation error. such as, space, period, and...
Writing FeedbackEnvyfire213 - Aug 14, 2016 / bbcheesecake14 - Aug 16, 2016
|TOEFL integrated essay about healing with the presence of animals
2 - The author explains that how pets enhance both ... They are convenient partners for lonely people. Also,...
Writing Feedbackjoo_rad - Aug 16, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 16, 2016
|An info - how long it took to go arround the city before and after the transport was improved
2 - Hi Atikah.. In this writing, you have presented the big problem. You will get a penalty for your score...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 16, 2016
|TED talk: Under water explorer - cave diver
4 - here some comment from me There are many people imagine that diving in underwater most dangerous and imagine cave...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 16, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 16, 2016
|Travelling to Work in Houston and the most popular choice of transportation - IELTS Task 1
2 - Hi Farida. Let me help you. We will establish the good writing together. Please, you meet my footnote and...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 16, 2016
|IELTS Task 1 :Time and Costs to Go Around The City
3 - Farida, it is a great chance to read your writing. Allow me to give some additional insights. The...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 15, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Aug 16, 2016
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Agree and disagree with the effect of modern communication to social lives
2 - Hi..... However, I argue that technologies make less quantity on human interactions, because ... ( i think technology,...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 15, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 16, 2016
|Writing Task 1: Summaries of the dissimilar time before and after expansion and it cost in traveling
2 - Hi Hikuma. I am always curious to read your writing. In a couple of days, you show the better...
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 16, 2016
|The effect of refinements in travel times duration for different form of transportation in the city
2 - Greetings Mrs sofi, It is my pleasure to share knowledge in this forum, Taxi was the most expensive...
Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 15, 2016 / ramzi06 - Aug 16, 2016
|Dealing with people is the most essential skills according to choices of 60% respondents in 1997
2 - Hi Daya. Welcome to EF. Fortunately, you have been the right way to improve your writing. Let me help...
Writing Feedbackdaya23 - Aug 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 16, 2016
|TED Talks : Track Your Happiness; Want to be Happier? Stay in the Moment.
2 - Hi Dinar. Let me help you again. I hope these will improve your grammar when you create the writing...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 16, 2016
|TED : baby diapers inspired scientist to create sophisticated technology
2 - hi miss sofi ... information about 'baby diapers that inspired scientist to contrive ... ... became greater...
Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 15, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 15, 2016
|Summary TED Talks : 5 ways to be a good listener
2 - Hello Faridadwi18 I applied a few stylistic adjustments to your text so that it sounds more professionally written....
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 15, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 15, 2016
|Which aspects of communication skills are the most crucial in a job? Two surveys from 1997 and 2006
2 - Hi Nurul, here's my take on your essay. - A breakdown of communication skills that are equally important...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Aug 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 15, 2016
|Summary Article "10 Beauty Products You Should Never Ever Share"
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 15, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 15, 2016
|Summary Article : Selfish Dogs Would Rather play with a Toy than help a Human
2 - Hi Farida.. I have still found the grammar errors in your writing. These are my corrections to finalise the...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 15, 2016
|Summary out of an article: Sports help heal in the darkest of times
4 - What is the effect of placing the forever in middle of sentence and in the end of sentence? THE...
Writing FeedbackbornStunna15 - Aug 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 15, 2016
|[Task 2] What makes a good teacher? Training or personal qualities?
Writing Feedbackyon959 - Aug 14, 2016 / yon959 - Aug 15, 2016
|Technological proliferation has revolutionised the interaction between people. IELTS essay
NEW - Topic: Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has...
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|Ear Care: Do-It-Yourself Wax Removal
Writing Feedbackbbcheesecake14 - Aug 15, 2016 / Rinnegan45 - Aug 15, 2016
|Summary of the article written by Jennifer S. Holland related to pandas.
Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 15, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 15, 2016
|Essay written on the flaws in the foster care system and solutions to fix them
Writing FeedbackKar2170572 - Aug 12, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 15, 2016
|TED "Got a meeting? Take a walk by Nilofer Merchant"
Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Aug 15, 2016 / JuanSebastianR - Aug 15, 2016
|Discuss the possible advantages and disanvantages of making unemployed people take any job.
Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Aug 13, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 15, 2016
|TOEFL Independent Writing:Nowadays, it is much easier to achieve success with help from one's family
4 - Hi joe, - For instance, peoplesomeone who was born in a silver spoon with his mouth needwealth family...
Writing Feedbackjoetuanlt - Aug 13, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 15, 2016
|Retirement Saving Doesn't Have to Be So Stressful
Writing FeedbackYusuf05 - Aug 15, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 15, 2016
|Transportation network after improvement - how much time is needed to repair transportation system?
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 15, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 15, 2016
|IELTS WTITING TASK 1: how journey times in a city centre changed after improvements were made to the
4 - Hello ekalamarsyari11. I just want to give you little corrections. 1. ... because it costed for nearly Є1.80....
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|Wired Summary : Augmented Reality Games Like Pokémon Go Need a Code of Ethics-Now
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