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Economic inequality is increasing in many countries. Unequal distribution of income.

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Closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Are there more advantages or disadvantages to visiting new places?

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The proportion of British people who saw the film in forth age groups on two decades after 1990

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IELTS 1: the percentage of public community and prosperity in 8 different areas in the worldwide

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Several museums have regulated a policy that the visitors are supposed to pay money for museum entra

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The increase of population causes humanity problem

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Writing IELTS 1: Cinema attendance pattern which occured amidst the four of age groups in the UK

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The cycle's life of salmon which is species of large fish

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The table illustrated the comparison of the budget output of Australian households (1991-2001)

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China has the greatest number of population in the world, while United States is the richest country

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People needs to change their daily routine, habits, because obesity is now a major global epidemic.

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IELTS TASK 1 - Global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

Writing Feedbackdina79 - Apr 4, 2016 / LaPolo11 - Apr 4, 2016
The cycle of the salmon in diverse habitats and stages

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The Criminals Lead People To Stay At Home...___...IELTS Task 2

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IELTS 1: the wealth in a country versus population proportions in various regions of the world

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IELTS TASK 1: Cinema visitors description in the Great Britain in 2 decades

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IELTS TASK 2 e-book as an additional format and it can not replace the presence of a printed book

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The best alernative to prevent crime - 'apply a stringent penalties'

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To solve the fear of crime problem. What official has done is not sufficient to restrict it.

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Salmon put their eggs in the upper river which has slow moving currents - facts from this fish life

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The statistics data about cinema visitors based on different age groups in the United Kingdom

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After 4 years in Lower River, salmons fry will grow into smolts which have size roughly 12-15 cm

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CHARTS the age and gender of single-occupant households as well as how many bedrooms in their houses

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This species originally hatch in fresh water, then live in the sea when it grows. The life of salmon

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The growth of salmon begin when eggs from adult salmon laid out at small stones under the reeds

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Salmon Life Cycle. It lives in upper-river which move slowly as an egg for 5 until 6 months.

Writing Feedbackyonathan66 - Apr 4, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 4, 2016
IELTS TASK I: the satisfaction of spending money - in shops, restaurants, and design (New Zealand)

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Taks 1 : the employees according to their gender in the Great Britain

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Does Charging Tourist For Admission Has More Merits Than Demerits?

Writing Feedbackyonathan66 - Apr 4, 2016 / Hadiyati Fudla - Apr 4, 2016
From the chart: Native Australia experienced the largest number entering Movie Theater at 70%

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Many citizens should pay admission to visit museum. Money is spent eg. for rebuilding the facility.

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IELTS TASK 2: Whether crime prevention should be done or not.

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A fixed punishment delivers some benefits for human being - IELTS TASK 2.

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The advantages gain by museums when charging visitors for admission

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The consideration of entrance fee in some museums

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Museums are supposed to be affordable to all people

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Charging people for admission to the museums; original writing, 40 minutes

Writing Feedbackangga93 - Apr 4, 2016 / fardan10 - Apr 4, 2016
IELTS TASK 2: The rich and poor nations have the gap after that what the cause and solution the case

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Railway passengers in the U.K. In 1950, the National train stood at top rank with 1,000 users

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IELTS Task 2 Government should introduce new technologies or offer free education to improve life

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The life cycle of salmon marine creature - big size of fish in river and in ocean habitat

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Tourism can cause some problems in socio-culture due to its bad influence.

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Helping the young generation be ready to face the globalization era is the task of education sector.

Writing Feedbacknelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Apr 4, 2016
IELTS TASK 1. Four places visited by three different people migrants living in Australia

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IELTS writing Task 2 : The media in people's lives and politicians

Writing Feedbacklily89 - Apr 3, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Apr 4, 2016
Can we get more knowledge about the whole world only by television broadcasts or movies?

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Increasing a large number of flight is widely known in whole world. What is the effect of this?

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Writing Task 2: In order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing

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IELTS 2 : Rich vs Poor Nations - income achievement gap has been growing for at least fifty years

Writing Feedbacklily89 - Apr 3, 2016 / fardan10 - Apr 4, 2016
Issue price of stuff about the which are relatively inexpensive

Writing Feedbackrahmat248 - Apr 1, 2016 / yonathan66 - Apr 4, 2016
The massive usage of electronic media has a drawback on the society's private relationships.

Writing FeedbackRAY93 - Mar 28, 2016 / nurannisaputry92 - Apr 3, 2016
Some people argue that those who live in apartment tower is far from social life; IELTS

Writing Feedbackadeclara - Apr 3, 2016 / yonathan66 - Apr 3, 2016
The pie chart presented the plus points and problems the most general categories of Fairmont Islands

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Almost a half of the Fairmont Island disbenefits come from high cost living

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The general merits and demerits of visiting Fairmont Island; expensive living cost was complained

Writing Feedbacknelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016 / Sawsana - Apr 3, 2016
IELTS TASK I: cell-pone market share - upward trend in Nokia, Motorola, and Sony Ericsson.

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Task 1 : mobile phone manufacture for two consecutive years (2005 and 2006)

Writing FeedbackLaPolo11 - Apr 3, 2016 / xutong - Apr 3, 2016
It is clear for me that the increasing percentage of overweight among children is parents' mistakes

Writing Feedbacknelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016 / adeclara - Apr 3, 2016
Early education boosts creativity, although it can bring detrimental effect on mentality development

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