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|There is no doubt that most of the people consider health as a major part of their life
6 - Hi, kindly find my feedback on your first paragraph. There is a contradiction in your first sentence: There...
Writing FeedbackAmir1987 - Mar 6, 2015 / Trias - May 21, 2015
|Learning how to be a good member in society through the (obligatory?) community service program
4 - Some people believe that it should be to become a compulsory part of high school curriculum so that student...
Writing FeedbackMuhammadImho - May 20, 2015 / Trias - May 21, 2015
|Is it appropriate to use of animals for human benefits?
2 - Hy trias, these are your writing feedback from me: 1. Give example or scientific fact for each body...
Writing FeedbackTrias - May 19, 2015 / MuhammadImho - May 20, 2015
|The world's energy consumption in 2010
Writing Feedbackthutyedaniel - May 7, 2015 / Hettymsk - May 20, 2015
|Is it better study domestic or abroad?
NEW - In the flat world today, besides economical factor has changed significantly, education has affected by globalization phenomenon. There are...
Writing Feedbacknguyenvannam - May 19, 2015 / — -
|International market access in order to produce more goods and to generate solid profits for regions
4 - For instance, economical help from the United States to demerit regions in Indonesia has gradually reduced since = because...
Writing Feedbacksiddiqumar - May 19, 2015 / nguyenvannam - May 19, 2015
|People Get Into Dept Since They Afford Things They Do Not Need
3 - stacy..., a few points for para 1 & 2: Para 1: - Do not write "relate to...", but "satisfaction...
Writing FeedbackStacy Handayani - May 19, 2015 / eddies - May 19, 2015
|The annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films
3 - Moving to a more detailed analysis from the bar chart, it reveals that DVS sales type rose gradually at...
Writing Feedbackthutyedaniel - May 19, 2015 / siddiqumar - May 19, 2015
|As a form of transportations, cycling has its merits and demerits, however it improves our health.
3 - To begin with, cycling is a low cost means of traffic, the opening of the advantages of cycling ...
Writing Feedbackmijoan - May 18, 2015 / Trias - May 19, 2015
|How often people bought or rented movies between 2002 and 2011 in a particular store
2 - Hi Siddiq, Please find my feedback on your overview paragraph below: The bar chart gives information concerning how...
Writing Feedbacksiddiqumar - May 19, 2015 / Trias - May 19, 2015
|TV Programmes Watched in Australia - women prefer to watch reality shows more than game shows
NEW - The chart below show the number and genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different...
Writing FeedbackTrias - May 19, 2015 / — -
|Media are focusing more on the personal lives of celebrities.
3 - Dear justivy Thanks for your pints and your helpful advice. Can you give a grade to this essay...
Writing Feedbackm4soud - May 18, 2015 / m4soud - May 19, 2015
|Getting into dept by buying goods which do not needed
2 - I hope this helps you. I also gave you some suggestions on how you can improve your writing. ...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - May 19, 2015 / lcturn87 - May 19, 2015
|Three points why people these days are living longer.
4 - For example, Tuberculosis was one of the most formidable diseases that killed many victims in the past but today...
Writing Feedbackchuoi9 - May 14, 2015 / nguyenvannam - May 19, 2015
|Some effects of Internet addiction lead to consequences like health problems or relationships damage
Writing Feedbacknguyenvannam - May 18, 2015 / nguyenvannam - May 19, 2015
|IELTS: Strict punishments for driving offences - safety reasons?
4 - On the other hand, there are many other ways which can be implemented to improved road safety. Firstly, It...
Writing Feedbackzoha - May 15, 2015 / SHanafi - May 18, 2015
|It is up to us to decide which one is better - either work or travel before starting a university
Writing FeedbackKaraeng - May 18, 2015 / lcturn87 - May 18, 2015
|City life and country life - I will stay in the city, although both places are good to live.
2 - I think you need to have indentations or a way for the reader to understand when you are trying...
Writing Feedbackhoangan - May 18, 2015 / lcturn87 - May 18, 2015
|Estimate the essay "Single parent struggle". What advantages and disadvantages can you find?
Writing Feedbacksonya_mirka - May 17, 2015 / sonya_mirka - May 18, 2015
|Grades help motivate or discourage students to learn?
3 - Another point to consider is, some students have shameful... adapt to their friends I think this point is a...
