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|Factors which influence a good movie ( your opinions )
Writing Feedbacklilythuy2289 - May 27, 2013 / shaddy - May 29, 2013
|IELTS : Nowadays people are producing more and more rubbish. Reasons and actions.
Writing Feedbackshaddy - May 27, 2013 / Shumaila86 - May 29, 2013
|IELTS - Report an island before and after construction
Writing Feedbackseabird88 - May 26, 2013 / shaddy - May 28, 2013
|Ielts: % of Australian men and women with 5-levels of post-school qualifications
2 - Your chart seem to direct in introduction. The horizontal bar chart differentiates Australian men and women on post...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 27, 2013 / sophisticated - May 28, 2013
|IELTS ; Letter to Football Team-mate to inform why I leave the team
5 - I hope this letter finds you in good spirit and health. The purpose of this letter is to bring...
Writing Feedbacksophisticated - May 27, 2013 / nicktheB - May 28, 2013
|TOEFL; Some people think that family has more influence on the young adult
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 27, 2013 / April April - May 28, 2013
|Computer Addiction (Causes/Effect/Solution )
4 - ... technology has literary influenced everybody's life and therefore you can keep this very general .......
Writing Feedbackyasser - May 27, 2013 / dumi - May 27, 2013
|Cracking Down The Laws of Bullying by Pandora Campbell
Writing FeedbackPandora0510 - May 18, 2013 / Pandora0510 - May 27, 2013
|ARGUMENT ESSAY ON IMPORTANCE OF COMMUNITY SERVICE AMONG STUDENTS AT PLEASANTVILLE
NEW - Q- Several charitable organizations in Pleasant-ville provide opportunities for teenagers to engage in community service. Write a response...
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|IELTS; In our society child's education have never been a simple task
9 - never need comma Some people argue that, children should be taught to be avaluevaluablemembemembers in their...
Writing Feedbacknguyenngoc - May 21, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 27, 2013
|IELTS : Reason of being overweight in children is due to fast food outlets or parents
4 - Thanks guys for the corrections \ suggestions. I was busy with some stuff so couldn't come here earlier....
Writing Feedbackshaddy - May 15, 2013 / shaddy - May 27, 2013
|IELTS, the reasons for increasing rubbish, and provide the measures for governments.
Writing Feedbackhomsai - May 21, 2013 / April April - May 27, 2013
|Advantages of living in the dormitory rooms and apartment buildings - COMPARISON
3 - --> Moreover, the dorm buildings are usually close to the class buildings and departments; therefore, students do...
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 26, 2013 / April April - May 26, 2013
|A story about desert survival; Creative writing
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|Lord Arragorn has returned short story.
2 - It is an engaging read, but it gets kind of confusing after the narrator gets hacked and shot. I...
Writing Feedbackchessman567 - May 26, 2013 / Didgeridoo - May 26, 2013
|Lincoln Paper - Introductory Paragraph
Writing FeedbackGlenn900 - Jan 3, 2009 / mussy - May 26, 2013
|IELTS: Importance of studying History in school.
3 - thanx Habib. I really appreciate ur time and effort. But there are few corrections. Do not put comma after...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - May 25, 2013 / Shumaila86 - May 26, 2013
|Report on the likely effects of Global warming on the capital city of my country
Writing Feedbackxucoi - May 18, 2013 / xucoi - May 26, 2013
|Life itself is a big recipe- COURAGE; Concept Essay/ Grand Canyon U
Writing FeedbackJeremyofAL - May 18, 2013 / Shumaila86 - May 25, 2013
|IELTS - good changes can be brought in life without major difficulties.
6 - thank u o much. i really appreciate ur opinion but please can ye explain how to gather the ideas...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - May 24, 2013 / Shumaila86 - May 25, 2013
|IELTS: profits from natural resources make people ignore to preserve natural world
Writing FeedbackHelio - May 24, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 25, 2013
|GRE: Mason City residents & Water sports - Argumentive Essay
3 - Residents of Mason city constantly complain forabout the quality of river water and the river's smell but that doesdo...
Writing FeedbackDips - May 24, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|Reliance on Technology to solve problem will deteriorate humans ability to think
4 - ... exactly :) .... this is a well written introduction... The only point I notice is that you...
Writing Feedbackmavericksid - May 22, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|TOEFL Students are more interested in politics today than those in the past.
4 - ...need to improve :( In this advance society, politics too have become very complicated and they, either directly...
Writing FeedbackIvy_Missing - May 24, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|Happiness of working that one can achieve is the best in this world
Writing Feedbackninasalimi - May 25, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|Today, new media is springing out and bringing convenience to everyday life
2 - ... another way of expressing this ; As a result of rapid globalization, media industry keeps flourishing stronger...
Writing Feedbackfrancy - May 25, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|"The words like Justice only exist in dictionaries"; Rich men have no fault
Writing Feedbackkingmaker - May 25, 2013 / dumi - May 25, 2013
|Teacher should relate well with students than having an excellent knowledge.
5 - Put away the thesaurus and rewrite this using words you already know (no matter how simple). Then I'll be...
Writing Feedbackjunisha rai - May 19, 2013 / jkjeremy - May 24, 2013
|Some say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together
3 - ....when you say "communication gap" it has a much broader meaning than talking about communication between people. Here...
