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|RACE! What is race? What does your race mean?
Writing Feedbackschool1st - Jun 23, 2013 / dumi - Jun 23, 2013
|Cyber-bullying occurs when one party harasses another on-line
2 - For the most part I like this. If only there were fewer instances of the words "cyber" and "bullying,"...
Writing Feedbackpacers7ind - Jun 22, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 22, 2013
|SOCIETY;children are to be great fellows or not depend on learning and good idol
2 - ... This is confusing ... It does not convey your idea properly... You need to re-phrase this to...
Writing Feedbackbmtcute - Jun 6, 2013 / dumi - Jun 22, 2013
|World is like a small village and people, especially students, decide to go abroad for study
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - Jun 6, 2013 / dumi - Jun 22, 2013
|Technological advancement hamper the development of a country's traditional skills?
Writing FeedbackAslanbek - Jun 22, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 22, 2013
|'Thank you God for those gifts' - friendship essay
Writing Feedbackjole - Jun 7, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 22, 2013
|MY THOUGHTS ABOUT WRITING HAS NEVER BEEN FUN, FAST OR EASY; Reflective essay
3 - Good writing.... your essay challenges your claim of having no confidence in writing...Lol :D I too notice the often...
Writing Feedbackschool1st - Jun 21, 2013 / dumi - Jun 21, 2013
|Human activity is harmful to the existance of earth; what's your opinion?
Writing Feedbackkvant - Jun 21, 2013 / kvant - Jun 21, 2013
|Let various boards maintain their autonomy in preparing curriculum
7 - Our country is developing and step by step becomes a civilization country where the vast majority of people are...
Writing Feedbackrohan4819 - Jun 20, 2013 / chiphan38 - Jun 21, 2013
|IELTS TASK1:Complain letter for wrong information on a product's AD
3 - Yes, this has some grammar errors that have been already highlighted by others and the fixes have been...
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 20, 2013 / dumi - Jun 21, 2013
|IELTS; CHANGE or ROUTINE LIFESTYLE? Which one is better?
Writing Feedbackorxan88 - Jun 19, 2013 / dido272000 - Jun 21, 2013
|Books and experience - rate my essay for TOEFL iBT
Writing Feedbacklucky_boy - Jun 20, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 20, 2013
|Nowadays big cities in many countries become overcrowded. Why? Give some reasons
Writing FeedbackSrikanthan89 - Jun 5, 2013 / Srikanthan89 - Jun 20, 2013
|IELTS TASK2:Reward or punishment for a good behavior?
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 18, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS; Gender equality should be exercised in universities?
3 - .... Good opening. However, I feel they need fair treatment irrespective of which era they live in. There...
Writing Feedbackjenny90 - Jun 18, 2013 / dumi - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS; Leisure time is for improving mind or resting mind?
Writing Feedbackmario_nagi - Jun 19, 2013 / ellie_lcl - Jun 19, 2013
|What's more important? Roads or public transport?
Writing FeedbackMabossani - Jun 19, 2013 / Mabossani - Jun 19, 2013
|I'll move; my city is not capable to provide job vacancies for young specialists
Writing Feedbackkvant - Jun 18, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 19, 2013
|My trip to a nice and unusual village!
2 - ..."gO to new places" is implied by the word "traveling".... so itsounds redundant. I love to travel because...
Writing Feedbackvahidbm - Jun 19, 2013 / dumi - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS; Business letter explaining the reasons why I want to be away from work
5 - It is not required but it is good to have at least two sentences in your first paragraph. You...
Writing Feedbackmario_nagi - Jun 17, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS TASK2:learning to play a music instrument is a waste of time
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 17, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS; İnformation about USA marriage and divorce rates
Writing Feedbackorxan88 - Jun 14, 2013 / orxan88 - Jun 19, 2013
|Grade this GRE issue essay task out of 6.. feel free to point out any mistake
6 - This can be true. However, if I don't know my multiplication tables, should I be teaching arithmetic (let...
Writing FeedbackNilanjana - Jun 17, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 18, 2013
|Being afraid of changing can make people conservative and less interesting than others.
Writing Feedbackshinichi75 - Jun 15, 2013 / shinichi75 - Jun 18, 2013
|Students should find the field they are interested in and contribute to it.
4 - .... Start sentences with capital letters. It's difficult for others to identify your sentences when you present...
Writing Feedbackjemmy - Jun 3, 2013 / dumi - Jun 18, 2013
|Report- The number of vehicles crossing the Waterloo Bridge.
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Jun 15, 2013 / xucoi - Jun 18, 2013
|'uniformity in the educational system'; one national curriculum for students
Writing Feedbackretro13 - Jun 17, 2013 / retro13 - Jun 18, 2013
|IELTS; Teachers would not be need anymore in the classroom as a result of computers
4 - Hi Kjerry Pay attention to preposition,vocabulary and spelling. Read some articles and books. the way we...
Writing FeedbackKjerry - Jun 17, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 17, 2013
|GRE Analytic Writing; Should student study the same National Curriculum ?
4 - Don't make a list of points in your introduction. High school teachers (and teachers of all kinds) are wrong...
Writing Feedbackshadman19922 - Jun 17, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 17, 2013
|'censorhip'; Creative artists should have freedom to express their views
3 - .... It's not just last decades... Even in ancient times, the artists used to talk to their people...
