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|IELTS essay, Increasing weight of people - causes and solutions
5 - Thank you all very much! I'll consider all your remarks and try to avoid these mistakes in my future...
Writing FeedbackKamilG - Apr 26, 2013 / KamilG - Apr 29, 2013
|IETLS: Children can benefit by engaging in some kind of paid work
6 - Thank you for your correction I think I should redo this question again. Let answer more relevant....
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|What is the better way of gaining knowledge, experience or books ?
5 - One of the most traditional ways of gaining knowledge is books. ...is reading books. he learns to not touch...
Writing FeedbackJosephd6 - Apr 27, 2013 / veronicafy - Apr 29, 2013
|Most difficult aspects of learning a new language ; TOEFL ibt
11 - ok thanks dear :)...
Writing Feedbackgeorgekozma - Apr 25, 2013 / georgekozma - Apr 29, 2013
|My Favorite Super hero is Ayatollah Khomeini
Writing Feedbackabedkh - Apr 29, 2013 / dumi - Apr 29, 2013
|People dream things that are often almost impossible achieve;Compare &Contrast Essay
Writing FeedbackAeryn - Apr 25, 2013 / Aeryn - Apr 28, 2013
|IELTS - children learning foreign language in young age; brain under development
2 - Today, children have the facilities to learn a foreign language at the level of primary school itself. Some...
Writing Feedbackchristyzhongs - Apr 25, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 28, 2013
|'Learning never stops' - Learn from a teacher or by yourself?
Writing FeedbackJosephd6 - Apr 25, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 28, 2013
|"Learning starts with failure; the first failure is the beginning of education."
Writing Feedbackthegypsygirl - Apr 22, 2013 / thegypsygirl - Apr 27, 2013
|Parenting outweigh the schooling in terms of nurturing a good member of society
3 - Nowadays, many people have realized the importance of influencing their children to be more socially responsible . ...
Writing Feedbackhomsai - Apr 27, 2013 / dumi - Apr 27, 2013
|Should museums charge admission fees? YES
3 - Advancement in technology has influenced the hobbies and leisure activities of the people of modern era. ...
Writing Feedbacksanaqvi - Apr 24, 2013 / dumi - Apr 27, 2013
|'what young people can learn from the older?' - the knowledge is most important
Writing Feedbackningo - Apr 24, 2013 / dumi - Apr 27, 2013
|IELTS TASK 2 ; Are talents inborn or trained?
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|Increasing dependence on technology & the ability of thinking for ourselves
Writing Feedbackedisonjk - Apr 26, 2013 / dumi - Apr 27, 2013
|I strongly believe that life in a big city is extremely enjoyable
7 - This is your opinion.... It is better to start your essay by introducing the topic to the reader...
Writing FeedbackLimetta - Apr 22, 2013 / dumi - Apr 26, 2013
|TOEFL ;Taking enough time to do things is better than finishing in a hurry
6 - ....Very interesting paragraph. You write very well and I like the way you present your ideas. That's quite unique...
Writing Feedbackterryoftommorw - Apr 21, 2013 / dumi - Apr 26, 2013
|What is your idea about children's studying at boarding school?
2 - .... Before coming to this point, it's better if you introduced the other options as well, since you...
Writing FeedbackOrkhan_O - Apr 25, 2013 / dumi - Apr 26, 2013
|GRE Argument Essay- Skateboarders VS. Shop Owners
2 - The Central Plaza store owner's concludes that increase in popularity of skateboarding and the level of vandalism and...
Writing Feedbacklaurelmegan - Apr 26, 2013 / dumi - Apr 26, 2013
|IELTS Essay - Teenage years are the Happiest time of life?
Writing Feedbackchristyzhongs - Apr 25, 2013 / dumi - Apr 26, 2013
|Why do you think people attend colleges?career preparation, new experiences
Writing Feedbackmreza65 - Apr 26, 2013 / dumi - Apr 26, 2013
|IELTS : Have modern ways of preparing food improved the way people live?
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 22, 2013 / jesseswll - Apr 26, 2013
|IELTS task 2; What is teacher's role? Should they teach academic subjects only?
2 - ...... although some people believe otherwise. First, in one's student life, he or she spends most...
Writing Feedbackmaruko_a2609 - Apr 22, 2013 / dumi - Apr 25, 2013
|British & Australian laws on criminal cases
Writing FeedbackSevocka - Apr 21, 2013 / Sevocka - Apr 25, 2013
|IELTS Essay---No one should be allowed to work after the age of 65(Discussion)
Writing Feedbackdeva624 - Apr 22, 2013 / Redtape - Apr 25, 2013
|Memorial Day Essay - significant history
Writing Feedbacksaichicka39 - Apr 22, 2013 / andrea94 - Apr 25, 2013
|IELTS : I believe that parents are the best among the teachers to teach
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 24, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS - International Tourism becomes more common than earlier.
7 - Dear Dumi, I appreciate so much for your review and correction in my essay. It looks to me that...
Writing FeedbackJessiewyq - Apr 21, 2013 / Jessiewyq - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS ESSAY: Whether scientist are able to give solutions to all the problems?
7 - ... very true :) .... this needs improvement. The main reason why scientists cannot solve all...
Writing Feedbacksakuralucia - Apr 22, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 24, 2013
|Toefl Ibt- Task 2; Reasons for attending college or universities
3 - But I have a strong belief that most of students attend to an educational institution in hope of...
