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|Advantage and Disadvantage Essay - Being an Only Child
3 - In the past, there were families with a dozen or so children. However, ın the modern world, having an...
Writing FeedbackFurkan - Dec 21, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 23, 2015
|Comparisons regarding the number of heat level per month and annual hours of sunshine; IELTS 1
2 - According to the data particularly in the line chart, the advance cities as Sydney records the greatest temperature in...
Writing FeedbackArundyna - Dec 23, 2015 / shuto - Dec 23, 2015
|The Most Favorite Leader in Indonesia by Grahyta
3 - Grayta, try to make the essay more informative. As Michael said, it would be nice to learn about why...
Writing FeedbackGrahyta24 - Dec 19, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 23, 2015
|IELTS Task 2 - the presence of senior citizens in a community is beneficial; life expectancy essay
NEW - One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing....
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|Handwriting errors, undermined writing skills - these are effects of using computers and smartphones
2 - I suggest you to upload the question of this writing task 2, so we can see whether it answers...
Writing Feedbackrasam11 - Dec 22, 2015 / somasalims - Dec 23, 2015
|Pocket money helps children for managing their future financial skills
2 - More attention should be paid to teach children become an responsible adult. One of the best ways is...
Writing Feedbackannahatef - Dec 22, 2015 / eddies - Dec 22, 2015
|IELTS: The Table and The Bar - forms of transportation used for journeys in some countries
Writing Feedbackainirere - Dec 18, 2015 / Furkan - Dec 21, 2015
|My Perception about ONLINE SHOP - Good or Bad?
2 - there THERE is no doubt that THE internet is ONE of the greatest humankind inventions of the last century....
Writing FeedbackCulas18 - Dec 19, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 19, 2015
|kasfulanwar7 - I want to tell about sport, just my opinion
2 - As we know, sportS is ARE physical activity IES that aimS to maintain or improve A PERSON'S physical ability...
Writing FeedbackKasfulanwar7 - Dec 19, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 19, 2015
|Toefl essay: Advice from a supervisor is more valuable than some hint from a co-worker
4 - Hello, ellaak, thank you for taking your time reading my essay and tidying up the introduction. Hello, vangiespen. I...
Writing Feedbackkichan - Dec 19, 2015 / kichan - Dec 19, 2015
|Because of mobile phones and computers people are losing the ability to communicate face to face
Writing Feedbackthunang - Dec 18, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 19, 2015
|[IELST TASK 1] visitors to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999
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|Harmful effects on natural sources and how to minimize them
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Writing Feedbackannahatef - Dec 19, 2015 / bonboncase - Dec 19, 2015
|The skills that we can improve from Facebook
Writing FeedbackFia0910 - Dec 17, 2015 / Fia0910 - Dec 19, 2015
|Multi cultural societies - IELTS Writing Task 2 - Agree or Disagree?
Writing Feedbackainirere - Dec 11, 2015 / ainirere - Dec 18, 2015
|IELTS-TASK2 internet contains information however sometimes this information is inaccurate or wrong
3 - vangiespen your comments is precious to me and I appreciate your effort to show me my errors, so...
Writing Feedbackrasam11 - Dec 18, 2015 / rasam11 - Dec 18, 2015
|Global warming has an impact on world stability. How to reduce carbon footprint?
2 - Furkan, I wish that you had provided us with the actual prompt you are trying to answer along with...
Writing FeedbackFurkan - Dec 18, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 18, 2015
|Percentage of Yemen and Italy population - IELTS 1 writing that I did for 1.5 hours
5 - The pie charts given compare the percentage of YemenI and Italy ITALIAN population based on the ages in 2000...
Writing FeedbackMaulinaDChem - Dec 17, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 18, 2015
|The figure give information about smoking habits of the UK population by age. (Writing Task 1 IELTS)
10 - I see. I got new knowledge here, thank you so much vangiespen. I'll look another essays to improve my...
Writing Feedbackainirere - Dec 11, 2015 / ainirere - Dec 18, 2015
|[IELST TASK 1] The average number of hours per week that men and women spend doing houseworks
NEW - The bar chart shows the average number of hours per week that men and women spend doing activities around...
