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|Difference between Two Close friends
Writing Feedbackkieulinhbs - May 29, 2013 / JangGemini - Jun 30, 2013
|IELTS- begin language learning from elementary school compared to secondary school
3 - Learning a foreign language is becoming increasingly essential in the modern globalized world. ... teaching what?...
Writing Feedbackvenise - Jun 29, 2013 / dumi - Jun 30, 2013
|IELTS- Task 1.The number of houses sold of UK in 2000
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Jun 27, 2013 / shinichi75 - Jun 30, 2013
|Children who grew up with hardships are better prepared to deal with problems; Agree?
2 - I wish you wrote this in two sentences; Personally I agree with this statement. However, I also...
Writing FeedbackMuath1987 - Jun 29, 2013 / dumi - Jun 30, 2013
|TOEFL; Integrated writing task - Team Work is the best way to handle a new project
5 - First, the reading passage claims that a team exerts a greater power than that of an individual in...
Writing Feedbacksinafrm1365 - Jun 17, 2013 / dumi - Jun 29, 2013
|Same laws should be applied to Tobacco as they are applied to Heroin
3 - Follow the outline suggested by jkjeremy. Also don't forget to support your reasons with a specific example that can...
Writing Feedbackdrodriguez_38 - Jun 16, 2013 / dumi - Jun 29, 2013
|Break after high school has advantages and disadvantages
8 - Yes.... you are right because it is the easiest way to handle this task. Considering the time factor, you...
Writing Feedbackdido272000 - Jun 11, 2013 / dumi - Jun 29, 2013
|My sister, my roommate - MY COMPARISON AND CONTRAST ESSAY
2 - My sister and i usually argue about somthing whereas my sister I wonder how she can talk consecutive over...
Writing Feedbackchauuyenbinh - Jun 29, 2013 / sally12390 - Jun 29, 2013
|The Effects of TV on Society, especially on children;
Writing Feedbackkieulinhbs - Jun 15, 2013 / dumi - Jun 29, 2013
|Ielts Task 1: Main reasons for migration to and from the UK
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 28, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 29, 2013
|Universities should provide both knowledge and skills needed in the workplace
Writing Feedbackvenise - Jun 27, 2013 / venise - Jun 29, 2013
|IELTS, To some people, studying HISTORY has very little value; what is your view?
10 - This goes in the introduction. . Which difficulties? Pick ONE and write a paragraph about it....
Writing Feedbackshinichi75 - Jun 21, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 28, 2013
|Now a days technologies have became a very important aspect of everybodys lives!
4 - "Now a days" should be spelled "nowadays," but is a word that is no longer used frequently by...
Writing Feedbackgangadhar - Jun 16, 2013 / IntheClouds - Jun 28, 2013
|What's more influencial on child's development? Family influence or Other factors?
Writing Feedbackleotimothy - Jun 27, 2013 / leotimothy - Jun 28, 2013
|IELTS; Is CHANGE good or bad? / People's preferences
3 - ...I guess your prompt asks you about your stand on this. To which side you belong? Those like to...
Writing Feedbackbluesoly - Jun 28, 2013 / dumi - Jun 28, 2013
|Global water scarcity - a Global concern
2 - we will be concerned about the next generation . our lives on earth depends on water so everyone should...
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 27, 2013 / sally12390 - Jun 27, 2013
|goverment has a plan to plant trees , dose this have affect on ecosystem and water ?
2 - Each organism of the ecosystem has heavy dependence on other living beings and vice verse contributing to...
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 27, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 27, 2013
|Social networks create more harm than good to teenagers. What are your views ?
Writing Feedbackelfailure - Jun 11, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 27, 2013
|Imported fruits &vegetables can affect the home grown vegetable market
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 27, 2013 / dumi - Jun 27, 2013
|IELTS task 1: The highest qualification attained by sex...
Writing Feedbackshinichi75 - Jun 27, 2013 / dumi - Jun 27, 2013
|IELTS ; MOBILE PHONES - Essential or Unnecessary?
4 - It seems you are new to this forum. Please select the forum "writing feedback" for your essays written on...
Writing Feedbacksally12390 - Jun 27, 2013 / dumi - Jun 27, 2013
|IELTS ESSAY- Graphic describing; Differences of an island
Writing Feedbackhuyenanh1508 - Jun 26, 2013 / huyenanh1508 - Jun 27, 2013
|IELTS TASK1:Letter to inform a friend about his accomodation
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 24, 2013 / IntheClouds - Jun 26, 2013
|IELTS TASK 1; GDP Growth for 3 different countries
3 - 6.5% and 6.4%...
Writing Feedbackhaje9alshoo8 - Jun 26, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 26, 2013
|IETLS TASK 2; More money should be spend on education and sports?
4 - First, you need to give a meaningful topic for your essays when you open a new thread. That helps...
Writing Feedbackhaje9alshoo8 - Jun 26, 2013 / dumi - Jun 26, 2013
|IELTS; 'benefits of technology' What older people can learn from young people?
3 - .... Wish you broke this up to two sentences; With the advent of new technologies, our generation has...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - Jun 26, 2013 / dumi - Jun 26, 2013
|Learning English through Social Issue - Teen Smoking
Writing Feedbackdavylsc910 - Jun 9, 2013 / dumi - Jun 26, 2013
|IELTS TASK2:who should take care of the elderly,family or professionals?
4 - Receiving this compliment from a renowned forumer like you made me the most proud student here..thanks.. tell you...
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 25, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 26, 2013
|Ielts: Libraries should not waste their money on hi-tech media. Agree or disagree?
6 - Thanks for your suggestion! If I didn't sum up my ideas in the conclusion, should I give some recommendations...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 25, 2013
|IELTS; Why attend Universities or Colleges? Specific reasons and examples
5 - I think you should change this sentence a bit: I believe that career preparation is the main reason...
