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|I ate the candy eleven years ago but the bitterness and sweetness of life remains!
Writing Feedbackxpmichy - Dec 13, 2012 / xpmichy - Dec 15, 2012
|Families today are not as close as they used to be, causes and solutions?
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Dec 14, 2012 / April April - Dec 15, 2012
|IELTS essay : criminal who send to prison would commit crimes when set free
Writing Feedbackcolin - Dec 14, 2012 / Prafull - Dec 15, 2012
|(Ielts practicing) - It is common to leave home countries to study at universities abroad
6 - @dumi : thanks your appreciation , this forum gives me opportunities to improve my skill hi hungdv :...
Writing Feedbackleeminh - Dec 13, 2012 / leeminh - Dec 15, 2012
|Our past is a cemented foundation upon which we build our future - GRE
3 - @Lisa Thank you immensely! The follies you pointed out were completely legitimate! I am taking the gre on 18...
Writing Feedbackkethsaxena - Dec 13, 2012 / kethsaxena - Dec 14, 2012
|Most education system rely on examinations to encourage children to study,but as a re
2 - I certainly do not agree with the idea of abolishing examinations for several reasons. .... unnecessary...
Writing FeedbackAlicegaga - Dec 13, 2012 / dumi - Dec 14, 2012
|Tattoo and Piercing research paper
2 - Change "student's" to "students'" or perhaps "children's" "Young adolescence" is a little redundant Can...
Writing Feedbackltraviss - Dec 8, 2012 / Enigmaticguitar - Dec 14, 2012
|Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today
2 - It is always a better thing to concentrate on present instead of planning too much for an unknown...
Writing Feedbackpkr123 - Dec 14, 2012 / dumi - Dec 14, 2012
|(IELTS essay) disappearing languages good or bad?
6 - People feel, unity, equality and encourage economical development. -->>economic development Besides, it may reduce the problem of translation,...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 3, 2012 / colin - Dec 14, 2012
|The advantages & disadvantages of starting school at an early age.
4 - hai.. The essay stracture and organization is good. Some sentences are confusing. As it pointed out earlier. ...
Writing Feedbackththnho_tl - Dec 11, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 14, 2012
|IELTS essay, new things or old things?
6 - i see your essay isn't really clear. I mean your essay doesn't have a clear theses, it's so general....
Writing Feedbackmy88626 - Dec 9, 2012 / ththnho_tl - Dec 14, 2012
|College plays a great role in shaping our future :TOEFL
5 - These days people get many choices when it comes to choosing colleges or university. ==>These days people get many...
Writing Feedbackkiratee - Dec 10, 2012 / colin - Dec 14, 2012
|"80 points" - Different reasons as to why people attend college; TOEFL
3 - What you have written is completely out of topic. For TOEFL independent task, you need to write at least...
Writing FeedbackEmin Can - Dec 13, 2012 / dumi - Dec 13, 2012
|How to reduce air pollution in our Mongolian city? Pure air importancy for people's health
Writing Feedbackulziitugs - Dec 12, 2012 / EmeeAfua - Dec 13, 2012
|The reason why I choose Lee is that he was born in Taiwan
Writing Feedbacksimonsat - Dec 12, 2012 / simonsat - Dec 13, 2012
|Using mobile phone while driving should be banned
6 - Can anyone else check if there is any final errors or anything that I have to remove, that is...
Writing Feedbackfarzan23 - Dec 9, 2012 / farzan23 - Dec 12, 2012
|Expository essay on cell phone's impact.
3 - Well it's an expository essay...so I have to give my opinion, but without really stating it. My teacher is...
Writing FeedbackAbr518 - Dec 12, 2012 / Abr518 - Dec 12, 2012
|Description on Telecommunicating.
9 - Telecommunication is a form of communication that takes place through technolobical means such as telephone, internet, etc. Telecommunicating...
Writing Feedbacktranquanghuy321 - Dec 12, 2012 / dumi - Dec 12, 2012
|Without friends we can hardly survive
Writing FeedbackInvisiblebbb - Dec 12, 2012 / Invisiblebbb - Dec 12, 2012
|television and movies will bring more harmful things than the delightful things
Writing FeedbackInvisiblebbb - Dec 12, 2012 / Invisiblebbb - Dec 12, 2012
|Potential promblems that people face while Living Abroad; IELTS exam essays
Writing Feedbackbehruz - Dec 10, 2012 / B_Simba - Dec 12, 2012
|IELTS practice - cause and effect essay; "Television at its worst"
Writing FeedbackSnowTran - Dec 11, 2012 / SnowTran - Dec 12, 2012
|people should be flexible to adjust their thoughts and behavior; Task 2
Writing Feedbackprue124 - Dec 11, 2012 / prue124 - Dec 12, 2012
|I prefer living in a small town; birds' chirping and singing
Writing Feedbackcindy_523 - Dec 11, 2012 / korch - Dec 12, 2012
|Discussion about a short example in my essay
Writing Feedbacka5b5935 - Dec 7, 2012 / a5b5935 - Dec 11, 2012
|Why the divorce rate is so high in North America?
Writing FeedbackJareer1979 - Dec 2, 2012 / Jareer1979 - Dec 11, 2012
|allow workers to work at home ESSAY
Writing Feedbackleeminh - Dec 10, 2012 / leeminh - Dec 11, 2012
|Impacts of and solutions for rural depopulation???
6 - Thank you guys so much for your kind comments. Please give me more comments on my next coming essays...