Writing Feedbacknguyenngoc - May 19, 2013 / dumi - May 24, 2013
|TOEFL: I think that there are still a lot of different types of movies
Writing FeedbackLAB 328 - May 22, 2013 / dumi - May 24, 2013
|IELTS: The development of a coastal village
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 21, 2013 / Helio - May 24, 2013
|GRE Issue Task; More technology for problem solving results in less ability to think?
Writing FeedbackDips - May 24, 2013 / Dips - May 24, 2013
|The Mass Media Control; Differents Risks and Points of View
4 - Thanks a lot for your help, both of you. I've managed to correct the mistakes that kridUessay found, but...
Writing FeedbackFco_94 - May 23, 2013 / Fco_94 - May 24, 2013
|Shorris's studies show the reader that a change is possible in any community
2 - overcome the division? .... interrogation means questioning, inquiring etc. and mostly used in criminology. Is...
Writing FeedbackFreenchy - May 24, 2013 / dumi - May 24, 2013
|People are now more interested in using seafood and some products from seafoods than ever before
3 - No one can deny that many ocean species have become endangered due to human over-fishing across the...
Writing FeedbackHelio - May 23, 2013 / dumi - May 23, 2013
|Ielts: What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic are they?
2 - ... some parts that I highlighted sound a bit irrelevant - specially " worker's occupation" and "modern societies".......
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 23, 2013 / dumi - May 23, 2013
|Living in the countryside better in Vietnam
Writing Feedbacklele1987 - May 22, 2013 / lele1987 - May 23, 2013
|TOEFL :Which do u prefer living in an apartment or living in a dorm?
Writing FeedbackMax Payne - May 21, 2013 / LAB 328 - May 22, 2013
|Marriage older is more advantageous than marrying at young age!
Writing Feedbacktruongnhunhan - May 21, 2013 / dumi - May 22, 2013
|IELTS; Students from rural areas find difficult to receive higher education
6 - ... Start with a sentence which has more relevance to your topic. Ideally, it should introduce your topic...
Writing FeedbackNancy Quan - May 19, 2013 / dumi - May 22, 2013
|Important truths begin as outrageous, or at least uncomfortable, attacks.....
Writing Feedbacksanilt237 - May 22, 2013 / dumi - May 22, 2013
|Why do crime rates increase? How to arrest this issue?
Writing Feedbackartlife - May 21, 2013 / Pahan - May 22, 2013
|Criticism of Modern Primary Education System
Writing FeedbackTneufy11 - May 13, 2013 / Pahan - May 22, 2013
|How does rapid economic development affect a country?
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 21, 2013 / MisterWandering - May 22, 2013
|The advantages and disadvantages of study in other country
Writing Feedbackanup80 - May 21, 2013 / dumi - May 21, 2013
|"Made in China"; Fake products produced in China
Writing FeedbackFiorella Li - May 21, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 21, 2013
|Which one do you prefer? A student-based class or a lectured-based class.
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 21, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 21, 2013
|IELTS; How to reduce traffic in cities? Should it be by reducing the need for travel?
4 - This is much better than what you've written first. I'm sure Pahan too would agree. However, even this...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 21, 2013 / dumi - May 21, 2013
|In my opinion, daily homework is necessary; Reasons & Examples
Writing FeedbackSapodils - May 20, 2013 / Sapodils - May 21, 2013
|Which is more advantages? Marrying young or older?
2 - .... is that so? I thought people now tend to postpone marriage compared to older generations. ...
Writing Feedbacktruongnhunhan - May 21, 2013 / Pahan - May 21, 2013
|IELTS :Creativity needs freedom and so do the creative artists; Do you agree?
2 - ... In this sentence, I don't find any relevance to your topic. That's a bit dangerous because everything...
Writing FeedbackSecilia - May 21, 2013 / dumi - May 21, 2013
|Increasing price of petrol would not help controlling traffic
Writing FeedbackRavLlika - May 20, 2013 / dumi - May 21, 2013
|What Should People Do To Become Healthier?
Writing FeedbackMuath1987 - May 20, 2013 / Muath1987 - May 20, 2013
|'less stress'; Games are as important for adults as they are for children.
Writing Feedbackgp2013 - May 20, 2013 / dumi - May 20, 2013
|IELTS; Changing jobs and living places - Good or Bad?
5 - Well.... your prompt does not ask for reasons for changing jobs...it asks you whether it's a positive or...
Writing FeedbackNancy Quan - May 19, 2013 / dumi - May 20, 2013
|TOEFL : which on do you prefer? serious movies or amusing movies
Writing FeedbackS0heil - May 19, 2013 / S0heil - May 20, 2013
|It's a good idea to allow students take a long break in order to work or travel
Writing Feedbackhomsai - May 8, 2013 / Muath1987 - May 20, 2013
|Narrate how did you overcome the challenges to achieve your goal(s) in life
6 - I appreciate your revision. You have changed it more concise. Would it be more appropriate if I am...
Writing Feedbackniesaysi - May 6, 2013 / niesaysi - May 20, 2013
|A person's passion and dream cannot be bought by money
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|TOEFL; A person's job's has more effects on his happiness
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