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|The possibility of choosing the physical characteristics of a child!
Writing Feedbackkdr98 - Apr 12, 2014 / kikiliyik - Apr 13, 2014
|Toefl - enforce limit the use of automobile for the betterment of our earth
4 - The second reason is that increasedinincrease in number of automobile has produced inconveniencyinconvenience in our life. We cannot...
Writing Feedbacksayes - Apr 1, 2014 / dumi - Apr 13, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1; The map about Garlsdon City.
4 - You need to improve on your structure and I hope you follow dumi's approach. This should come...
Writing Feedbackernhy - Apr 12, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 13, 2014
|IELTS; Jewelry or concert tickets; What is more important for you?
6 - Well, your topic is not exactly argumentative type, but you can have it fitting into the above structure. For...
Writing FeedbackPurwati Ayu - Apr 6, 2014 / dumi - Apr 12, 2014
|Soul of American: Integrity and Ethics Essay.
Writing Feedbackkserc - Apr 12, 2014 / englishlover - Apr 12, 2014
|'relieve tension' - Going to a new school is exciting / frustratating
4 - What is the purpose of writing this essay? Is this for TOEFL or IELTS? It is always better the...
Writing FeedbackSandP - Apr 2, 2014 / dumi - Apr 12, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Changes in one city spending patterns in 1966.
Writing FeedbackBOMAT_IRA - Apr 11, 2014 / upinipin - Apr 12, 2014
|IETS Task 1 : Propotion of Canadian graduates by gender
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Apr 12, 2014 / SHanafi - Apr 12, 2014
|IELTS: Emigration intentions, Bulgarian aged 15-60, 2001 & 2006
9 - A few words for the layout of the paragraph: Developing the classical five paragraph essay or more will send...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 28, 2014 / eddies - Apr 12, 2014
|Choice between academic qualifications vs personal experience and values, when hiring
4 - I see you try to vary your sentences by using synonyms, but you should remember not all synonyms have...
Writing Feedbackmshojaei - Mar 25, 2014 / eddies - Apr 12, 2014
|IELTSTask1: Music choice VS Pop parade music
7 - Hi Pahan, I think if the statements which are connected with but , you should use coma before...
Writing Feedbackernhy - Apr 11, 2014 / Eva Novita Sari - Apr 12, 2014
|Such a surprised day! Yesterday's weather was hard. It was changeable.
3 - Thank you so much. Actually, this is a record about my daily life. Thanks for correcting my mistakes turn...
Writing FeedbackStwhWindresides - Apr 11, 2014 / StwhWindresides - Apr 12, 2014
|'Gender and jobs relate to gender' - Equal numbers of male and female students
Writing FeedbackTruong Nguyen - Apr 6, 2014 / eddies - Apr 12, 2014
|IELTS: How many people listened to different types of music in Tokyo last month
3 - As can be seen from the table, a massivea large majority of 79% of males use Mp3-players to listenfor...
Writing Feedbackcrystal941 - Mar 28, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 12, 2014
|The most beneficial discovery in last 100 years - internet invention; many impacts
7 - Yes,as dumi says it is the contents and presentation matter more than the word count (however, you should...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 24, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 12, 2014
|'dissatisfaction with the house' ; IELTS TASK 1
14 - Were I you, I would start constructing the bodies of the paragraph, like this: Para 2: Thank him for...
Writing Feedbackgoyote - Mar 31, 2014 / eddies - Apr 11, 2014
|IELTS Task 1. Estimated world illiteracy
Writing Feedbackbakhadeer - Apr 10, 2014 / bakhadeer - Apr 11, 2014
|IELTS: Question about the influence of the media coverage of celebrities
8 - Well, the structures that I and Pahan have already suggested to you in our previous comments are the best...
Writing FeedbackShokhusrav - Apr 10, 2014 / dumi - Apr 11, 2014
|IELTS; Parents are the best teachers? Use specific reasons and examples
Writing Feedbackxingshigang - Apr 1, 2014 / xingshigang - Apr 11, 2014
|IELTS: born with certain talents or not?; professional football player
3 - .... well, this statement has an issue... :( .... "people can acquire any fields"? That part does not...
