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|IELTS TASK 1 - The hierarchical structure in a marketing company
5 - 1. Then, the third is who fills the position of anas advertising executive , he is Mr. Gartner. ...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 6, 2016 / NourNour - May 7, 2016
|TV programmes Australian viewers charts - IELTS (Task 1)
3 - Hi Mochtar, Concerning the introduction, I have checked several ielts books and youtube videos even the ielts website,...
Writing FeedbackNourNour - May 6, 2016 / NourNour - May 7, 2016
|The percentage of non-working females in England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland - IELTS 1
2 - Nour, if you keep doing this, I am afraid that it will be harmful towards your band score. You...
Writing FeedbackNourNour - May 6, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 6, 2016
|Many people think it is important to protect environment, but they make no effort on it themselves
3 - Hi Rere, here's another take on your essay. -is a humaneverybody's obligation, - yet itthis is absolutely important...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 6, 2016 / justivy03 - May 6, 2016
|Solving the environmental problem can positively influence people's health
2 - Hi Victoria,first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we do hope that this is the start of...
Writing FeedbackVictoria1015 - May 6, 2016 / justivy03 - May 6, 2016
|Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Playing games teaches us about life.
Writing FeedbackNahid87 - May 1, 2016 / Nahid87 - May 6, 2016
|Task 2: Limited water resources in the woldwide
2 - Hi Maya, you have a good essay, however i have some corrections for this. I firmly believe that...
Writing FeedbackMaya29 - May 5, 2016 / madmoiselle - May 6, 2016
|'substantial growth in both Petrol and Oil, and Coal'; Comparison of four different types of fuels
Writing Feedbacknana77 - May 5, 2016 / Maya29 - May 5, 2016
|Supporting artists and funding money on arts is not a waste and it's also very essential for society
2 - Hi Mostafa, I can see that you have received a comprehensive modification here on EF and I hope you...
Writing Feedbackm_kmp - Apr 27, 2016 / justivy03 - May 5, 2016
|Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach young persons how to be a good parent
3 - Hi,Azi: I'd like to give you some suggestions. Firstly--Nowadays learning process mostly occur at schools so it...
Writing Feedbackad_ei - May 5, 2016 / suxiaojing - May 5, 2016
|Reasons why adults decide to study and why such education should be shared
4 - Hi Maxim Thank you for your helpful feedback for my essay which was TASK2 of IELTS. I suppose...
Writing FeedbackMaximKlopunov99 - May 2, 2016 / nana77 - May 5, 2016
|IELTS TASK2 essay: Should animals be treated equally as human because they have the rights?
2 - Dear nana77, I really liked your essay and I think you will ace your IELTS examination. You've respected 4...
Writing Feedbacknana77 - May 5, 2016 / MaximKlopunov99 - May 5, 2016
|The hiring process of a company is depicted in the flow chart - five steps
2 - Hi Helene, this analysis is one of the most comprehensive ones I read so far today, I believe the...
Writing Feedbackamour - May 3, 2016 / justivy03 - May 4, 2016
|Eight stages process of consumer goods manufacturing.
Writing Feedbacksuxiaojing - May 3, 2016 / justivy03 - May 4, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 - An American film actor once said: "tomorrow is the most important thing in life"
2 - Hi Helene, after reading and understanding your essay, I must say it's quiet weak, the introduction for instance, it's...
Writing Feedbackamour - May 4, 2016 / justivy03 - May 4, 2016
|This is report to describe the process of collecting information for the weather forecast
5 - Hi Maxim, it is our pleasure to be able to help you with all your writing article, there's nothing...
Writing FeedbackMaximKlopunov99 - May 3, 2016 / justivy03 - May 4, 2016
|IELTS; Youngsters have got little spare time and they are much under of pressure to study hard.
2 - youngsters have [got] little spare time don't use got in formal writing just say have instead are much...
Writing Feedbackamour - May 4, 2016 / ad_ei - May 4, 2016
|IETLS 2: Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned. Agree or disagree?
Writing FeedbackLinhTinh - May 3, 2016 / amour - May 4, 2016
|The body weight Bob and John, IELTS TASK 1
Writing Feedbackamour - May 3, 2016 / amour - May 4, 2016
|Yes, we need money to have a more comfortable life, but it is also the root of all evil.
