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|Nature vs industry - it is a must for our country to get the most out of our free space
2 - - Your overview is somewhat incomplete. You could have presented a summary of the reasons why you believe...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 29, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 29, 2014
|Numerous people have a tendency to play at least 1 hour a day - Technologies
4 - Shon, I feel that your argument in this case is flaewed because you tried to relate the use of...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 28, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 29, 2014
|Argument Essay; part of a letter to the editor of a scientific journal
2 - - Arun, you need to make specific mention that first born humans and monkeys exhibit the same tendencies....
Writing Feedbackarunpoppat - Oct 29, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 29, 2014
|IELTS - I would watch the events live once or twice every month and watch the rest of them on TV
2 - In conclusion, I believe both arguments can hold itstheir ground, and personally, I would go to site to ...
Writing Feedbackianisafk - Oct 29, 2014 / Dapocalypse7 - Oct 29, 2014
|IELTS: Wars essay - natural resources might be considered as a primary reason for wars
Writing Feedbackthongdat1608 - Oct 29, 2014 / thongdat1608 - Oct 29, 2014
|GRE issue: As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible?
Writing Feedbackbuheborjgin - Oct 2, 2014 / arunpoppat - Oct 29, 2014
|Teachers should teach academic or social subjects
2 - The Selection of topics for education is often(has been) very controversial. While I agree that teachers can teach their...
Writing Feedbackielts7 - Oct 29, 2014 / thongdat1608 - Oct 29, 2014
|Illiteracy cause and effect essay
Writing Feedbackthongdat1608 - Oct 29, 2014 / arunpoppat - Oct 29, 2014
|A society without school and education system is like a body without brain
7 - Hi Vns9x Firstly, Thank you for your time, I think my essay is not rich enough for using advanced...
Writing Feedbacksina_ns - Oct 28, 2014 / sina_ns - Oct 29, 2014
|IELTS - under suitable administration, tourism enhances local economic development
6 - While it seems that both of the ideas make sense, my view is that, by being managed properly, booming...
Writing FeedbackLen_hart - Oct 26, 2014 / zzwestmanzz - Oct 28, 2014
|Nicaragua has experienced a sharp increase in violence and ruthless crimes against woman
Writing Feedbackasdfkjsouplove2 - Oct 26, 2014 / asdfkjsouplove2 - Oct 28, 2014
|FARMING: Agriculture plays a leading role in our country, Cambodia has abundance of free territories
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 28, 2014 / Charphil - Oct 28, 2014
|Parents help their children to make decision
5 - There is no doubt that parents are the people who most care about their children in the world. Everything...
Writing FeedbackChppoin - Oct 25, 2014 / Chppoin - Oct 28, 2014
|"My friend, Angel" An essay about how I thought of her from day one until now
Writing FeedbackCath21 - Oct 24, 2014 / Cath21 - Oct 27, 2014
|I love science because I'm curious. Engineering Essay Template.
8 - You can still talk about how your love for engineering developed. You just need to slide it down to...
Writing FeedbackAtom007 - Oct 23, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 27, 2014
|The value of plans. Toefl exam.
6 - you should also reorganize the overall structure of the article(as commentator said above), especially an outline at the start...
Writing FeedbackAdamtong - Oct 3, 2014 / buheborjgin - Oct 27, 2014
|People should find what their talent is, to support what they do, to reach their goal in live
Writing FeedbackYULIS - Oct 26, 2014 / fp2014 - Oct 26, 2014
|Sentiments about the upcoming university!
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 26, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 26, 2014
|some paraphrase for some articles about the internet and newspaper
NEW - source 1 Ross Dawson, who wrote the 'Living Networks' book which predicted the social networking revolution, thinks that newspapers...
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|The dramatically fluctuations are composite by Canada, Italy, Japan and France - IELTS table chart
7 - Hello Wiratmaja_Dicky, I suggest you to read many sample answer as much as you can to improve your writing...
Writing FeedbackWiratmaja_Dicky - Oct 20, 2014 / tiaDS - Oct 26, 2014
|IELTS Essay: The government should allocate more funds to public services instead of arts
3 - Many thanks for your worthy feedback. It is really appreciated. I am also concern about grammar and punctuation or...