Writing FeedbackNaph - May 16, 2015 / chuoi9 - May 18, 2015
|How to improve you skills in English?
4 - Mariam, Regarding the remarks I made, the punctuation on the "example" and the rest of the remarks I...
Writing Feedbackmariam soos - May 16, 2015 / justivy03 - May 18, 2015
|'The lazy generation' - compare and contrast essay
4 - Kiaraaa123, thank you for your offer to help me with Spanish. How kind of you! I know more than...
Writing Feedbackkiaraaa123 - May 16, 2015 / ChristineB - May 17, 2015
|The museum should be a fun and appealing place for its visitors - shall attract and entertain people
4 - Hello I am beginner in English, With the sensational effects and interesting features, they never fail to attract young...
Writing FeedbackMichaelLi - May 16, 2015 / Naph - May 17, 2015
|Inherent Truth - something that you do is more important than what you say to people
NEW - Do u agree or disagree with the following statement? Actions speak louder than words. The maxim actions speak...
Writing FeedbackNaph - May 16, 2015 / — -
|Students who take a break between the high school and universities are at disadvantage
4 - i have one suggestion for you Do not use contractions . the use contraction reflects lack of formality and...
Writing FeedbackparkcoolGuy - May 15, 2015 / Naph - May 16, 2015
|The preference of people changing from purchasing a house to renting one and benefits from it.
Writing FeedbackMichaelLi - May 16, 2015 / Naph - May 16, 2015
|5 paragraph writing - travel and transportation
3 - When we were near Kanchanaburi that was a relief! why you used from (we)?? I think it is personal...
Writing Feedbackmayph - May 15, 2015 / Naph - May 16, 2015
|Freetime activities - trying to write an essay for my important examination
Writing Feedbacktulipgirl - May 15, 2015 / tulipgirl - May 15, 2015
|A friend in need is a friend indeed.
Writing FeedbackNaph - May 15, 2015 / Naph - May 15, 2015
|Global warming is the serious problem in the world : IELTS Task 2
4 - Here are my observation/comments. I believe this is discussion essay only not discussion plus opinion, so I do...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - May 9, 2015 / zoha - May 15, 2015
|Summary of the polemic essay "Single parent struggle"
Writing Feedbackstasy - May 13, 2015 / stasy - May 14, 2015
|Young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year. Agree or Disagree?
3 - Therefore, I personally believe that this approach would give significant impacts for students. Your intro needs a stronger...
Writing Feedbackintiaiqbal92 - Apr 30, 2015 / EF_Carol - May 14, 2015
|English paper about NGOs - Nongovernmental Organizations
2 - - The general idealizedidea and framework of how NGOs were created... - use of punctuation marks, colon...
Writing Feedbackalsulaiti - May 13, 2015 / justivy03 - May 13, 2015
|Issue with the accidental findings of many important discoveries or creations.
5 - Your points are brilliant. Thank you very much Christine! That are kind of the ways I want to direct...
Writing Feedbackdunguyen - May 7, 2015 / dunguyen - May 12, 2015
|Task 2: Living in rural area became choice of most people
3 - I think your essay is very thoughtful, and well written. Just a couple of comments, however. People do...
Writing FeedbackAdhisti - May 7, 2015 / EF_Carol - May 12, 2015
|Leaving home is common to University Students' nowadays and it serves several purposes to them.
Writing FeedbackSun Sokteang - May 12, 2015 / Sun Sokteang - May 12, 2015
|Solving Sustainable Electricity in California
Writing Feedbackvinhson87 - May 11, 2015 / vinhson87 - May 12, 2015
|Kids should be guided to find well balance between electronic entertainment and outdoor activities
6 - Hi could you please correct this for me, Thanks Topic :.... MOD comment:One essay at one time...
Writing Feedbackshani777 - May 7, 2015 / shani777 - May 12, 2015
|Best change in my hometown? Establishing companies to make a lot of job vacancies and employ people.
Writing Feedbackminoosaba - May 10, 2015 / minoosaba - May 11, 2015
|There are a lot of challenges in order to reduce traffic accidents - how a strict punishment work?
2 - Second paragraph first line some people could be afraid of paying fines and disqualification because of driving offence,this is...
Writing FeedbackKellen - May 10, 2015 / Farhan393 - May 10, 2015
|IELST TASK 2 : living in small community creates a wide range communication
3 - If you fix it as above ur essay will be really well-written u r writing to argue the negative...
