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|Kids have problems to concentrate at study in school. Why? What can be done?
2 - @Bennytruong Welcome to the forum! This is my feedback for this writing of yours. Try to read up...
Writing FeedbackBennytruong - Nov 15, 2019 / Maria - Nov 16, 2019
|In many countries imprisonment is the most common solution to crimes. Ielts 2
2 - @tamminh Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I hope my feedback gives you insight on how to improve your...
Writing Feedbacktamminh - Nov 13, 2019 / Maria - Nov 16, 2019
|"Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns as it increases crime and violence in society".
Writing FeedbackTrunggrasshopper - Nov 12, 2019 / Trunggrasshopper - Nov 14, 2019
|IELTS writing task 2 The media should report about famous or ordinary people?
3 - @Maria Your feedback is appreciated! I think I messed up task response a bit too. Will try to rewrite...
Writing Feedbackisshi - Nov 13, 2019 / isshi - Nov 13, 2019
|The quantity of water usage by different ways in the world and water consumption in Brazil and Congo
2 - @roswita116 Hi there. Welcome to the site! I am hoping that the feedback you receive here will be useful...
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Nov 13, 2019 / Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 - The only way to reduce the traffic jam is by reducing the need for people to travel.
3 - @roswita116 Thank you very much!!! Your advice was really help. i will take it and try to stand at...
Writing FeedbackPOR HWA - Nov 12, 2019 / POR HWA - Nov 13, 2019
|Separating students which cause problems from others in a school
2 - @Dogmidoo Hey. Welcome here! I hope that this feedback helps you somehow. First and foremost, you still lack...
Writing FeedbackDogmidoo - Nov 12, 2019 / Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: the income is a fundamental factor whenever making decision on choosing a job
2 - @munomita Hi there. Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, all of the feedback you receive here will be useful for...
Writing Feedbackmunomita - Nov 11, 2019 / Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|The study of current students
2 - @Tranthuytrang Hi there! Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, my feedback will give you insight on how to improve your...
Writing FeedbackTranthuytrang - Nov 10, 2019 / Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|Parental pressure: parents put too much pressure on their children
2 - @Winter Hi there! Thanks for being a consistent part of the forum. Hopefully, this feedback will give you insight...
Writing FeedbackWinter - Nov 10, 2019 / Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|Presence of teachers and student learning - computers cannot replace teachers
2 - @lamnguyen Hi there. Thanks for being a part of the forum! Welcome here. Hopefully, my feedback will give you...
Writing Feedbacklamnguyen - Nov 10, 2019 / Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|Utilizing alternative sources to build a sustainable economy and society - IELTS WRITING TASK 2
2 - @banhdauxanh Hi there. I would like to give you some feedback about your writing. 😁 As I read...
Writing Feedbackbanhdauxanh - Nov 10, 2019 / roswita116 - Nov 13, 2019
|IELTS Task 2 - problems and solutions of getting enough exercise in cities.
3 - @lorimyl Hi there. Good luck on your upcoming IELTS examination! Hopefully, my feedback will give you an idea on...
Writing Feedbacklorimyl - Nov 9, 2019 / Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|The animals should not be kept in the zoos - such isolation is harmful for them
2 - @jorash Hi there. Welcome to the forum! Hopefully, my feedback sheds light on how you can improve your writing....
Writing Feedbackjorash - Nov 8, 2019 / Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|HOW TO LEARN ENGLISH EFFECTIVELY
2 - @ngthuhien Hi there! Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, my feedback will give you insight on how to improve your...
Writing Feedbackngthuhien - Nov 8, 2019 / Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|Popular hobbies and interests as a reflection of trends and fashions
2 - @snowflake817 Hi there. Thanks for coming to the forum! Sorry for the delay. Hopefully, this feedback still somewhat helps...
Writing Feedbacksnowflake817 - Nov 8, 2019 / Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|IELTS essay with topic: salary aspect importance for job seekers
Writing Feedbacktatrandinhduc - Nov 9, 2019 / tatrandinhduc - Nov 10, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2- E-BOOKS V.S PRINTED MEDIA ? WHAT IS YOUR OPINIONS ?
2 - grammatical error: should be written: Despite Although some ... by generation, from my perspective... in the second...
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Nov 7, 2019 / Winter - Nov 10, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: YOUNG PEOPLE ARE IMPOLITE AND DISRESPECTFUL TO THE OLD. CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS?
2 - the living standards are higher "folks" is more used in informal contexts, use "people" instead "media" is an uncountable...
Writing FeedbackLeisa - Nov 9, 2019 / lorimyl - Nov 9, 2019
|IELTS task 2: the lack of basic interpersonal skills among workers - causes and solutions
2 - @nguyenvanhieucf Hi there. Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, my feedback will give you insight on how to improve your...
Writing Feedbacknguyenvanhieucf - Nov 7, 2019 / Maria - Nov 9, 2019
|TOEFL Independent Essay Sample (Small university in countryside vs. big university in city)
2 - @Sunrise011 Hi there. Thanks for coming back to the forum! Hopefully, my feedback will be beneficial for you. ...
