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|WRITING TASK 1 : the total amount of gold sold in each month throughout the year of 2002 in Dubai
2 - I think your essay is pretty good. However, you have a grammatical mistake : "are measured " not "...
Writing Feedbackvieanh - Jul 2, 2019 / mphuonggg - Jul 3, 2019
|IELTS WRITING Task 1: Active participation rates in top ten sports in 1998 and 2005 in Canada
2 - I think it would be better to change some words paticipation rates ... with rates those in 1998 (word...
Writing Feedbacksensen - Jul 1, 2019 / trvaanh - Jul 2, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1: A survey conducted by a university library
Writing Feedbackopaki1234 - Jul 1, 2019 / opaki1234 - Jul 2, 2019
|IELTS: Importance of teacher's role as opposed to parents in the development of students.
2 - Hello @Balocating, I agree with most of @littlecurious's corrections, except replacing "thru" with "through". "Thru" is a correct word....
Writing FeedbackBalocating - Jun 30, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 1, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 1: Process Diagram of Producing Reliable Forecasts
2 - Hello! Here are some advice: "... and the analysis to the sources" may sound more sensible. "With...
Writing Feedbackselinastchen - Jul 1, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 1, 2019
|Due to many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised
2 - Hi there! It is extremely important that you should check your essay carefully again to correct some spelling and...
Writing Feedbacktamtauheodan - Jul 1, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 1, 2019
|The exercise which I often do and how it get on
3 - 1. There are some spelling mistakes such as undoubtedly and every time. 2. Many of your sentences can be...
Writing FeedbackAnitaliou - Jun 30, 2019 / selinastchen - Jul 1, 2019
|IELTS task 2 : essay about self-study and study in group
4 - @oneouran Hi there! Firstly, restructure your sentences in a way that you would be able to articulate in...
Writing Feedbackoneouran - Jun 26, 2019 / Maria - Jun 30, 2019
|Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic...
Writing Feedbackchituantran99 - Jun 30, 2019 / godstar - Jun 30, 2019
|IELTS Task 2- Death Penalty is essential to control the crime rate
Writing Feedbacktonhi2002 - Jun 28, 2019 / tonhi2002 - Jun 30, 2019
|Economic growth is a way to end hunger and poverty or damage the environment
3 - @vilender Hello there. Let me provide a few comments that will hopefully help you in your writing. ...
Writing Feedbackvilender - Jun 29, 2019 / Maria - Jun 29, 2019
|Summarise the information of two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
2 - @shureoni Hi there! Welcome to the forum. I hope you find the feedback you're looking anywhere here. Next...
Writing Feedbackshureoni - Jun 29, 2019 / Maria - Jun 29, 2019
|Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation. Others want to try and improve them.
2 - -This may not only bring benefits to only themselves but ...Besides, a problems solved ... -if an applicant...
Writing Feedbackviviantruong1120 - Jun 29, 2019 / vilender - Jun 29, 2019
|Which one is better: STEM or STEAM?
3 - @solivagant Hello! Generally speaking, your writing profile is sufficient in terms of providing the bare minimum necessary content...
Writing Feedbacksolivagant - Jun 27, 2019 / Maria - Jun 28, 2019
|High salaries for some individuals - discussion essay.
2 - @luna21 Hello. Firstly, the structure of your essay needs more work. Tinker and tamper with the body paragraphs....
Writing Feedbackluna21 - Jun 28, 2019 / Maria - Jun 28, 2019
|Parents and some teachers recommend naughty and disobedient learners to be taught separately
3 - @tranphuongnhi Hello there. First and foremost, work on the structure of your essay. Notice how the transition in...
Writing Feedbacktranphuongnhi - Jun 27, 2019 / Maria - Jun 28, 2019
|Causes and solutions of reduced family ties nowadays
3 - @nguyentran9795 Hi there! Welcome to the forum. Let me try my best to provide you with substantial feedback...
Writing Feedbacknguyentran9795 - Jun 28, 2019 / Maria - Jun 28, 2019
|It is better for young students to learn English with Vietnamese teachers than native teachers
5 - @tranphuongnhi Hello there! Welcome to the forum. I hope that you find substantial feedback here that you're looking...
Writing Feedbacktranphuongnhi - Jun 27, 2019 / Maria - Jun 28, 2019
|Increasing travel between countries enable people to learn different cultures or increase tension
3 - @murph Hi there! Try adding more dynamism to your writing through incorporating a more structured and yet complex...
