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|The busy activities almost every day mean no much time left for a health improvement - IELTS 2
NEW - Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle....
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|Diagram Process of Wind Turbine and Its Optimum Locations
2 - hi nuni :) The two diagramDIAGRAMS illustrate the way in which electricity can be generated by using wind turbine...
Writing Feedbacknuni11 - Jan 20, 2016 / andika06 - Jan 20, 2016
|Global expenditure in several basic needs and Global resource consumptions
NEW - The pie charts below show World Spending, World population and Consumption of Resources. The pie charts illustrate Global...
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|TASK 2 - It is believed that a health-based life is hard to be practiced - I would argue with this
2 - Good essay but here some suggestion A tight schedule inhabitantsit should be a tight schedule our...
Writing Feedbackilankelo21 - Jan 20, 2016 / fijarakbar25 - Jan 20, 2016
|A breakdown of English and French teachers selection in Ontario according to year of graduation
Writing Feedbacknuni11 - Jan 20, 2016 / fijarakbar25 - Jan 20, 2016
|IELTS TASK 1: TABLE OF JOB SKILL - a questionnaire answers
2 - rise confusing sentence, consider this change: many employees determine that skill are the most important accomplishment...
Writing FeedbackRiiskacha03 - Jan 20, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jan 20, 2016
|The number of new graduates who were accepted as English and French teachers in Ontario 2001-2007
2 - You should have minimum 2 sentences each paragraph. then you should add "s" for plural.. such as teacherS ...
Writing Feedbackpertiwi02 - Jan 20, 2016 / swara86 - Jan 20, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 - DIFFICULTIES TO MAINTAIN A HEALTHY LIFESTYLE
Writing Feedbackawe_28 - Jan 20, 2016 / Mardy17 - Jan 20, 2016
|TASK 2 : Nowadays, it is true that the modern lifestyle can influence health of students
2 - Hi pertiwi02 Let me correct your writing. One of the bad habits which are IS evident in children...
Writing Feedbackpertiwi02 - Jan 20, 2016 / sir99 - Jan 20, 2016
|A comparison of residents rate in three different areas of Oregon from 1940 to 2000 - the line chart
4 - A breakdown of population rate in three ... A breakdown of population rate in three counties during sixty-year...
Writing Feedbackpikul - Jan 19, 2016 / Febri91 - Jan 19, 2016
|GRE Issue essay: Cooperation or competition, which is best to instill leadership in young minds?
5 - HI JVISHAL PERHAPS YOU NEED TO MORE CAREFUL IN USING SEVERAL WORDS SINCE IT SOMETIMES LOOKS INAPPROPRIATE. I SUGGEST...
Writing Feedbackjvishal - Jan 19, 2016 / ilankelo21 - Jan 19, 2016
|The U.S. state of Oregon - population outline. Writing Task 1
2 - is showed SHOWN to show /showed /shown Yamhill and Columbia' population increased the population of Yamhill and...
Writing FeedbackSaputra Putra - Jan 19, 2016 / NourNour - Jan 19, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2: Modern World Provide an Unhealthy Lifestyle
Writing Feedbackaflah15 - Jan 18, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jan 19, 2016
|[Writing Task1/Pie Chart] World Spending, World population and Consumption of Resources
2 - Hi @Niam01 You have read the pie chart pretty well. The inferences that you drew from the combining the...
Writing FeedbackNiam01 - Jan 19, 2016 / jvishal - Jan 19, 2016
|World population and Consumption of Resources
2 - This is an interesting presentation of the information in the pie charts. The grammar is simple but understandable, regardless...
Writing Feedbacksir99 - Jan 19, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 19, 2016
|The breakdown of world population balance
2 - The breakdown of earth consumption, global inhabitants and consumption of suppliers in this universe OF SUPPLIES BY CONTINENTS ARE...
Writing Feedbackdesgit33 - Jan 19, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 19, 2016
|Expenditure, Inhabitant and Consumption of Resources in the world
4 - Hi Bunglon11, here is my correction A breakdown of Expenditure, Inhabitant Rates, and Consumption of Resources...
Writing FeedbackBunglon11 - Jan 19, 2016 / faarasyad - Jan 19, 2016
|What career would you like to choose after leaving school?
2 - Thuy, your essay has a number of punctuation errors aside from an abundance of grammatical errors. Before I address...
Writing Feedbackthuytran - Jan 19, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 19, 2016
|The Rate of Boy and Girl Students Passing The Exam Based on Subject of Study
5 - ... based on subject of studies from 2011(2010) to 2011. ... while girl students are most MORE dominant than...