Writing Feedbackmeral - May 3, 2016 / amour - May 4, 2016
|The percentage of visitors in an Australian zoo, library, theater, and cinema
2 - Hi Nurtria, I would like to help you out with your analysis. Overall,it is a good analysis, you...
Writing Feedbacktria25 - May 1, 2016 / justivy03 - May 3, 2016
|The number of places visited by three types different people living in Australia
3 - - by three types different people - It is noticeable that the cinema - favourite places by - places...
Writing FeedbackMimi07 - May 1, 2016 / justivy03 - May 3, 2016
|What I want to change in my university is to expand the library
Writing FeedbackYoki - May 2, 2016 / youe - May 3, 2016
|The high cost of leaving belongs to the largest drawbacks of Fairmont Island. IELTS
3 - Hi Mimi, I'd like to share additional insights to your analysis. - ofin Fairmont Island, - according to...
Writing FeedbackMimi07 - May 1, 2016 / justivy03 - May 3, 2016
|Task 2 -IELTS- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong..
3 - They are strongly requested to instill confidence and self-respect to them whereas (,) physical punishment completely damages their self-esteem....
Writing Feedbackmersad - May 2, 2016 / amour - May 3, 2016
|Advertisement (being volunteer to take part in expedition)
3 - Dear sir or madame, I'm writing this letterto volunteer to take part by volunteering in the conversation expedition...
Writing Feedbacklearn english34 - May 3, 2016 / amour - May 3, 2016
|IELTS Academic - Task 1 - review my writing relating to fast food consumption in Australia
7 - I think it's 7 points essay.Your sentences and ideas are in a logical order , the use of cohesive...
Writing FeedbackRajatSharma1 - Apr 28, 2016 / MaximKlopunov99 - May 3, 2016
|In the UK teaching personnel continues to be female-dominated at children's schools.
3 - Sorry about that mate, here is the necessary image. I would appreciate if you could give me a rough...
Writing Feedbacktyler1234 - May 2, 2016 / tyler1234 - May 3, 2016
|What are the reasons of poverty? It influences hundreds of millions of people around the world.
2 - Hi Jurny, I hope you are finding this website to be helpful in your essay and writing projects. We...
Writing Feedbackjurny - May 2, 2016 / justivy03 - May 2, 2016
|"Big Cat or Tall Story?" - A newspaper article for the local newspaper based on visit to the moor.
Writing Feedbacksamuelchangjian - May 1, 2016 / TJLuschen - May 2, 2016
|These days authorities are becoming more concerned about museums
Writing Feedbackmersad - Apr 30, 2016 / mersad - May 2, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2: Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students...
Writing Feedbacksuxiaojing - Apr 30, 2016 / suxiaojing - May 2, 2016
|Task 1: The proportion of the advantages and disadvatages of Fairmont Island
2 - Maya, I would like to try to assess you based on writing band descriptors of IELTS task 1. Firstly,...
Writing FeedbackMaya29 - May 1, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 1, 2016
|The principal function of state is to give a good education and healthcare to everyone in country
NEW - Q: All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do...
Writing FeedbackMimi07 - May 1, 2016 / — -
|The cost of schooling and healthcare should be paid by the government - free access for all people
Writing Feedbacktria25 - May 1, 2016 / Mimi07 - May 1, 2016
|Task 1 IELTS: the comparison of common advantages and disadvantages of Fairmont Island
Writing Feedbacktria25 - May 1, 2016 / justivy03 - May 1, 2016
|Psychologist's statement that parents and teachers hold a paramount role to control children. IELTS
Writing Feedbackainirere - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - May 1, 2016
|Task 2: Violence in Media Upgrade Hardness in Society?
5 - Hi Mimi, thanks for appreciating our work here on EF and I hope you continue to post your work...
Writing FeedbackMimi07 - Apr 22, 2016 / justivy03 - May 1, 2016
|Task 2: Education and healthcare should be funded by the government
NEW - Question : All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent...
Writing FeedbackMaya29 - May 1, 2016 / — -
|The existence of electronic media can decrease the quality of relationship between people.
4 - hello nida, niceto read a good writing of yours. let me give you some suggestions. 1. you have...
Writing Feedbacknida26 - Mar 28, 2016 / tria25 - May 1, 2016
|Task 1: The process of milk making on some dairy products such as cheese, cream, butter and milk
5 - Hi wahyu, tria, and ichan thank you for your sugeestions, please give me some suggestions for my new essays...
