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|IELTS-TASK1-Describing changes taking place at an island
4 - ==> should not use and 2 times. no building except a few trees distributed in the eastern and...
Writing Feedbackyucky - Aug 25, 2013 / seabird88 - Aug 27, 2013
|IELTS; Population control is one of the greatest concerns in this current environment
Writing Feedbackshreyansh - Aug 26, 2013 / shreyansh - Aug 27, 2013
|Ielts 2: How far do you agree with this latter statement?
Writing Feedbackcongchop - Aug 26, 2013 / Shasvat Shukla - Aug 26, 2013
|Agree or disagree : Younger school children should study art and music (TOEFL)
4 - this statement is included in your prompt so you should incline your idea on 'why it should be...
Writing FeedbackAllen Hu - Aug 25, 2013 / gmad06 - Aug 26, 2013
|Improving roads and highways or public transportation? It completely depends on dependency of public
NEW - Should government spend money on improving roads and highways or should government spend more money on improving public transportation...
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|Children should only play sports for fun, not in competitions or contests.(TOEFL)
12 - All right~~my major has nothing to do with your major at all~haha, accounting,actually~ I love scientific guy though I...
Writing FeedbackAllen Hu - Aug 23, 2013 / Allen Hu - Aug 25, 2013
|[TOEFL] Do you agree that telephones play more effective role than television?
Writing Feedbackjoyhu - Aug 25, 2013 / Allen Hu - Aug 25, 2013
|TOEFL:UNIVs pay attention to sports and social activities as the educational issues?
Writing FeedbackQUPHAS - Aug 24, 2013 / hohuuhoa - Aug 25, 2013
|[GRE Issue essay] Corporations have responsibility to promote well-being of societies
Writing Feedbacktesttaker - Aug 23, 2013 / testtaker - Aug 24, 2013
|[GRE: Analyze an Argument] Reduce operating expenses to reverse decline in profits
6 - Hi shadman19222! Sorry that I forgot to address your last query. I think I crossed the 30-minute time limit...
Writing Feedbacktesttaker - Aug 23, 2013 / testtaker - Aug 24, 2013
|IELTS TASK2:Spending leisure time with different and the same age group
4 - Dear Gmad06 your introduction and 2 body paragraphs are good organized, but in my point of view in...
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Aug 23, 2013 / mahgh123 - Aug 24, 2013
|Young vs. Old generation - who is having more fun? - TOEFL
Writing Feedbacknlakhots - Aug 23, 2013 / blackbird2013 - Aug 24, 2013
|Individuals can do nothing on environmental issues, Agree or disagree?(TOEFL)
Writing FeedbackAllen Hu - Jul 17, 2013 / Allen Hu - Aug 23, 2013
|Compare and contrast your way of live with your parents
3 - We are now living in the age of information and communication technology where the world runs at a...
Writing Feedbackdoli - Aug 23, 2013 / dumi - Aug 23, 2013
|TOEFL: job has more effect on your happiness; brings the sense of accomplishment
4 - I have seen many people begin their essays like this. However, I find it's not an interesting hook...
Writing FeedbackHsinyu - Aug 22, 2013 / dumi - Aug 23, 2013
|Working in supplementary task besides studying at high school may bring benefits
2 - I think you need to pay attention to the essay structure. Your introduction should contain three main parts. The...
Writing Feedbackmahgh123 - Aug 23, 2013 / dumi - Aug 23, 2013
|Students staying away from parents as they mature - TOEFL
Writing Feedbacknlakhots - Aug 21, 2013 / nlakhots - Aug 22, 2013
|Perfect Man.-Short Descriptive writing :)
2 - Your writing is free and soaring. It has feeling which touches me. Although I am not native, just...
Writing FeedbackEmax3 - Aug 22, 2013 / Minions144 - Aug 22, 2013
|Ielts2: should rich countries help poor countries?
Writing Feedbackcongchop - Aug 22, 2013 / shadman19922 - Aug 22, 2013
|IELTS ; Increased prices of petrol can solve growing traffic and pollution issues
5 - Dear redtape, I highly appreciate your comment. I will save your advice. Thank you so much for...
Writing FeedbackMinions144 - Aug 21, 2013 / Minions144 - Aug 22, 2013
|TOEFL - Impact made by fast food on our lives
7 - One of those aspects is the decreasing the time given for preparing he food which made the people face...