Writing Feedbackfaarasyad - May 7, 2015 / hunhann - May 10, 2015
|Is TV a good thing for keeping people informed and entertained?
3 - the length of the two paragraphs are not equal your state ideas are not clear enough. I think it...
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - May 9, 2015 / hunhann - May 10, 2015
|'strike while the iron is hot' - Topic: "Is spanking a good way to discipline children?"
Writing Feedbacknvnhcmus - May 10, 2015 / nvnhcmus - May 10, 2015
|The two methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes
3 - Like writing task 2, the first paragraph in writing task 1 is the starting point to introduce the whole...
Writing Feedbackalif - May 7, 2015 / eddies - May 10, 2015
|Communication skills within internal and external companies over a 10-year period; IELTS Task 1
2 - How valid is the survey overall, is it trustworthy? It may be worth it to add some information about...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - May 7, 2015 / Dhaliwal - May 9, 2015
|Write a paragraph of 140 words about the sport you like most
3 - I think your short essay, is well written, for a first attempt. Just a couple of suggestions: It...
Writing Feedbacktangthidiepanh - May 5, 2015 / EF_Carol - May 9, 2015
|A large explosion at a COMAH site in a heavily populated area - detailed plan of the action
3 - Sorry about the delay! I hope this information helps. I tried to organize suggestions in the order the paper...
Writing FeedbackJeremy Newcastl - May 7, 2015 / lcturn87 - May 8, 2015
|The amount of world's energy use in 2010 by type of its sources
3 - These type of assignments are challenging in my opinion, but your did a good job presenting accurate and detailed...
Writing Feedbackintiaiqbal92 - May 7, 2015 / ChristineB - May 8, 2015
|The optimum location for wind turbine is in high land as the wind strengths are maximum
2 - Stacy, your information is accurate and complete, but I think my suggestions will help make your writing "sound" better....
Writing FeedbackStacy Handayani - May 7, 2015 / ChristineB - May 8, 2015
|How to make English lessons more successful? The teacher point of view.
8 - I think that you should explain to your teacher that you received help with your English grammar and punctuation...
Writing Feedbackalmani - May 2, 2015 / ChristineB - May 8, 2015
|IELTS TASK 1 : The design for a wind turbine and its location
3 - (it does not tell what the pictures actually means) in this first introductory paagraph, you should; 1. tell the...
Writing Feedbackintiaiqbal92 - May 7, 2015 / Anfalia - May 7, 2015
|The diagram depicts the phases of erosion of a headland
3 - Hello Ainun, let me give you some overview for you introductory paragraph. (1) overview; you need not...
Writing FeedbackAinunAlfatih - May 7, 2015 / Anfalia - May 7, 2015
|Task 2: Nowadays, there has been a rapid progress of modern communication
2 - Nowadays, there has been a rapid progress of modern communication that has declined people's time to see their relatives....
Writing FeedbackAdhisti - May 7, 2015 / zoha - May 7, 2015
|The percentage of teacher recruitments in Ontario
2 - I don't see the line graph. I will have to help you with grammar instead. Please look at your...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - May 7, 2015 / lcturn87 - May 7, 2015
|What is the effect of modern interaction between people in human social lives?
Writing Feedbackrianristyanti - May 7, 2015 / tangthidiepanh - May 7, 2015
|The stages of a wind turbine works and the output resulted
NEW - The two diagrams give information regarding how a wind turbine is adjusted in different locations. Overall, what stands out...
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|Changing children's unhealthy lifestyle by parents', schools' and government's active role
NEW - Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - May 7, 2015 / — -
|Details of the elecricity production on the basis of given diagrams
2 - - Overall, what stands out from the diagrams reveals that for in producing electricity, all elements of a wind...
Writing Feedbacksiddiqumar - May 7, 2015 / justivy03 - May 7, 2015
|Universities concept about gender equality among their students.
4 - Therefore Universities are unable to set the gender equality in every subject, even it creates lots of advancement in...
Writing Feedbackhsustudent89 - May 2, 2015 / EF_Carol - May 7, 2015
|The people who are staying in a small community often live and communicate like among a large family
2 - Hi asep, I think your introduction need to rework. Please, attention to the question. it is better for...
Writing Feedbackaseprudi - May 7, 2015 / IqbalThemi - May 7, 2015
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