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|Luis Riel led two rebellions against his government, killing many in the process - guilty of treason
Writing Feedbackaria12345678 - Dec 16, 2015 / aria12345678 - Dec 17, 2015
|Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society.
4 - You write good. Yet, you need to improve the way you write the introduction, especially the thesis. As...
Writing Feedbackjaysmile4 - Dec 16, 2015 / eddies - Dec 17, 2015
|A varieties of clothes change people - correct my essay for TOEFL practice
2 - Some people from past until now spend BELIEVE THAT IT IS IMPORTANT TO SPEND A high amount of money...
Writing FeedbackBayan - Dec 17, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 17, 2015
|SPORT FOR CHILDREN INSTEAD OF COMPUTER GAMES
2 - Anna, this is a personal opinion essay. Therefore, you have to present your personal opinion in the introductory statement...
Writing Feedbackannahatef - Dec 16, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 16, 2015
|IELTS Task 2 : Government's Subsidy For Education And Healthcare
Writing Feedbackaniani - Dec 15, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 15, 2015
|Some persons claim that competition sense among children is important and need to be strenghtened
Writing Feedbackafsarazizi - Dec 15, 2015 / afsarazizi - Dec 15, 2015
|Why people choose to go to a college or university more than the past time?
Writing FeedbackRosaKar - Dec 15, 2015 / RosaKar - Dec 15, 2015
|The growing number of high school leavers choose to obtain their bachelor degree in a foreign school
2 - Hi hollanda, Nice essay. A few suggestion about it. school leavers choose to obtain their bachelor degree...
Writing Feedbackhollanda - Dec 14, 2015 / Guang - Dec 14, 2015
|The Australian children's free time activities (IELTS)
6 - I personally think we should not add information that is not included in the graph, such as " they...
Writing Feedbackxchan - Dec 6, 2015 / hollanda - Dec 14, 2015
|IELTS Task 1 - The essential skills for external and internal in communication
3 - I think I would write the introduction in an active voice: The given table compares the importance of internal...
Writing FeedbackM3L1 - Dec 2, 2015 / hollanda - Dec 14, 2015
|International experience and more precious opportunity. Statement of Purpose For Enrollment at KAUST
4 - Hi Ani, I believe that this essay already has all the elements that make it a very good statement...
Writing Feedbackaniani - Dec 13, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 14, 2015
|We can not function without doctors because they are more important than inventors.. A/D?
Writing Feedbackpikul - Dec 14, 2015 / pikul - Dec 14, 2015
|Online sales for retail area of travel, film/music, books, and clothes in New Zealand
NEW - The pie charts give information about kinds of online sales for retail area which consist of travel, film/music, books,...
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|To reduce accidents number the council of Balmer Island should limit renting of mopeds; GRE argument
2 - The main problem that I see in your argument essay is that you have a hard time structuring your...
Writing FeedbackKYR8533 - Dec 13, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 13, 2015
|FOCUSING ONE SUBJECT IN UNIVERSITY OR NOT
2 - Hi annahatef, nice to see you here. Now, let me give some corrections on your passage. Here it goes....
Writing Feedbackannahatef - Dec 13, 2015 / aniani - Dec 13, 2015
|FEELING UNSAFE AT HOME AND OUT - WRITING IELTS TASK 2 - CAUSES & SOLUTIONS
5 - Thank you so much for your detailed reply Madam. Your feedback is really helpful, it clear many of my...
Writing Feedbackhollanda - Dec 12, 2015 / hollanda - Dec 13, 2015
|IN GROUPS or ALONE? The way of study depends on students and the lessons. Task 2
3 - Moreover, study in group teachES student about moral values ... There is no doubt that study in groups...
Writing Feedbacksharfina - Dec 8, 2015 / pikul - Dec 13, 2015
|Health is indeed wealth! IGCSE ESL - How to Improve for the Exam
Writing FeedbackNada9210 - Dec 12, 2015 / Nada9210 - Dec 12, 2015
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 : The Number of Books Read by Different Genders At Burnay Public LIbrary
Writing Feedbackandrisaputra3 - Dec 11, 2015 / eddies - Dec 11, 2015
|The Function of Tax reflects in two aspects: in a country and individuals.
2 - ...we need strong armyarmies/the military to protect us, and armyarmies and weapons cost a lot... I think in...