Writing Feedbackmurph - Jun 14, 2019 / Maria - Jun 28, 2019
|ARE TAXES FOR AVIATION INDUSTRY APPROPRIATE?
2 - @Mikoliver Hello there! I see that you're new to the forum. Welcome! I hope that you find the...
Writing FeedbackMikoliver - Jun 27, 2019 / Maria - Jun 28, 2019
|Development of economy required for fight against hunger and poverty. Threat for environment?
4 - Hello @Sun241 I hope my feedback will be useful for you you should try to avoid repetition as much...
Writing FeedbackSun271 - Jun 26, 2019 / tranphuongnhi - Jun 27, 2019
|Comparing two maps showing a difference regarding road access to a city hospital
4 - I've revised my writing. I'll appreciate a lot of anyone will like to give me some advice. _____ ...
Writing Feedbackselinastchen - Jun 25, 2019 / selinastchen - Jun 26, 2019
|IELTS-2 : Should we let old languages die?
7 - English has became become the .. live a place which can not cannot connect ... own language dies out,...
Writing Feedbacknaomi1993 - Jun 10, 2019 / oneouran - Jun 26, 2019
|The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and report
NEW - The diagram demonstrates the process of making chocolate. Overall, The process has ten parts which is begun from the...
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|IELTS Task 2- Developed and developing nations should both combat climate change
Writing FeedbackKatherine_Tu1101 - Jun 23, 2019 / Katherine_Tu1101 - Jun 25, 2019
|The price of 800 grams of four kinds of bread in a particular European country
4 - @Sangdoan Hello there! Welcome to the forum. Firstly, try to use words that would help you compress...
Writing FeedbackSangdoan - Jun 22, 2019 / Maria - Jun 25, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 Essay about the problem of stress
6 - @Maria Thank you very much for giving me such useful feedbacks! I will try to write better essay following...
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Jun 24, 2019 / Thangnguyen315 - Jun 25, 2019
|IELTS Task 2 regarding impact of modern technology
NEW - Topic: Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think is making them less...
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|Making people believe in Arts - IELTS task 2-- discussion Essay
Writing Feedbackluna21 - Jun 25, 2019 / agungbachruddin - Jun 25, 2019
|The amount of time spent by telephone in the UK, in three categories, over the seven-year period
Writing Feedbackoneouran - Jun 24, 2019 / oneouran - Jun 25, 2019
|[IELTS TASK 2] Advantages and disadvantages of genetically-modified foods
Writing Feedbackphamhieu98 - Jun 23, 2019 / phamhieu98 - Jun 25, 2019
|The population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
Writing FeedbackThao Huynh - Jun 24, 2019 / Maria - Jun 25, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1: A BAR CHART SHOWS IRRITANTS FOR THEATER-GOERS
4 - @thaley Hi there! Firstly, try minimizing the usage of words that are unnecessary. I repeatedly mention this to...
Writing Feedbackthaley - Jun 21, 2019 / Maria - Jun 25, 2019
|Animal experiments to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products
Writing Feedbacksandyhsu - Jun 23, 2019 / Maria - Jun 23, 2019
|The bar chart illustrates the proportion of overweight men and women in Australia
2 - @myronpage Hi there! Welcome to the forum. I'll provide you with feedback on your writing. Firstly, I...
Writing Feedbackmyronpage - Jun 22, 2019 / Maria - Jun 23, 2019
|Reasons affecting farmland degradation over the world
2 - @LUNA94 Hello there. First and foremost, I highly recommend that you try to be more concise with your...
Writing FeedbackLUNA94 - Jun 22, 2019 / Maria - Jun 23, 2019
|Room for Improvement - Rhetorical Essay Comparison and Contrast
2 - @Martinez1011 Hello there! Let me do my best to provide you with substantial feedback on your essay. ...
Writing FeedbackMartinez1011 - Jun 21, 2019 / Maria - Jun 23, 2019
|IELTS Part II: Should we invest in science education only for the country development.
Writing Feedbackvietcti - Jun 20, 2019 / vietcti - Jun 22, 2019
|IELTS task 1: pie charts about the average percentages of nutrients
3 - Hi, I personal think that your first and second paragraph can be combined as the first paragraph. ...
