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|Do you agree that the internet has transformed lives and economies?
Writing Feedbackmaruko_a2609 - Apr 11, 2013 / maruko_a2609 - Apr 22, 2013
|IELTS: Child phenomenon; Learning a foreign language at the primary school.
4 - I think the debate is about learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. So,...
Writing Feedbackmhss - Mar 26, 2013 / CallMeRay - Apr 22, 2013
|IELTS Essay:Being a celebrity,the benifits are out weigh the problem?
Writing Feedbackchristyzhongs - Apr 21, 2013 / Lorica - Apr 21, 2013
|SARCASM - Exploratory Essay/ Need editing & suggestions to improve
NEW - Length : No more than 4 pages. Purpose(s) : 1. To apply critical thinking skills to language. 2. To...
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|IELTS; How to stay healthy in your country? Reasons & Answeres
6 - :) Well, I think your prompt needs you to discuss what people should do to stay healthy in your...
Writing FeedbackRedtape - Apr 18, 2013 / dumi - Apr 21, 2013
|IELTS: Increase of Illiteracy rate causes and effects on society
10 - Great ideas, I'll surely take care of the minor mistakes. These days I am trying to complete my...
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 18, 2013 / shaddy - Apr 21, 2013
|IELTS: Should both parents work in a family?
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 21, 2013 / shaddy - Apr 21, 2013
|IETLS; Do you agree that it's worth spending money on space exploration?
6 - Will Do. Exactly dumi, I should have mentioned few areas that needs improvement. Thank you for...
Writing FeedbackRedtape - Apr 20, 2013 / Redtape - Apr 21, 2013
|IELTS; Money spending on space exploration is a complete waste/ Agree or disagree?
Writing Feedbackessaytest - Apr 21, 2013 / dumi - Apr 21, 2013
|The crease on my mom's forhead ; Motivation
Writing FeedbackKoit - Apr 17, 2013 / Koit - Apr 20, 2013
|IELTS General training, inviting a friend to visit your new house.
5 - 3. My cousin is getting married this Sunday and his family will move into my old house to start...
Writing Feedbackhomsai - Apr 20, 2013 / Sunny he - Apr 20, 2013
|The Future of America: The One Change Needed Above All
Writing Feedbackmaxmartinez - Apr 15, 2013 / Sunny he - Apr 20, 2013
|Truth is outrageous,nonacceptable & may hurts our belief; ISSUE TOPIC 1
Writing Feedbackaum - Apr 19, 2013 / aum - Apr 20, 2013
|Who is responsible for Medical Services ?
6 - Hi, Lorica, First, I would like to highlight that you IELTs essay is not long enough(only 240 words),...
Writing FeedbackLorica - Apr 19, 2013 / christyzhongs - Apr 20, 2013
|Do you think that television programs, movies, and video games influence young people
Writing FeedbackCaroline777 - Apr 18, 2013 / ningo - Apr 19, 2013
|'understanding intercultural communication'; culture shock
Writing Feedbackhoai - Apr 15, 2013 / ningo - Apr 19, 2013
|IELTS; Intelligent/ Humor/ Reliable - Which one of these you look in your friend?
Writing Feedbackgyal - Apr 19, 2013 / dumi - Apr 19, 2013
|Role of teachers with appearance of computers.
Writing FeedbackPond - Apr 19, 2013 / dumi - Apr 19, 2013
|Impacts that affect on advertising is always the (only) thing which companies concentrate on
Writing FeedbackPond - Apr 18, 2013 / Pond - Apr 19, 2013
|Homework is Harmful! - Why?
Writing FeedbackFajriyah - Apr 14, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 19, 2013
|IELTS- It's important to address root causes in order to reduce criminal activities!
3 - On the other side of the argument, punishment needs to be balanced with the crime committed by...
Writing FeedbackStG - Apr 18, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 19, 2013
|Should the government invest in early childhood education or higher education
Writing FeedbackJoyceessay - Apr 19, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 19, 2013
|Neighbors are the people who live near us. What are the qualities of a good neighbor?
Writing Feedbacksnwr jamal - Apr 15, 2013 / snwr jamal - Apr 19, 2013
|FACE TO FACE COMMUNICATION is a better way to communicate
Writing Feedbackningo - Apr 10, 2013 / ningo - Apr 19, 2013
|It is true that the past stays in the past; Past or future
Writing Feedbackgular - Apr 17, 2013 / gular - Apr 18, 2013
|GRE argument: Super Screen Movie Production Company
3 - ... Your prompt does not tell that the production of Super Screen movies had been lowered. As I...
Writing Feedbackhjq1990 - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 18, 2013
|Impacts of modern medical science on society.
2 - .... you have grammar issues here. Also you idea is not presented very clearly. This is my suggestion;...
Writing FeedbackMilad Mac - Apr 17, 2013 / dumi - Apr 18, 2013
|IELTS Essay: Impact of computer usage on children.
8 - Great and thanks again. Thanks eileenalien, your suggestions are equally important to me. Cheers!!...
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 17, 2013 / shaddy - Apr 18, 2013
|TOEFL, Communicating via e-mail and voice mail vs Telephone and face-to face
4 - .... This sentence does not have any grammatical issues. However, I prefer if you introduced the topic theme...
Writing FeedbackMisius - Apr 13, 2013 / dumi - Apr 17, 2013
|Subject: Factors contributing to JOB SATISFACTION/ How realistic they are?
5 - ... Wish you presented this in a more simpler manner; In modern society, people spend more time at...
Writing FeedbackvickieZ - Apr 14, 2013 / dumi - Apr 17, 2013
|In many countries schools leave severe problems with student behavior.
2 - .... discipline and behavioral programs are two things, so they need to be treated as plural. ...