Writing Feedbackfaheddarmoch - Aug 19, 2013 / congchop - Aug 22, 2013
|IELTS TASK 2: ZOOs are only to entertain people?
Writing Feedbackcongchop - Aug 17, 2013 / congchop - Aug 22, 2013
|[TOEFL] Once you are unique enough, you are already on the way to success.
3 - I didn't see any obviously grammatical problems. Beside, I do like your point of view!! Wish you good luck!...
Writing Feedbackalice0209 - Aug 22, 2013 / Hsinyu - Aug 22, 2013
|[TOEFL] Working at home V.S Working in a company; Which do you prefer?
4 - Hi Your essay is well organised, especially your introduction. However, I have only one note on this sentence ''Moreover,...
Writing Feedbackalice0209 - Aug 21, 2013 / moutaz1978 - Aug 22, 2013
|[TOEFL] Successful people try new things; Do you agree?
Writing Feedbackjoyhu - Aug 21, 2013 / joyhu - Aug 22, 2013
|IELTS Task 1 - line graph (UNEMPLOYMENT RATES IN THE US AND JAPAN)
4 - Thank you very much guys, I will definitely keep on eye on my mistakes and learn from them :)...
Writing Feedbackteehee123 - Aug 18, 2013 / teehee123 - Aug 21, 2013
|Now many employees have the option to telecommute - why?
Writing Feedbacknlakhots - Aug 19, 2013 / nlakhots - Aug 21, 2013
|IELTS : The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men & women
2 - Bivek3 I don't know how to give a mark. The writing looks excellent, though. ...status between the years...
Writing FeedbackBivek3 - Aug 21, 2013 / EF_Kevin - Aug 21, 2013
|[IELTS] 'Developed Countries' - World literacy rates by region and by gender.
2 - The bar chart shows illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Overall, it can clearly...
Writing Feedbackbozhidar94 - Aug 21, 2013 / Bivek3 - Aug 21, 2013
|IELTS TASK1:Complain letter about an online purchase
3 - Well....complaint is something negative. Generally, we try not to start with a negtive note. So, first you introduce...
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Aug 21, 2013 / dumi - Aug 21, 2013
|Reactions Upon the Gross Effects of Typhoon Maring and Monsoon
NEW - Question: Write in essay about your personal reactions why Filipinos experience the gross effects of typhoon Maring and monsoon....
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|IETLS General Task 1: You have taken apart time job. issue with them and its solution
Writing FeedbackArun0506 - Aug 20, 2013 / Arun0506 - Aug 20, 2013
|[Proficiency exams ]Argument essay arguing in favour of or against advertising..
4 - ... People include both sellers and buyers. That is to say they represent both advertisers and consumers. So,...
Writing FeedbackDeli52 - Aug 10, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 20, 2013
|Installing lights to reduce accidents. GRE Analyze an argument. Feel free to comment.
5 - Hi Pahan, Sorry, the first mistake came about as a result of typing too fast and not proofreading it...
Writing Feedbackshadman19922 - Aug 19, 2013 / shadman19922 - Aug 20, 2013
|Petition to University administration/ GRE analyze
6 - ... lacking in the fact????? do you mean that author's argument lacks factual evidence? .... I...
Writing Feedbackshadman19922 - Aug 19, 2013 / dumi - Aug 20, 2013
|IELTS Task 1 General training : A friend has agreed to look after your house and pets
5 - Well Arun.... by reading your prompt, I understand your friend has agreed to look after your house and pet...
Writing FeedbackArun0506 - Aug 14, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 20, 2013
|IELTS; FIXED PUNISHMENT FOR CRIMES? Or they need to be based on circumstances?
7 - In my opinion, you have taken an example of a child for the fixed punishment system where there...
Writing FeedbackDreqc - Aug 18, 2013 / Redtape - Aug 20, 2013
|'Multitasking teenagers' - ACT Essay Review
4 - ... fully agree sounds better. As dumi suggested, I too feel you need to introduce the topic before...
Writing FeedbackACTPREP - Aug 4, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 20, 2013
|What distinguishs Art from Design?
6 - Contemporary art galleries are the greatest art works of all time.These works are done by the highly recognized and...
