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|Ielts task 2: people sleep less than before, causes and effects
5 - In the second paragraph, you started off with a discussion regarding how social media keeps people awake. Then, without...
Writing FeedbackOsha - Feb 27, 2019 / Holt - Mar 2, 2019
|Some people believe that a rising petrol price is the best way to deal with traffic and pollution.
2 - Please try to write a minimum of three sentences for your opening paraphrase and summary conclusion paragraphs. The 3...
Writing FeedbackLarissa Linh - Feb 28, 2019 / Holt - Mar 1, 2019
|IELTS writing task 2 - Advertisements - drawbacks and benefits
3 - Truc, this is not a comparison essay. This is a single opinion essay whose response is based upon one...
Writing FeedbackTrcQynh - Feb 28, 2019 / Holt - Mar 1, 2019
|Write a short paragraph about the problems associated with an increase in the usage of car.
2 - Hi Quang. Since you did not specify whether this paragraph should be written UK or US English, I decided...
Writing FeedbackKenss - Feb 28, 2019 / Holt - Mar 1, 2019
|Writing task 1 about the line graph regarding household savings (Ielts)
Writing Feedbackmrbi1408 - Feb 28, 2019 / mrbi1408 - Mar 1, 2019
|A training for future employment is more significant than the provision of broad-based education
2 - It is better to put some examples in the body paragraphs The the first sentence of the second...
Writing Feedbackswaysbothways - Feb 27, 2019 / robinm147 - Feb 28, 2019
|Coins and paper money will soon be replaced by credit and back cards
NEW - IELTS TASK 2: COins and paper money will soon be replaced by credit and back cards. DO you agree...
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|The chart shows the average class size class in 6 countries
3 - Hello! I like the fact that you have an introduction paragraph before you jump into the bar graph details,...
Writing Feedbackbaoan - Feb 27, 2019 / DoctorWho - Feb 27, 2019
|Topic: Life in the city. "150-200 words"
Writing FeedbackNieo - Feb 26, 2019 / Nieo - Feb 27, 2019
|Space exploration - is it necessary to continue this costly project?
3 - Sheetal, it does not seem like you are writing a research paper here. It feels like you are responding...
Writing Feedbackdrzee - Feb 25, 2019 / Holt - Feb 26, 2019
|Is it more beneficial to play sport in team than in individual? ielts writting task 2
4 - thanks a lot Holt for pointing out my mistakes. i appreciate and will improve my skills in writing...
Writing Feedbacknhuxuan - Feb 24, 2019 / nhuxuan - Feb 25, 2019
|IELTS - Fixed punishments nevertheless of circumstances?
Writing Feedbackngokhoa99 - Feb 24, 2019 / ngokhoa99 - Feb 25, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: MEN AND WOMEN'S JOBS ACCORDING TO THEIR QUALITIES
3 - Try to avoid presenting over-used expressions such as "more and more" in the presentation. These memorized phrases tend to...
Writing Feedbackchimmy88 - Feb 24, 2019 / Holt - Feb 25, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: IS ART AN USEFUL SUBJECT TO STUDY?
3 - @october24 I think you forgot that there are English words that are pronounced the same, but are spelled differently...
Writing Feedbackoctober24 - Feb 24, 2019 / Holt - Feb 25, 2019
|Writing task 1 : adults' study and how the costs of courses should be shared
Writing FeedbackHammy - Feb 24, 2019 / Hammy - Feb 25, 2019
|Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life
3 - Consider using more descriptive adjectives in your essay instead of simple words such as "a long period of time"....
Writing Feedbackrobinm147 - Feb 24, 2019 / Holt - Feb 25, 2019
|Due to the internet invention, the world is getting smaller by connecting people - task 2
Writing FeedbackSushine510 - Feb 24, 2019 / Holt - Feb 25, 2019
|IELTS: Advantages and Disadvantages of Student Gap Year - teenagers dillema
3 - Sunil, you have to practice timed writing of these essays. There is absolutely no way you can write over...
Writing Feedbacksunilgrowwer1 - Feb 23, 2019 / Holt - Feb 24, 2019
|Writing task 2: the necessary of music - traditional music and international music
3 - thank you so much, i can't believe that i receive a detailed comments as yours thank you, thank you.......
Writing FeedbackHammy - Feb 22, 2019 / Hammy - Feb 24, 2019
|IELTS writing task 2. The topic is about talent in art.
2 - Ngo, try to avoid writing run-on sentences. A run-on sentence is identified as a very long sentence that has...
Writing Feedbackngothanhnam2211 - Feb 23, 2019 / Holt - Feb 24, 2019
|Recidivism - Ielts writing: Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the 1st punishment
2 - Tranh, this essay cannot be reviewed properly for two reasons. The first, is that you have not provided the...
