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|Toefl Ibt- Task 2; Reasons for attending college or universities
3 - But I have a strong belief that most of students attend to an educational institution in hope of...
Writing FeedbackBarriosMaricel9 - Apr 24, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS task2 - Childen should/should not obey rules made by parents and teachers
4 - .... I prefer the word "strain" to "restrict" for this idea. Too much controls may strain one's creativeness...
Writing FeedbackCallMeRay - Apr 22, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS task 1: Letter to the neighbors to apologize for the noise
2 - I was terribly sorry to learn about the noise created by us that disturbed the neighborhood on the...
Writing FeedbackJessiewyq - Apr 21, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|Advantages of face-to-face communication
Writing FeedbackLimetta - Apr 23, 2013 / sakuralucia - Apr 24, 2013
|Listen to teachers or Get involved in discussing ; Type of CLASS I like
Writing FeedbackFardin - Apr 21, 2013 / shaddy - Apr 24, 2013
|The Absolutely True Diary of Part Time Indian School Book Essay [Year 9, Australia]
Writing FeedbackEddie Han - Mar 23, 2013 / Eddie Han - Apr 24, 2013
|The table compares the percentages of product consumption among five different countries in 2002
4 - thank homsai and dumi, I've attached the table here :D Hope that someone could give me a mark for...
Writing Feedbacksevensea - Apr 19, 2013 / sevensea - Apr 24, 2013
|"Who wants to be a millionaire?" - a popular TV Show
3 - Charles answered the first few questions with ease. You say there had been an episode where the contestant...
Writing Feedbackalexg7g7 - Apr 21, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|College years bring to individuals the experience and worth remembered memory
7 - .... Okkkkkk.... you need to provide an example to support your claim that college would create long lasting...
Writing Feedbackningo - Apr 19, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|Report - production of colored paper clips.
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Apr 19, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|What is more important? STUDIES or LUCK?
4 - AidanaMyrzakhan You should take a very clear point of view that will help to write convincingly. For instance, ...
Writing FeedbackAidanaMyrzakhan - Apr 23, 2013 / sanaqvi - Apr 24, 2013
|Punishment for misconduct of school children
Writing Feedbacksanaqvi - Apr 24, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|It's good to learn a foreign language in that foreign land !
Writing Feedbackningo - Apr 21, 2013 / ningo - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS Task2: Essay - The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents..
3 - .... Your topic is for traffic accidents ... better not narrow it down to cars only. Also it's...
Writing FeedbackSuzy Naguib - Apr 23, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS ESSAY- Old people are more valued than the youth?
Writing FeedbackLorica - Apr 21, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS - Strict Punishment for driving offences is a must to curtail traffic accidents
Writing FeedbackMeekay - Mar 24, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS : Is knowledge gained from books or experiences? 'both are important'
4 - ... the latter part does not add value. Good introduction :) Your first body para is very well...
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 23, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS ; Leading a Simple Life helps protect our environment?
2 - .... I think the word "decade" is more appropriate because it's been happening for sometime at a faster...
Writing FeedbackLorica - Apr 23, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|Uniforms are the way to go! School uniforms are a better option for students
3 - thankyouu!!...
Writing Feedbacksarinacornforth - Apr 18, 2013 / sarinacornforth - Apr 23, 2013
|IELTS, Why more people travel than before? What are the benefits?
Writing Feedbackhomsai - Apr 20, 2013 / homsai - Apr 23, 2013
|Do you agree that the internet has transformed lives and economies?
Writing Feedbackmaruko_a2609 - Apr 11, 2013 / maruko_a2609 - Apr 22, 2013
|Parents always have efficient and vital impact on a child's success in school
2 - No one can deny the benefits and positive effects.. Opponents of this position may say thatClassmates can affect the...
Writing Feedbackningo - Apr 21, 2013 / niesaysi - Apr 22, 2013
|IELTS: Child phenomenon; Learning a foreign language at the primary school.
4 - I think the debate is about learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. So,...
Writing Feedbackmhss - Mar 26, 2013 / CallMeRay - Apr 22, 2013
|IELTS Essay:Being a celebrity,the benifits are out weigh the problem?
Writing Feedbackchristyzhongs - Apr 21, 2013 / Lorica - Apr 21, 2013
|SARCASM - Exploratory Essay/ Need editing & suggestions to improve
NEW - Length : No more than 4 pages. Purpose(s) : 1. To apply critical thinking skills to language. 2. To...
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|IELTS; How to stay healthy in your country? Reasons & Answeres
6 - :) Well, I think your prompt needs you to discuss what people should do to stay healthy in your...
Writing FeedbackRedtape - Apr 18, 2013 / dumi - Apr 21, 2013
|IELTS: Increase of Illiteracy rate causes and effects on society
10 - Great ideas, I'll surely take care of the minor mistakes. These days I am trying to complete my...
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 18, 2013 / shaddy - Apr 21, 2013
|IELTS: Should both parents work in a family?
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 21, 2013 / shaddy - Apr 21, 2013
|IETLS; Do you agree that it's worth spending money on space exploration?
6 - Will Do. Exactly dumi, I should have mentioned few areas that needs improvement. Thank you for...
Writing FeedbackRedtape - Apr 20, 2013 / Redtape - Apr 21, 2013
|IELTS; Money spending on space exploration is a complete waste/ Agree or disagree?