Writing FeedbackSunrise011 - Nov 6, 2019 / Maria - Nov 9, 2019
|An experienced that changed my life (Reflective/Narative Essay) Gr. 12
2 - @ka8786 Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I'll provide you with feedback on this writing. Hopefully, this gives you...
Writing Feedbackka8786 - Nov 6, 2019 / Maria - Nov 9, 2019
|Ielts writing essays on "Artificial Intelligence" and its effect on human
3 - @Maria Hi. Your comments surely help me realize my weakness in writing. I've had problems with coherence and cohesion....
Writing Feedbacksnowflake817 - Nov 1, 2019 / snowflake817 - Nov 8, 2019
|IELTS writing task 2: the custom of families having meals together is on the verge of disappearing
2 - @ngochuyen60 Hi, there. I would like to give you some feedback about your writing.😁😁 First of all, about...
Writing Feedbackngochuyen60 - Nov 7, 2019 / roswita116 - Nov 7, 2019
|Sales of goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs. Agree or not
2 - "... money to endorse it on Instagram as her account ..." Since you are making an example about...
Writing Feedbacktina_pisces - Nov 7, 2019 / MinhAnh_98 - Nov 7, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - Procedures of Recruitment Flow Chart
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Nov 3, 2019 / roswita116 - Nov 7, 2019
|Language students - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - TWO PIE CHARTS COMPARISON
3 - @Bear Lac Loi Thank you for your detail suggestion. I really appreciated. 😁😁 As I read through your feedback....
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Nov 4, 2019 / roswita116 - Nov 7, 2019
|Should people or government be responsible for human life?
2 - Here are some grammar mistakes: most of the people fulfill they should definitely... irresponsible of about their health...
Writing Feedbackanh9dpct - Nov 4, 2019 / ntlinhtran - Nov 5, 2019
|IELTS writing task 2: Environment protection responsibility essay
2 - To me, your essay has a good structure. I only suggest some points: "... with less packaging, and recycling...
Writing FeedbackManhtruong - Nov 3, 2019 / Maya Tng - Nov 4, 2019
|ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES FOR BEING A CHILD-FREE COUPLE
2 - After reading your essay, i find your writing style is very well structured and clear. I only have one...
Writing FeedbackHanNguyen0510 - Nov 3, 2019 / Maya Tng - Nov 4, 2019
|Chevening scholarship essay: Studying in the UK_ I have chosen my courses focusing on my career goal
2 - @Iqbal3993 Hi there. Thanks for coming to the forum! Hopefully, my feedback will give you insight on how to...
Writing FeedbackIqbal3993 - Nov 2, 2019 / Maria - Nov 4, 2019
|Some people think that the modern life provides us a great number of choices
2 - @chloeyyy123 Hi, there. I would like to give you some of my personal feedback about your writing. 😁😁 ...
Writing Feedbackchloeyyy123 - Nov 2, 2019 / roswita116 - Nov 4, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Advantages and disadvantages of foreign language learning
Writing FeedbackHaliey - Nov 2, 2019 / HanNguyen0510 - Nov 3, 2019
|Should children be inspired to compete or to cooperate? My point of view.
4 - Hi there, I think your essay is pretty good at grammar and arguments. However, I have some opinion about...
Writing Feedbackbgulcen - Nov 2, 2019 / HanNguyen0510 - Nov 3, 2019
|Ielts writing task 1, visitors' evaluation about Bowen Island
6 - @vuthaihoa74 Hi, there. Hope this finds you well.😁😁 Thank you for your feedback. I think cause every person...
Writing Feedbackvuthaihoa74 - Oct 25, 2019 / roswita116 - Nov 3, 2019
|Overpopulation Causes and Solutions; imbalance of employment opportunity and educational resources
3 - Hi, Maria. Thank you so much for always giving me valuable advice.😁😁 I really appreciated. Next time I...
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Oct 30, 2019 / roswita116 - Nov 3, 2019
|Independent toefl essay - People do what they like to do rather than doing things they should do
2 - @salmanhaleemi Hi there. Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, my feedback will give you an idea on how to improve...
Writing Feedbacksalmanhaleemi - Nov 2, 2019 / Maria - Nov 3, 2019
|Review my essay on working homelessness
2 - @colleengeraghty Hi there. Welcome to the forum! Hopefully, my feedback will be helpful for your writing endeavors. If it...
Writing Feedbackcolleengeraghty - Nov 2, 2019 / Maria - Nov 3, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK2: Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas
Writing FeedbackChrisChen - Oct 28, 2019 / ChrisChen - Nov 1, 2019
|IELTS Writng task 1: why UK adults attend arts events
4 - I will be commenting your first paragraph in detail and provide a brief comment for your second and third...
