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|'Game is imagination bowed three dimension'; important for adults and children
Writing Feedbackridwan - Apr 4, 2014 / eddies - Apr 7, 2014
|'special talents' parent and family background vs teachers influence on children
8 - As professional teachers, it is obvious thatEvidently, they, professional teachers, have adequate teaching techniques which can help young people...
Writing Feedbackjack zhao - Apr 1, 2014 / eddies - Apr 7, 2014
|Increasing weight, decreasing health; 'can't find absolutely healthy person'
4 - Today it seems to be impossible to meet an absolutely healthy person who is absolutely healthy , (1)( stop...
Writing FeedbackShokhusrav - Apr 6, 2014 / eddies - Apr 6, 2014
|TOEFL iBT - Saving/Spending money
Writing FeedbackLeonP - Apr 2, 2014 / eddies - Apr 6, 2014
|impressive buildings are important for a city or hospitals and schools
5 - After perusing the prompt, I conclude that the essay should be written to respond to the ideas: Money should...
Writing FeedbackNhasir Rahmatia - Apr 1, 2014 / eddies - Apr 6, 2014
|Telecomm. effects; 'Edison would be astonished if he saw the use of telephone'
3 - Where is your prompt? Anyway, I will just concentrate on syntactical principles (grammar, mechanics, sentence structure). What has...
Writing FeedbackBINGBINGLIANG - Apr 3, 2014 / niesaysi - Apr 6, 2014
|Directors of large companies receive high salary; 'Employees are working hard'
9 - Well , I wrote like this because I am supporting normal workers rather than directors, can I write like...
Writing Feedbackammus1 - Apr 4, 2014 / ammus1 - Apr 6, 2014
|'we gather in living room and talk about daily activities' - most important room
Writing Feedbacksayes - Mar 31, 2014 / dumi - Apr 6, 2014
|My Life Goals; I came to realize my passion in the Entertainment Industry and in Computing
4 - I have edited few words: there are lots of unsolved problem which needs to be giving a solution In...
Writing Feedbackdejiman - Mar 27, 2014 / eddies - Apr 6, 2014
|Toefl evalution - God is too large to fit in one religion
5 - Firstly, nobody have ever seen god except their imaginations, faith or beliefs , probably that is the reason god...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 27, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 6, 2014
|'People need food, fashion, and health' - advertisements may improve our lives
Writing Feedbackridwan - Mar 30, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 6, 2014
|IELTS, TASK; 'In Indonesia, child workers are still the one of the big issues'
3 - Hey Friend, please have this note: When you deal with IELTS, the first thing the assessor sees is your...
Writing Feedbackkikiliyik - Apr 5, 2014 / eddies - Apr 6, 2014
|IELTS: 'satisfaction'; People are never satisfied with what they have
8 - On the one side, I think that some persons want to reach something that they want. They will not...
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - Apr 3, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 6, 2014
|Ielts task 2: Parents vs teachers: development of a child.
4 - Your introduction does not contain what you think about the issue. It's important to have that in your intro....
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Apr 5, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 6, 2014
|IELTS; schools as oppose to parents; different forms of violence
6 - Well, if you struggle so much for finding a most appropriate hook, don't trouble yourself. What you can...
Writing Feedbackcodeblue - Apr 3, 2014 / dumi - Apr 5, 2014
|ielts writing task - Causes of obesity and worsening people's health and fitness
5 - My best advice for you is that do not worry about how well your writing would impress the reader....
Writing Feedbackkikiliyik - Apr 4, 2014 / dumi - Apr 5, 2014
|IELTS task 1: Two possible sites for the supermarket
4 - Hey, sure :D This is excellent :) You have followed the most appropriate structure, good clear sentences, good...
Writing Feedbackpuman - Apr 3, 2014 / dumi - Apr 5, 2014
|IELTS: solution for arresting traffic & pollution?; 'proper mass transportation'
Writing Feedbackkikiliyik - Apr 3, 2014 / dumi - Apr 5, 2014
|parents are the best teachers. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
7 - 1. When you write your essay, the first thing the reader sees is your layout, which shows whole of...