Writing FeedbackWangQi - Jul 27, 2013 / thomascarlson - Aug 20, 2013
|Agree/Disagree? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends
Writing Feedbackalexcripton - Aug 18, 2013 / alexcripton - Aug 20, 2013
|TOEFL - Factory near your community/ Advantages & Distadvantages
3 - ... I don't find a connection between your first and the second part of this sentence; On the...
Writing Feedbackfaheddarmoch - Aug 19, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 20, 2013
|IELTS essay about the effects of future developments in the field of IT
5 - ... why do you cite developed countries? Even in developing countries such as India or China (which are...
Writing Feedbackmoutaz1978 - Aug 19, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 20, 2013
|IELTS task 1 - line graph aging population
Writing Feedbackteehee123 - Aug 19, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 20, 2013
|IELTS: Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more
4 - .... I feel you should have more weight on the reason why they believe so; The people support...
Writing Feedbackme4mbd - Aug 19, 2013 / dumi - Aug 19, 2013
|IELTS: Nowadays, many secondary schools teach business and communication skills
Writing Feedbackgustmd09 - Aug 19, 2013 / gustmd09 - Aug 19, 2013
|Child Abuse and my Future; How I learned to become a man!
7 - Red: Really appreciate the effort, especially at what time it is! Blue: I really try to put passion,...
Writing FeedbackIvykid96 - Aug 4, 2013 / Ivykid96 - Aug 19, 2013
|IELTS; Competition instills confidence into the child's mind.
5 - I request both Pahan and Dumi to use marking pen when you suggest me writing new sentence instead of...
Writing Feedbackfahadbd - Aug 19, 2013 / fahadbd - Aug 19, 2013
|The sense of competition and the spirit of cooperation, I believe are equally essential to children.
7 - ... I guess you should have used a different wording :) It is essential to promote cooperation in...
Writing Feedbackking jane - Aug 18, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 19, 2013
|IELTS: It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be.
5 - ... this is an interesting simple idea which you have presented in a very complicated manner. Also, this...
Writing Feedbackme4mbd - Aug 18, 2013 / dumi - Aug 19, 2013
|Student behavior has became major problem in world .causes and solution .
6 - What's the purpose of this essay? Are you preparing for IELTS, TOEFL or what? It's better you mention the...
Writing FeedbackMohkam - Aug 18, 2013 / dumi - Aug 19, 2013
|IELTS : ESSAY ON DESCRIPTIVE WRITING FOR GRAPHICAL DATA
Writing FeedbackDreqc - Aug 19, 2013 / Dreqc - Aug 19, 2013
|[TOEFL] Deal with the cane toad; Integrated Writing Task
3 - ... this is not grammatically incorrect. But I wish you changed the beginning a little bit; Both the...
Writing Feedbackjoyhu - Aug 19, 2013 / dumi - Aug 19, 2013
|IELTS: Some people think that sense of competition in children should be encouraged.
NEW - Please grade my essay by your valuable suggestions. Topic: Some people think that sense of competition in children...
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|IELTS_cultural traditions will be destroyed by developing tourism. right/wrong?
Writing FeedbackIbrahim_Xian - Aug 15, 2013 / Ibrahim_Xian - Aug 19, 2013
|Stay in one job or change jobs frequently.Discuss both and give your own opinion.
7 - However, this does not mean you can't do better. Your ideas and essay structure are good though. So hopefully...
Writing FeedbackRealTMac - Aug 18, 2013 / gmad06 - Aug 19, 2013
|GRE:Development of technology should improve our ability to think for ourselves
Writing Feedbackmilanbuffon - Aug 7, 2013 / milanbuffon - Aug 18, 2013
|TOEFL: sometimes it is good to learn with a teacher and sometimes on my own
4 - In your conclusion, you are stating that both sides are equal so you should also present your ideas...
Writing Feedbackramshah - Aug 18, 2013 / gmad06 - Aug 18, 2013
|A person should be very careful when making a decision - think carefully before any judgement
8 - Think about how each paragraph connects to the previous one. For example, for your third paragraph, you could...
Writing Feedbacktesttaker - Aug 13, 2013 / Sybrinth - Aug 18, 2013
|TOEFL- UNIVERSITY STUDENTS SHOULD ATTEND CLASSES OR NOT?
6 - I think your content is good and well developed, but you'd better use the topic sentences of your paragraphs...
Writing Feedbackalice0209 - Aug 13, 2013 / ramshah - Aug 18, 2013
|IELTS; GAP YEAR is helpful for students to gain experience through work or travel
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