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Worldwide Mobile Phone Sales ( % share of market)

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Violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18

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The chart gives information about the proportion of rail transport in four different states in 2007

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Basic factor of the violent crime increase among teens is less learning from parents and teachers

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TED talk regarding nuclear power - the nuclear fusion reactor is built.

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TASK II : difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives

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Essay on George Hewes from the American Revolution

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The table chart describes the use of trail, categorized by how many people use it

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The table about Rail transport in five different countries

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Horror Essay continuation of the book : The house on the Brink. Need more ideas.

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Living in a big city - means more robbers and criminals around

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Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued -IELTS

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Write a story that happens in a mysterious place.

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TOEFL: Should students have longer vacations than before?

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Selecting an employees based on age - how this development is seen?

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The TEDTalk summary regarding education. Writing flows and checking grammar.

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In this essay, I would argue that media has positive and negative impact for people's live.

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Observation of rail transport in 4 developed countries in 2007

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Rail transport in four countries (UK, US, Japan and Italy) in 2007

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We won't go far away from media influence - advantage and disadvantage living in full-media society

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Buying things online is very convenient. Simple trade brings some demerits though.

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Task 2 IELTS - Some organizations believe that their employees should dress smartly.

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The inclination between social activities and studying at school

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TASK II : own business instead of working for a company or organisation

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Many awesome inventions in many aspects has been increased technology, education and transportation

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I decided to start college straight out of high school. Great parenting of both - my mom and dad.

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Technology is not foster our business only but also make people's daily life easier.

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Talking about myself - environment, culture, or family history helped to shape my identity

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Many governments in the world spend large amounts of money on art.

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Today people are not polite to each other, but why to blame; the world if full of fierce competition

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Professionalism of an organisation requires the introduction of an proper dress code

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"A Walk". Creative writing personal essay on a storm (descriptive) i need help making it longer

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Education is a critical element to prosperity of any nation. Justify.

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IELTS TASK 2: The best way to solve the environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel.

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IELTS TASK 1 - The Measurement of Parent Happiness With Children

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The graph shows the number of West Indians and Indians and Pakistanis Immigrating to the UK

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Task 2 - The clothes people wear are the most indication of what they are like

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There is nothing that technology can't reach - it make children less creative (toefl writing)

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Cbest - At some point in our lives, all of us have focused some sort of rejection or defeat

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Space exploration requires vast sums of money. Justifiable?

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Books or computers for learning? Most students who use technology are more engaged with their study

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Salary imbalance between entertainment profession and profession like doctor and teacher.

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Academic writing task 2 - The influence of modern world to a healthy lifestyle

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Secondary education has been dominated among Bulgarians who wanted to live abroad in 2000s

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Children face up unhealthy lifestyle - youngers tend to do severe modus vivendi

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Task 1 - Total words spoken to child compare with Children's total Vocabulary size

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The diagrams describe how a turbine can produce electricity from renewable energy

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Summary from TED's video. Writing flows and grammar.

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A summarize from TED Talk from Bill Gates who reveals how to improve teaching quality

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Negative effect of electronic media on personal relationship - ielts task 2

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The correlation between family talks and a different number of the vocabulary used by children

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Inhabitants live in several different places - second task for IELTS

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Wind turbines - the figure describes how the elictricity is made and best place to locate generators

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How the air circulates in a house and waste of energy due to heat losses - IELTS diagram

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The clothes indicate what kind of persons we are - IELTS TASK 2

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IELTS TASK 2 - Clothes are the most important indication of your identity

Writing FeedbackBayuwibowo - Sep 21, 2015 / eddies - Sep 22, 2015
The generator turbine is using the wind power to produce electricity in the three distinct locations

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TASK 1 : Happiness of parents with children of different ages

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RIGHT ATTITUDE IS EVERYTHING

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Analyze an Argument Task: Physical Fitness of Corpora's Citizens

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