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|IELTS TASK 2 - THE MOST ESSENTIAL DISCOVERY
4 - Hi awe_28, I have to agree with Ssakshijain. If I were you, I would compare people lifestyle before and...
Writing Feedbackawe_28 - Jan 5, 2016 / raditya - Jan 6, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 : TWO DIFFERENT WAYS IN GAINING LESSONS FROM ANOTHER COUNTRY
NEW - Some people say that you can learn more about another country by watching television programmes and films about it...
Writing Feedbackichatea07 - Jan 6, 2016 / — -
|IELTS Task 2: The most important factors of happiness. Is it a job you love doing?
2 - people who love to draw and design choose to enter fashion industry, in which they can get salary to...
Writing Feedbacknuni11 - Jan 6, 2016 / tigeryip510 - Jan 6, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 "Learning to Manage Money is One of the Key Aspects of Adult Life"
2 - I will explain further those means in this essay. (I think it would be better if you just mention...
Writing Feedbackainirere - Dec 21, 2015 / Riiskacha03 - Jan 6, 2016
|IELTS task 2 - Modern forms of communication have reduced the amount of time people to meet friends
NEW - Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their...
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|IELTS TASK 2: THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF LIVING IN ONE AND DIFFERENT PLACES
2 - IN CONTRARY, At the present time, most people TEND TO spend their time BY STAYING in various areas,and even...
Writing Feedbackaflah15 - Jan 5, 2016 / Mardy17 - Jan 6, 2016
|Write a passage to show the main reason that polluting the environment and suggest some solutions
2 - There are some suggestions for you: You have some mistakes, you put plenty of coordinating conjunctions in wrong places...
Writing FeedbackReece - Jan 5, 2016 / aflah15 - Jan 6, 2016
|IELTS Task 2: The Crime Rate That Always Rises Gradually Every Year
3 - Hi fahmisadja, I think your essay offers an insightful commentary on the prevalence of crime rates. However, it...
Writing Feedbackfahmisadja - Dec 7, 2015 / brayan1996 - Jan 5, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 : a small or bigger community - solidarity, mutual attention vs more privacy?
3 - Hi @pertiwi02, I am in complete agreement with @longguyen. I think that you should strive to make this...
Writing Feedbackpertiwi02 - Jan 5, 2016 / brayan1996 - Jan 5, 2016
|Modern parents should spend more times with their children and care for mutual communication.
3 - Hello BlackNightmarez, I don't know exactly if this is part of an essay but to me the structure looks...
Writing FeedbackBlackNightmareZ - Jan 5, 2016 / brayan1996 - Jan 5, 2016
|Is a perfect job the main factor of happiness? IELTS TASK 2
2 - Nevertheless, having an enjoyable job is not the only reason that can lead to blissfulness, since different person PEOPLE...
Writing FeedbackMardy17 - Jan 5, 2016 / annahatef - Jan 5, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2: GOVERNMENT PRIORITY IN SPEND MONEY (EDIFICE OR PUBLIC INFRASTRUCTURE)
2 - However, I am extremely confident ... ... gain knowledge , which (that) is important ... be capable of a...
Writing FeedbackRiiskacha03 - Jan 5, 2016 / Reece - Jan 5, 2016
|IELTS task 2 - the talent shows is purposed for finding talented people or entertaining audiences
NEW - Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are these shows a good method of finding talented...
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|IELTS TASK 2 : Sense of community within the apartment dwellers
2 - Several people believe that dwelling LIVING inside a flat incurs CREATES loneliness due to the unavailability of community...
Writing Feedbackichatea07 - Jan 5, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 5, 2016
|HEALTHY LIFESTYLE IN THE MODERN WORLD TODAY - IELTS WRITING TASK 2
NEW - Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle....
Writing Feedbackdynaranjani - Jan 5, 2016 / — -
|TOEFL ESSAY: Children should have fun playing but rivarly also benefits them.
3 - Jin, there is one point for discussion that you failed to consider while you were developing this essay. There...
Writing FeedbackOlivia33 - Jan 4, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 5, 2016
|TASK 2. Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done?
6 - Rahmat, I think you are trying to combine the Writing Task 1 with Writing Task 2. That is why...
Writing FeedbackRa_fhli - Dec 8, 2015 / vangiespen - Jan 4, 2016
|TOEFL Task - The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by individuals.
4 - ThingsProblems like global warming, air pollution, and energy crisis, these kinds of problems can be barely solved by one'san...
Writing Feedbackbruce5658 - Dec 13, 2015 / Olivia33 - Jan 4, 2016
|Effectiveness through divided assignments in a group study vs comfort of learning alone at home
3 - I think you should definetely focus a little bit more on expanding your analysis by integrating more solid evidence...