Writing FeedbackRemansou - Oct 25, 2014 / Remansou - Oct 26, 2014
|These days, most of universities have many subjects for male or female only
3 - 1. Avoid shopping listing. In formal writing, commonly, it attaches three words or phrases. eg. engineering, nursing and...
Writing FeedbackYULIS - Sep 24, 2014 / SHanafi - Oct 26, 2014
|In personal live, we have some responsibilities towards other people (TOEFL)
5 - Moreover, sometimes by doing things helps the people learn about livelife . In this essay, the reasons for why...
Writing Feedbackgbekil - Oct 22, 2014 / Remansou - Oct 25, 2014
|TOEFL: working alone appears to be better. It helps us to be more responsible.
9 - Revised essay: Our work describes the way we are. People practice lots of ways of working to get the...
Writing Feedbacklephuc - Oct 11, 2014 / lephuc - Oct 25, 2014
|IELTS: people are now more conscious to gain more educational qualification
3 - Hi Katy, Thanks a lot. Actually it's from Cambridge-01, test-04. They never used to define precisely if that's an...
Writing Feedbackimon - Oct 25, 2014 / imon - Oct 25, 2014
|IELTS WT1 Test 1 CAM 7 - National consumer expenditure 2002
NEW - Please mark my description below. I really need your help because of the next week IELTS exam. Thank you...
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|TOEFL: It is better to wait in patience than take action.
13 - Zhang, you understood what I meant precisely. In the TOEFL, you are under a time constraint of 30 minutes....
Writing FeedbackDiesel - Oct 4, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 25, 2014
|Living in dormitory can immensely enhance your independency skills
2 - I know this is one of the approved forms when dealing with an introductory statement. However, you need...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 25, 2014 / eddies - Oct 25, 2014
|IELTS: Modern forms of communication increases the frequency and quality of interpersonal links
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Oct 22, 2014 / imon - Oct 25, 2014
|Others advices and personal experience should co-exist to assist person reach success
Writing Feedbackshabemahtab - Oct 24, 2014 / Vns9x - Oct 25, 2014
|People can easily achieve success unless they have two prominent aspects: talent and hard effort
3 - I think the term "prison sentence" is not usable here. Overall, your reasoning was good. But the...
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Oct 23, 2014 / imon - Oct 25, 2014
|IELTS: Summarizing a Bar Graph (Population of Asian Elephants)
2 - The graph illustrates the estimated maximum population of Asian elephants in nine countries in both 1997 and 2004 ...
Writing FeedbackJakurino - Oct 24, 2014 / eddies - Oct 25, 2014
|IELTS - the level of education among women in the land experienced an upgrade
2 - The pie charts illustrate how educated women in someland attain their high levels of education between 1945 and...
Writing Feedbackmaritsanur - Oct 22, 2014 / eddies - Oct 24, 2014
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 24, 2014 / RawrKiwiz - Oct 24, 2014
|futuristic city vs marvelous artifacts - historical building IELTS essay
4 - Well, this writing is good. However, this lacks specific examples for both para 3 and 4. As you can...
Writing Feedbackbteng011284 - Oct 20, 2014 / eddies - Oct 24, 2014
|IELTS - nowadays human activities are influenced by computer use; computers are more of a hindrance?
2 - This essay is good. However, this contains grammar issues affecting the flow of the sentences. A closer look at...
Writing FeedbackMann_ms - Oct 23, 2014 / eddies - Oct 24, 2014
|'At least try once' - An essay about mundane topics
Writing Feedbackcalvinluo1997 - Oct 4, 2014 / calvinluo1997 - Oct 23, 2014
|Compare and contrast- 2 war artist images. How do they reflect and convey the impact of WAR?
2 - In the prompt, I see 4 things the paper has to include. Compare, contrast, how do they reflect...
Writing FeedbackJakeCarter - Oct 21, 2014 / EF_Kevin - Oct 23, 2014
|Our country had numerous wars and conflicts in the past. I have learned a lot from war's movies.
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 23, 2014 / eugene_611925 - Oct 23, 2014
|It is believed by many that women should decide whether to have an offspring or not
Writing Feedbackimon - Oct 22, 2014 / imon - Oct 23, 2014
|Celebrities vs real problems
2 - Hello :) allow me to correct your writing (introduction) I think it still happening until now,...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 23, 2014 / maritsanur - Oct 23, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1: American Spending Patterns between 1966 and 1996
Writing Feedbackmaritsanur - Oct 23, 2014 / Vns9x - Oct 23, 2014
|Ielts that competitive sports, both team and individual
4 - Advantages : you and your trainer can only focus on your own, you can fastly fix your lackness in...
