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|TOEFL; Nowadays, people put too much emphasis on personal appearances and fashions
Writing Feedbackbegin06 - Feb 18, 2013 / koe - Feb 19, 2013
|"I dont ask for excuses from my BEST TEACHER";ESSAY on what i did wrong with my CA
Writing Feedbackkoe - Feb 14, 2013 / koe - Feb 19, 2013
|With more money, schools will construct a better stadium, where students will exercise more often
Writing FeedbackMatcha - Feb 19, 2013 / Matcha - Feb 19, 2013
|An occasion when it was necessary to tell the truth whatever the consequences.
2 - Good editing by kurianjoseph, as always :) .... you first worry about exam and then results :D...
Writing Feedbacksasori66 - Feb 19, 2013 / dumi - Feb 19, 2013
|IELTS Task2; TV programmes are transmitted throughout the day and night
6 - rombos , thanks your encouragement ! now, i feel more confident. william731 , thanks your very good and...
Writing Feedbacklazk - Feb 18, 2013 / lazk - Feb 19, 2013
|IELTS ; Single Career or Multi Career? More Careers are more beneficial!
4 - There are some grammatical errors this sentence. The new trend is to have several careers or sources of...
Writing Feedbackrombos - Feb 19, 2013 / Pahan - Feb 19, 2013
|Education plays a pivotal role; Children learn how to be good members of society
Writing Feedbackwilliam731 - Feb 17, 2013 / dumi - Feb 18, 2013
|TOEFL iBT ESSAY: ONE SHOULD LISTEN TO OTHERS OR NOT IN TEAM WORK
Writing Feedbacksongjianzhi - Feb 17, 2013 / songjianzhi - Feb 18, 2013
|The pie chart shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive
2 - .... actually, the graph presents factor that make the land less productive, in other words less fertile. ...
Writing Feedbackwilliam731 - Feb 18, 2013 / dumi - Feb 18, 2013
|IETLS GT writing task 1 - Complaint to a restaurant
2 - Well, this sounds too rigid. Generally you need to show some politeness even if you are going to...
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Feb 17, 2013 / dumi - Feb 18, 2013
|Which is better - working at office or from home?
Writing Feedbackpankration - Feb 18, 2013 / pankration - Feb 18, 2013
|(IELTS essay) An ambition is positive or negative?
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Feb 17, 2013 / dumi - Feb 18, 2013
|(IELTS graph) Cinema attendance of different age group of people in Australia
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Feb 18, 2013 / william731 - Feb 18, 2013
|Parents Will Always Be Parents; Personal/Reflection essay about parents
11 - Thank you once again somedaysoon! I really appreciate you pointing out my errors! You're too kind!! Thank you...
Writing Feedbackhelppleasee - Feb 14, 2013 / helppleasee - Feb 18, 2013
|(IELTS graph) Immigration, Emigration and Net migration in UK.
4 - Hai Dumi and Willam.. Hai Dumi.. Thanks for your suggestions and correction. The last para is the...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Feb 16, 2013 / joythblessy - Feb 18, 2013
|IELTS - Youth unemployment issue and what measures can be taken to reduce its level
5 - Youth unemployment rate has been regards as one of the most tough problems in most countries. I think...
Writing FeedbackAlexChow - Feb 17, 2013 / nadrian - Feb 18, 2013
|'it brings efficiency' - Face-to-face Communication. Opinion essay (IELTS)
4 - I don't think this is necessary.. tro begin with, face-to-face communication is much more effective and...
Writing Feedbacknghiabkdn - Feb 17, 2013 / Pahan - Feb 18, 2013
|(Ielts) Most countries develop their economies to improve living standards
Writing Feedbackwilliam731 - Feb 17, 2013 / william731 - Feb 17, 2013
|IELTS: Classmates Vs Parents - Influence on child's future
Writing Feedbacknadrian - Feb 14, 2013 / nadrian - Feb 17, 2013
|Nowadays for many people the Internet is replacing regular books.
Writing Feedbackwilliam731 - Feb 14, 2013 / william731 - Feb 17, 2013
|( IELTS essay)Difficult hobbies are more enjoyable?