Writing Feedbacktranthaiha - Feb 22, 2019 / Holt - Feb 23, 2019
|Topic: Veganism is becoming popular to its numerous benefits. To what extent do you agree?
3 - Nguyen, the essay will get an automatic failing score for not having been written using the minimum 250 word...
Writing FeedbackTrucLynn123 - Feb 22, 2019 / Holt - Feb 23, 2019
|Consumer devices in the UK IELTS task 1 : The table chart
3 - Ngoc, the whole essay shows that you do not understand how to use connecting words to create an understandable...
Writing Feedbackngocdn - Feb 22, 2019 / Holt - Feb 23, 2019
|IELTS Essay: Sharing the Information (the most significant for human) - Writing Task 2
Writing Feedbackckraysun - Feb 21, 2019 / ckraysun - Feb 22, 2019
|IELTS writing essay: Should we legalize the right to die?
3 - Nguyen, unless you provide the complete prompt when you post your essay, it will be difficult to do a...
Writing FeedbackthuyEDHANU - Feb 21, 2019 / Holt - Feb 22, 2019
|IELTS essay: Should everyone follow a vegetarianism diet?
5 - @Holt thank you so much for your response! I would certainly rewrite. Also sorry for my late reply....
Writing FeedbackthuyEDHANU - Jan 10, 2019 / thuyEDHANU - Feb 21, 2019
|IELTS ESSAY: Failure is proof that the desire wasn't strong enough
3 - Great esaay Hangtan! I just have a few things to add: - Try to vary your sentence structures more....
Writing Feedbackhangtan - Feb 20, 2019 / ngokhoa99 - Feb 21, 2019
|Sustainable development - government should spend money on railways rather than roads
Writing Feedbackhanh244 - Feb 20, 2019 / Holt - Feb 20, 2019
|IELTS writing task 2: Using punishment as a way to deal with challenging behaviour in children...
Writing FeedbackBee426 - Feb 19, 2019 / Holt - Feb 20, 2019
|Language: Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language.
2 - Tran, you cannot say "thousand of decade ago". A decade is equal to 10 years, which is a singular...
Writing FeedbackDung Tran - Feb 18, 2019 / Holt - Feb 19, 2019
|Poor people and people from rural areas and universal education
2 - Lien, please remember to time yourself during the pencil practice test. Always allot at least 10 minutes of editing...
Writing Feedbacklynn1901 - Feb 18, 2019 / Holt - Feb 19, 2019
|Do you agree or disagree with this statement? "Watching TV is a waste of time for children".
Writing Feedbackanphuonglinh155 - Feb 18, 2019 / Holt - Feb 19, 2019
|The percentage of tourists to England who visited attractions in Brighton.
2 - The percentage of people visiting to Pavilion and Pier. because you made mistake with the subject of proportion ...
Writing Feedbacknguyenhieu209 - Feb 18, 2019 / Dung Tran - Feb 18, 2019
|IELTS:In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water...
2 - Hi, I think your skill in English is apparent, but I don't think you focused enough on the prompt...
Writing Feedbacksinhaprerna1112 - Feb 17, 2019 / TJLuschen - Feb 18, 2019
|Parents, who choose private education for their kids, allowed to not pay state education taxes?
3 - Thank you!...
Writing Feedbackngokhoa99 - Feb 17, 2019 / ngokhoa99 - Feb 18, 2019
|Some People think that watching Sports is wastage of time during leisure time
6 - Hello Nazim The MS Word autocorrect function is of great assistance to spot your mistakes. Personally, I use Grammarly...
Writing Feedbackna57zim - Feb 16, 2019 / coke - Feb 18, 2019
|People living in large cities face many problems in their everytime life.
4 - You are welcome. Please remember that "advice" is non-countable singular, so it should be "Thank you so much for...
Writing Feedbacktamnguyenx - Feb 16, 2019 / TJLuschen - Feb 17, 2019
|Psychology and health - they both are intricately connected
3 - Steph, there is a bigger and far greater problem in your essay than just the simple structure and missing...
Writing Feedbackmushimushi - Feb 16, 2019 / Holt - Feb 16, 2019
|IELTS; The advertising has been widespread in the world. A complete restriction necessary?
2 - Tran, good job on the direct response to the extent essay. Further applause is required because you knew well...
Writing FeedbackDung Tran - Feb 16, 2019 / Holt - Feb 16, 2019
|Advantages and disadvantages when comparing pubic transport with private cars.
6 - @TJLuschen Thanks for your detailed correction. This is actually the second I wrote this sort of "quotation essay", as...