Writing Feedbackvuthaihoa74 - Oct 31, 2019 / Bear Lac Loi - Nov 1, 2019
|Money for professors should depend on performance of their students
4 - @drive Hello there. Welcome to the forum. I hope that my feedback gives you an idea on how to...
Writing Feedbackdrive - Oct 29, 2019 / Maria - Nov 1, 2019
|People believe that governments should provide free university education
4 - I think you should be more careful with your grammar, especially complex structures as can be fixed below: ...
Writing FeedbackLavence - Oct 30, 2019 / snowflake817 - Nov 1, 2019
|Ielts writing essays on "choices" - are people unable to make decisions due to many choices?
Writing Feedbacksnowflake817 - Oct 30, 2019 / snowflake817 - Nov 1, 2019
|In the chart numbers of waste that were produced by Ireland, Japan, Korea, Poland, Portugal, and US
4 - Try to avoid using the same word again nd again e.g the word 'waste'....i mean try to use synonyms.......
Writing Feedbackwuu_u - Oct 28, 2019 / Mohsin12236 - Oct 31, 2019
|IELTS TASK1: the changes in the number of people who went to and came from the UK for travel
3 - @ChrisChen I hope my comment would be helpful Your introsuction is relatively simple and poor in vocab, my introduction...
Writing FeedbackChrisChen - Oct 28, 2019 / vuthaihoa74 - Oct 31, 2019
|IELTS WRITING about the circus popularity
5 - @Aegris Hi, I would like to give you some grammatical advice.😁😁 1. Curious "about", not"of" 2.with their"children",...
Writing FeedbackAegris - Oct 22, 2019 / roswita116 - Oct 30, 2019
|Luck and accomplishments - what matters?
2 - @Mia Nguyen Hi there! Welcome to the forum. I hope that this feedback somehow helps you in your writing...
Writing FeedbackMia Nguyen - Oct 28, 2019 / Maria - Oct 30, 2019
|Ielts writing task 2: world hunger problem
Writing Feedbackthuy_linh_soo - Oct 29, 2019 / thuy_linh_soo - Oct 30, 2019
|Produces of goods should be responsible for plastic products
Writing Feedbackthaitran07 - Oct 27, 2019 / thaitran07 - Oct 28, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 PEOPLE NOWADAYS TEND TO TAKE THEIR FAMILY TO ANOTHER COUNTRY
5 - @Maria Thank you very much! I have learnt a lot from your recommendations. If there are any grammatical mistakes...
Writing Feedbackminhnguyento - Oct 25, 2019 / minhnguyento - Oct 28, 2019
|IELTS The table depicts the average distance in miles traveled by mode of travel per person per year
2 - 1. mode->modes 2. I think you shuold use the past tense, like the "while the least ... people were...
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Oct 27, 2019 / ChrisChen - Oct 28, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: HOW TO SPEND LEISURE TIME IN THE MOST BENEFICIAL WAY?
2 - Hi, In my opinion, your content is great and well-structured. However, I notice that there are two grammatical mistakes...
Writing FeedbackMaya Tng - Oct 27, 2019 / uyen1092 - Oct 27, 2019
|Changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles
Writing Feedbackuyen1092 - Oct 20, 2019 / Quizzy - Oct 26, 2019
|My favourite Vietnamese dish - broken rice
3 - @Linyu12 I don't know which level/stage/grade you are writing this essay for but I find it too scanty and...
Writing FeedbackLinyu12 - Oct 26, 2019 / Quizzy - Oct 26, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2 Correction about sharing information in the public
4 - @satan123 On the one hand starting a paragraph like this doesn't right. you can do without that phrase. all...
Writing Feedbacksatan123 - Oct 22, 2019 / Quizzy - Oct 26, 2019
|The graph below demonstrates the statistics of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007
3 - 1. since there are only two groups comparing, you should not use the word "all", which means you are...
Writing Feedbackjanenat - Oct 24, 2019 / s410377088 - Oct 26, 2019
|The charts of the domestic energy use in six different activities and the greenhouse gas emission
2 - I think your first two paragraphs are well-organized. But in the third paragraph, you express the statistics in a...
Writing Feedbackyellowhead21 - Oct 24, 2019 / s410377088 - Oct 26, 2019
|Who is responsible for taking care of the environment, governments or the citizens?
2 - Hi Krystal, great essay overall. I just want to comment on some grammar mistakes, that could reduce your IELTS...
Writing FeedbackKrystal318 - Oct 24, 2019 / ayunovianti - Oct 26, 2019
|Airplanes - the revolution in transportation
4 - I think in terms of this independent essay, you're topic sentences are very clear in explaining how transportation has...
Writing FeedbackJana11 - Oct 24, 2019 / rachelmaddiee - Oct 25, 2019
|Write a short paragraph introducing your country's traditional food.
2 - I think you do a good job of introducing your country's traditional food in the paragraph. When comparing your...
Writing FeedbackThu Lee - Oct 24, 2019 / rachelmaddiee - Oct 25, 2019
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