Writing Feedbackamon2006 - Jan 1, 2012 / uci31 - Oct 22, 2014
|Title: there are many children in a family in the past. Which advantages or disadvantages outweigh.
3 - Hello... Allow me to rewrite; It seems a family with more children gain more benefits; however, I...
Writing Feedbackanthonynguyen - Oct 22, 2014 / Anfalia - Oct 22, 2014
|In the professional work life there is just one factor that motivates people - money
Writing Feedbackgbekil - Oct 21, 2014 / Anfalia - Oct 22, 2014
|Study without teacher? You should choose the right way which suits your learning.
Writing FeedbackKristy Nguyen - Oct 22, 2014 / Anfalia - Oct 22, 2014
|Mankind nowadays face their natural enemy, nature. IELTS Writing Task 2
Writing FeedbackWiratmaja_Dicky - Oct 22, 2014 / Wiratmaja_Dicky - Oct 22, 2014
|IELTS task 1: Line graphs of car theft in 4 different countries
2 - Hello) Woah, your writing is great! You have followed proper structure! Just one question: "A four-country...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Sep 23, 2014 / Abdurasul - Oct 22, 2014
|Writing Task 1- process of chocolate-making and the percentage of allocation the cost
Writing FeedbackMann_ms - Oct 22, 2014 / Anfalia - Oct 22, 2014
|People smart choice should be supported - they have right to refuse a job proposal - IELTS
2 - In IELTS, I suggest that you'd better write "some people", instead of some, which seems incomplete thought. ...
Writing Feedbackboo2601 - Oct 22, 2014 / eddies - Oct 22, 2014
|Pet ownership can give merits and demerits for the animal who are involved and for the community
2 - You have good ideas to answer better. But you need to work on grammar and sentence structure. For example.......
Writing FeedbackMann_ms - Oct 21, 2014 / shavaktm - Oct 22, 2014
|Essay: Extra private lessons outside school hours helps do better at school. Disagree or agree?
Writing FeedbackVera Canderine - Oct 22, 2014 / Wiratmaja_Dicky - Oct 22, 2014
|IELTS national teams/individual financially supported by the government/non-government organisations
4 - This essay contains over 500 words. Also, make sure that you write it in 40 minutes. It is hard...
Writing Feedbackmaritsanur - Oct 20, 2014 / eddies - Oct 22, 2014
|Robots will play a crucial role in 21 first century
2 - -replace "a lot of or lots of" by abundance of, many, a huge number , plenty of, the majority...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 21, 2014 / anthonynguyen - Oct 22, 2014
|Qualification is still the fundamental determinant of an employee's competency of their jobs.(ielts)
2 - With the increased educational level of workforce, there are a/the ( depend on ur view) growing number of employers...
Writing Feedbackwilliam731 - Oct 22, 2014 / anthonynguyen - Oct 22, 2014
|[IELTS] International aid should be prioritised as foreigners are facing more serious problems
4 - I believe much should be use for uncountable things. if you use s after problem, it's better to...
Writing Feedbackzjxhz - Oct 21, 2014 / maritsanur - Oct 22, 2014
|IELTS - Exporting is beneficial to people's well-being as they can afford high quality products
8 - I think after despite must be noun directly: despite the transportation cost,... if you want to use prep...
Writing Feedbackzjxhz - Oct 18, 2014 / maritsanur - Oct 22, 2014
|Biometric - cost, reliability and public acceptance of fingerprint and iris
2 - ...to protect their database and information from theft or loss, stealing or losing, ... and this is done by...
Writing Feedbackhaval - Oct 16, 2014 / EF_Kevin - Oct 21, 2014
|'Airplanes became the most outstanding vehicle' - Automobiles or Bicycles or Airplanes?
3 - if you will be travelling by ships, then it would require from tremendous amount of time If you...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 20, 2014 / gbekil - Oct 21, 2014
|People should choose their mindset to have a small family to live happier with their wife/husband
Writing FeedbackYULIS - Oct 21, 2014 / Mann_ms - Oct 21, 2014
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