6 - Hai Dumi, Dev, Somy and Dongguo.. Hai dumi.. Reading books gives physical rest and thereby physcical rest..( Am...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Feb 1, 2013 / joythblessy - Feb 17, 2013
|GRE Issue- Effective leader & Highest ethical and moral standards of public official
Writing Feedbacknh1 - Feb 15, 2013 / dumi - Feb 17, 2013
|( IELTS essay) Younger generation neglect the advices of older people?
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 20, 2013 / joythblessy - Feb 17, 2013
|Five-Mile High Wasteland-An argument essay on commercial climbing on Everst
Writing Feedbackjmilla13 - Feb 13, 2013 / dumi - Feb 17, 2013
|IELTS;Being polite is the priority to a visitor to avoid embarassment or offense
4 - ==>I suppose you might wrote wrong words "open-minded" But that is not a big problem,I think you will...
Writing Feedbacktajima621 - Feb 15, 2013 / beyondmtk - Feb 16, 2013
|IELTS; More houses are needed in many countries to cope with increasing populations
4 - =>With respect, I think "crowded" means there are too many people in a place. furthermore , in...
Writing Feedbackedouw33 - Feb 15, 2013 / beyondmtk - Feb 16, 2013
|Being healthy people have to observe some rules!
Writing FeedbackRusi - Feb 16, 2013 / joythblessy - Feb 16, 2013
|These days couples decide to have children later in their life!
2 - Good introduction :) Traditional concept of motherhood means that she should devote most of her time...
Writing Feedbackwilliam731 - Feb 16, 2013 / dumi - Feb 16, 2013
|Picture Telling - bout a little boy sitting alone on a swing
2 - I likeYyouessay, I think you could make it stronger by showing instead of telling. Using sounds to create pictures....
Writing Feedbackjenniferxx - Feb 15, 2013 / anniesis27 - Feb 16, 2013
|In the past, buildings often reflected the culture of a society- IELTS
Writing Feedbackkurianjoseph1 - Feb 13, 2013 / kurianjoseph1 - Feb 16, 2013
|Going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people. -IELTS
Writing Feedbackkurianjoseph1 - Feb 13, 2013 / kurianjoseph1 - Feb 16, 2013
|IELTS Task1 essay "Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about"
Writing Feedbackbeyondmtk - Feb 14, 2013 / dumi - Feb 15, 2013
|As a child you can enjoy life without responsabilities and worries
Writing Feedbackcarito15 - Feb 13, 2013 / jenniferxx - Feb 15, 2013
|'different ways of leading lives' - Children should begin their formal education at a very early age
5 - Different people have different knowledge levels and I believe teachers can help them receive a solid education. ...
Writing FeedbackManon - Feb 14, 2013 / Pahan - Feb 15, 2013
|The best movie I've ever seen, without a doubt, is called "The pursuit of happiness"
4 - Can anyone correct this sentence for me? Because I think it's too abrupt to start off with "The...
Writing Feedbackjenniferxx - Feb 12, 2013 / jenniferxx - Feb 15, 2013
|There was a gradual slight drop in the sales of CDs during this three years period (2000-2003)
5 - hai dumi... Really sorry ... I skipped your replay... I already gone to that site and this was...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Feb 11, 2013 / joythblessy - Feb 14, 2013
|(IELTS graph) Population of turtles in India
6 - hai Dumi and Pahan.. Hai dumi.. Thanks for the link you provided through Khof's thread. I was...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Feb 12, 2013 / joythblessy - Feb 14, 2013
|It is essential to make creative artists feel free to product more new creation
3 - ==>I guess "that artists should be aware of ..." would be better ,right? aware is an adjective....
Writing FeedbackMarySwift - Feb 14, 2013 / beyondmtk - Feb 14, 2013
|Art is sometimes hard to understand because of our limitation of knowledge
2 - I disagree with the statement that any form of art needs to be comprehensible to most people in...
Writing Feedbackhyvaahyvaa - Feb 14, 2013 / dumi - Feb 14, 2013
|AGE GAP IN RELATIONSHIPS IS AN OBSTACLE
Writing Feedbackcarito15 - Feb 13, 2013 / dumi - Feb 14, 2013
|IELTS - CHANGE IN LIFE IS GOOD OR BAD?
