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|Should we live a simpler life without technology?
2 - - To some people, the recent booms in the... -... therebyhereby sufficegive my personal feeling. - For an example,...
Writing Feedbacklacusclyne - Jul 17, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 24, 2015
|WHY DO YOUNG PEOPLE LIKE TO LIVE IN BIG CITIES? IELTS ESSAY
3 - This is a good essay with alto of potential! array of reasons... This thesis sentence needs to...
Writing Feedbacknguyenthiet1993 - Jul 21, 2015 / EF_Carol - Jul 22, 2015
|Elderly people can't enjoy their life enough due to lack of strength, energy and confidence
2 - I would like to assist you in making some corrections. When you begin your essay I think you need...
Writing FeedbackMichele9 - Jul 21, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jul 22, 2015
|"Is it possible to be a hero in the modern world?" SAT December 2010
3 - I will help assist you again with your essay. First, I would like to say that you are working...
Writing FeedbackDawn01 - Jul 21, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jul 21, 2015
|An Analytical Essay on the Impacts of Bots on the Economy of Runescape
4 - is this supposed to be an academic text? If yes, you should avoid using informal language like ...
Writing FeedbackindirectMW - Jul 20, 2015 / ah_zafari - Jul 21, 2015
|Benefits and drawbacks of working from home (IELTS)
3 - Pro to working from home is you get to go to the toilet without asking for permission and you...
Writing Feedbackkishki - Jul 21, 2015 / indirectMW - Jul 21, 2015
|It's more important to work at a job you enjoy , even if the salary is low.
Writing FeedbackMichele9 - Jul 20, 2015 / mina_banoo - Jul 21, 2015
|Opportunities when working in a team. No need to worry about negatives.
3 - Hi Yamigi, I think you have good ideas about the topic, about the structure you should add up benefits...
Writing FeedbackYamigi - Jul 18, 2015 / Dieu Anh - Jul 20, 2015
|Imitating others can only be positive if it aimed to learn from others' experiences and findings
2 - I can help assist you again. In your first sentence you change the tense from the past to the...
Writing FeedbackDawn01 - Jul 20, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jul 20, 2015
|Should people make more of an effort to keep some things private? SAT June 2011
3 - replace meditations with thoughts last sentence - say that these ideas might become poisonous lastly say a blade hidden...
Writing FeedbackDawn01 - Jul 18, 2015 / vikey168 - Jul 20, 2015
|Are countries with a long average working time more economically successful?
4 - Lengthening the duration of hours per employee is not necessarily improveing the productivity rate of labour. People who...
Writing FeedbackTiffanyLee - Jul 17, 2015 / Michele9 - Jul 20, 2015
|Should Censorship exist or not?
3 - Thanks @Dieu Anh I appreciate the criticism. Okay, so I will make my examples a bit more wide ranging....
Writing FeedbackAnushaisawesome - Jul 19, 2015 / Anushaisawesome - Jul 20, 2015
|Education as a firm foundation of prosperous and functional person? IELTS
Writing FeedbackDieu Anh - Jul 19, 2015 / Dieu Anh - Jul 20, 2015
|College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs
3 - I would like to help make suggestions to help you improve your essay. First, I think before you...
Writing Feedbackafaghfarhadi2 - Jul 19, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jul 19, 2015
|Should people always tell the truth? Or a lie is necessary sometimes? IELTS Essay
2 - I will help to assist you. First, I think you are doing quite well with transition words (However, For...
Writing Feedbackhieuak11cqt - Jul 19, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jul 19, 2015
|Equal distribution of both gender types in every course in the tertiary level of education
Writing FeedbackMeth - Jul 19, 2015 / Meth - Jul 19, 2015
|IELTS Essay: The advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities.
Writing Feedbacknguyenthiet1993 - Jul 18, 2015 / nguyenthiet1993 - Jul 19, 2015
|My niece has never ever changed badly and stabbed back at my shoulder.
Writing FeedbackHanan1999 - Jul 10, 2015 / Hanan1999 - Jul 19, 2015
|Using a mobile phone in personal / professional life - IELTS
NEW - There are technical revolution in our life due to the present of several appliances for each one,such as mobile...
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|The given table provides the percentage of the monthly average expenditure from family budget
Writing Feedbackspiegli - Jul 18, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jul 18, 2015
|[GRE Argument] Recommendation appeared in a memo from the mayor of the town of Hopewel
3 - Hi thanks for your comment, I really appreciate it =) I'm confused by one sentence in this paragraph....