Writing Feedbacksalmah1997 - Jun 18, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Ielts Task 1: Imprisonment levels in 5 countries
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 23, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Talent vs Training - Talent is more important!
5 - Your essay structure definitely needs improvement. Seems like you have two conclusion paragraphs, you have a paragraph with a...
Writing FeedbackAnnaLimetta - Jun 5, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 24, 2013
|What's more useful: purchasing a business or a house?
6 - I think you can get a better structure for this essay if you could share some insights also on...
Writing FeedbackMabossani - Jun 21, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTS; Consumer durables(telephone,refrigerator,etc)owned inBritain
4 - The rate of people using this item fluctuated between 93% to 98% during the period Refrigerator...
Writing Feedbacklytetdi - Jun 21, 2013 / dumi - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTs---competition is much more importance than cooperation in school. do you agree?
Writing FeedbackKjerry - Jun 24, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Ielts: The cement and concrete making process
11 - I see. I guessed I could add a sentence about the fire to supplement the preceded sentence. Thank...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 14, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Compare and Contrast: Two kinds of transportation/ DRIVING & FLYING
Writing Feedbackastuart - Jun 8, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTS:Why Do People Feel Isolated from Each Other and what are the solutions?
3 - .... yes of course.... great start! .... How about introverts? They love isolation and do not...
Writing FeedbackYasir1994 - Jun 12, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 24, 2013
|Young adults are full of dreams and passion about their future. Do they need more independence?
Writing Feedbackdeepi - Jun 12, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTS: International travel brings more benefits than its de-merits
5 - .... You need to attend to grammar, but with practice you'll be alright. Follow the corrections suggested by...
Writing Feedbackellie_lcl - Jun 23, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 24, 2013
|TOEFL: Studying at home or at traditional school?
3 - Hi MisterWandering, I made a few revisions and here's what this sentence means. However, students can...
Writing FeedbackXiaokai Jin - Jun 24, 2013 / Xiaokai Jin - Jun 24, 2013
|Reason why you want to buy carbon filter comforter mask
3 - ...it's good if you can improve clarity of this line; [i]The industrial enviroments are often polluted by noise,...
Writing Feedbacklespeed - Jun 20, 2013 / dumi - Jun 24, 2013
|Eaqual number of male & female students in universities
5 - ....yes... shinichi75 has a very valid point. It appears that you are preparing for IELTS or TOEFL and...
Writing Feedbackdido272000 - Jun 23, 2013 / dumi - Jun 23, 2013
|IELTS: Select 3 effective media and write about their effectiveness
3 - .... The media is a "catch-all" term which caters to any type of activity whether it involves current...
Writing Feedbackwinny239 - Jun 23, 2013 / dumi - Jun 23, 2013
|IELTS: Many people are busy with work and not enough time for famliy
Writing Feedbackellie_lcl - Jun 19, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 23, 2013
|IELTS: business and financial grew noticeably and become the most advanced area
3 - -> ... the UK in the twentieth century -> business and financial services grew/developed the most...
Writing Feedbackshinichi75 - Jun 21, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 23, 2013
|"fine for driving through the red signal" - FUNNY STORY
Writing FeedbackiBoris96 - Jun 6, 2013 / dumi - Jun 23, 2013
|GRE: Analyze an arguement; Wearing a helmet while bicycling
4 - No---in this case you're just telling me what the assumption is. You haven't yet commented on why...
Writing Feedbackshadman19922 - Jun 22, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 23, 2013
|RACE! What is race? What does your race mean?
Writing Feedbackschool1st - Jun 23, 2013 / dumi - Jun 23, 2013
|Cyber-bullying occurs when one party harasses another on-line
2 - For the most part I like this. If only there were fewer instances of the words "cyber" and "bullying,"...
Writing Feedbackpacers7ind - Jun 22, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 22, 2013
|SOCIETY;children are to be great fellows or not depend on learning and good idol
2 - ... This is confusing ... It does not convey your idea properly... You need to re-phrase this to...
Writing Feedbackbmtcute - Jun 6, 2013 / dumi - Jun 22, 2013
|World is like a small village and people, especially students, decide to go abroad for study
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - Jun 6, 2013 / dumi - Jun 22, 2013
|Technological advancement hamper the development of a country's traditional skills?
Writing FeedbackAslanbek - Jun 22, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 22, 2013
|'Thank you God for those gifts' - friendship essay
Writing Feedbackjole - Jun 7, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 22, 2013
|MY THOUGHTS ABOUT WRITING HAS NEVER BEEN FUN, FAST OR EASY; Reflective essay
3 - Good writing.... your essay challenges your claim of having no confidence in writing...Lol :D I too notice the often...
Writing Feedbackschool1st - Jun 21, 2013 / dumi - Jun 21, 2013
|Human activity is harmful to the existance of earth; what's your opinion?
Writing Feedbackkvant - Jun 21, 2013 / kvant - Jun 21, 2013
|Let various boards maintain their autonomy in preparing curriculum
7 - Our country is developing and step by step becomes a civilization country where the vast majority of people are...
Writing Feedbackrohan4819 - Jun 20, 2013 / chiphan38 - Jun 21, 2013
|IELTS TASK1:Complain letter for wrong information on a product's AD
3 - Yes, this has some grammar errors that have been already highlighted by others and the fixes have been...
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 20, 2013 / dumi - Jun 21, 2013
|IELTS; CHANGE or ROUTINE LIFESTYLE? Which one is better?
Writing Feedbackorxan88 - Jun 19, 2013 / dido272000 - Jun 21, 2013
|Books and experience - rate my essay for TOEFL iBT
Writing Feedbacklucky_boy - Jun 20, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 20, 2013
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