Writing FeedbackFebri91 - Jan 18, 2016 / Fauzi17 - Jan 19, 2016
|The number of students interested in lesson
5 - ... was at 56.3% and just at 42.1% comecame from boys in the similar lesson. ... in mathematics and...
Writing Feedbackdesgit33 - Jan 18, 2016 / yus72 - Jan 19, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2: IS IT DIFFICULT TO BE HEALTH?
2 - Hello, I just correct your grammar.. However some othersarguebelieve that basically obtaining ... In my opinion,it is argued...
Writing FeedbackMardy17 - Jan 18, 2016 / sharfina - Jan 19, 2016
|The rate of students who passed major examination in high school
5 - ... percentage of students who passed THE major examination in high school that divided by gender ... Overall,...
Writing FeedbackFauzi17 - Jan 18, 2016 / Bunglon11 - Jan 19, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 : THE MEDIA AND THE MAIN REPORTS
2 - Mardy, the prompt that you provided is incomplete so I am unable to determine if you were able to...
Writing FeedbackMardy17 - Jan 19, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 19, 2016
|The proportion of graduates recruited for teaching different languages in Ontario, Canada
2 - Andika. I am amazed at how you were able to develop such a concise and thorough report based upon...
Writing Feedbackandika06 - Jan 19, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 19, 2016
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - THE PERCENTAGE OF COMMUNICATION ABILITIES
2 - Overall, external interaction skills are WERE more crucial for labors, while, the internal communication showED a reverse. ......
Writing Feedbackandika06 - Jan 19, 2016 / Mardy17 - Jan 19, 2016
|IELTS Task 1: A breakdown of Wheat Exports in Several Countries
2 - A breakdown of wheat exports in several countries is presented in the line chart from 1985 to 1990. -...
Writing Feedbackfahmisadja - Jan 19, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 19, 2016
|IELTS Task 1: A breakdown of how much wheat exported by three regions from 1985 to 1990
2 - A breakdown of how much wheat exportedthe number of the abroad shipment of wheat by three regions Australia, Canada...
Writing Feedbackakbarmappiare - Jan 19, 2016 / Riiskacha03 - Jan 19, 2016
|ENGLISH AND FRENCH LANGUAGE TEACHER IN ONTARIO BASED ON THEIR GRADUATED YEAR - IELTS TASK 1
2 - Riska, the information in your graph is not correct as it does not accurately represent the explanation of what...
Writing FeedbackRiiskacha03 - Jan 19, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 19, 2016
|IELTS TASK 1 - SOME PROBLEMS WHICH ARE FACED WHEN STAY ABROAD
Writing Feedbackawe_28 - Jan 19, 2016 / fahmisadja - Jan 19, 2016
|TASK 1 - NUMBER OF BOOKS READ BY MALE AND FEMALE; 2013 shown an interesting pattern
4 - Muhamad, try to increase the difficulty level of your English writing in your next practice essay. Your English usage...
Writing Feedbackfijarakbar25 - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 19, 2016
|IELTS Task 1: GDP Growth Per Year For Tunisia, Japan, and Ecuador
2 - Masdar, I am sure that you have been reminded in your previous practice tests about the mandatory format for...
Writing Feedbackfahmisadja - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 19, 2016
|The Percentage of student passed the exam
2 - ... that both of genderS passed the final exam in AT high school. while females showed the dominance...
Writing FeedbackBunglon11 - Jan 18, 2016 / andika06 - Jan 19, 2016
|IELTS TASK 1 : World Population Projection and Population of Distinctive Areas, Urban and Rural
3 - Thanks for your concern, but million after number cannot be added with -s. That's true. ;) The only exception...
Writing Feedbackichatea07 - Jan 7, 2016 / ichatea07 - Jan 19, 2016
|The population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. State of Oregon
2 - There were some problems with the way that you set up the essay. These were minor problems though that...
Writing Feedbacksharfina - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2016
|IELTS TASK1 the proportion of two surveys in what skills are extremely essential
2 - There is a lack of clarity in the way that you presented the discussion. However, the facts that you...
Writing Feedbackilankelo21 - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2016
|The percentage of pupils who accomplished their test.
2 - First correction, the bar chart discussed the results of an exam, there is nothing stated about these examinees being...
Writing FeedbackSyahrul08 - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2016
|A breakdown of the population rate in three different counties of Oregon from 1940 to 2000
2 - Wow! Dynar, your English writing is almost perfect this time around :-) Congratulations. You have displayed an excellent ability...
Writing Feedbackdynaranjani - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2016
|IELTS TASK 1: THE PROBLEMS PEOPLE HAVE WHEN THEY GO TO LIVE IN OTHER COUNTRIES
2 - ... and how the problems THEY ENCOUNTER vary according to people's ages ... who find sorting DIFFICULTY IN...