Writing Feedbackbertojuergen - Jul 17, 2015 / bertojuergen - Jul 18, 2015
|Abilities of the headland to resist the erosion; IELTS writing
3 - Thanks a lot for such a thorough review! Sometimes I make silly mistakes like "it's" and forget about...
Writing Feedbackthelastpolaris - Jul 17, 2015 / thelastpolaris - Jul 17, 2015
|The number of animal and plant species gradually plummets in recent years; it's wake-up call to glob
3 - Can you help me to change this sentence :" "It's is undeniable that human activities cause damage to some...
Writing Feedbackanhtuyet2440 - Jul 13, 2015 / anhtuyet2440 - Jul 17, 2015
|IELTS - Task 2 Studying in a university or working as a builder. Discuss both view and give opinion.
NEW - Topic: Some people think young people should go to university to further their educations, while others think they should...
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|ESSAY about the IMPORTANT of LOYALTY in a FRIEND &the CIRCUMSTANCES that led them show LOYALTY
Writing Feedbackngocnguyen16688 - Jul 17, 2015 / ngocnguyen16688 - Jul 17, 2015
|Should juries get access to criminals' past covictions?
3 - Well, I'm not a lawyer or somebody who works for one, but believe me, it's a tough world they...
Writing Feedbacktuananh - Jul 15, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 17, 2015
|Choosing friends; having mates who are similar or different from you have both its good points TOEFL
2 - - In every part of lifetime, - you couldcan talk about everything, - people rather than the other ones....
Writing Feedbackeegii012 - Jul 14, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 17, 2015
|(GRE Argument) a memo from the director of student housing at Buckingham College
2 - -..will constantly be increasingincrease in the future. -..enrollment increase does not necessarily increase the demand - UselessSome (you cannot...
Writing Feedbackjyh2013 - Jul 12, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 16, 2015
|A comparison of five groups activities of Australian kids 5 -14 years old spent their leisure time
Writing Feedbackruaconbm122 - Jul 14, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 16, 2015
|"The roots of education are bitter but the fruit is sweet."; Commitment to service
Writing FeedbackIlovemonkeys - Jul 13, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 16, 2015
|My action as the youth agent of change
2 - Amalia, right of the bat, I applaud you for coming up with a very good essay on education. It's...
Writing FeedbackAmaliaIR - Jul 11, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 16, 2015
|IELTS: whether an enjoyable job or a good salary leads to a better life
Writing Feedbackknighttoken - Jul 15, 2015 / tinytinisea - Jul 16, 2015
|Library equipment is more expensive than the sport tools - which needs more financial support?
2 - I have some ideas: - Libraries and sport activities is very important => are - The university...
Writing Feedbackkhumayra - Jul 14, 2015 / tinytinisea - Jul 16, 2015
|Some people are feeling unsecured either when they are at home or outside
Writing Feedbacktinytinisea - Jul 15, 2015 / tinytinisea - Jul 16, 2015
|Companies can not decisive people in giving low standard commodities just for profit.
3 - Snape, before I start with your essay, I'm quite puzzled with the title; - Companies cannot decisivedecidepeople in...
Writing Feedbacksnape - Jul 10, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 15, 2015
|"Does the success of a community depends on limiting personal Interest" SAT May 2006
4 - Thanks lightfox I really appreciate your help !! Respect !!! To cap it all, a community is like...
Writing FeedbackDawn01 - Jul 12, 2015 / Dawn01 - Jul 15, 2015
|IELTS: the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities
Writing Feedbackarcoyy - Jul 13, 2015 / tuananh - Jul 15, 2015
|Single-sex or mixed school?
3 - Pretty good structured essay. But pay attention to plural usage. Proficient vocabulary. Except some mechanical errors, perfectly written writing....
Writing Feedbacksepehr_gh - Jul 10, 2015 / eegii012 - Jul 14, 2015
|TOEFL : Most businesspeople are motivated only by the desire for more money.
6 - In overall, it is perfect essay except some typo errors. So, it'd be helpful to check your writing once...
Writing FeedbackHouram - Jul 9, 2015 / eegii012 - Jul 14, 2015
|"Do people need to "unlearn"many of their assumptions and ideas?" SAT December 2007
NEW - Well, I am preparing for the SAT and I wonder if you guys , EF_Contributers and members , can...