Writing FeedbackJasS - Apr 10, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 10, 2014
|IELTS: Men and women are having children late. 'it can be more beneficial'
Writing Feedbackgggooniel - Apr 4, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 10, 2014
|Many teachers assign homework to students every day. 'Valuable exercise'
Writing FeedbackBOMAT_IRA - Apr 5, 2014 / Eva Novita Sari - Apr 10, 2014
|IELTS; Bill Gates, Mark Zuckerberg - succesful people who earned a lot of money
5 - A tip dealing with EF: Every time you want to submit writing, you should always include the full prompt...
Writing Feedbackundral - Apr 3, 2014 / eddies - Apr 10, 2014
|The contribution of three different sectors to the UK economy; 'agriculture 50%'
Writing Feedbackbakhadeer - Apr 9, 2014 / thiagocardoso - Apr 10, 2014
|IELTS "a subject that you haven't opportunity to study" study religion more deep
6 - You should utilize the grammar and spell check features of Microsoft Word to correct as many spelling and grammar...
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - Apr 6, 2014 / eddies - Apr 10, 2014
|IELTS: International Graduations of Canadian Colleges; New Brunswick highest %
4 - I think "university" and "college" are not interchangeable. Ontario had the lowest percentage of international graduates...
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - Apr 10, 2014 / MisterWandering - Apr 10, 2014
|Be positive when unemployed; People attending schools for many different reasons
3 - 1. Utilize the grammar and spell check features of Microsoft Word to correct as many spelling and grammar problems...
Writing Feedbackmikoo4444 - Apr 8, 2014 / eddies - Apr 10, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Underground railway systems; 'London has been the oldest'
Writing FeedbackBOMAT_IRA - Apr 9, 2014 / oneclbb - Apr 10, 2014
|Keep Senior Citizens Away From Cars
3 - This tradition was passed down from generation to generation in my family. However, (little did I know that) behind...
Writing FeedbackMr_Jaggers - Mar 19, 2014 / dumi - Apr 10, 2014
|Cultural differences should be welcomed by everyone
6 - Thank you :D...
Writing FeedbackShokhusrav - Apr 9, 2014 / Shokhusrav - Apr 10, 2014
|"I am glad that my mother didn't give up"; most intelligent and beautiful lady in our town
3 - Today, as I write this, I recall the memories that were never swept out of my mind. (stop here)whileI...
Writing FeedbackaliMurtaza - Mar 26, 2014 / dumi - Apr 10, 2014
|IELTS: Solving the issues of growing traffic and pollution - Increase petrol price?
6 - Hi, i am preparing IELTS as well, my teacher said that answer the question is very important for IELTS...
Writing Feedbackmariasultana - Mar 7, 2014 / oneclbb - Apr 10, 2014
|IELTS essay - why adults decide to study; shared cost of each course
6 - Hope this can cover the data presented in the bar chart: A subject's preference breaks a record as the...
Writing Feedbackshikamaru - Mar 31, 2014 / eddies - Apr 10, 2014
|IELTS: Technology impact on people; Earth has become like a small village
10 - Thank you Pahan, dumi and eddies. I really appreciate your helps. I will be grateful to see your comments...
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Apr 9, 2014 / Abdurasul - Apr 10, 2014
|Number of visits to two new music sites on the web - 180,000 / 80,000
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - Apr 10, 2014 / eddies - Apr 10, 2014
|IELTSTASK1:illiteracy rates by region and by gender; 2%, 12% and 20% rate
Writing Feedbackernhy - Apr 10, 2014 / eddies - Apr 10, 2014
|IELTS: Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access
8 - Sorry, dear :( I am not the one who is capable of answering your question. To make everything clear,...
Writing Feedbacktechgeek - Apr 8, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|IELTS: The graph below shows how much money was spent on different forms of fun?
4 - In Europe, in 1995, the bar chart started from 97.000 million dollars were spent on entertainment in 1995.It...
Writing Feedbacktechgeek - Apr 8, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 9, 2014
|IELTS - governments or individuals should take care of environment? 'equal role'
Writing Feedbackduo008 - Apr 3, 2014 / duo008 - Apr 9, 2014
|TOEFL - Rush vs. Slower Pace
5 - If you do not hurry yourselfrush for things, then you can take more time for your family and friends....