Writing Feedbackgviiivayh - Feb 15, 2019 / gviiivayh - Feb 15, 2019
|IELTS - The controversial law that protects the person who is being accused of a crime.
3 - Thanks TJLuschen! I really agree with your comments. As for the last body paragraph, I probably got distracted and...
Writing Feedbackngokhoa99 - Feb 14, 2019 / ngokhoa99 - Feb 15, 2019
|Young people should learn what the world is doing.
4 - @Lilittt I think you misunderstood the meaning of the word "world's business" in the conclusion, or may be I...
Writing Feedbacktrvaanh - Feb 12, 2019 / trvaanh - Feb 14, 2019
|The older generation tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think, behave
2 - Zichen, you should not wrote more than 300 words for this essay. You do not have enough time to...
Writing Feedbackbobbyw - Feb 13, 2019 / Holt - Feb 13, 2019
|Internet and food - has it improved the way people live?
3 - M'hammed , I am sorry but I cannot continue to review this essay based on the 4 scoring bands....
Writing FeedbackMedKabbaj - Feb 12, 2019 / Holt - Feb 13, 2019
|Discuss the effects of modern technology. IELTS essay
3 - Phan, each type of essay has a specific number of reasoning paragraphs to present in the body of the...
Writing Feedbackcoke - Feb 12, 2019 / Holt - Feb 13, 2019
|Technology and Crime Rate - IELTS Writing Task 2- Opinion Essay
2 - I partly agree with the view while I also believe that ... benefit from the technological developments too. enable...
Writing Feedbackthekingmindaugas - Feb 12, 2019 / riteshsinha - Feb 13, 2019
|IELTS: Supermarket versus local community stores
Writing Feedbackriteshsinha - Feb 3, 2019 / eddies - Feb 12, 2019
|Birth control policy - IELTS writing task 2 practice.
3 - Ching, this is a direct question essay, which requires a direct response be delivered to the questions in the...
Writing FeedbackVimini - Feb 11, 2019 / Holt - Feb 12, 2019
|The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income in five countries over Europe
2 - Pham, please remember that your noun phrase must represent the proper number reference for your item. In this instance,...
Writing Feedbackphamnguyen - Feb 11, 2019 / Holt - Feb 12, 2019
|Government budget for art is argued by a few as a waste of money - rightly or wrongly?
3 - Rites, congratulations in writing a precise prompt paraphrase and including a properly framed extent response as your response to...
Writing Feedbackriteshsinha - Feb 11, 2019 / Holt - Feb 12, 2019
|What do you think the role of a parent should be in their child's education?
2 - Claudya, you have not followed the correct format for the discussion requirement of the essay. This is an advanced...
Writing Feedbackabclaudya - Feb 11, 2019 / Holt - Feb 12, 2019
|Experience is the best teacher or reading books is more important?
3 - Hi Holt Thanks for your kindly message I wrote this as an IELTS essay practice, I know it has...
Writing Feedbackparisaaa - Feb 10, 2019 / parisaaa - Feb 11, 2019
|In your opinion, what are the advantages and disadvantages of being a member in a large family?
7 - you have to concern about the (s) if it is singular. for instance : The more economy develops, the...
Writing Feedbacksiatina - Feb 10, 2019 / abclaudya - Feb 11, 2019
|Young Leaders or Old Leaders for better business prosperity?
2 - Hello, I've enjoyed reading what you've written but what about your conclusion? I see that you've started your essay...
Writing Feedbacklinhnguyen2002 - Feb 10, 2019 / Ghaidaa - Feb 10, 2019
|The given graph shows the consumption of fast food in the UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990.
2 - Hi, I liked your report. Expenditure means spending, so you spend on something, not in or of something, and...
Writing Feedbacklin0208 - Feb 9, 2019 / TJLuschen - Feb 9, 2019
|ielts task 2 : essay about health problems (causes and measures)
Writing Feedbackoneouran - Feb 9, 2019 / TJLuschen - Feb 9, 2019
|The information about integration problems for people (all age groups) moving to other countries.
4 - @Holt thanks for your comments i recognize maybe i depended on models and forgot other factors as sources, measurement,......
Writing FeedbackHammy - Feb 8, 2019 / Hammy - Feb 9, 2019
|Which is more important family or friend
Writing FeedbackPhuongbo - Feb 2, 2019 / lin0208 - Feb 9, 2019
|The line graph elucidates the percentage of inhabitants aged 65 and more in three nations
3 - Ni, you should be more careful with the way you spell and use certain words. Spelling mistakes the wrong...
Writing Feedbacklin0208 - Feb 8, 2019 / Holt - Feb 9, 2019
|IELTS Writing task 2 - comparing talents from birth and trained musicians/athletes..
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