Writing Feedbackdynaranjani - Dec 9, 2015 / brayan1996 - Jan 4, 2016
|The continuous increase of divorce rate concerns many - what are the reasons of this trend?
2 - According to a research done by World Health Organization in 2013, the divorce rate in the world is 2...
Writing Feedbackthiet sun - Jan 4, 2016 / Ishaqur - Jan 4, 2016
|TOEFL Independent Task (1/185) - Why do you think people attend college or university?
2 - Some consider attending university as a best way to gain professional knowledge. Some think entering ... SomeOthers think going...
Writing Feedbackliuzhengxian - Dec 22, 2015 / Olivia33 - Jan 4, 2016
|TOEFL: Y/N Professional athletes who receive high salaries are fully entitled to all money they get.
3 - Thanks a lot.:) @thiet sun Sometimes I just find it hard to use words or colocations correctly in my...
Writing FeedbackOlivia33 - Jan 3, 2016 / Olivia33 - Jan 4, 2016
|The recognized greatness of a political leader is coming from his ability to take up the challenges
2 - The essay is very generic. There are no concrete examples and nothing which you have related to. Your essay...
Writing Feedbackfadh93 - Jan 4, 2016 / sidchilling - Jan 4, 2016
|Write a paragraph about the measures of protecting endanger animals
4 - Another thing:so sorry for not hitting a space bar,which made you find it unconvinient to read my essay...
Writing FeedbackThanhthu - Jan 3, 2016 / Thanhthu - Jan 3, 2016
|IELTS: By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder.
3 - thank you much mate. What could be possible band score of this particular essay in real ielts ?...
Writing Feedbackjoezan - Jan 1, 2016 / joezan - Jan 1, 2016
|Pollution and decreasing its effects on people and how to increase it
2 - You have to underline Pollution and Climate Change in order to explain in your introduction. REDUNDANCY...
Writing Feedbackannahatef - Dec 31, 2015 / akhfan - Jan 1, 2016
|Essay about HOW TO CHANGE A BAD HABIT? -
2 - I would avoid talking in second person throughout the essay. It may be effective in the beginning to draw...
Writing Feedbacklongguyen - Dec 31, 2015 / ch017 - Dec 31, 2015
|WRITING IELTS-TASK 2 The benefits and drawbacks of the education development
2 - Hi Asmaniatur Here are my suggestions: Nowadays, many student complete their study and get the graduation from...
Writing FeedbackAsmaniatur - Dec 31, 2015 / Ssakshijain - Dec 31, 2015
|Technique of using ICT for young learner
3 - thanks...
Writing FeedbackFia0910 - Dec 28, 2015 / Fia0910 - Dec 31, 2015
|Statement of Purpose : King Abdullah University of Science & Technology
NEW - Dear reader, I am really pleased if you give me some advice of my Statement of Purpose, since dead...
Writing Feedbackandy_gowa - Dec 31, 2015 / — -
|IELTS essay about community service for high schoolers. It shouldn't be mandatory - only voluntary.
NEW - Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs . To what...
Writing FeedbackEric Liu - Dec 30, 2015 / — -
|The Broken Girl - Gothic horror English coursework (GCSE)
2 - screamed in agony. The girl all this time, she is being pulled needless to her screams they continue --...
Writing FeedbackBatuli jalo - Dec 28, 2015 / mcooley - Dec 29, 2015
|Should science be impersonal? I want to improve my writing skill.
NEW - I am practicing my English writing as a non-native speaker. This is my first post so far. Thank a...
Writing Feedbacklth08091998 - Dec 29, 2015 / — -
|List the required readings from courses during the school year - grammar check
4 - Luisa, you are thinking about the statement of instruction in a generalized manner. Thought of in standard form, you...
Writing Feedbackmarialuisadcl - Dec 27, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 29, 2015
|People are concerned how the government distributes a budget for various activities.
NEW - Government should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports Nowadays, an increasing number of people...
Writing Feedbackhanhmy2102 - Dec 27, 2015 / — -
|Time To Give Back - Peace Corps Motivation Statement Essay
Writing Feedbackcleo71 - Dec 26, 2015 / nic123 - Dec 27, 2015
|Technology has many disadvantages as well as advantages.
2 - Due to THE ongoing industrialization and ONGOING technological advancementS , humans are enjoying more luxuries than ever before. There...
Writing Feedbackprince18 - Dec 26, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 26, 2015
|Economy decreases poverty or increases enviromental damages
NEW - Some people think that economic growth is the only way to stop world's poverty and hunger, while others say...
Writing Feedbackannahatef - Dec 25, 2015 / — -
|Starting early education for young children or letting them to play?
Writing Feedbackrezamonadi - Dec 25, 2015 / NourNour - Dec 25, 2015
|Why college or university? To acquire a new knowledge and prepare for a future career - IELTS
Writing FeedbackNourNour - Dec 24, 2015 / NourNour - Dec 25, 2015
|Causes and reasons of vanishing languages - it can destroy some valuable information about societies
NEW - Some languages spoken by very few people are losing their importance and may become extinct completely. Is it a...