Writing FeedbackLeonP - Apr 8, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 9, 2014
|ielts; Teaching foreign languages broaden childrens horizons
7 - axa thanks for feedback) i will try to be active and i hope you regularly give me your suggestions)...
Writing Feedbackbakhadeer - Apr 8, 2014 / bakhadeer - Apr 9, 2014
|TOEFL: Listening to the advice of family and friends or via personal experience?
Writing Feedbacksntinn - Apr 8, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|Money is a major source of satisfaction while searching for a job
5 - The first thing the reader sees is your layout, which shows whole of your essay. If the layout is...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Apr 9, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|IELTS: Reading news in the internet or newspapers ?
7 - This item is highly common. Use these less common lexical items: The aforementioned evidence examines that ... Given...
Writing Feedbackchaaaany - Apr 7, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|I agree with the selective roommate system; Dormitory rooms shared by 2 students
4 - Well, the first thing the reader sees is your layout, which shows whole of your essay. If the layout...
Writing Feedbackpedramcontrol - Mar 31, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|Travels broaden the mind - Advantage and disadvantage of travelling
Writing Feedbackciasteczkoik - Mar 18, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|IELTS:The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall.
8 - This item is highly common. Use these less common lexical items: The aforementioned evidence examines that ... Given...
Writing Feedbackuzboy - Apr 6, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|Never miss a chance to attend a live performance, its way better than TV at home
4 - You'd better rewrite this expression. What I see is that many students think the memorization of the phrase...
Writing Feedbackhere2study - Apr 8, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|Work or travel between high school & university; beneficial or unfavorable year
Writing FeedbackShokhusrav - Apr 6, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|Large shopping center in your neighborhood; 'it can increase province income'
7 - Well, you conclude this intro with a question to the reader. However, your prompt expects you to answer...
Writing Feedbackernhy - Apr 2, 2014 / dumi - Apr 9, 2014
|IELTS - Is social skill as important as good qualification? give your reasons.
21 - Ok, thanks Pahan!...
Writing Feedbackduo008 - Mar 31, 2014 / duo008 - Apr 9, 2014
|Single career is an old fashion - 'being an expert in one specified sphere'
Writing FeedbackShokhusrav - Apr 7, 2014 / Shokhusrav - Apr 9, 2014
|TOEFL - Human needs vs. saving land for endangered animals
Writing FeedbackLeonP - Apr 8, 2014 / LeonP - Apr 9, 2014
|Co-Educaitonal Schooling Systems; integrating concepts of the future; conclusion
2 - that ( END YOUR SENTENCE HERE) co-educational institutes do not compromise the academic achievement of students, and that co-educational...
Writing Feedbackclassified9988 - Apr 6, 2014 / sandipsinh - Apr 9, 2014
|IELTS: leisure time - joblessness people take the highest place in the race
5 - Yes, Dumi is right. It is hard to share thoughtful feedback for your IELTS visual writing if the...
Writing Feedbackkikiliyik - Apr 7, 2014 / eddies - Apr 8, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 : Student joining education by gender.
4 - I think you wrote writing task 1 perfectly. There are some mistakes such as felt , it should be...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Apr 7, 2014 / techgeek - Apr 8, 2014
|IELTS: E-mail has had a huge impact on professional and social communication, ..
4 - Nowadays, most people use e-mail for communicating and sharing data with individualsothers who live in a long distance. It...
Writing Feedbacktechgeek - Apr 7, 2014 / dumi - Apr 8, 2014
|ielts essay: Physical education plays an important role in pupil's life
4 - Yes, you should follow Pahan's suggested structure. Read those examples to get a good knack about it. For this...
Writing Feedbacksunny0438 - Apr 7, 2014 / dumi - Apr 8, 2014
|IELTS: 'car industry is developing extremely fast' ; traffic problems
7 - which every family pays / which all families pay Today, income taxes, which every family pays are...
Writing Feedbacktechgeek - Apr 7, 2014 / dumi - Apr 8, 2014
|Budget control; it is better to enjoy your money than you save your money?
5 - I actually wanted to ask you this question in my earlier comment, but somehow I have missed it out...
Writing Feedbackernhy - Apr 2, 2014 / dumi - Apr 8, 2014
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