Writing Feedbackmayjiang - Dec 11, 2015 / Charlottefang - Dec 11, 2015
|People are never satisfied with what they have. They always want something different.
4 - Adil, when writing an opinion statement, you cannot say that you support one side in your introduction and then...
Writing Feedbackmushaithir - Dec 10, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 11, 2015
|Redreacing the fee of air traveling is it good or not?
2 - Anna, in your essay, you only indicate the restated prompt and a declaration that you will be discussing both...
Writing Feedbackannahatef - Dec 10, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 11, 2015
|IELTS TASK 2: In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered effective ways...
2 - Lithfia, do not use the term issue when you are not discussing a topic that has many sides or...
Writing FeedbackLuthfia Dewi - Dec 10, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 11, 2015
|IELTS TASK 1 - Percentage of online shopping for retail sectors in New Zealand
2 - ... percentage of online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand and are were measured in 2003 and...
Writing Feedbackdynaranjani - Dec 8, 2015 / annahatef - Dec 10, 2015
|My half in my school - information about a classmate - we are close eachother
Writing FeedbackMimuska - Dec 8, 2015 / Mimuska - Dec 10, 2015
|We can't live without doctors as well as without inventors, so we must appreciate their efforts.
4 - ... technology and health sector are the most essential fields. The word "essential" is non-gradable. ... so when people...
Writing Feedbacksharfina - Dec 9, 2015 / eegii0123 - Dec 10, 2015
|How geography played a role in shaping the different "personalities" of Sumerians, Egyptians, and Ch
2 - ... the Mesopotamian area by the Persian Gulf, where the weather was always different. While egyptians had their nation...
Writing Feedbacksantima570 - Dec 10, 2015 / eegii0123 - Dec 10, 2015
|'Night at the castle' - gothic descriptive piece
15 - The dialogue actually adds to the sense of foreboding to the story so I think you should leave it...
Writing Feedbackiman9931 - Dec 4, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 10, 2015
|Writing about a successful person, Vincent Van Gogh example
Writing Feedbackalamedaboy - Dec 9, 2015 / alamedaboy - Dec 9, 2015
|Which corrupts more, power or powerlessness?
Writing Feedbackmarinaibrahim19 - Dec 8, 2015 / marinaibrahim19 - Dec 9, 2015
|Cause and Effect of stress on college student
3 - The American Institute of Stress explains that ' stress is not a useful term for scientists becausesince it is...
Writing Feedbackalexish - Dec 8, 2015 / sharfina - Dec 9, 2015
|TASK 1- TOOTH DECAY - dental problem illustrated on the line chart
NEW - The line chart illustrates the dental problem with time elapsed after consumptions of fruit sugar, cane sugar, and honey....
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|Global sale of fuel and electricity-based hybrid vehicles - IELTS TASK 1
Writing Feedbackdynaranjani - Dec 9, 2015 / bonboncase - Dec 9, 2015
|IELTS Task 2- Space Exploration is too Expensive
3 - Surya, I would like to share my insights on your essay. - Even space research, whichthat needs a...
Writing FeedbackAsri - Nov 27, 2015 / justivy03 - Dec 8, 2015
|TITLE YOUR STORY - Emerson College essay
Writing Feedbackm16kikano - Dec 7, 2015 / ECalv001 - Dec 8, 2015
|TASK 1- Online shopping sales in New Zealand enggaged in four distinct retail sectors
Writing Feedbacksharfina - Dec 8, 2015 / dynaranjani - Dec 8, 2015
|IELTS-TASK2 : The causes and solutions of criminal activity.
3 - Hello nofrinorman. You have such brilliant ideas ! Well.. I notice some mistakes that are commented by Lucy....
Writing FeedbackNofrinorman - Dec 7, 2015 / dynaranjani - Dec 8, 2015
|HYBRID VEHICLE SALES. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features
NEW - The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicle between 2006 and 2009. Summarize the information...
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|Toefl essay: Independent Task- the rules for young adults are too strict
NEW - Can you please grade my essay out of 30? Urgent!!! I would appreciate any advice. Thanks. Do you...
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|Clear plastic dome. IELTS Writing Task 1
2 - This diagram re presents a method for transforming sea water into drinking water by using a simple device which...
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