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Dec 7, 2012 / hungvud - Dec 10, 2012
|'expressing negative opinions' - my essay about "TV and Radio Censorship"
Writing FeedbackNazaninrp - Nov 27, 2012 / Nazaninrp - Dec 10, 2012
|Noah and Utnapishtim are exactly the same person
Writing Feedbackshlortx - Dec 9, 2012 / mannyalesh - Dec 10, 2012
|I have some true friends! ; My memorable experience(s)"
Writing Feedbackdelightlita - Dec 10, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 10, 2012
|[TOEFL] Do you prefer to use the telephone or email?
Writing Feedbackkorch - Dec 9, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 10, 2012
|IELTS - Beijing example; Petrol price rising vs traffic and pollution
Writing FeedbackMommmmo - Dec 7, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 10, 2012
|[TOEFL] Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants,other people prefer..
8 - thanks dumi. you drew attention to points that make me confused. I will follow your advices :)...
Writing Feedbackokk - Dec 9, 2012 / okk - Dec 10, 2012
|Some people think it would be a good idea for school to teach every young person how
2 - This line has several issues; grammar, punctuation, clarity and sentence structure. Also you must post your essays in...
Writing Feedbackspear - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 10, 2012
|IELTS Cam 7 Test 2- Criminal Punishment
Writing FeedbackMommmmo - Dec 8, 2012 / Mommmmo - Dec 10, 2012
|Inquiry Essay: Literature's power to affect our perspectives - feedback and editting
2 - Hi Tsesh; I find your first paragraph needs improvement in its presentation. Here are my suggestions; What...
Writing FeedbackTsesh - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|Are parents the best teachers? they play a dominant role
4 - Hi, Well... what you say is that ''parents definitely play a dominant role in their children's life"....
Writing Feedbacknastaran1990 - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|STUDENT BEHAVIOR is becoming a problems in many countries!
Writing Feedbackai7 - Dec 9, 2012 / dumi - Dec 9, 2012
|Theoretical knowledge or practical skill.
3 - Hmmm.. The sentence is a little too long. Try to break it down. Firstly, many school graduates find...
Writing FeedbackEdna - Dec 9, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 9, 2012
|Beubg Friendly and considerate ; characteristics of good neighbors
3 - This sentence doesn't sound very good. Try this. Since the stone age, man has always lived in groups....
Writing Feedbackbahar - Dec 9, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 9, 2012
|'Not being hopeless' - Working in a group or working independently?
Writing Feedbacknastaran1990 - Dec 8, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 8, 2012
|IELTS writing: Similarity of different places.
Writing Feedbackmy88626 - Dec 8, 2012 / my88626 - Dec 8, 2012
|Privacy of celebrates on newspapers and magazines Ielts essay
6 - The topic of privacy of celebrities on magazines and newspapers has sparked a heated debate in the recent...
Writing Feedbackleeminh - Dec 8, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 8, 2012
|I believe parents shape the way you see life!
7 - Tkae my experience fro instance, when I was a child, my parents were the best teachers. They taught...
Writing FeedbackEdna - Dec 4, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 8, 2012
|You have been asked to suggest improvements to a park ,a national park, regional park
2 - Correct grammar would be; park has always been / parks have always been / park had always been/...
Writing Feedbacknastaran1990 - Dec 7, 2012 / dumi - Dec 8, 2012
|IELTS: The concept of only mothers raising their kids has become an old one
Writing FeedbackIEC - Dec 6, 2012 / Mommmmo - Dec 7, 2012
|Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. Essay Contest: "The Drum Major Instinct"
Writing Feedbackmimilambie77 - Nov 29, 2012 / mimilambie77 - Dec 7, 2012
|should wealthy nations take responsiblity to help the poorer countries?
Writing Feedbackcu_chuoi - Dec 5, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 7, 2012
|describe the table illustrating expenses
NEW - the table is given in the file attachment.^^ The given table illustrates the percentage of expenses consumers spent...
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|Spanking is not okay! (Argumentative Essay)
Writing Feedbackkristenbrooke97 - Dec 6, 2012 / kristenbrooke97 - Dec 7, 2012
|Annual spending by a British school in 1981 - ielts task1
11 - Well, it means that a group of people think that the number of university students is too high and...
Writing Feedbackrenlyso - Nov 12, 2012 / ah_zafari - Dec 7, 2012
|the compare and contrast between A and B Ice Cream
Writing Feedbackcnancysr - Dec 7, 2012 / dumi - Dec 7, 2012
|Group Essay - "Warning! Teen Dating Hurts!"
7 - Where are those paragraphs? You need to do a draft and post it here.... Then others would be able...
Writing Feedbackplant4therice - Dec 5, 2011 / dumi - Dec 7, 2012
|Why do you believe you will be an effective teacher in a high-need school?
3 - Hi,Abby5, Your essay is so impressive! You develop the topic fluently and explain your dream clearly. I think...
Writing FeedbackAbby5 - Dec 6, 2012 / yisha - Dec 7, 2012
|Most important benefits from a job: relax, and fulfilling - even if less money
Writing Feedbackundidiamaka - Dec 5, 2012 / undidiamaka - Dec 6, 2012
|(IELTS essay) MNC's are good or bad..?
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Dec 6, 2012 / joythblessy - Dec 6, 2012
|Analysing argument estate agents GRE
3 - There are some grammar issues here and that disturbs conveying your idea to the reader; The homeowner who...
Writing Feedbackbusybee - Dec 2, 2012 / dumi - Dec 6, 2012
|What would you change if you are given a chance?
3 - This road creates problems to people stuck in traffic. Especially, people who drive a motorbikes will...
Writing FeedbackJonni - Dec 5, 2012 / Pahan - Dec 6, 2012
|Life with Courage
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