Writing FeedbackBarriosMaricel9 - Apr 24, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS task2 - Childen should/should not obey rules made by parents and teachers
4 - .... I prefer the word "strain" to "restrict" for this idea. Too much controls may strain one's creativeness...
Writing FeedbackCallMeRay - Apr 22, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS task 1: Letter to the neighbors to apologize for the noise
2 - I was terribly sorry to learn about the noise created by us that disturbed the neighborhood on the...
Writing FeedbackJessiewyq - Apr 21, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|Advantages of face-to-face communication
Writing FeedbackLimetta - Apr 23, 2013 / sakuralucia - Apr 24, 2013
|Listen to teachers or Get involved in discussing ; Type of CLASS I like
Writing FeedbackFardin - Apr 21, 2013 / shaddy - Apr 24, 2013
|The Absolutely True Diary of Part Time Indian School Book Essay [Year 9, Australia]
Writing FeedbackEddie Han - Mar 23, 2013 / Eddie Han - Apr 24, 2013
|The table compares the percentages of product consumption among five different countries in 2002
4 - thank homsai and dumi, I've attached the table here :D Hope that someone could give me a mark for...
Writing Feedbacksevensea - Apr 19, 2013 / sevensea - Apr 24, 2013
|"Who wants to be a millionaire?" - a popular TV Show
3 - Charles answered the first few questions with ease. You say there had been an episode where the contestant...
Writing Feedbackalexg7g7 - Apr 21, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|College years bring to individuals the experience and worth remembered memory
7 - .... Okkkkkk.... you need to provide an example to support your claim that college would create long lasting...
Writing Feedbackningo - Apr 19, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|Report - production of colored paper clips.
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Apr 19, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|What is more important? STUDIES or LUCK?
4 - AidanaMyrzakhan You should take a very clear point of view that will help to write convincingly. For instance, ...
Writing FeedbackAidanaMyrzakhan - Apr 23, 2013 / sanaqvi - Apr 24, 2013
|Punishment for misconduct of school children
Writing Feedbacksanaqvi - Apr 24, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|It's good to learn a foreign language in that foreign land !
Writing Feedbackningo - Apr 21, 2013 / ningo - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS Task2: Essay - The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents..
3 - .... Your topic is for traffic accidents ... better not narrow it down to cars only. Also it's...
Writing FeedbackSuzy Naguib - Apr 23, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS ESSAY- Old people are more valued than the youth?
Writing FeedbackLorica - Apr 21, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS - Strict Punishment for driving offences is a must to curtail traffic accidents
Writing FeedbackMeekay - Mar 24, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS : Is knowledge gained from books or experiences? 'both are important'
4 - ... the latter part does not add value. Good introduction :) Your first body para is very well...
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 23, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS ; Leading a Simple Life helps protect our environment?
2 - .... I think the word "decade" is more appropriate because it's been happening for sometime at a faster...
Writing FeedbackLorica - Apr 23, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|Uniforms are the way to go! School uniforms are a better option for students
3 - thankyouu!!...
Writing Feedbacksarinacornforth - Apr 18, 2013 / sarinacornforth - Apr 23, 2013
|IELTS, Why more people travel than before? What are the benefits?
Writing Feedbackhomsai - Apr 20, 2013 / homsai - Apr 23, 2013
|Do you agree that the internet has transformed lives and economies?
Writing Feedbackmaruko_a2609 - Apr 11, 2013 / maruko_a2609 - Apr 22, 2013
|Parents always have efficient and vital impact on a child's success in school
2 - No one can deny the benefits and positive effects.. Opponents of this position may say thatClassmates can affect the...
Writing Feedbackningo - Apr 21, 2013 / niesaysi - Apr 22, 2013
|IELTS: Child phenomenon; Learning a foreign language at the primary school.
4 - I think the debate is about learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. So,...
Writing Feedbackmhss - Mar 26, 2013 / CallMeRay - Apr 22, 2013
|IELTS Essay:Being a celebrity,the benifits are out weigh the problem?
Writing Feedbackchristyzhongs - Apr 21, 2013 / Lorica - Apr 21, 2013
|SARCASM - Exploratory Essay/ Need editing & suggestions to improve
NEW - Length : No more than 4 pages. Purpose(s) : 1. To apply critical thinking skills to language. 2. To...
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|IELTS; How to stay healthy in your country? Reasons & Answeres
6 - :) Well, I think your prompt needs you to discuss what people should do to stay healthy in your...
Writing FeedbackRedtape - Apr 18, 2013 / dumi - Apr 21, 2013
|IELTS: Increase of Illiteracy rate causes and effects on society
10 - Great ideas, I'll surely take care of the minor mistakes. These days I am trying to complete my...
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 18, 2013 / shaddy - Apr 21, 2013
|IELTS: Should both parents work in a family?
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 21, 2013 / shaddy - Apr 21, 2013
|IETLS; Do you agree that it's worth spending money on space exploration?
6 - Will Do. Exactly dumi, I should have mentioned few areas that needs improvement. Thank you for...
Writing FeedbackRedtape - Apr 20, 2013 / Redtape - Apr 21, 2013
|IELTS; Money spending on space exploration is a complete waste/ Agree or disagree?
Writing Feedbackessaytest - Apr 21, 2013 / dumi - Apr 21, 2013
|The crease on my mom's forhead ; Motivation
Writing FeedbackKoit - Apr 17, 2013 / Koit - Apr 20, 2013
|IELTS General training, inviting a friend to visit your new house.
4 - 3. My cousin is getting married this Sunday and his family will move into my old house to start...
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