Writing FeedbackAidanaMyrzakhan - Apr 17, 2013 / dumi - Apr 17, 2013
|'My sister's problems and solutions' - concise narrative describe a meaningful event
Writing FeedbackNoumon - Oct 14, 2009 / shaddy - Apr 16, 2013
|Solve the environmental problems by increasing the fuel prize. Agree or disagree.
Writing Feedbackessaytest - Apr 16, 2013 / essaytest - Apr 16, 2013
|Co-ed education versus single sex education; Which is better?
Writing Feedbackxu yu cheng - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 16, 2013
|IELTS Essay: Suggestions for the densely populated countries.
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 16, 2013 / dumi - Apr 16, 2013
|IELTSl; Refugee programs/process should be allowed?
Writing FeedbackRedtape - Apr 13, 2013 / dumi - Apr 16, 2013
|Comparison of three hostels in Sydney
6 - .... since you started with "although" you cannot have "but" Although Central YHA charges the highest,...
Writing Feedbackproabc123 - Apr 8, 2013 / dumi - Apr 16, 2013
|IELTS; How should schools select their students?
3 - As essaytest comments, here there is a slight confusion about whether you are answering what your prompt suggests....
Writing Feedbackmalhamed - Apr 14, 2013 / dumi - Apr 15, 2013
|IELTS; Can price hikes on fuel solve environmental problems?
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 14, 2013 / dumi - Apr 15, 2013
|TOEFL iBT: Integrated Essay, The win-win negotiating
4 - okay... then thats certainly a mistake in my observation. and thats obvious because i myself have no good strength...
Writing FeedbackMisius - Apr 13, 2013 / temptprovidence - Apr 15, 2013
|Describe the heart lung machine -IELTS
6 - No, It isnt. It's not scientific word. I think that word used to describe unoxygenated blood is appropriate....
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Apr 12, 2013 / xucoi - Apr 14, 2013
|"Every thing is alive because of water"; Clean Water ESSAY
Writing Feedbackabdullahtrading - Apr 12, 2013 / temptprovidence - Apr 14, 2013
|'many good degrees in Japan'; family background have more influence than teacher
2 - Begin your essay with a more catchy line; Who influence the young person's learning more? Parents or the...
Writing Feedbacklinhmonoforever - Apr 13, 2013 / dumi - Apr 14, 2013
|IETLS; Social media and its impact on my life
3 - .... it is not clear what you mean by "work and societal outcomes".... you better specify that. ...
Writing Feedbacktestessay - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 14, 2013
|Dieting can change a person's life for the better or ruin one's health completely.
4 - I would strongly suggest you to follow the four para structure for this task. That's the best way...
Writing FeedbackSuzy Naguib - Apr 14, 2013 / dumi - Apr 14, 2013
|Will the Internet will bring people of the world closer together?
Writing Feedbackjohnsultanov - Apr 12, 2013 / johnsultanov - Apr 14, 2013
|Computers usage at school-level studies for children (IELTS)
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 8, 2013 / Redtape - Apr 14, 2013
|Drawbacks of technology in our modern world? *Short <400 words!
Writing Feedbackballerinia - Apr 13, 2013 / Misius - Apr 13, 2013
|You are going to visit New Zealand for an 'English and Homestay' program
2 - Dear Mr. Nicolas, I am very thankful to you, for hosting my 'English and homestay' program in New...
Writing Feedbackabhigeorge - Apr 11, 2013 / ballerinia - Apr 13, 2013
|TOEFL: Students should apply for admission for their first choice or several schools?
3 - Thank you about your opinion! However, I do have some doubts. I am studying BARRON's Toefl ibt and they...
Writing FeedbackMisius - Apr 13, 2013 / Misius - Apr 13, 2013
|IELTS-Wealthy nations have an obligation to provide food and education to the poorer?
4 - This should be your introductory paragraph. Don't leave the first line separate. Well ... why you...
Writing FeedbackAntonR - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 13, 2013
|Mr. Heng taught me the value of HARDWORKING; My favorite TEACHER
Writing Feedbackpohui88 - Apr 9, 2013 / dumi - Apr 13, 2013
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Bar chart (various flavours of food)
4 - That's just fine.... Those are good key words you can use in report writing. In this task try to...
Writing Feedbackdannydo - Apr 13, 2013 / dumi - Apr 13, 2013
|TOEFL iBT: Integrated Essay, The origin of dreams, Freud vs biochemical approach
3 - Thank you for your advice! I completely understand your position about integrated essays so I asked about grammar and...
Writing FeedbackMisius - Apr 13, 2013 / Misius - Apr 13, 2013
|Everyone has the right to education irrespective of gender difference
2 - Hi You should include your prompt in your post so that others can give you more relevant feed backs....
Writing Feedbacktestessay - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 13, 2013
|Sapodila, was the name given to me when I was born; Essay on myself
Writing FeedbackSapodils - Apr 13, 2013 / Sapodils - Apr 13, 2013
|In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel before university
Writing Feedbackmsmwarren - Apr 12, 2013 / dumi - Apr 13, 2013
|IELTS-writing a short essay to express why moves to a new house and how's that place.
Writing Feedbackstormynick - Apr 12, 2013 / dumi - Apr 13, 2013
|IELTS;Children are under increasing educational, social, and financial stress
5 - In the modern society, the children undergo sever stress due to study pressure together with social and financial...
Writing Feedbackhomsai - Apr 9, 2013 / dumi - Apr 13, 2013
|Reasons for why people attending colleges or universities?
2 - ... This introduction is a bit too short. Introduce your topic with a better entrance to your essay....
Writing FeedbackPATEL RAJ - Apr 12, 2013 / dumi - Apr 12, 2013
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