Writing FeedbackMimi07 - Apr 17, 2016 / Mimi07 - May 1, 2016
|IELTS Task 1 "Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world"
5 - hi Zizou, happy to read a good writing like yours. your grammar is very good, yet it is better...
Writing FeedbackZizou88 - Apr 22, 2016 / tria25 - May 1, 2016
|Number of trainees for obtaining teacher qualifications and the percentage of male qualifiers in UK
4 - hallo Ainirere, you get improvement in your writing. However, let me help you correcting some parts. It is better...
Writing Feedbackainirere - Apr 29, 2016 / tria25 - May 1, 2016
|There are many advantages if state cover whole cost of education and health systems for everyone
2 - Hi Desty, your writing is good enough. Please let me give another suggestions for you. You have to...
Writing FeedbackDesty22 - Apr 3, 2016 / Maya29 - May 1, 2016
|Some individuals believe that the primary goal of universities is to provide information and skills
NEW - Some individuals believe that the primary goal of universities should be to provide information and skills for needed for...
Writing Feedbackainirere - May 1, 2016 / — -
|The societies shouldn't be pliant and ought to select what kind of information they want in media
Writing Feedbackainirere - Apr 29, 2016 / ainirere - May 1, 2016
|Volunteerism to be a main part in Higschool Programmes
2 - Furqanda, welcome to EssayForum :) This is the place where you can freely share your ideas and thoughts about...
Writing FeedbackBtihbk11 - Apr 30, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 30, 2016
|Genetically modified crops are potentially dangerous. to what extent do you agree?
3 - Spring, I would like to try convey my ideas relating to your score, which is based on Writing IELTS...
Writing Feedbackspring1986 - Apr 30, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 30, 2016
|Discuss the advantages of team sports and individual sports, indicate which you prefer?
2 - Hi Youe, you write quite well. Please allow me to give some suggestions to you. they might encounter...
Writing Feedbackyoue - Apr 29, 2016 / Maya29 - Apr 29, 2016
|GRE prompt: Any information referred to be mistrusted, since it may prove false in the future.
Writing FeedbackROBINPHILIP - Apr 27, 2016 / ROBINPHILIP - Apr 29, 2016
|The Chart and information about global population, where China is the most densely populated state
5 - Hi Rere, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF. To answer your question, "of which "...
Writing Feedbackainirere - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 29, 2016
|Scientist and tourists now able to travel to remote environment. Advantages vs Disadvantages IELTS
2 - Hi mate, I would like to say that your essay is quite understandable even though you separated it into...
Writing Feedbackthebest2016 - Apr 29, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 29, 2016
|Students shall be free to study what they want, but schools should give priority to practical majors
2 - Hi there， here are my suggestions in regards to the first paragraph： ... the main role of university...
Writing Feedbackmersad - Apr 29, 2016 / Brandon_G - Apr 29, 2016
|Email is a fast and convenient way to communicate, and written letters aren't needed anymore.
3 - the benefits of using emails outweigh TO THE drawbacks. THE more emails have sent, THE more trees would be...
Writing Feedbackspring1986 - Apr 27, 2016 / ainirere - Apr 29, 2016
|Change is necessary because it brings creativity as well as progress in life
Writing Feedbackad_ei - Apr 28, 2016 / ainirere - Apr 29, 2016
|Is talent gifted or not? - IELTS Writing Task 2
3 - Hi Nabila, what I like about this essay is that you were able to incorporate scientific facts with your...
Writing Feedbacknabila05 - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 28, 2016
|Should the amount of noise people make be controlled strictly or not? IELTS
4 - You're most welcome Thebest2016, indeed this website is not just a website, one of our goals is to make...
Writing Feedbackthebest2016 - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 28, 2016
|A practicing essay on "Talents can be trained or not".
3 - Hi Bingbing, that's a very warm WELCOME there from our EF contributors and we really hope we can be...
Writing FeedbackBrandon_G - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 28, 2016
|Estimation of the happiness ratings with regard to married and unmarried persons.
2 - Hi, Nida. There are some additional insights to your analysis. - The bars chart illustrates - unmarried people,...
Writing Feedbacknida26 - Mar 28, 2016 / nabila05 - Apr 28, 2016
|Individuals can do nothing to change society
3 - On the other hand, a revolution started by minor or poor people who were recognized to be powerless ...
Writing Feedbacknabila05 - Apr 27, 2016 / ainirere - Apr 27, 2016
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