Writing Feedbackpertiwi02 - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2016
|Looking at High School Students Competency in one Period: The Women Domination Year
2 - Students in high level Should this be "students in high school?" What does "in high level" mean? deference...
Writing Feedbacksir99 - Jan 18, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Jan 18, 2016
|Do we need knowledge of the past to fully understand the present?
2 - Anh, you have delivered a very insightful response to the prompt that you were provided with. The considerations you...
Writing Feedbackhansungah - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2016
|Communication skills survey, internal and external, in 1997 and 2006
3 - Sri, your work on this essay is commendable. You have displayed an ability to understand the chart information thoroughly....
Writing Feedbacknuni11 - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2016
|IELTS TASK1 the percentage of recruitment of new-graduate students
2 - Hei bro: French-language teaching had a slightly lower trend than an English-language job in the first year which stood...
Writing Feedbackilankelo21 - Jan 18, 2016 / Saputra Putra - Jan 18, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 - The responsibility of parents and schools towards children's lifestyle
Writing Feedbackawe_28 - Jan 18, 2016 / pertiwi02 - Jan 18, 2016
|IELTS 1 - The bar chart reveals the proportion of succeed competency test of apprentice
Writing FeedbackNiam01 - Jan 18, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jan 18, 2016
|INTERNATIONAL GRADUATES FROM CANADIAN schools in the five years period (Ielts Task 1)
2 - who had graduated in different Canadian provinces is showedshown It is should be noticed this was showedshown "To...
Writing FeedbackSaputra Putra - Jan 18, 2016 / NourNour - Jan 18, 2016
|The level of graduation student passed the examination in senior high school
2 - An alternative : A breakdown of the figure for the proportion of student who complete the exam of competency...
Writing Feedbackyus72 - Jan 18, 2016 / Saputra Putra - Jan 18, 2016
|IMMIGRANT'S PROBLEM WHEN LIVING ABROAD
Writing FeedbackMardy17 - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2016
|A comparison of three different countries on annual GDP development over the course of four years
Writing FeedbackArundyna - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2016
|The proportion of the most favourite tourist choices in Brighton attentions over 3 decades 1980-2010
3 - hello, mr yogy, nice to read your writing, actually you have ability to write well, let me give you...
Writing Feedbackyogi07 - Jan 18, 2016 / Arundyna - Jan 18, 2016
|The International Graduate Students in some Canadian Universities
2 - Devi, always aim to deliver as complete a summary overview as you can when you write your introduction. In...
Writing Feedbackdaveandrei - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2016
|IELTS TASK 1 : MUSEUMS VISITORS IN LONDON (measured in thousands)
3 - Hi, Mardy. I think your writing is quite clear, but there are some errors. Here's my suggestion. The...
Writing FeedbackMardy17 - Jan 7, 2016 / daveandrei - Jan 18, 2016
|How many books from Burnaby Public Library were read by women and men?
2 - Miftah, your introduction lacks information. You should have included the inclusive years that the line graph illustrated in order...
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk31 - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2016
|A comparison of changes in the amount of money spent on books over a 10-year period
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk31 - Jan 18, 2016 / fahmisadja - Jan 18, 2016
|TASK 1 - Percentage of Tourists to England who Visited Brighton attractions
3 - Naufan, your presentation needs a lot of work. Your introduction was short by one sentence and did not really...
Writing FeedbackPey28 - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2016
|The trend of Outokompu stock price over a five-year period is illustrated in the line chart.
2 - Naufan, the most important part of the formatting requirement of these tests lies in the number of sentences per...
Writing FeedbackPey28 - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2016
|The line graph shows the amount of book expenditure for 4 different euro countries; IELTS 1
3 - The method by which you developed this report creates an authoritative tone for yourself as a reporter. This has...
Writing Feedbackyogi07 - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2016
|The bar chart presents... TASK 1 - INTERNATIONAL GRAGUATES FROM CANADIAN UNIVERSITIES, 2001-2006
2 - Hi Dynar, I really enjoyed reading your essay. You have a good explanation to illustrate the line graph. But,...
Writing Feedbackdynaranjani - Jan 18, 2016 / fahmisadja - Jan 18, 2016
|Task 1 - The line graph shows the data regarding the book's purchased in four European countries
2 - Please avoid double posting the same essay in a single thread. It makes editing the essay difficult. I only...
Writing Feedbackwahyutri13 - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2016
|Task 1: Outokumpu Share Price Between 2006 and 2010
4 - You should practice better word choices. The previous responses were correct when they advised you to use more complex...
Writing Feedbackfariz10 - Jan 18, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2016
|IELTS Brighton's attractions; the Pavilion visitors reached a highest proportion of tourists in 1995
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