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|One should imagine first and then get knowledge; Imagination is important that knowledge.
3 - i think it is a little awakward to use the theif as the argument of the realtionship of imagination...
Writing FeedbackJunisha111p - Jul 13, 2015 / arcoyy - Jul 13, 2015
|Playing out door games are the best solution to remove my stress and have a carefree life.
Writing Feedbacksmitahingankar - Jul 8, 2015 / Junisha111p - Jul 13, 2015
|Newcomers Dealing with The New Place
4 - Thanks a lot Ahmad, Shinta, and Mr. Eddy because i found that your advise are very helpful :) Hopefully...
Writing Feedbackveaenia - Jul 11, 2015 / veaenia - Jul 12, 2015
|Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Parents and schools responsible?
3 - Hi Ha Hoang, 1. Please write the question completely so that readers enable providing meaningful feedback for your...
Writing FeedbackHoang Ha ktl - Jul 10, 2015 / shintacandrade - Jul 11, 2015
|Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary
Writing Feedbackarcoyy - Jul 10, 2015 / shintacandrade - Jul 11, 2015
|More and more senior high schools require students take part in some voluntary activities
NEW - hi, everyone, please help me polish my IELTS essay. Thanks a lot :) Demanding Students To Work for...
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|There are times when it is acceptable not to tell the truth.
4 - @justivy03 thanks for your help again. Sure, life is complicated and maybe sometimes not telling the truth is the...
Writing FeedbackMichele9 - Jul 9, 2015 / Michele9 - Jul 10, 2015
|Whatever lead our dreams for better life to become a reality, is our experience.
3 - Linda, I definitely agree that experience is a very powerful driver for people to be what they want to...
Writing FeedbackLinda44 - Jul 10, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 10, 2015
|Governments must support financially major cities because it preserve national tradition.
Writing FeedbackJunisha111p - Jul 9, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 10, 2015
|Natural resource from outer space
3 - - In this essay, I would agreewill site why I agree that we should use alternative energy which is...
Writing FeedbackAdhisti - Jul 9, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 10, 2015
|IELTS TASK 2 : SEEKING ALTERNATIVE ENERGY
3 - - Natural resources are utterly important forin human's life. -... natural resources for poweringto power up their accommodation...
Writing Feedbackaseprudi - Jul 9, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 10, 2015
|Natural resource from Earth will run out soon - seeking for other solutions
3 - - Generally, it is inevitable that natural resources from Earth and will run out soon. - As such,...
Writing Feedbackalif - Jul 9, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 10, 2015
|'Money can't Buy Happiness'. Being rich gives an opportunity to give back.
3 - - ...it is just to fulfill our needs not contentment. - First and fore most significant is that...
Writing FeedbackJaggi7921 - Jul 9, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 10, 2015
|Should developed nations help undeveloped ones in the aspects of health, education and trading
6 - dear Rich Monte I'm sorry and this will be the last time I wrote something without proper evidence....
Writing Feedbacktuananh - Jul 9, 2015 / tuananh - Jul 10, 2015
|Some people argue using a cleaner energy to protect the environment
4 - The most important thing to do is practice typing these sentences after you make the corrections. So for...
Writing Feedbackuuu0301 - Jul 9, 2015 / EF_Kevin - Jul 9, 2015
|"Is it necessary for people to combine their efforts .." SAT March 2015
4 - You need to write more from a realistic (not literary / legendary) point of view. 'The Plaque' is a...
Writing FeedbackDawn01 - Jul 9, 2015 / Rich Monte - Jul 9, 2015
|TOEFL:In the busy and crowded world, we should expect people to be polite to others
2 - Lisa, after reading your essay, I grade it 4. 4 because of the following corrections that I made; ...
Writing Feedbacklisa_severus - Jul 9, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 9, 2015
|IELTS TASK 1 : SURVEY SHOPPING CENTER
Writing Feedbackaseprudi - Jul 9, 2015 / shintacandrade - Jul 9, 2015
|The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
3 - you should not use word "strong" in conclusion. you can say-- In the aforementioned reasons, It is clear...
Writing Feedbackmarned - Jul 9, 2015 / Junisha111p - Jul 9, 2015
|It is more beneficial to complete independent study than to attend college.
4 - Please check your introduction. main idea should be convey properly in introduction and in conclusion. Keep writing...
Writing FeedbackKUP - Jun 30, 2015 / Junisha111p - Jul 9, 2015
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