Writing Feedbackessaytest - Apr 21, 2013 / dumi - Apr 21, 2013
|The crease on my mom's forhead ; Motivation
Writing FeedbackKoit - Apr 17, 2013 / Koit - Apr 20, 2013
|IELTS General training, inviting a friend to visit your new house.
4 - 3. My cousin is getting married this Sunday and his family will move into my old house to start...
Writing Feedbackhomsai - Apr 20, 2013 / Sunny he - Apr 20, 2013
|The Future of America: The One Change Needed Above All
Writing Feedbackmaxmartinez - Apr 15, 2013 / Sunny he - Apr 20, 2013
|Truth is outrageous,nonacceptable & may hurts our belief; ISSUE TOPIC 1
Writing Feedbackaum - Apr 19, 2013 / aum - Apr 20, 2013
|Who is responsible for Medical Services ?
6 - Hi, Lorica, First, I would like to highlight that you IELTs essay is not long enough(only 240 words),...
Writing FeedbackLorica - Apr 19, 2013 / christyzhongs - Apr 20, 2013
|Do you think that television programs, movies, and video games influence young people
Writing FeedbackCaroline777 - Apr 18, 2013 / ningo - Apr 19, 2013
|'understanding intercultural communication'; culture shock
Writing Feedbackhoai - Apr 15, 2013 / ningo - Apr 19, 2013
|IELTS; Intelligent/ Humor/ Reliable - Which one of these you look in your friend?
Writing Feedbackgyal - Apr 19, 2013 / dumi - Apr 19, 2013
|Role of teachers with appearance of computers.
Writing FeedbackPond - Apr 19, 2013 / dumi - Apr 19, 2013
|Impacts that affect on advertising is always the (only) thing which companies concentrate on
Writing FeedbackPond - Apr 18, 2013 / Pond - Apr 19, 2013
|Homework is Harmful! - Why?
Writing FeedbackFajriyah - Apr 14, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 19, 2013
|IELTS- It's important to address root causes in order to reduce criminal activities!
3 - On the other side of the argument, punishment needs to be balanced with the crime committed by...
Writing FeedbackStG - Apr 18, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 19, 2013
|Should the government invest in early childhood education or higher education
Writing FeedbackJoyceessay - Apr 19, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 19, 2013
|Neighbors are the people who live near us. What are the qualities of a good neighbor?
Writing Feedbacksnwr jamal - Apr 15, 2013 / snwr jamal - Apr 19, 2013
|FACE TO FACE COMMUNICATION is a better way to communicate
Writing Feedbackningo - Apr 10, 2013 / ningo - Apr 19, 2013
|It is true that the past stays in the past; Past or future
Writing Feedbackgular - Apr 17, 2013 / gular - Apr 18, 2013
|GRE argument: Super Screen Movie Production Company
3 - ... Your prompt does not tell that the production of Super Screen movies had been lowered. As I...
Writing Feedbackhjq1990 - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 18, 2013
|Impacts of modern medical science on society.
2 - .... you have grammar issues here. Also you idea is not presented very clearly. This is my suggestion;...
Writing FeedbackMilad Mac - Apr 17, 2013 / dumi - Apr 18, 2013
|IELTS Essay: Impact of computer usage on children.
8 - Great and thanks again. Thanks eileenalien, your suggestions are equally important to me. Cheers!!...
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 17, 2013 / shaddy - Apr 18, 2013
|TOEFL, Communicating via e-mail and voice mail vs Telephone and face-to face
3 - .... This sentence does not have any grammatical issues. However, I prefer if you introduced the topic theme...
Writing FeedbackMisius - Apr 13, 2013 / dumi - Apr 17, 2013
|Subject: Factors contributing to JOB SATISFACTION/ How realistic they are?
5 - ... Wish you presented this in a more simpler manner; In modern society, people spend more time at...
Writing FeedbackvickieZ - Apr 14, 2013 / dumi - Apr 17, 2013
|In many countries schools leave severe problems with student behavior.
2 - .... discipline and behavioral programs are two things, so they need to be treated as plural. ...
Writing FeedbackAidanaMyrzakhan - Apr 17, 2013 / dumi - Apr 17, 2013
|'My sister's problems and solutions' - concise narrative describe a meaningful event
Writing FeedbackNoumon - Oct 14, 2009 / shaddy - Apr 16, 2013
|Co-ed education versus single sex education; Which is better?
Writing Feedbackxu yu cheng - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 16, 2013
|IELTS Essay: Suggestions for the densely populated countries.
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 16, 2013 / dumi - Apr 16, 2013
|Solve the environmental problems by increasing the fuel prize. Agree or disagree.
2 - ... The idea here sounds good. You can say higher fuel prices cause higher level of inflation. Inflation...
Writing Feedbackessaytest - Apr 16, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 16, 2013
|IELTSl; Refugee programs/process should be allowed?
Writing FeedbackRedtape - Apr 13, 2013 / dumi - Apr 16, 2013
|Comparison of three hostels in Sydney
6 - .... since you started with "although" you cannot have "but" Although Central YHA charges the highest,...
Writing Feedbackproabc123 - Apr 8, 2013 / dumi - Apr 16, 2013
|IELTS; How should schools select their students?
3 - As essaytest comments, here there is a slight confusion about whether you are answering what your prompt suggests....
Writing Feedbackmalhamed - Apr 14, 2013 / dumi - Apr 15, 2013
|IELTS; Can price hikes on fuel solve environmental problems?
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 14, 2013 / dumi - Apr 15, 2013
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