Writing Feedbackannahatef - Dec 25, 2015 / — -
|IELTS Essay - Building a statue/ monument to honor a famous person. Who would you choose? Ho Chi Min
2 - Hi Vuthithuhienb1 Here are my suggestions. I tried my best to help you, also I saw many spelling...
Writing Feedbackvuthithuhienb1 - Dec 24, 2015 / Ssakshijain - Dec 24, 2015
|City gridlock, lack of foods - overpopulation caused immense problems, what are the solutions?
2 - Hi there I think that your introduction and the conclusion shouldn't be detailed, it should be general. like...
Writing Feedbackirhame - Dec 23, 2015 / Hidro13 - Dec 24, 2015
|IELTS task 2 exam - best way to learn: "learning by doing" or through books and from teachers?
2 - You need at least three sentences in a paragraph. If you write less than the sentences required, then...
Writing Feedbackalamedaboy - Dec 23, 2015 / eddies - Dec 23, 2015
|Descriptive essay : Singapore during Japanese Occupation
Writing FeedbackSamuelsam123 - Dec 23, 2015 / Samuelsam123 - Dec 23, 2015
|IELTS Writing Task 1: The average monthly temperature and sunshine in Landon, New York and Sydney
NEW - =)The graph and table show the average monthly temperature and the average number of hours of sunshine per year...
Writing FeedbackEjepe - Dec 23, 2015 / — -
|The effects of medical care in human life
2 - Healthy is a precious capital in human life. Did you mean to say Health? humankinds are living longer....
Writing FeedbackEjepe - Dec 23, 2015 / KatieJoy - Dec 23, 2015
|'the rapid growth of population is always a bad news' - IELTS TASK 2 THE INCREASE LIFE EXPECTANCY
Writing Feedbacklinanovirawati - Dec 23, 2015 / Ejepe - Dec 23, 2015
|IELTS TASK 2-Medical care improvement for living longer
2 - ... is to make people are livinglive longer and to increase of human-life expectancy. Some people claim about advantages...
Writing FeedbackInkanLukie - Dec 23, 2015 / shuto - Dec 23, 2015
|LAZINESS (it talk about laziness. It is my thinking, my first paragraph post on here.
3 - Suong, don't just write aimlessly. I know that you are trying to develop your English writing skills but writing...
Writing Feedbacksuonghoang - Dec 20, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 23, 2015
|Advantage and Disadvantage Essay - Being an Only Child
3 - In the past, there were families with a dozen or so children. However, ın the modern world, having an...
Writing FeedbackFurkan - Dec 21, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 23, 2015
|Comparisons regarding the number of heat level per month and annual hours of sunshine; IELTS 1
2 - According to the data particularly in the line chart, the advance cities as Sydney records the greatest temperature in...
Writing FeedbackArundyna - Dec 23, 2015 / shuto - Dec 23, 2015
|The Most Favorite Leader in Indonesia by Grahyta
3 - Grayta, try to make the essay more informative. As Michael said, it would be nice to learn about why...
Writing FeedbackGrahyta24 - Dec 19, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 23, 2015
|IELTS Task 2 - the presence of senior citizens in a community is beneficial; life expectancy essay
NEW - One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing....
Writing Feedbackibrahiem - Dec 23, 2015 / — -
|Handwriting errors, undermined writing skills - these are effects of using computers and smartphones
2 - I suggest you to upload the question of this writing task 2, so we can see whether it answers...
Writing Feedbackrasam11 - Dec 22, 2015 / somasalims - Dec 23, 2015
|Pocket money helps children for managing their future financial skills
2 - More attention should be paid to teach children become an responsible adult. One of the best ways is...
Writing Feedbackannahatef - Dec 22, 2015 / eddies - Dec 22, 2015
|IELTS: The Table and The Bar - forms of transportation used for journeys in some countries
Writing Feedbackainirere - Dec 18, 2015 / Furkan - Dec 21, 2015
|My Perception about ONLINE SHOP - Good or Bad?
2 - there THERE is no doubt that THE internet is ONE of the greatest humankind inventions of the last century....
Writing FeedbackCulas18 - Dec 19, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 19, 2015
|kasfulanwar7 - I want to tell about sport, just my opinion
2 - As we know, sportS is ARE physical activity IES that aimS to maintain or improve A PERSON'S physical ability...
Writing FeedbackKasfulanwar7 - Dec 19, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 19, 2015
|Toefl essay: Advice from a supervisor is more valuable than some hint from a co-worker
4 - Hello, ellaak, thank you for taking your time reading my essay and tidying up the introduction. Hello, vangiespen. I...
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