Writing Feedbackoneouran - Jun 22, 2019 / LUNA94 - Jun 22, 2019
|The pie charts below compare 2 years in terms of online sale in retail sectors in Canada
Writing Feedbacknochu307 - Jun 20, 2019 / nochu307 - Jun 21, 2019
|The invention of computers is one of the most significant inventions all the time. Academic IELTS
Writing Feedbackotgon - Jun 11, 2019 / otgon - Jun 21, 2019
|Positive & Negative to actions to effect environment
Writing Feedbackyennhi2010 - Jun 20, 2019 / vietcti - Jun 20, 2019
|IELTS Writing Part II: Essay about the positive and negative development of tourism in some country
Writing Feedbackvietcti - Jun 19, 2019 / vietcti - Jun 20, 2019
|Task 1 about the proportion of consumer expenditures on different categories
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Jun 20, 2019 / Thangnguyen315 - Jun 20, 2019
|Pie charts showing data on British students speaking additional languages
4 - @Maria Hi Mara, Thank you very much for your constructive feedback! It helps a lot. I really appreciate...
Writing FeedbackTruc02 - Jun 19, 2019 / Truc02 - Jun 20, 2019
|Encouraging the young people to live alone - is it a good idea?
3 - @solivagant Hello there. First and foremost, try to ensure that the language you are using in your articulation...
Writing Feedbacksolivagant - Jun 15, 2019 / Maria - Jun 20, 2019
|IELTS essay Task 1 on Water usage in different areas in the world
3 - @dodquynh Hi there! Next time, it would be beneficial if you could provide the graph alongside your post...
Writing Feedbackdodquynh - Jun 17, 2019 / Maria - Jun 20, 2019
|Investing on the arts is a waste of money - Agree or disagree?
3 - @nguyenvuong Hello there. Let me provide you with feedback on your writing. Firstly, I recommend that you try...
Writing Feedbacknguyenvuong - Jun 16, 2019 / Maria - Jun 20, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: CARE ABOUT ANIMAL EXTINCTION OR HUMAN'S PROBLEM? DISSCUSS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.
4 - @Dang Khoa Hi there! Thanks for being a consistent, active participant in the forum. Let me try my...
Writing FeedbackDang Khoa - Jun 18, 2019 / Maria - Jun 20, 2019
|The bar chart illustrates the age distribution of Australians who did regular physical activity
Writing Feedbacknthao9987 - Jun 19, 2019 / nthao9987 - Jun 20, 2019
|Should be any financial concession made for people who take option for private schools education?
Writing Feedbacktiffanyvietnam - Jun 19, 2019 / tiffanyvietnam - Jun 20, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - DESCRIBING THE DATA FROM TABLE
3 - @Wendynguyen803 Hi there! Let me try to provide a substantial feedback for your essay. First and foremost,...
Writing FeedbackWendynguyen803 - Jun 13, 2019 / Maria - Jun 19, 2019
|IELTS- parents give more freedom to children nowadays
3 - @Jipsa Jadwani Hi there! First and foremost, ensure that you would have clarity in the delivery of your...
Writing FeedbackJipsa Jadwani - Jun 19, 2019 / Maria - Jun 19, 2019
|Genetically modified food as a new solution to agriculture productivity
2 - @baonguyen Hello there! I see that you're new here. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find feedback...
Writing Feedbackbaonguyen - Jun 19, 2019 / Maria - Jun 19, 2019
|What is better: academic or vocational education?
2 - @suong1510 Hi there! Good luck with your exam in October. I'll provide you with feedback on your writing....
Writing Feedbacksuong1510 - Jun 19, 2019 / Maria - Jun 19, 2019
|Writing task 2: education is expensive - funding
5 - I think your ideas are good, and you should reduce redundant words to make your voice stronger. But I...
Writing Feedbackyuanyuan123 - Jun 11, 2019 / suong1510 - Jun 19, 2019
|The chart reveals the data about global sales of IT products (2000 - 2003)
Writing Feedbackmphuonggg - Jun 17, 2019 / mphuonggg - Jun 19, 2019
|Task 1: Table about the annual expenditure of college students
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Jun 18, 2019 / Kate22 - Jun 19, 2019
|IELTS: When designing, the use of a building is the most important, rather than appearance.
5 - @Maria Your comments have been always useful, thank you very much. It was a difficult topic to write, I'll...
Writing Feedbackmanhmoc - Jun 16, 2019 / manhmoc - Jun 19, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: a general thesis that salary is the most vital element of a job
NEW - Question: When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extend do you agree or...
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