4 - If someone wants something, he will need to break through many barriers on his way. I don't feel...
Writing FeedbackVladimirAust - Feb 13, 2013 / Pahan - Feb 14, 2013
|Existence of plants around study places should be maintained
3 - 'Having plants around a study area brings about many advantages. Ummm... I'm not sure I understand...
Writing Feedbackjeffyonata - Feb 13, 2013 / Pahan - Feb 13, 2013
|(IELTS graph) Proportion of people in household types living in poverty in Australia
2 - You have written too many words(240). You should write less, so you can finish it during the exam period....
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Feb 13, 2013 / celestialnese - Feb 13, 2013
|Should public authorities spend money on outer space exploration or not?
Writing FeedbackMabossani - Feb 12, 2013 / Mabossani - Feb 13, 2013
|IELTS - Fish and meat consumption - Writing Task
Writing Feedbackkhof - Feb 13, 2013 / dumi - Feb 13, 2013
|IELTS; "Prevention is better than cure", However issues need to be addressed
Writing Feedbackorkhan - Feb 13, 2013 / dumi - Feb 13, 2013
|(IELTS graph)Time duration and Severity of acid production by three sweet products.
2 - It is clear from the graphs that intake of sweet products increases acidity in the mouth that lowers...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Feb 12, 2013 / dumi - Feb 13, 2013
|born with talents - children could be an outstanding individuals
4 - My suggestion; People hold different views about whether certain talents of children are inborn or can be trained....
Writing Feedbacknghiabkdn - Feb 13, 2013 / dumi - Feb 13, 2013
|ESCAPE FROM STRESSFUL LIVES; Descriptive Essay: Tiki Beach
3 - Your essay was very descriptive. I think you describe what was stressing you to show readers that you needed...
Writing Feedbacklinadu95 - Feb 12, 2013 / brendaaa1329 - Feb 12, 2013
|IELTS; Second Language should be compulsory for all children?
4 - .... I think it's better you talk about the main idea about globalization. i.e. globalization has brought different...
Writing FeedbackSarvar - Feb 8, 2013 / dumi - Feb 12, 2013
|'requirements and conditions of studying in college' - one national curriculum?
5 - Such as different books and courses that each school people learn to it's students and so the students can...
Writing Feedbackmar_b6707 - Jan 29, 2013 / nadrian - Feb 12, 2013
|IELTS Task2 ; "that all students should learn a foreign language"
Writing Feedbackbeyondmtk - Feb 11, 2013 / joythblessy - Feb 12, 2013
|The amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women
Writing Feedbackorkhan - Feb 12, 2013 / jenniferxx - Feb 12, 2013
|IELTS-Rare languages disappear from the world. Some people say is not important
5 - This sentence has some grammar issues. Due to dominance of certain languages, many rare languages are disappearing every...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Feb 9, 2013 / Pahan - Feb 12, 2013
|( IELTS essay) Who is more influential in children: Parents or Classmates
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Feb 11, 2013 / jorgearmando18 - Feb 11, 2013
|AGE OF GETTING MARRIED ; NEGATIVE & POSITIVE ASPECTS
3 - .... good point :) First, young couples are not matured enough to control their emotions and this...
Writing FeedbackRusi - Feb 11, 2013 / dumi - Feb 11, 2013
|IELTS-Some people think the role of women in military or police forces is relevant
6 - Hai Dev... Multi tasking in their tasks...? aditional points.. The service of women in help to...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Feb 10, 2013 / joythblessy - Feb 11, 2013
|(IELTS graph) Coca-Cola consumption and its share value
3 - The difference between the two was nearly 5% only --> I think only is not required --> The difference...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Feb 9, 2013 / devabe2005 - Feb 10, 2013
|essay about depending on online learning in the future with no schools.
4 - Online learning will be realy helpful because its sometimes hard to listen and understand a teacher in class,and by...
Writing FeedbackHeidi - Feb 8, 2013 / Tjengisile - Feb 10, 2013
|The best values and principles children should be brought up with ^^
Writing Feedbackcosmopure - Feb 7, 2013 / dumi - Feb 10, 2013
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