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|TASK 1. How tourists obtain benefits and drawbacks from Fairmont Island based on survey's results
3 - I have made slight improvements on your report writing. Hopefully you can notice them. The pie charts reveal...
Writing FeedbackRa_fhli - Nov 20, 2015 / eddies - Nov 21, 2015
|Headland erosion. The diagram shows the damage that took place.
3 - The diagram shows a process of stack and stump formed as result of coastal erosion. As seen, the...
Writing Feedbackirhame - Nov 21, 2015 / eddies - Nov 21, 2015
|Intelligence based on testing not common sense stuff
Writing Feedbackjvahoviak - Nov 16, 2015 / Clark Kent - Nov 21, 2015
|IELTS Task 1 : The average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010
2 - Hi aniani, your writing is good. However, you need to make this change. The above statement needs...
Writing Feedbackaniani - Nov 21, 2015 / Sketches - Nov 21, 2015
|There are four paces that can be seen. The erosion process in a headland - IELTS TASK 1
2 - The diagrams illustrate the erosion process that takeN place in a headland. Overall, there are four paces that can...
Writing FeedbackBayuwibowo - Nov 21, 2015 / eddies - Nov 21, 2015
|IELTS Task 1:The changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960
Writing Feedbackaniani - Nov 21, 2015 / eddies - Nov 21, 2015
|Maintaining old buildings is a very important thing to preserve one of country's heritages
Writing Feedbackirhame - Nov 21, 2015 / Kevin623623 - Nov 21, 2015
|The picture of Fairmont Island in the eyes of regular visitors.
Writing Feedbackdaveandrei - Nov 20, 2015 / irhame - Nov 21, 2015
|Banning Corporal Punishment in America to Decrease Mental Disorders
Writing Feedbacksam2177413 - Nov 19, 2015 / sam2177413 - Nov 20, 2015
|Travelling to foreign countries brings advantages or disadvantages for young, energetic adults?
NEW - Young people say that traveling to different countries benefits them and the society. Do you agree or disagree? Give...
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|Teaching method will not exist in 2050, agree or disagree? Ielts task 2.
3 - Hi let give you some feedback 1) The first body paragraph, your reason for the main idea should...
Writing Feedbacknsahmad - Nov 20, 2015 / Nofrinorman - Nov 20, 2015
|IELTS Task 1: The aspects of Fairmont Island that tourists enjoy the most and the least
2 - Hi Akbar, let me help you out with finalizing the content of your informative essay. You were able to...
Writing Feedbackakbarmappiare - Nov 20, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 20, 2015
|Ease your education with Internet
3 - hi pinky, i read your essay. i am impressed. it is easy to read and grabs the readers attention....
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|IELTS TASK 1 : The two pie charts illustrate the most common drawbacks and benefits of Fairmont Isla
2 - Hi broibra, happy to read your writing. I try to give you suggestion, hoping it will help you. ...
Writing Feedbackbroibra - Nov 20, 2015 / nsahmad - Nov 20, 2015
|'The machine can be placed near the coast' - A WIND TURBINES AND OPTIMUM LOCATIONS (IELTS)
3 - The diagrams present a turbine machine for generating electricity from wind HOW A WIND TURBINE IS DESIGNED and where...
Writing FeedbackNofrinorman - Nov 19, 2015 / eddies - Nov 20, 2015
|The pie chart informs what is interesting for Australian citizens and for new migrants - IELTS 1
2 - GREETINGS!!! LET DISCUSS TOGETHER. FIRST AND FOREMOST. I NOTICE that, I found bullky mistake in your introductory....
Writing FeedbackFenny Nelwan - Nov 18, 2015 / Ra_fhli - Nov 19, 2015
|IELTS task 1 - The power that generated by wind turbine is depended on its location
2 - The diagrams display the plan for wind turbines PLANNED and its location. It seems that its location determines the...
Writing FeedbackM3L1 - Nov 19, 2015 / eddies - Nov 19, 2015
|IELTS Task 1: Parts of a wind turbine and its effective positions to place.
2 - A BREAKDOWN OF THE CERTAIN FIGURE FOR HOW A WIND TURBINE IS DESIGNED AND WHERE THIS LIES SO AS...
Writing Feedbackakbarmappiare - Nov 19, 2015 / eddies - Nov 19, 2015
|TASK 1. How a wind turbine designed and where the installation is placed
NEW - The diagram gives breakdown how a wind turbine designed and where the installation is placed. In general, the wind...
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|"The Park Area" - Describe your favourite place essay
2 - Hi Soha.. I closely read your writing.. I will give you few suggestions. I hope that these can improve...