Writing Feedbackprii - Mar 11, 2014 / eddies - Apr 5, 2014
|Parents are the best teachers? YES! 'mother always give you motivation, and love'
Writing Feedbackridwan - Mar 26, 2014 / juliajonk5 - Apr 4, 2014
|Ielts: Causes of worldwide land degradation; 'over-grazing'
3 - As a salient example, I can give Europe. Because this continent's lands are do not begin a sentence with...
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Apr 3, 2014 / codeblue - Apr 3, 2014
|TOEFL: 'my rest time' - Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life
7 - I think the structure suggested by Dumi can help you a lot, Asia97. And below is not a complete...
Writing FeedbackAsia97 - Mar 27, 2014 / Rolla Ngo - Apr 3, 2014
|Your teamwork experience that you have learned the most from (300ws)
3 - Thank you Asia97 :) What about the body and the conclusion? Please give me a piece of advise if...
Writing FeedbackRolla Ngo - Apr 2, 2014 / Rolla Ngo - Apr 3, 2014
|Ielts : academic writing ; Learning A New Language Fast and Properly
2 - You cannot use "I, you, we" in IELTS, and must change to objective words. eg. Some say..., most people...
Writing Feedbackxlife - Apr 3, 2014 / puman - Apr 3, 2014
|The 21st century; world always changes - technology, transportation, and humankind
6 - Well, if you have a question that you don't like at all, then you can write with a 5-paragraph...
Writing Feedbackkukuh - Mar 27, 2014 / eddies - Apr 3, 2014
|'heat-debated topic'; Everyone has the right to get university education?
5 - I have seen this phrase from different corners of the world. It is too common for words. You'd...
Writing Feedbackclairpure - Apr 2, 2014 / eddies - Apr 3, 2014
|Classmates can have positive or negative impact on a child's behaviour at school
Writing FeedbackNickar - Feb 27, 2014 / eddies - Apr 3, 2014
|not to separate influence of parents & school on child; useful member of society
Writing FeedbackBINGBINGLIANG - Apr 1, 2014 / BINGBINGLIANG - Apr 3, 2014
|Museum is a place that retain of history object; Visiting museums during travel.
3 - It is always good to mention the purpose of writing your essay in the title itself. For e.g. IELTS,...
Writing FeedbackBOMAT_IRA - Apr 2, 2014 / dumi - Apr 3, 2014
|Travel within a group with guide? 'we do not enjoy the traveling, can't go everywhere'
8 - Problems with grammatical mechanics for this sentence. One of them is called comma splice, occuring when you use...
Writing Feedbackernhy - Mar 29, 2014 / eddies - Apr 2, 2014
|Grievance is unsatisfaction about quality; complaint by writing more effective
Writing Feedbackridwan - Apr 2, 2014 / BOMAT_IRA - Apr 2, 2014
|'culture of conserve'; company should give money to support the arts
Writing Feedbackridwan - Apr 1, 2014 / Eva Novita Sari - Apr 2, 2014
|Many teachers assign homework to students every day; 'not important in Physics'
3 - Some people think homework can help students toexercise comprehension toward lessons.comprehend and memorize what they learn in the classroom....
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - Apr 1, 2014 / dumi - Apr 2, 2014
|IELTS: phone calls in UK; 35 billions minutes in 2002
Writing FeedbackMowonight - Apr 2, 2014 / Mowonight - Apr 2, 2014
|policies to deter negative effects; Urbanization is an important ongoing process
Writing Feedbackmonshri1979 - Mar 21, 2014 / monshri1979 - Apr 2, 2014
|IELTS: Some people enjoy change, new experiences. Changing our habits is making us better
Writing FeedbackBOMAT_IRA - Mar 28, 2014 / ridwan - Apr 2, 2014
|'Today 's children are tomorrow's citizen' - good members of SOCIETY
Writing Feedbackammus1 - Apr 1, 2014 / ammus1 - Apr 1, 2014
|Internet and school teachers. 'Teachers are much more essential than computers'
2 - I can't even provide you the examples, dear :D Well, I think the best examples come from your...
Writing Feedbackningo - Mar 29, 2014 / eddies - Apr 1, 2014
|IELTS: Young people commiting serious crimes should be punished as adults
9 - Yes, she is right. When you deal with IELTS, the first thing the assessor sees is your layout,...