Writing Feedbackdragosp - Jun 17, 2013 / dumi - Jun 17, 2013
|Minimum Legal Drinking Age 21 & why it should stay there
Writing Feedbackls2ws6 - Jun 1, 2013 / dumi - Jun 17, 2013
|Mind is very vulnerable and fragile; Death and the Maiden / Visual Essay
Writing Feedbackomid_sarox - Jun 17, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 17, 2013
|IELTS TASK1:Letter to a friend visiting your country
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 16, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 17, 2013
|Topic: "Which is a better place to live - a small town or a big?"
3 - There are many advantages and disadvantages tothat one would experience by living in a big city or small town....
Writing FeedbackLokiWolfChilde - Jun 16, 2013 / dumi - Jun 17, 2013
|Nature Vs Nurture; What is more important? Inborn characteristics or Experience?
Writing Feedbackdido272000 - Jun 17, 2013 / dumi - Jun 17, 2013
|Frederick II: Astonishment of the World or Blasphemous Beast of the Apocalypse?
Writing FeedbackRegathion - Jun 6, 2013 / drodriguez_38 - Jun 16, 2013
|The eating habits and lifestyle change of the new generation.
Writing FeedbackLady Elle - Jun 10, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 16, 2013
|IELTS; Certain professionals are not paid well for their services; Do you agree?
2 - .... this has happened and still continue to happen. So write it in present tense; It is true...
Writing Feedbackerni - May 18, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 16, 2013
|Where would you prefer to live? Small town or Big city; existence of facilities'
3 - this is grammatically wrong. Have a look; Furthermore, living in a big town is easy and convenient ...or...
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - Jun 12, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 16, 2013
|St Augustine was the first individual who read silentlz; A silent force
4 - There was a legend called St Augustine and he was the first individual who read less aloud, as...
Writing FeedbackDHuong - Jun 2, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 16, 2013
|IETLS; Should government spend money on preserving language? YES
Writing Feedbackwzncx - Jun 12, 2013 / dumi - Jun 16, 2013
|Should children be encouraged to compete or co-operate? Discuss
4 - .... well.... first, researchers find facts through their studies and not claim. You can also say, "Research studies...
Writing Feedbackdido272000 - Jun 13, 2013 / dumi - Jun 16, 2013
|IELTS;Streamlining Education has more advantages or disadvantages? Discuss both views
3 - Many people are of the opinion that this should be implemented while some oppose this view claiming...
Writing Feedbackntdang92 - Jun 13, 2013 / dumi - Jun 16, 2013
|IELTS: Negative effect of modern life's pressures on family life
6 - Thank you all for pointing out my mistakes. I'll rewrite about this topic as soon as possible....
Writing Feedbacknellylovekelly - Jun 14, 2013 / nellylovekelly - Jun 16, 2013
|Technology Vs Traditional skills and Way of life
Writing Feedbackmaryam2900 - Aug 25, 2011 / violetkau1 - Jun 16, 2013
|Let's protect our Earth; Effects of Global Warming
4 - 1. "Serious and dangerous" are already implied if not directly stated. 2. The word "this" doesn't mean...
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 14, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 16, 2013
|I always dreamed of being a doctor
Writing Feedbackenglishlover - Jun 14, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 16, 2013
|Ielts: Changes in women's position in society cause juvenile deliquency
4 - Thank you, Sopha but the second sentence in the introduction is my thesis statement. I had better add some...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 15, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 15, 2013
|Students are the people who get knowledge from teachers in classroom and laboratory.
3 - These are the places where students gain knowledge and wisdom. This knowledge is necessary for...
Writing Feedbackgangadhar - Jun 15, 2013 / dumi - Jun 15, 2013
|IELTS: Should we experiment on animals?
Writing FeedbackDHuong - Jun 15, 2013 / dumi - Jun 15, 2013
|IELTS task2 : How should visitors behave when they travel in other countries?
3 - Thanx v.much for the feedback ,,do you think any part of this is not related to the main topic...
Writing Feedbackmedoo - Jun 14, 2013 / medoo - Jun 15, 2013
|Human Trafficking is a process that forces people to act against their will!
Writing Feedbackreem19 - Nov 17, 2012 / rozha - Jun 15, 2013
|IELTS: Young people today have more power & influence than previous generations
3 - .... your sentences are pretty incomplete. You also need to have a logical flow of ideas. First, technological...
Writing Feedbackgrb18 - Jun 13, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 15, 2013
|Increasing a number of students are choosing to study abroad
6 - On the other hand, studying abroad is not always beneficial. or even you can say; On the other...
Writing Feedbacknguyenngoc - May 31, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 15, 2013
|Selecting a career is not an easy thing; How do you choose your career?
5 - Thank Dumi....
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 13, 2013 / rozha - Jun 15, 2013
|IELTS-Smoking kills and hence should be banned!
5 - ... I wish you said this a bit differently; Furthermore, smoking freely in public places may set a...
Writing FeedbackArezuF - Jun 6, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 15, 2013
|"I'm not going to lie, I'm a liar" - my best lie yet is lying about lying
Writing Feedbacktrilam153 - Jun 14, 2013 / dumi - Jun 15, 2013
|Formal exams and Course Assignments; Which is better to assess students?
6 - Thanks Dummi and all for your correction and your useful feedback! I will take it into account and revise...
Writing Feedbacklilythuy2289 - Jun 9, 2013 / lilythuy2289 - Jun 15, 2013
|STOP BULLYING - Argumentive Essay
5 - Yes, it's only you can delete your posts. Since you have already got comments from others including moderators,...
Writing FeedbackAlexRomero - May 28, 2013 / dumi - Jun 15, 2013
|An short essay - ways and reasons why people are escaping from the reality.
Writing Feedbackmichi555 - Jun 14, 2013 / dumi - Jun 15, 2013
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