Writing FeedbackPinkyTune - Nov 19, 2015 / akbarmappiare - Nov 19, 2015
|The most popular attraction places visited by tourists in England
NEW - Tourist who visited four different attractions in Brighton - IELTS task 1. A breakdown of the proportion of...
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|Is money the most important aspects of job?
2 - Hi, let me try to give you some suggestion for this writing. Before answering to the question, ...
Writing Feedbackzanbaq - Oct 26, 2015 / broibra - Nov 19, 2015
|IELTS Task 1: A Machine For Generating Electricity From Wind And Where It Can Be Located
2 - Hi sadja, happy to read your writting and make some discussions with you. It is good writting, but trying...
Writing Feedbackfahmisadja - Nov 19, 2015 / nsahmad - Nov 19, 2015
|The internet cannot replace the position of museum role; IELTS TASK 2
2 - Sorry, I clicked 'post message' accidentally, so I will continue my comments, Generally, I did not find grammatical...
Writing FeedbackLuthfia Dewi - Nov 18, 2015 / fahmisadja - Nov 18, 2015
|IELTS TASK 2: The Bad News Report from The Media Discourages People Doing Activity
2 - This intro is too bulky. Simply introduce the background with one or two sentences, then show your claim.you...
Writing Feedbackdaveandrei - Nov 18, 2015 / eddies - Nov 18, 2015
|A breakdown of the percentages of people visiting several places in Australia
3 - A breakdown of SOME ATTRACTIONS WHERE THREE DIFFERENT BRACKETS LIVING IN AUSTRALIA VISIT the percentages of people visiting several...
Writing Feedbackochio - Nov 18, 2015 / eddies - Nov 18, 2015
|Australian people like watching movies in cinemas. IELTS WRITING TASK 1
4 - The bar graph gives information about four different attractions that three brackets always visit in Australia. Overall, while new...
Writing FeedbackAndre kusuma - Nov 18, 2015 / eddies - Nov 18, 2015
|The Ways of A Wind Turbing Working And Where It Have to be Located
2 - The diagrams illustrate a design of a wind turbine and its appropriate location. As seen, there do seem...
Writing Feedbackdaveandrei - Nov 18, 2015 / eddies - Nov 18, 2015
|Cinema, Theatre, Zoo, Library. Popular Places for Different People in Australia (IELTS TASK I)
2 - Greetings! There's a large number of writing mistakes in your writing, so i have made another one for...
Writing Feedbackmujahid_fadli - Nov 18, 2015 / Zahra ahmad - Nov 18, 2015
|Where are the leisure areas for three different groups of Australian inhabitants?
2 - Your essay explains the bar graph well! However it has some problems. visit library...it has This is...
Writing Feedbackaniani - Nov 18, 2015 / EF_Carol - Nov 18, 2015
|Percentage of the leisure areas attended by 3 different groups of Australian inhabitants
2 - I think you have done decently in analyzing this bar graph however I believe there is room for improvement...
Writing Feedbackaniani - Nov 18, 2015 / KenMugi - Nov 18, 2015
|I agree that mass media should arrange the publicity of celebrities
Writing FeedbackRa_fhli - Nov 17, 2015 / daveandrei - Nov 18, 2015
|The bar chart compares the proportion of certain categorized people living in Australia
NEW - The bar chart compares the proportion of certain categorized people living in Australia who visit four selected places which...
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|The cinema is the most popular place for the inhabitants living in Australia
NEW - A breakdown of people living and visiting four different public facilities in Australia is revealed in the chart. Overall,...
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|TASK 1. The recruitment of foreign language teachers in Ontario from 2001 to 2007.
4 - Rahmat, first of all, it's good that you plugged the graph in the essay, most of the students forget...
Writing FeedbackRa_fhli - Nov 15, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 18, 2015
|IELTS task 1 - enrolled educator for regularly job in Ontario
Writing FeedbackM3L1 - Nov 14, 2015 / Clark Kent - Nov 18, 2015
|An in-depth drill in drug abuse - the death toll has been increasing exponentially
Writing Feedbacklacusclyne - Nov 17, 2015 / fidelissari - Nov 18, 2015
|IELTS Task 2: Charge in museum - it should be balanced with a better service
2 - Museums have a variety of purposes and budgets, it causes them having difference in charge. Improving museum facility and...
Writing Feedbacknsahmad - Nov 18, 2015 / eddies - Nov 18, 2015
|The study-work culture in Denmark has always fascinated a lot of international students
Writing FeedbackYashwanth - Nov 17, 2015 / Yashwanth - Nov 18, 2015
|Children being the most naive and easy target of the media influence, become a victim. GRE essay
Writing Feedbackchandnimaishery - Nov 18, 2015 / chandnimaishery - Nov 18, 2015
|Same national curriculum; imbalance in the development rather than the intended unity for the school
2 - Every child has its own potential of learning ... Every child has own interests and potentials in their...