Writing Feedbackningo - Mar 31, 2014 / eddies - Apr 1, 2014
|hard work vs luck - become the person what you are trying to be, not by the luck
5 - When introducing the topic and expressing your opinion, you do this in the introduction . (redo this in the...
Writing Feedbacknhando - Mar 28, 2014 / eddies - Apr 1, 2014
|WHAT SHOULD YOU CONSIDER TO SET A NEW BUSINESS ?
Writing FeedbackNgochieu - Mar 31, 2014 / Ngochieu - Apr 1, 2014
|Earning of money differs from person to person; 'money doesn't give success'
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful....
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|IELTS: Some people like to do only what they already do well.
10 - [quote=]Additionally, I people need changes make our lives more beautiful and exiting. [/quote] I think if you want...
Writing FeedbackBOMAT_IRA - Mar 28, 2014 / Eva Novita Sari - Apr 1, 2014
|Toefl essay. Computer vs book - chose to buy computers
3 - It is nicer when you conclude the intro with a statement expressing your opinion very clearly. 5...
Writing Feedbackhakuyo1112 - Mar 27, 2014 / eddies - Apr 1, 2014
|IELTS-GT: Women in Navy or Air Forces - should not be allowed; instead: career, children
Writing FeedbackNaveed786 - Mar 27, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 1, 2014
|IELTS: Children to learn about money via parents - educate about the significance of money
10 - Amazing score :-) let me try your idea in my next writing. Thanks for sharing your experience....
Writing FeedbackArun0506 - Mar 27, 2014 / Arun0506 - Apr 1, 2014
|Televised talent shows is not only to entertain
9 - Honestly I find my self too confused in developing my idea to support my view. As the question stated...
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - Mar 22, 2014 / Misnariah Idrus - Apr 1, 2014
|IELTS; electricity volume for two major seasons in UK
2 - First, a few admin requests :) 1. Have a more meaningful title for your essay. This one has been...
Writing Feedbackgggooniel - Apr 1, 2014 / dumi - Apr 1, 2014
|Advantages outweigh the disadvantages to starting foreign language early
3 - and, my conclusion style will be like: In conclusion, despite that fact ... may be beneficial for...., ...are...
Writing Feedbackcrystal941 - Apr 1, 2014 / duo008 - Apr 1, 2014
|IELTS: Prediction of world population growth - 4000 millions of people in 2040.
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 28, 2014 / Mowonight - Apr 1, 2014
|IELTS: unemployment rate comparaison between US and Japan mar.93-mar.99
Writing FeedbackMowonight - Mar 31, 2014 / crystal941 - Apr 1, 2014
|Dormitory rooms shared by two students. Choice of room should be allowed.
6 - You need to pay attention to grammar because you tend to make some minor grammar errors; University is...
Writing FeedbackPriya1 - Mar 30, 2014 / dumi - Apr 1, 2014
|Toefl - teacher evaluation; students can learn more
3 - I totally agree with Pahan. Alignment between your writing and the prompt is a mandatory requirement for this...
Writing Feedbacksayes - Mar 31, 2014 / dumi - Apr 1, 2014
|Technology become Culture - big effect to our lives
7 - ridwan, you should mention what type of your writing, whether it is ielts or toefl essay, so that the...
Writing Feedbackridwan - Mar 26, 2014 / fikri - Apr 1, 2014
|Teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Good Idea? Knowledge vs Money.
8 - Hi Mrs.Ira, I think if you want to use the affirmative statements connected with and, after and you...
Writing Feedbackernhy - Mar 27, 2014 / Eva Novita Sari - Apr 1, 2014
|IELTS: languages die out annually. The greatest victims: history and culture
Writing Feedbackpuman - Mar 31, 2014 / puman - Mar 31, 2014
|Toefl - 'members can learn more' - live a life without any burdens
NEW - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better to be a member of a group than...
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|If I am to travel 40 miles distance, I would choose the train
Writing Feedbackoktavianna - Mar 21, 2014 / tiaDS - Mar 31, 2014
|conventional medicine, is it safe or not?
Writing Feedbackcodeblue - Mar 31, 2014 / dumi - Mar 31, 2014
|'TV disease' - How do movies or television influence people's behavior?
3 - 1.instead of addition to that,it will be better if you write in addition to that 2.from above mentioned channel...
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