People will give their best if they know that can get high salary for their work
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The proportion of pupils who passed the final examination in their secondary school
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Children pressures related to getting a high score in school, bullying, and expensive gadgets
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The conclusion after analyzing the bar chart on disbursements in some countries
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The percentage of people's consumption - four necessities and four different countries in 2009
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The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams,
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Verifying the standards of accountability among high school students in special tests
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Nowadays, youngsters sometimes are needed for helping to improve communities.
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In the globalisation era, children are pushed to be ready for their future live
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The information about the subjects of high school exam which are passed by both gender students
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Spendings of four big countries in the world for various purposes
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The proportion of students, both males and females, who passed their skill exams in high school
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The total demand on hybrid vehicles in 2009 was twice as much as three years earlier
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Exercise in ES; the number of hybrid vehicles sold over the 4-year timeframe from 2006 to 2009
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Recently, large number of children have a common problem called an unhealthy lifestyle.
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List of problems people face being abroad - it's similar for all ages
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Causes of Children's Life Pressures and Its Solution
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The outcome in five countries including UK, USA, Canada, and Japan based on five categories in 2009
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(Summary TED) A temporary tattoo that brings hospital care to the home
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Franchise plays an enormous role in Indonesia
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Writing IELTS task 2 - cause effect of consuming fast food
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The % of national shares spent on food, accommodation, transportation, health care and clothing
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The teenagers are frequently paticipating as a part of the working for community developments
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In this modern era, the pressure is faced by not only older people, but also children.
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Foreign Language and Mathematics - the subjects with the least disparity between girls and boys
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Article Summary : Vitamin D deficiency is widely overestimated, doctors warn
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US witnessed the highest proportion in housing while the lowest proportion was UK in the health care
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Writing Task 2 about very bad lifestyle in effect on well-being and obligations of different parties
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Miss Grand International 2016 Comes Home to North Sumatra
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High competition with other people makes parents to force their children to success - a big pressure
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IELTS Writing Task I about people living in the overseas
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Children use their smartphones everywhere - it provides to the unhealthy lifestyle
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TED Eric Giller demonstrates wireless electricity
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Young people are often asked for participating for the development of communities as a volunteer
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Discussing the benefits of working in more than one job
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Nowadays, the majorty of children are facing a huge pressure rather than in the past
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Coconut crab's bone-crushing grip is 10 times stronger than ours
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Development communities usually utilize young adults to work for them
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An info about people shares of money, spent for five different necessities in four various countries
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Ielts academic writing task 2: What is an ideal society? How people can achieve it?
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There are many things which could be changed in my university; TOEFL independent writing
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How many pupils have passed their high school exams, according to the subject and sex
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A lot of people want to have a better life and it requires a good amount of educational background
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Citizens have the joy of shopping, regardless of their need or the product function
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Exercise writing test 2 (Inventors are not as important to society as doctors, Agree or disagree)
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Students' achievement in the high school competency exams based on the lesson classifications
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Recently, youth movement has developed significantly, especially throughout voluntary activities
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Here's depicted a breakdown of expenditures' usage in some of countries of three continents in 2009
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The Main Feature to Get Happy Life is Depending to The Around Factor of Self
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The water cycle has three natural steps which start by evaporation water through the rain process.
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Pupils are pressed by their surroundings like academic circle even for commercial purposes
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A villain who turned out to be a hero ----------- Short Story Writing
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A comparison of the amount of High School Students who reach minimum grade to pass competency exams
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Guests' quantities on two music sites
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"Inventors are not as important to society as doctors, Agree or disagree?"
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Elizabeth Gilbert tells the audience about how creativity can survive from failure.
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The new appearance of The Canada transition out of coal-powered electricity by 2030
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Why Rochester Minnesota is the greatest place to go to? Top 100 Best Places to Live.
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From my point of view, the most crucial trait of a person is his diligence
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Ielts writing task 2 - Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
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