Writing FeedbackSsakshijain - Nov 17, 2015 / ochio - Nov 18, 2015
|IELTS Task 2: Life and a relation of entertainers (such as actors, singers or footballs)
2 - Life and a relation of entertainers (such as actors, singers or footballs) are reported by the media. There is...
Writing Feedbackakbarmappiare - Nov 18, 2015 / ochio - Nov 18, 2015
|Ielts task 2 - the aim of university education
4 - Hi ngong, happy to read your writing. let me give some suggestions. Comment. *much for noun uncountable,...
Writing FeedbackLucy Ngong - Nov 17, 2015 / nsahmad - Nov 18, 2015
|IELTS task 2 - Media like to expose famous people activities
Writing FeedbackM3L1 - Nov 17, 2015 / nsahmad - Nov 18, 2015
|IELTS-TASK2 : Whether the media should notice ordinary people than famous people ?
4 - hello Sir Nofynorman let me give you little suggestion for your consideration The world of media has taken...
Writing FeedbackNofrinorman - Nov 17, 2015 / Arundyna - Nov 17, 2015
|TOEFL ESSAY: professional athletes or performers shouldn't be involved in politics.
Writing Feedbackakiraaa - Nov 16, 2015 / akiraaa - Nov 17, 2015
|"Is 18 the right age limit for voting?" Can you tell me if my essay is off-topic or not?
3 - Thanks, I appreciate your suggestion. Yes, you are right, I'm arguing that the age limit is not fairly set...
Writing FeedbackAnthonyJ - Nov 17, 2015 / AnthonyJ - Nov 17, 2015
|IELTS TASK 2 : The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities.
2 - Let me give your suggestion In my opinion, you miss one word, regarding singing in the first paragraph, which...
Writing Feedbackbroibra - Nov 17, 2015 / Arundyna - Nov 17, 2015
|TOEFL Writing--whether parents should exchange their ideas about education methods with teachers
Writing FeedbackDousiyu - Oct 20, 2015 / broibra - Nov 17, 2015
|How does higher education in Denmark differ from India?
7 - Hi Shiring, in answer to your first question, you certainly can get creative in writing your response to the...
Writing Feedbackshiring - Nov 15, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 17, 2015
|IELTS : satisfaction customer levels in US airlines. Task 1.
2 - A comparison regarding customer ... A comparison of the proportion of how people felt about the service offered by...
Writing Feedbacknsahmad - Nov 17, 2015 / eddies - Nov 17, 2015
|Ielts task 1 : Consumer of stuff in Britain - explanation of the graph
Writing FeedbackArundyna - Nov 16, 2015 / broibra - Nov 17, 2015
|IELTS Task 2: Famous People Like Celebrities or Athletes Almost Are Reported by The Media
2 - Hello fahmi, I guess this is an familiar topic for you and you give your best idea to answering...
Writing Feedbackfahmisadja - Nov 17, 2015 / Nofrinorman - Nov 17, 2015
|Which is more effective - consultancy from consultants or listening to employees
2 - Hello.., i really enjoy your topic came up.. I will give you some suggest for the content.. 1....
Writing FeedbackSsakshijain - Nov 16, 2015 / Nofrinorman - Nov 17, 2015
|A breakdown of the number of people both female and male participating four evening courses - IELTS1
2 - Hi Fidelis... I will try to closely read your writing.. I will give you few suggestions. I hope that...
Writing Feedbackfidelissari - Nov 16, 2015 / akbarmappiare - Nov 17, 2015
|Theater satisfaction - what two groups of people think of a new theatre? ielts task 1
3 - Hi soyoung, Happy to discuss with you. Comment. *Gerund/Verb-ing as subject is singular. *need verb in your...
Writing FeedbackSOYOUNG - Nov 16, 2015 / nsahmad - Nov 16, 2015
|TOEFL ESSAY: New devices vs well-adopted devices - which do you prefer?
10 - WOW！Thanks for reminding me what i may not be aware of, TJLuschen! Your advice really helped me a...
Writing Feedbackakiraaa - Nov 11, 2015 / akiraaa - Nov 16, 2015
|Global warming - human's activity have nothing to do with this rapidly increase in temperature
NEW - Please could someone correct my mistakes? To know, it is not an essay and either intended to be formal....
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|Rewarding students to improve their academic results
Writing Feedbackannahatef - Nov 16, 2015 / iban - Nov 16, 2015
|Three reasons for visiting museums
4 - Hey Adrian Sorry if it was misunderstood: By childish I only meant I found it less persuasive: ...
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